[Dorabooji]

Nice update

[garaju1977]

Good update

[Losliyafan]

Excellent

[Muthiah Sivaraman]

Marvelous update friend

[Gopal Ratnam]

Expect this to go for one more day or week in this version. disappointed.

[NovelNavel]

Hoping some changes here for a differentiator

[vissu0321]

Waiting for your update upcoming of way of narration sir

[veeravaibhav]

UR Rocking

[Saikarthik]

Superb wish you will continue the story in your version

[AjitKumar]

Not much of change from the original. Another version means expectation of different thought process.

[Blue Bull]

Nice update

Good update

Excellent

Marvelous update friend

UR Rocking

Thx friends for ur nice compliments which made me able to complete the story ..... it is going to meet its' end soon .........

[Blue Bull]

Expect this to go for one more day or week in this version. disappointed.

Yes dear ..... in a day or two its' going to be ended ......... do not be disappointed ..... so many good writers are here with their great stories with good narration .......

[Blue Bull]

Waiting for your update upcoming of way of narration sir

Yes giving another update tonight on ur honor ..........

[Blue Bull]

Superb wish you will continue the story in your version

Its' not a version dear but a modified one like a script modified to be presented on a silver screen ...

[Blue Bull]

Not much of change from the original. Another version means expectation of different thought process.

Yes dear ...... its' a writer's ethics ......... modification means no change in original concept and theme .........

[Blue Bull]

She then slowly pulled my pants up, zipped and buttoned it, buckled my belt, and then got up on her feet.

“May I have a little favour from you?” I pleaded and she was turned on.

“Can I have a token of love from you?” I asked again.

“Siraj, You put life in a corpse. Loved me to live. You are my savior. I have surrendered everything I have to you including my soul. I have nothing more other than my life to offer you. Do you need that?” She answered emotionally.

I embraced her tight and kissed her forehead.

“No…. no …. no. Not that. I only need your drenched panties if you like to give.”

She shied and teardrops shredded down from her eyes. Without uttering a single word she lifted her saree and put out her panty and handed it over to me looking at the ground.

I smelled that, kissed and put that in my pocket with a smile. I straightaway hugged her and kissed her eyes and lips affectionately. 

Her lips had lost their charm. But it was still tasty.


3. Conclude:


Most vital part of the story is following tomorrow ........

[Karmayogee]

One woman ready to give her life for a man will leave him go just like that?. waiting for the last episode.

[Rangabaashyam]

Very good.
As token of love she is cheat her husband and going to carry siraj baby.
What more she can ask for.

[xbiilove]

yr): yr): yr):

[garaju1977]

She is in love with Siraj,
And ready to bear his child in token of gratitude towards Siraj.
Let's wait and see.

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