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"Okay. Sure. But one more question. Kids?"
"No."
She stopped there. Later she told me she was the loser. Not me.
"Now that's really, really a great compliment."
"I'm seriously telling you. I envy her. And I'm angry with her."
"That's great. I'm feeling honoured now, Your excellency." and bowed my head again
She laughed. I did too.
"You're very funny, Siraj."
"And you're... You're..Sh..sh...se..."
I paused and she looked at me, expecting some nice comment but I didn't say anything. She pulled my hair playfully. She was a little bit easy and friendlier now.
"You know you're actually far from what I thought when I saw you. I thought you were a very serious man. You know, you look very reserved but I can see now you're very frank and funny."
"No, you're wrong. I'm very serious, very very serious.."
She laughed.
That's the moment Vinnee woke up again and this time he straightaway resorted to crying mode.
"You stop laughing please. It looks really daunting to me but it always wakes him up..." I said.
She picked him up from the bed and tried to calm him down, but in vain.
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Eela story comma istha yalaga sir, much waiting for your update
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He is a divorcee. She is married, but not happy. Good that they met.
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Very good. She started touching the stranger.
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Wonderful
Both are now see the other side of each.
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(11-11-2021, 09:42 PM)vissu0321 Wrote: Eela story comma istha yalaga sir, much waiting for your update
Sorry, unable to understand the first part of your comment ..... Yes Sir, do not worry.... pl have regular visit ..... it'd s dsily updated thread ......
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(11-11-2021, 09:56 PM)LustyLeo Wrote: He is a divorcee. She is married, but not happy. Good that they met.
Let's see ...... what result will be outcome out of their meeting ..........
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(11-11-2021, 10:02 PM)Thangaraasu Wrote: Very good. She started touching the stranger.
Without touching there will be love making .............:P
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(11-11-2021, 10:08 PM)Gandhi krishna Wrote: Wonderful
Both are now see the other side of each.
Yes, what is above and what is beneath .........
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Super update thanks
Writers are nothing but creators. Always respect them.
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(11-11-2021, 11:02 PM)AB-the Unicorn Wrote: Super update thanks
Most welcome bro ....... keep regular visit and inspiring ........
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Such short updates.
But very beautifully written.
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This night has to be like their first night. I expect both explore each others body fully and lick and kiss each other fully. He teach her blow job and she enjoy it and drink all his juices. He eat her mangoes and vertical lips and asshole and make her moan and cry with many thundrous orgasms. Original story did not have things in details. Hope this has more in detail on each other point of view. She will get whatever her husband did not show so far. Siraj will show complete love like his wife and make her fall for him.
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Turning more hotter with each episode.
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Lovely updates..make it naughtier between them...A sexy lactating lady n a horny handsome guy...lovely combination...lots of possibilities.
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(12-11-2021, 02:34 AM)Curiousbull Wrote: Such short updates.
But very beautifully written.
Bro, it's a daily updated thread ....... so long updates are ant feasible ....... I am trying to write 2 or 3 A4 pages daily ......
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(12-11-2021, 06:05 AM)Gandhi krishna Wrote: This night has to be like their first night. I expect both explore each others body fully and lick and kiss each other fully. He teach her blow job and she enjoy it and drink all his juices. He eat her mangoes and vertical lips and asshole and make her moan and cry with many thundrous orgasms. Original story did not have things in details. Hope this has more in detail on each other point of view. She will get whatever her husband did not show so far. Siraj will show complete love like his wife and make her fall for him.
Thx Gandhi for the suggestions ........ I have overlooked these facts ...... certainly ur suggestions will be taken care of .........
Thx again ...... keep suggesting things to make the story more palatable .........
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(12-11-2021, 06:26 AM)Chennai Veeran Wrote: Nice story
Thx for the compliments ......... keep regular visit .......
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(12-11-2021, 06:56 AM)Vasanthan Wrote: Turning more hotter with each episode.
Slow n steady wins the race .......Yes, it will be more erotic as times goes on ...........
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