Fantasy Journey of my Married life - By Fantasy King

[Lust4You]

Hey Bro.....

Finally thanks for posting the story..... A good start no doubt but please don't get me wrong, but you waited for so long just to present a copy of what we have already read...... I personally expected something new....

Hope your future updates could bring that change......

Please update soon.....

[FantasyKing21]

Hey Bro.....

Finally thanks for posting the story..... A good start no doubt but please don't get me wrong, but you waited for so long just to present a copy of what we have already read...... I personally expected something new....

Hope your future updates could bring that change......

Please update soon.....

What Else could I have written..... I tried different options but none made it erotic.....

So I had to resort to using the original plot and take it in a new direction.......

I guess You should try writing..... May be you have better ideas.....

[Givemeextra]

What Else could I have written..... I tried different options but none made it erotic.....
So I had to resort to using the original plot and take it in a new direction.......
I guess You should try writing..... May be you have better ideas.....

You have just started with an introduction and main adventures are not yet come

You are focusing on her past from your point of view. This will be different as it explains the reasons for her being such a slut in present

Yes, she being a slut is always there but her past will have new characters previously unread.

So  Do continue pls. Don't take anything personally.

[Lust4You]

You have just started with an introduction and main adventures are not yet come

You are focusing on her past from your point of view. This will be different as it explains the reasons for her being such a slut in present

Yes, she being a slut is always there but her past will have new characters previously unread.

So  Do continue pls. Don't take anything personally.

Hey Bro.... I am not saying anything bad....

Please don't mind my words... I only said what I thought as a reader..... the Name of the story "Journey of my Married life" suggests you write a story of her activities after marriage.....

Please think about it.....

[badri.rao2006]

Hi Guys.....

No Offense to any reader.....

I believe this platform is as Independent as Independent India...... But what I don't understand, on this platform instead of encouraging the writer we have people who try to find logic, sense etc in a erotic story.....

Please guys give the much need freedom to the writer.....


If You Don't like something, ignore it.... I am not saying that you should not comment or suggest, but that should help the writer and not discourage....

Please guys,

Once again No offense to any reader.......

Wish you All A Very happy New Year....... Lets have a Healthy and Exiting New Year......

All the Best to all the readers and the Website Creators.......

[Lust4You]

Hi Guys.....


Me Also - No Offense to any one......

I have just written a small version of the same story in a new thread......

Please read and share your comments.....

Thank You.

https://xossipy.com/thread-44599.html

[Givemeextra]

FantasyKing21 - Pls update next parts

[blackdesk]

please update.