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(28-03-2022, 07:22 AM)pawanqwert Wrote: Brother lambi kahani likhni thi.ye kahani bahut acchi hai
लघु कहानी में ही असल मज़ा होता है.
मैं खुद भी छोटी कहानियों का फैन हूँ... इसलिए छोटी कहानियाँ ही लिखता हूँ.
कोशिश करूँगा एक दिन लंबी कहानी लिखने का.
:)
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(07-04-2022, 08:23 AM)ghost19 Wrote: Nice story
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(06-01-2023, 05:00 PM)koolme98 Wrote: wow... what a story...
Do try to find time to read another story by me, "The Naughty Office Thing".
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Very well written story. Took me over the edge.
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(07-01-2023, 10:15 AM)sahebraopawar Wrote: Nice story
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(07-01-2023, 09:41 PM)viksbabs Wrote: Very well written story. Took me over the edge.
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(10-03-2023, 02:37 AM)creamydelight Wrote: Mind blowing
(10-03-2023, 03:52 AM)creamydelight Wrote: Umdaa writing
Thank You so much. :)
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(22-03-2022, 03:22 PM)Nadeem.Kn Wrote: Waiting Bhai
Haaaa re....jaldi kar.....mood kharab ho gaya naye launde ki chudai dekh kar.....paaani to band hi nahi Ho raha hai...
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(23-03-2022, 05:02 PM)tanushree Wrote: Bhai update karo
Bahut der kar raha hai baaaaaadmaaas. Yaha humlogo ki halat kharab ho rahi hai....hai n sahi baat Meri pyari chudakkad Tanushree darling....tera bhi yahi hal hai.n...
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(25-03-2022, 03:14 PM)The_Writer Wrote: “मैं जब बस में चढ़ा उस वक़्त कंडक्टर उस आंटी को, (यानि आयुष की मम्मी को) एक स्लीपर की ओर ले जा रहा था.. लेकिन आंटी को स्लीपर में चढ़ने में दिक्कत हो रही थी; तब मैंने आगे बढ़ कर उसकी हेल्प कर दी. जब वो स्लीपर में चली गई तब अचानक से मुझे एक आईडिया आया --- कंडक्टर वहीँ मेरे बगल में खड़ा था तो मैंने उससे थोड़ी ऊँची आवाज़ में पूछा की क्या मुझे भी कोई स्लीपर मिल सकती है? तो उसने नहीं में जवाब दिया --- बोला की ‘बस यही एक स्लीपर खाली है जिसमें दो जन जा सकते हैं.’ इस पर मैं उससे बोला,
“आंटी तो एक अकेली हैं; मैं चला जाऊँ इस स्लीपर में?”
कंडक्टर मुझे सिर से पैर तक देख कर बोला,
“पर तुम तो इनके परिचित नहीं हो इसलिए मैं तुम्हें इस पर जाने को नहीं बोल सकता.”
उसका जवाब सुन कर मैं मायूस हो गया.. ये देख कर कंडक्टर आगे बोला,
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(क्रमशः)
Bahut maja aa raha hai.....aisa lagta hai ki launda mujhe hi chodne ke liye aa raha hai.. .meri to fir se paani aane laga hai sab jagah se....tang apne aap khul gai....
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(27-03-2022, 09:44 PM)saya Wrote: kahani to bahut hi achhchhi thi par apne bahut hi jldi end kar ........................wow
Ohhhhhhhhh....to kyaaaaaaa ye kahani khatam ho gai.....
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(05-04-2022, 08:22 PM)The_Writer Wrote: कहानी को पसंद करने के लिए आप सब का बहुत धन्यवाद.  :)
Lekin itni jaldi kahani khatam ho gai....
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(05-04-2022, 08:27 PM)The_Writer Wrote: लघु कहानी में ही असल मज़ा होता है.
मैं खुद भी छोटी कहानियों का फैन हूँ... इसलिए छोटी कहानियाँ ही लिखता हूँ.
कोशिश करूँगा एक दिन लंबी कहानी लिखने का.
To dusri kaun si kahani hai....uske link to de . ..
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Next update please
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