Misc. Erotica Accidentally Accident. (Completed)

[Blue Bull]

Super update.
Naina has already started thinking wish she had a husband like him who is very caring and make her smile always. Time to thank.

Yes, Siraj is like that ........ he never seduces any but girls get attracted to him for his personality ......

[Blue Bull]

The stage is getting set. Nice update

Yes, now the play will start within no time or it will be KLPD ..........?

[Blue Bull]

Hope this story does not have the same end like the original. She deserves a better life and Siraj has to take her with him. Let them leave the child to karthik and say good bye.

I hope so ...... but changing either the basic theme or the climax will be an insult to the original auther..... It's just the modified not changed version of the original ..........

[Blue Bull]

Yes i was also dd not like the climax of original. Thought it should have been different.

Agreed, but we should not insult the original author by changing the story completely .........

[Blue Bull]

Nice story.
Any housewife will fall for the man who gives everything she misses in life.

Yes, that gives birth to the adulatory .........

[Blue Bull]

The author rewriting the story means, he also want to have a different climax. Otherwise, it can be a copy paste. 

I do not think so ......... Let's see ..... what more can be done to the original story ......... I do not have any right to change the original completely ...........

[vissu0321]

Story bagundi, way of going on ..

[Blue Bull]

Story bagundi, way of going on ..

[sexycharan]

A story can have different versions. Just a character name change will alone not make the story different. Situations, conversations, introduction of new characters and finally a new climax acceptable by the readers in a more acceptable manner. Otherwise, it will be old wine in new bottle. The challenge and victory is how to make the reader think this as classic compared to original. It is not insulting the original author. Its just a different thought process.

[Blue Bull]

I took some clothes from my bag and walked to the bathroom. I took a grand shower and I felt really relaxed. It was a long restless day. Must have crossed midnight.

I wore the T-shirt and trousers from the bathroom. And I washed my shirt and hung it on the hangar.

As I stepped out, she was breastfeeding Vinnee and I looked directly at her. She had her sari pallu removed and her blouse open, and a part of her milky white bulge was visible. I saw it and she saw me seeing it.

It was a great embarrassment for both of us.

"Oh shit! I’m Sorry!" I blurted and quickly looked away.

She tried to hide her open skin with her hand. She was sitting in the chair, facing me, so she couldn't turn away.

"I'm very sorry, Siraj!"

I heard her say. I didn't look at her.

"What sorry? You have shown me that." I said.

"Yeah I know. Please forget it."

"Yeah, I know, I should. But I don't think I can."

"Why?"

"Oh come on, let's better not talk about it."

"OK."

I heard her giggling.

"What? Why are you laughing?"

[Blue Bull]

"No, nothing.."

I was standing in front of the mirror. She finished feeding the child and got up. He seemed to be asleep. She lay him on the bed.
 
Her sari pallu fell again and I had that scene again. This time both of those hillocks with two medium sized gbangs at their top center.

She had hooked her blouse back but it betrayed it's purpose of hiding her secrets. 

Her nicely shaped round mounds, the white and silky skin cleavage between them, and, when she got up, her stomach and it's flaps and navel revealed Just for a moment, and she covered those all with her pallu.

I stood watching it all mesmerized. My mouth was left open.

"Stop staring." She said.

And I regained my consciousness.

"Oh, yeah."

"You're caring, but you're shameless also."

"That's a really, really nice compliment, Your Highness." I showed my teeth while bowing my head.

She laughed. What a beauty! I felt like her beauty was increasing to have an effect in my mind with each passing moment.

"I have one more compliment for you." She said,

"Oh please, please stop talking now and go take a bath. You badly need one. It's already past twelve thirty." I pleaded as I wanted to hide my feelings.

"Yeah. Sure."

She walked off to the bathroom and returned after a quick shower. She wore the clothes I had bought for her. She looked gorgeous as well as sexy. The churidar was indeed made for her. It made no attempt to conceal her curves. Starting from the low cut neck with orange coloured border that highlighted her glowing skin, through her chest bulge which were not so large but were definitely round, to the flat belly that led to the broadening hip, her curves made quite a view and I again forgot to blink my eyes.

[fuckandforget]

Great update

[vissu0321]

Some how feeling happy to read this story

[Blue Bull]

A story can have different versions. Just a character name change will alone not make the story different. Situations, conversations, introduction of new characters and finally a new climax acceptable by the readers in a more acceptable manner. Otherwise, it will be old wine in new bottle. The challenge and victory is how to make the reader think this as classic compared to original. It is not insulting the original author. Its just a different thought process.

Thx for your kind suggestion. Yes it's a modified version not remake of the story in which we can do anything like changing the climax, adding new characters, new concept and theme along with the old one. A modified story is nothing but new wine in old bottle with a changing taste. Yes it's wine not rum in a wine bottle. A lot of controversies were there for the same issue and we should avoid that.

Yes, I am in search of a acceptable solution that will fulfill the readers demand and will not hamper the original writer.

Readers acceptable kind suggestions solicited.

Do not worry there must be a solution which will not hurt the writer nor the readers emotion .........

[Blue Bull]

Great update

Thx.... have regular visit pl ........

[Blue Bull]

Some how feeling happy to read this story

Thx ..... other interesting things yet to come ........ keep visiting regularly ......

[Avenger boy]

Awesome writing

[Ananthukutty]

Superbbbbbbbbbbbbb

[Dorabooji]

Excellent

[Gopal Ratnam]

Interesting update. First love experience