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(23-05-2019, 01:08 AM)Armaan.K Wrote: I mean if possible; include the real life Nepowood relationships. There are too many mother, sister, cousins to choose from. Some of them are known IRL for some very specific things. etc; etc;
I do have some ideas (e.g Czarina Ekta Kapoor and such) but I am not sure what is overarching plot of your story.
Initially I was quite unsure about Indian actress and GOT plot character combination. But I enjoyed the intrigue this plot-line have provided and hope you continue same.
I will try to add such relationships bro.
Also if you have ideas,then feel free to message them to me, we can discuss the possibilities
And i hope you continue enjoying.
Thanks for your support. It means a lot.
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NEXT UPDATE TOMORROW. SORRY FOR DELAY.WAS OUT OF TOWN . WORK LOAD.
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(23-05-2019, 05:37 PM)Evil Wrote: NEXT UPDATE TOMORROW. SORRY FOR DELAY.WAS OUT OF TOWN . WORK LOAD.
Eagerly waiting for new update . I hope it will be on kriti or jacqueline
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(24-05-2019, 04:00 PM)jackdawrson Wrote: Excellent writing
Thank you bhai
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(23-05-2019, 05:37 PM)Evil Wrote: NEXT UPDATE TOMORROW. SORRY FOR DELAY.WAS OUT OF TOWN . WORK LOAD.
I hope will do what you say
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(24-05-2019, 05:49 PM)Evil Wrote: Thank you bhai
Bro what about adding Hollywood actress or wwe divas ??? I think that will be great what do you think
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(24-05-2019, 09:38 PM)Pallll Wrote: Bro what about adding Hollywood actress or wwe divas ??? I think that will be great what do you think
Author's choice but I personally wouldn't support it. I think we have enough women in India plus I feel it may alienate a lot of readers because a lot of Indians can relate more easily to the bollywood actresses than they would to hollywood.
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(24-05-2019, 09:38 PM)Pallll Wrote: Bro what about adding Hollywood actress or wwe divas ??? I think that will be great what do you think
Nah. Sorry bro,but first of all i even don't know about mivh hollywood and wwe chicks, so i personally cant relate to them. Secondly, there are already many actresses in bollywood, let me cover them.
And i got busy again.
The next update would be tomorrow
I have it written
It just had to be typed but i dont have time till tomorrow
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(25-05-2019, 07:08 AM)Evil Wrote: Nah. Sorry bro,but first of all i even don't know about mivh hollywood and wwe chicks, so i personally cant relate to them. Secondly, there are already many actresses in bollywood, let me cover them.
And i got busy again.
The next update would be tomorrow
I have it written
It just had to be typed but i dont have time till tomorrow
Don't worry buddy. I am a college student so I know how busy life can get. The fact that you take time out to write this is really amazing
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(25-05-2019, 12:54 PM)coolraj839 Wrote: Bro update ????
Would give it today. In work.
It will get uploaded before 4 pm.
In this Update introducing Deepika and Sridevi.
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CHAPTER - 8
ARJUN
'What do you know about the jungle?' Arjun asked Deepika as he sat on the edge of the jungle, on the ground, in the middle of night.
' About everything that anyman alive does ' said Deepika sitting besides Arjun
'Then tell me ' Arjun said as he took a puff from his cigar
'First tell me why are you so keen to go into the jungle? You know it is a death well.' Deepika asked worriedly
' You know why, there is my lover in it somewhere. I love her and I would go searching for her even if it means death'
Deepika's heart pounded as soon as she heard the word ' death' . Deepika loved Arjun. Loved him so much that it didn't affected her whether he loved her back or not.Which he didn't. He loved someone else. And he was loyal to his love. And strangely, that was one of his qualities which Deepika liked.
' About 30 thousand years ago' Deepika started to tell as she took the cigar from Arjun and took a puff ' A woman used to rule our land. She was kind woman and a just ruler. Until she ruled, no person in the entire land ever slept with empty stomach. She used to listen to people's problems and solved them. Everyone was happy and they liked her. She was not frightening like other rulers now. So people didn't feared her. And that was one thing that allowed people to raise voice against her, as soon as she did something what people thought was wrong.The Queen was a perfect ruler but as a person she was complicated . She had a forbidden incestuous relationship with her son. One day someone from the public saw her in compromising positions with her son. Slowly, the news spread , and everybody came to know the truth. They couldn’t bear a mother doing such evil deed with her son. So they ripped her of her clothes and sent her to live in the jungle, just like they did to your lover. In jungle , the Queen accumulated some magical power, they say, and raised an army of dead . She wanted revenge from humanity for giving her a push in the abyss in exchange of her so much love which she gave to people. They couldn’t even accept her love. She murdered every single person , on the planet and then got back to jungle and began to reside there. Humans took birth again on earth and crowded the world again. But it is said that, from then The Queen of the world lives in the Jungle, with her army of dead and when any human tries to cross the jungle , they are killed by the Queen.’ Deepika unfloded her narrative
‘Hmmmm’ was all Arjun said.
‘Please don’t go’ pleaded Deepika.
‘ Why do you care?’ Arjun asked, looking at the night sky.
‘ Because I love you’
‘Well you shouldn’t . You have a husband , and you are the Queen of our land and I don’t even love you’
‘ I know, but just like you, I am also genetically impaired to fall in love with the person forbidden by the society’
Arjun looked at Deepika for the first time . Her eyes showed something he hadn’t saw in them when she looked at the King of shailnagri. LOVE !
‘ I can’t stay. I have to find her’ He said.
‘ I can’t stop you from doing what you want, No one had ever come out alive of it’ said Deepika, and then planted a goodbye kiss on his cheeks. A long soothing kiss from her bold lips, the symbol of her love for him. One sided love.
Arjun got up from there, hugged Deepika and they parted their ways. Queen Deepika to her castle and Arjun to the jungle.
After about walking 2 kms deep into the jungle , Arjun decided to take rest against a tree besides a pond. The jungle seemed so peaceful, nothing but a cool breeze blew through Arjun’s hairs. The water in the pond was so still, that it almost seemed like a mirror. But still there were frogs and some other animals at the edge who regularly disturbed it a little. Out of nowhere a flock of hair started to appear on the surface of water. The hairs were longer than two hands. Surprised by this, and a little frightened, Arjun hid behind the tree.Slowly, a head started to appear too from beneath of the water, first came the forehead, then the round big, dark brown eyes and then slowly the whole wet face.The head from the deep center of pond was coming towards the corner . Slowly, her neck came into view and what then came into view were the humonguous tits . Round , plumpy tits of the size , no woman on the earth ever had. And two small , pointy nipples on top of them shined like diamonds when moonlight hit the knockers. Slowly, as the woman walked towards the edge of the pond, her flat belly started to appear and then those two gigantic hips , so bulged out that even if someone put a glass on their hips , they wouldn’t fall. And those busty thighs and calfs. That wet body was mother of all the female bodies anyone ever saw, and it was fully naked in all its glory, as the moonlight dispersed its beauty in all the directions. Arjun got shocked by seeing her, he remembered every bit of that body, that face, those tits he used to caress, that ass he used to put his dick in, that navel he used to play with it, those thighs he used to lick, every fucking part of it. How can somebody forget her. It was Sridevi, his lover, his will to live, the blood in his veins, the fire in his loins. She was the calmness in his eyes, the reason of existence of his body, the reason of erectness of his dick,the warmth in his eyes. She was the other half of his body, his life. She was his…….
‘Mom’
Uttered the feeble lips of Arjun
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(25-05-2019, 01:57 PM)Evil Wrote: CHAPTER - 9
ARJUN
'What do you know about the jungle?' Arjun asked Deepika as he sat on the edge of the jungle, on the ground, in the middle of night.
' About everything that anyman alive does ' said Deepika sitting besides Arjun
'Then tell me ' Arjun said as he took a puff from his cigar
'First tell me why are you so keen to go into the jungle? You know it is a death well.' Deepika asked worriedly
' You know why, there is my lover in it somewhere. I love her and I would go searching for her even if it means death'
Deepika's heart pounded as soon as she heard the word ' death' . Deepika loved Arjun. Loved him so much that it didn't affected her whether he loved her back or not.Which he didn't. He loved someone else. And he was loyal to his love. And strangely, that was one of his qualities which Deepika liked.
' About 30 thousand years ago' Deepika started to tell as she took the cigar from Arjun and took a puff ' A woman used to rule our land. She was kind woman and a just ruler. Until she ruled, no person in the entire land ever slept with empty stomach. She used to listen to people's problems and solved them. Everyone was happy and they liked her. She was not frightening like other rulers now. So people didn't feared her. And that was one thing that allowed people to raise voice against her, as soon as she did something what people thought was wrong.The Queen was a perfect ruler but as a person she was complicated . She had a forbidden incestuous relationship with her son. One day someone from the public saw her in compromising positions with her son. Slowly, the news spread , and everybody came to know the truth. They couldn’t bear a mother doing such evil deed with her son. So they ripped her of her clothes and sent her to live in the jungle, just like they did to your lover. In jungle , the Queen accumulated some magical power, they say, and raised an army of dead . She wanted revenge from humanity for giving her a push in the abyss in exchange of her so much love which she gave to people. They couldn’t even accept her love. She murdered every single person , on the planet and then got back to jungle and began to reside there. Humans took birth again on earth and crowded the world again. But it is said that, from then The Queen of the world lives in the Jungle, with her army of dead and when any human tries to cross the jungle , they are killed by the Queen.’ Deepika unfloded her narrative
‘Hmmmm’ was all Arjun said.
‘Please don’t go’ pleaded Deepika.
‘ Why do you care?’ Arjun asked, looking at the night sky.
‘ Because I love you’
‘Well you shouldn’t . You have a husband , and you are the Queen of our land and I don’t even love you’
‘ I know, but just like you, I am also genetically impaired to fall in love with the person forbidden by the society’
Arjun looked at Deepika for the first time . Her eyes showed something he hadn’t saw in them when she looked at the King of shailnagri. LOVE !
‘ I can’t stay. I have to find her’ He said.
‘ I can’t stop you from doing what you want, No one had ever come out alive of it’ said Deepika, and then planted a goodbye kiss on his cheeks. A long soothing kiss from her bold lips, the symbol of her love for him. One sided love.
Arjun got up from there, hugged Deepika and they parted their ways. Queen Deepika to her castle and Arjun to the jungle.
After about walking 2 kms deep into the jungle , Arjun decided to take rest against a tree besides a pond. The jungle seemed so peaceful, nothing but a cool breeze blew through Arjun’s hairs. The water in the pond was so still, that it almost seemed like a mirror. But still there were frogs and some other animals at the edge who regularly disturbed it a little. Out of nowhere a flock of hair started to appear on the surface of water. The hairs were longer than two hands. Surprised by this, and a little frightened, Arjun hid behind the tree.Slowly, a head started to appear too from beneath of the water, first came the forehead, then the round big, dark brown eyes and then slowly the whole wet face.The head from the deep center of pond was coming towards the corner . Slowly, her neck came into view and what then came into view were the humonguous tits . Round , plumpy tits of the size , no woman on the earth ever had. And two small , pointy nipples on top of them shined like diamonds when moonlight hit the knockers. Slowly, as the woman walked towards the edge of the pond, her flat belly started to appear and then those two gigantic hips , so bulged out that even if someone put a glass on their hips , they wouldn’t fall. And those busty thighs and calfs. That wet body was mother of all the female bodies anyone ever saw, and it was fully naked in all its glory, as the moonlight dispersed its beauty in all the directions. Arjun got shocked by seeing her, he remembered every bit of that body, that face, those tits he used to caress, that ass he used to put his dick in, that navel he used to play with it, those thighs he used to lick, every fucking part of it. How can somebody forget her. It was Sridevi, his lover, his will to live, the blood in his veins, the fire in his loins. She was the calmness in his eyes, the reason of existence of his body, the reason of erectness of his dick,the warmth in his eyes. She was the other half of his body, his life. She was his…….
‘Mom’
Uttered the feeble lips of Arjun
Great story and really exotic pics which made this even better . But bro where is kriti you said it will be about her ??? ?? but still great writting
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(25-05-2019, 02:08 PM)Pallll Wrote: Great story and really exotic pics which made this even better . But bro where is kriti you said it will be about her ??? ?? but still great writting
Yeah bro, at first i was bringing kriti in place of deepika. but deepika suited better for that role. I will bring kriti soon
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(25-05-2019, 12:54 PM)coolraj839 Wrote: Bro update ????
Did you not read what he/she said?
(25-05-2019, 07:08 AM)Evil Wrote: And i got busy again.
The next update would be tomorrow
I have it written
It just had to be typed but i dont have time till tomorrow
It's fine to ask for updates if he/she hasn't said anything but here they clearly said that they were busy. Give them time then
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WHO IS YOUR FAVOURITE CHARACTER UNTIL NOW FROM GAME OF BONES?
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(25-05-2019, 04:58 PM)Evil Wrote: WHO IS YOUR FAVOURITE CHARACTER UNTIL NOW FROM GAME OF BONES?
arya stark
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(25-05-2019, 04:58 PM)Evil Wrote: WHO IS YOUR FAVOURITE CHARACTER UNTIL NOW FROM GAME OF BONES?
Its dipika of course but my fev is kriti and Jacqueline just waiting for them and hoping their storys will be bigger then dipika's
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Awesome story evilnbro today i read your full story with connecting to it and it touched my lund and made it hard for kareena katrina deepika and please also add aishwarya and srk please give today big updates
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