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After reading the last update. I too feel Parvati will be good wife for Krish.
Meera got old Desai and why not krish have old parvati.
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Previous update so dramatic and as expected krish will been forced to leave home as far later than my expectations.
Waiting eagerly. Dont
make so long
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After the end of last update lots of explanation, debate going on. Mostly reader divide into two border part. One Meera leave Krish another Meera return back to Krish. In any one of the outcome, writer has to put strong logic. After reading all comments I reread the last update several times. Some points here need to be cleared.
1. Krish made hole in the room just to listen what happened inside the room. Whether Desai know it? I think he know it very well. In the 1st part of last episode he told Krish "Do you remember the night our friend Piyush spent overnight with us? That night he had come to know what is going on between us..." The room is sound proof, than how Piyush know the things without getting any sound from the room. So it is chance that Desai know very well about the hole and he planned his game accordingly.
2. The morning sex which was yet not clear this may be game plan of Desai to make Krish misunderstood about Meera.
For me from the beginning of the story Desai made his game plan to destroy the family. In case of failure of one plan he made another plan. Finally he win the faith of the couple. Both Meera and Krish become pawn of his game. Krish due to his fantasy and Meera due to his sexual power and sugar coated word.
I think it's time to expose the true face of Desai in front of Meera. Let's see how writer do all these in his last and final update.
Thanks and regards to writer Krish to give us such a wonderful masterpiece.
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As I already mentioned in my last statement, it is no longer so important who stays with whom in the
end or who shapes the future together.
We, as readers, discuss and speculate a lot ... basically "beating around the bush"!
It is rather our "wishfulness" and what we would like to imagine and see.
No more and no less!
Because, none of us is able to see inside the author Krish. Thus, his decision about the end of this story
remains hidden from us.
Only he is the master of the course, the sequence, the consequence and the end...
Meera, ...so
Krish, ...this
Desai, ...that
The rest, which ...
The day before yesterday, ...partnership
Yesterday, ...trust
Today, ...cheat
Tomorrow, ...was it all wort? ...
Love, ...only goes through sex
Marriage, ...measured by status and symbolism
Fidelity, ...bought with money
Friendship, ...similar to Brutus with knife held at the back (Et tu, Brute?) ...
One more thing;
almost all stories (those posted in erotic site's and reports those about swingers, wife/husband sharing)
that have voyeuristic, cuckolding and sharing content are rather about:
- more
- different
- other
- adventurous
- discovery ...
SEX !
So, nothing to do with;
Alpha-Monkey, Destroy Marriage, Manipulate and Steal Wife or Man, Abandonment and Divorce !...
I would like to see and be very happy about it if the author Krish would do a short time jump
(of about 1 - 3 years) at the end of this story to show us readers where the main protogonists
have arrived and are standing...
Lollobionda
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Hi Krish , hope this weekend there will be an update and final chapter unfolds.......
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Krish has lost Meera once and for all
Meera has been much more manipulative than Susheel. The way she expressed her love towards krish in bed and noticed his reactions and disclosed her past encounter to hear his opinion only to conclude if Desai will be a reliable person to move permanently to live with.
Desai has won her heart in many incidents other than in bed. Like having her photo in his wallet and bedroom. Saving her from the anniversary day humiliation from the securities. Taking care of her during their events outside together. She felt very secure in his hands. A woman expect only this from a man. A man who can rule a woman in bed only can give this secured feel. Krish has never been like that, He is a failure, loser and incompetent to Desai by all means.
There is no chance of coming together. It is not sensible as well.
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Tomorrow is Sunday. hope it will be a end day of this story. The story ended in the last episode itself, only the end card and credits to roll out.
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What ever be the final update, only thing i want to say here is ....
THANK YOU KRISH FOR EVERYTHING !!!!!!
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Author Krish is currently banging his head onto wall now. So much of speculation so much of theory. He must be thinking , I wanted to end this story with some simple ending , what he taught was also normal conclusion. But he is confused now what to do further. If Meera ends with Desai half of reader will protest , if she go with Krish now rest half will do dharna. Ha ha ha ??? god bless you
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This is a story of krish and he is the authority. The readers cannot dictate terms or try to take the story away and make him do what they want. The author would have decided from the intro to end. As he told in the beginning, krish will lose everything - his job, wife, house etc. Now it happened. So everything ended literally. If you want to change everything, you can just say, everything came in krish dreams. That would be very silly and childish way of writing. Matured author like krish would never do that. So let the readers accept the truth and thank the author and move on like a grownup instead of abusing the author or writing craps about the view of them.
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Hi all.
Thank you all for creating a storm with your comments here. I'm not in the position to reply any of them.
I'm concentrating on the next chapter, with a target of posting it on next weekend.
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Target date 15 Jan 2023.
Hope Krish(Author) achieve the target like Desai this time :)
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But my opinion Krish don't read readers comments before end post otherwise he will be confuses keep free him and write the end without any influence by any anybody's we accept any end with our open Hearts think most of viewers will be agree with me
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I see these comments and statements with all the facets, contents, critical aspects, annoyances
and points of view as a garden with many different flowers in magnificent colours and fragrances...
If there had been only one kind of flower, only one colour and one fragrance, this (garden) story
would not have had even a third of the visitors or statements and comments.
We would have long since grown weary and stopped visiting this (garden) story...
The variety of different sensations, ideas, opinions and preferences of the readers and fans is what
makes this story unique and interesting...
On the other hand, it is also an incentive for the author, with the predicate;
"keep it up, we like your writing and this story!"...
The author is/was able to touch the emotional level of most readers (only a few can do that!)
and managed to inspire us again and again and to pull us into the story like a magnet.
We all became "voluntary" and "enthusiastic" trabants of Krish and his writing talent....
I like this story very much, so; keep it up Krish ...
Lollobionda
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Bro what you have planned with the story don't know, but waiting for your next update,....,.......