[Dumeelkumar]

Super end.

I thought you will explain the reason for divorce. If siraj love his first wife, why should he divorce.
Did he have any child from first marriage
How many years since he divorced. His first wife married again? etc..

[Sankamithira]

She spoke about her divorce, it means she has made up her mind for it in future. Hope you can come out with another version.

[garaju1977]

Now a days truth .

Actually happening in real life.

Good conclusion with heart touching ending.

Waiting for u next story

[Blue Bull]

Super end.

I thought you will explain the reason for divorce. If siraj love his first wife, why should he divorce.
Did he have any child from first marriage
How many years since he divorced. His first wife married again? etc..

Siraj has not divorced his wife ....... the reason of divorce may be explained by Krish_999 the writer of the original story ...... other things are explained already in the story ..........

[Blue Bull]

She spoke about her divorce, it means she has made up her mind for it in future. Hope you can come out with another version.

Not only divorce ....... lot of questions are their to be answered ..... regarding next part ... not yet think over that ........ u people may have the question and probable answer to those ........ I may compile those ........

[Blue Bull]

Now a days truth .

Actually happening in real life.

Good conclusion with heart touching ending.

Waiting for u next story

Yes bro ....... I am not a regular writer ......... feel the same as u r ..... so liked to present that in a more natural and palatable way ...........

[Vishal Ramana]

Superb finish.

[Blue Bull]

Superb finish.

Thx ......... what about the eroticism ...........?

[Hotyyhard]

WOW WHAT A STORY BRO REALLY AWESOME YOUR NARRATION IS JUST AMAZING WAITING FOR MORE STORIES FROM YOU PLEASE DONT DISAPPOINT US

[Blue Bull]

WOW WHAT A STORY BRO REALLY AWESOME YOUR NARRATION IS JUST AMAZING WAITING FOR MORE STORIES FROM YOU PLEASE DONT DISAPPOINT US

I am not a real player dude ...... like to watch the match sitting in the box ..... actually I like to analyse the stories and to encourage the writers ..... my writing Guru is Shree and Theme n Concept master is Pinuram ....... better to ask them active here again ........

[Blue Bull]

This night has to be like their first night. I expect both explore each others body fully and lick and kiss each other fully. He teach her blow job and she enjoy it and drink all his juices. He eat her mangoes and vertical lips and asshole and make her moan and cry with many thundrous orgasms. Original story did not have things in details. Hope this has more in detail on each other point of view. She will get whatever her husband did not show so far. Siraj will show complete love like his wife and make her fall for him.

Gandhi, the story is now complied .............what is ur feelings now ..... Is my narration is up to ur mark .......?

[Thangaraasu]

Thanks for completing the story.
Naina is more playful, teasing in this version. The real emotions was only from Siraj.
The last scene where they parted did not make a punch like original. Not sure it is because its second time read.

[Rocky Rakesh]

There will be a thread of tension that would be running between the two main characters. i think it is missed somewhere. Naina behave more like a slut for the reason not known. Her plan to take his child and her explanation for giving her was appreciable.

[Steven Rajaa]

Wonderful story

[sandy4hotgirls1]

Lovely story.. well written and sensible conckusion though could have been continued and would have loved to read as wwell..nevertheless well done...plz keep writing.

[Blue Bull]

Thanks for completing the story.
Naina is more playful, teasing in this version. The real emotions was only from Siraj.
The last scene where they parted did not make a punch like original. Not sure it is because its second time read.

Actually this is the story of two different variants ...... Siraj, a seasoned veteran known as Playboy in his organization but with strong ethics and with vast experience with gals ...... where as Naina is quite nave and sexually starved for long time of which she was quite unaware and also not aware of the basic needs of a person and required amenities for a healthy leaving ..... They both are north and south poles ..... so such reactions from them is evident .......

As far as the punch from the last scene ...... I could not understand your feelings ..... I think it was just the original with a slight change in added naration .... do not think that diluted the closing punch .... will u pl explain that little bit in details ........

[Blue Bull]

There will be a thread of tension that would be running between the two main characters. i think it is missed somewhere. Naina behave more like a slut for the reason not known. Her plan to take his child and her explanation for giving her was appreciable.

I think all ur dilemmas are answered in the story itself or in my previous explanation to Thangaraasu ......

[Blue Bull]

Wonderful story

Thx dude .......

[Blue Bull]

Lovely story.. well written and sensible conckusion though could have been continued and would have loved to read as wwell..nevertheless well done...plz keep writing.

Thx Sir for ur compliments ...... Yes, lots of question to be answered ....... What happened to Siraj n Naina after they departed ......? How Naina's relation with Karthik was ?...... Whether she got impregnated or not? If yes, how she managed that and what is Karthik's reaction ?.... Whether Siraj forgot that onenight incidence as a nightmare ? ...... etc. many things .........

[Nesamanikumar]

Super erotic story. North and south cannot meet always.