Mera college te Mera Pind....

[Neo_]

story vadia ja ri ay  bas veeray ae billay kolun na thukwaen kavi nu

Thanks for the suggestion bro.. Will C.

[Neo_]

Awesome update buddy, very arousing you have really good skills with the plot, environment and story telling, thankyou very much for a wonderful update. I also a request for other readers that please don't try to influence the story this early like who will be good with whom, let the writer express what he initially set out to do. Once the story is in with first few scenes then writer can take suggestion if i wants. If the writer asked for suggestions in the first place then i apologizes. In any case i would like to request writer that he goes forward with what he has in his mind first and take suggestion later if he wants. Anyhow thanks again for a wonderful update, keep it up.

Thanks a lot for appreciating the story brother.........

[Kamboj saab]

Osm upadate

[Neo_]

Osm upadate

Thanks bro...

[Athra jutt]

Veer update kar day

[Jambojatt]

Update bro...

[Neo_]

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[Athra jutt]

Veer to khayalan hich hi chut da rawin chad yar swad ni aya hath ayi chad diti chal jai ta to aap laini aa apni mummy di tai bahan di tai lun wada rakhin tai hon taira tary aby nalo wada tai tagra hona chyai da swad fair ana jai to nira loka kolon apniya di phudi murwani aa tai koi swad ni story da jina chikar taira soda wada na hoya tai to apniya di na layi sab mix jaya kar phla kisai kolon mummy da kanda kicha fair aap kich tai ona di koriya da v kich jaira jaira tairiya da kichay thora tagra ban luli wada na bni story wich apni ta aa ray aa baki tairi marji

[Radha sharma]

Awesome .. mja aa reha story te play dono ch.. reet chalu aa te case hoya koi tahi bhej rhe ... college ch kavi te reet da system jyada lvayo awara mundeya to.. bench te beh k chhed chhad vgera.. keep it up te update continue te jldi rkheyo

[Athra jutt]

Veer update kar dai

[Neo_]

Awesome .. mja aa reha story te play dono ch.. reet chalu aa te case hoya koi tahi bhej rhe ... college ch kavi te reet da system jyada lvayo awara mundeya to.. bench te beh k chhed chhad vgera.. keep it up te update continue te jldi rkheyo

Thanks for liking the story dear and also for the suggestion. I will keep them in mind.... Updates main next week ton regular den di try karunga., will be busy this week, but will try to provide a short update just to keep the readers involved...

[Neo_]

Veer update kar dai

Trying to provide a short update...regular update will be coming from next week. Iss week main thoda busy han...

[Tera_happy]

22 ik bari daddy fad k tri mummy di fuddi ch lun pahve o gujjar da swad ah ju 22

[Athra jutt]

Update please

[hardeep]

aewain majak kari janda

[Neo_]

Hi readers,
 I am currently out of station and will be back by Sunday
Will try to provide update by Monday.

My current draft is almost complete but needs some editing..

[Athra jutt]

Thik a marzi aa tuwadi

[Taranpreetsingh]

Thanks for liking the story dear and also for the suggestion. I will keep them in mind.... Updates main next week ton regular den di try karunga., will be busy this week, but will try to provide a short update just to keep the readers involved...

[Neo_]

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[The Blue Prince]

Very good story dost. Carry on the good work. Good conversation between mummy and maami.