Adultery No One Dies a Saint (Completed)

[krish_999]

I have got addicted to this story. It feels as if it's a part of my life now and I have to know what is going on in Atul's & Anvi's lives each day.

I as a reader I simply can't thank or praise Krish_999 enough that he is providing us with this kind of amazing story and that also for free of cost. Honestly I would pay to read such content because I truly can see how much effort Krish is putting in this story. Now I cannot even use this line that you are one of the best authors Krish because I feel you are nonpareil in your field & you are actually THE BEST author who always delivers consistently. I have never read stories like yours anywhere on the internet.
Your stories are not just sex stories, they are much much more than that which actually unconsciously affects your mind too . The way you turn us on  with all those character conversations and realistic sexual scenarios is simply commendable. I absolutely salute your rhetorical skills.

But I have to be honest here and I personally do not enjoy Atul's other part of life which is linked with people like Ridhima or any other woman (I always read that part hurriedly :/ , though i know you give your 100 percent in that too but what to do ,I do not find it exciting unless our protagonist Anvita is there).
I am always up for the part where Anvita is mentioned and her perspective of the story is which I really enjoy the most and look forward to. Her encounters and conversations with all the different characters like Rajat, her boss, Maniesh etc just give goosebumps  and keeps us on the brink of excitement.
Talking about characters , I have to say her encounters with this "boy" Prithvi isn't exciting because I feel that Prithvi is like a kid who is too young for Anvita and he is childish which actually does not turn you on.He tends to get Anvita physically only by requesting or persuading with love/care which is really kinda unexciting. This is just my personal viewpoint.

For me if asked , the guy who turns the situation the most exciting is Rajat (man) because though Anvita hates him, still somehow he is cunning/smart enough to get him around her which is really an achievement , although his earlier blackmailing Anvita part was not at all expected of him (it was such a turn off and the same goes for George's part). banging Anvita was really not expected or needed.They Way Rajat makes his way cunningly towards Anvita is admirable and infact exciting and the same goes for Maniesh, we all are waiting how he would proceed with Anvita when she already knows that he is such a lecherous guy who is just after her body. lets see how smartly he breaks her resolve and able to befriend Anvita in future. (Hoping Anvita is hard nut to crack for him, lately she has started physically  submitting herself very easily. One has to just kiss her somehow and and she is ready for you. Is that what real Anvita is ??has she become so weak now?? I hope not. )

Till now the most exciting and turn on part was of Varun and Anvita in his car. (OMG the way you described that part of Anvita spitting on him and still making out with him was something unique(although Anvita succumbed to his request very easily but yeah he had played well and chose the way of emotional words which somehow affected Anvita and she did a favour for him ) .This car incident made me remember your last story which made you the star in the the world of erotica). Hope he tries to get back at her without blackmailing her since he has got one advantage which he used last time that is  having  "big fat dick" which I guess Anvita got intrigued to.

I have seen that a few readers here are hell bent on to find out who was in the video having sex with Anvita and they keep naming different characters of the story. I don't know but its that really needed?? Its really an irritating thing to do although its understandable that we all are curios to find out his name but I feel at some point , unconsciously it puts pressure on the Author and he might have to change his script just to avoid the suggested names by the readers. I feel we should go with the flow of the story and just enjoy it without putting any pressure on the Author. He knows what he is writing.

A few here are calling Anvita a slut/characterless and Atul a person of no reed/cuckold. I wanted to ask those people if you are here to see Anvita in a sati Savitri role? or the story to end with a happy note that nothing physically happened with Anvita. If that is so then you probably shoudn't be here reading an erotica.  I guess we all are here for an erotica otherwise this thread would be a waste.
we all know how much Atul and Anvita loves each other and that is what the most important thing is .I do not find Anvita a slut because if she were a Slut, she would sleep with any character of the story without any logic (just like a pornography or most of the sex stories) . Here she always fights back and its the cunning characters of the story may it be Rajat,Varun,her boss or anybody ,who makes their way to her for her body. She herself never approaches any guy, does she?? she is not filled with lust for any body. Her husband is not able to satisfy her, still she does not go out looking for men for sex. Such is her character. She loves Atul and only Atul and talking about Atul, does being a cuckold makes you a person of no reed ?? That is so illogical. If Rajat is able to generate cuckold feelings in Atul  then I guess it would be a win win situation. I just imagine how wonderful it would be if that actually happens. Though It would be a real challenge for our  Author here which actually is he is forte.

I feel Erotica is only complete when it has both sex and emotions involved based on realistic life approach and I have seen only a rarest of rare author could this. hats off to our author here. I really respect the way he takes out his precious time for all us readers. Salute you !!

Now we all are curious because its Anvita part which has to come now .....  waiting for the update

Overwhelmed to see such detailed comment. Thank you for finding time to pen this one. And I must thank all others who've added valuable comments every day. It feels good to see new comments whenever I return to the story and it's a huge inspiration to continue. 
About the plot points, I am opting out to comment anything for now. However, it is not meant to say I do not welcome plot suggestions. Even though I do not deviate from the storyline after reading the suggestions, I must admit that they are very helpful in finding loopholes in the story.
I know I am going a little slow now it's mainly because of the fact that the story is entering the final phase, and I have to often go through the previous chapters to avoid leaving loose ends. It's a process I think most of the writers can understand. Anyways, I will try my best to post one update in five days maximum.
As I have mentioned earlier, I welcome both positive and negative feedbacks.

Looking forward to more comments and thoughts.
Keep reading and keep posting.
Krish.

[themaskeditor]

Great going krish, we all love you

[RCF]

Very dramatic unrealistic events. Many great stories just killed when cuck theme introduced into them, to make justify that; The forced incident always seemed very dramatic unnatural.

Unrealistic yes but necessary I guess to plant the image of cuck for Atul in Anvita's mind atleast. Atul is not a cuck and I doubt he will become considering his feelings when he was trying to peek into his home. Rajat might excite him little bit with his wild theories but would be unsuccessful in converting him , Trust me on that   or why trust please go back and read through the first paragraph of this story , he is drinking in a bar in corner trying to comprehend why Anvita cheated him , if he is a cuck he wouldn't be doing that rather worrying about why he encouraged Anvita towards the dark path and lamenting the consequence of doing that.

[RCF]

After reading the update , as a fan of this story my feelings are messed up and confused. Though Author preferred not to discuss the plot or justify it and its his choice by all means , I couldn't resist asking my questions. Anyone can really answer me if interested.

1. Why would Anvita cry and confess to her FIL in previous episodes about her sexual encounter with Prithvi she could have hidden it and be at peace , instead she did confess and then she was bangd by George. why did she reveal that again to FIL? Was that out of guilt or her poor state of life where a trusted uncle bangd her and she no longer is pure for her Atul and she is corrupted. I would assume its mix of both that means she regretted her mistakes and really felt she lost control of her life and she indeed made an effort to get it back in her control. She handled Rajat so well after long time and seems like old Anvita. Isn't it logical to avoid Prithvi by all means or if Atul forced her to go for wedding she should have shown him his place as an ex student the very next time she is meeting him? Or atleast try not be alone with him? Who in right mind would sleep with the same guy again after the first mistake and that too she has seen the consequence of some one laying hands on her and what her FIL did to George? Did she not fear him and what he would do to Prithvi if he comes to know? Unrealistic logic here sorry but true. For me the only reason Anvita slept or the plot here was written as such for her was to think at the end that Atul knows her affair and for her to comprehend that he enjoyed it and which would be the base for her to fall for Rajat.

2. "It’s better to die than face him asking me why I did it to him." The statement contradicts the next one "Yes. I did it again. Atul will never know" So as long as Atul doesn't know Anvita is fine doing the same sin again and again? Where's love in that for Atul? If the plot is for all of us to have fun then why make us believe Anvita is fighting every moment to keep her dignity , she could have just been a seduced housewife long time back (note that I am not calling her slut which I don't believe any women is a slut for that matter, am just questioning the logic) ? So she will just fall for Rajat as an idiot just like Atul and believe Atul is a cuck so she will be fine if he doesn't know it?

Lastly the updates involving Rajat are the best so far and proves the writing skills of Krish . Truly a fan of his writing. Rajat is skillfully maneuvering both husband and wife and doing his best to bring Anvita into his bed. He deserves Anvita for his efforts. What did Prithvi do for his rewards :P ? A lady falling for silly infatuation of a teenager is so out of place in this story that it boggles my mind. I guess there is no redemption for this relationship or atleast the way its going , By the time of their Anniversary Atul would be really surprised of how many videos involving all of his friends he will see 

[fasterboy]

 please go back and read through the first paragraph of this story , he is drinking in a bar in corner trying to comprehend why Anvita cheated him , if he is a cuck he wouldn't be doing that rather worrying about why he encouraged Anvita towards the dark path and lamenting the consequence of doing that.

let's see this scene further,

Now anvita openly having sex with other thinking atul is enjoying this and wants too.

other-hand atul is thinking anvita wants this due to frustration born by unsatisfactory sex with atul. So he mutely starting to co-operate in threesome or as voyageur for shake of anvita happiness and more than that due to his guilt regarding unable to satisfy anvita.

       This is moral scenario in cuck theme but anvita never told him her past encounter, so while atul found video and feeling cheated or sorry for forced sex with anvita

[hottttestt]

Very good update again. Human emotions well portrayed

[fasterboy]

Anyway I am hoping to start " No One Dies a Saint - Part II " after video scene and start pure drama between them and their marriage survival or ending after that and other character's too.

Also rajat's future with his wife, their marital status,

A separate detailed update neeti and her husband marriage life.

Assuming all above update after knowing their infidelity by their spouse.

[fasterboy]

I recommend to all to read "aditi beautifull wife deceived" [uncompleted]

[krishagarwal]

Welcome...when will you start

[rv3443]

The story is at an interesting phase now. Lot of questions are being raised? Most important, whether Rajat will succeed in his attempt? Or the couple survive his attempts? So far throughout the story Anvita looks to be very vulnerable and very easy to capitulate. On the other hand Atul seems to be slipping easily but immediately recovering. He is neither a cuck nor a voyageur. But very easy to be tricked.
However, I don't understand the behavior of Anvita. Having committed a mistake and openly admitting the guilt to FIL, how she can meekly fall to Prithvi again. In fact, she took equal interest at the second time and she didn't feel any guilty about this. We can understand the frustration of a women when she is not getting the due share of satisfying sex, but Prithvi is not that sort of guy who can dominate a women, still she fell to him. Now she is going to face her FIL. I feel pity for Atul now.

[kal11]

The author seems to be pervert .He is making unrealistic events to fool the readers. I am thinking of quit reading this story.

[whocares]

The author seems to be pervert .He is making unrealistic events to fool the readers. I am thinking of quit reading this story.

Thanks for letting us know. I am sorry to say that may be I won't care though, not sure about the author or other readers.

[fasterboy]

1. Each time atul goes to rajat's flat without knowing him, he forget something to know rajat about his visit.
2. Inverter incident had lot of loopholes like A house interverter can't give backup in whole decorated house on occasion of party with all extra electricity on.
3. Many incident which even author can't justify to overdone that you simply put cuck touch there because when cuck comes each logic goes background like watching super heroes movies whether anything could be happen.
4. How easily radhika and ridhima agreed happily to become object of atul's pimp act. They both knowing that without logic ready to pleased him to get atul's client satisfed by pimping themself.
5. George blackmailing, while rajat is failed to get result of blackmailing randomly many time but george simply said "I know what you did last night" and she is ready to get fuck with him.
6. After tasting foud dicks since marriage with atul it is laughable to object with rajat.
7. Varun blowjob act in car, very very fantasy without any logic preparation or logic.
8. Getting car trip with manjot in front of office building just after 2 meeting with him. You don't do this in work place while you easily could use meeting room of office to talk to client if you are in compound of office.
9. george's masturbation on anvita when their first visit to george house.
10. Shreyas seduction suddenly, even with varun is very unnatural after having freindship with him for years.
11. prithvi's first stay in her house without any reason.
12. Detailed discussion with rajyavardhan (FIL) with anvita about anvita sex life with varun and her adultery/Infidelity while not a single line communicated with atul.

You hide many detail of act like what happened with shreyas in party gone with atul where you hide their whole night adventure.

May be you are planning to explain all of them in ending to justify that.

[andhratochennai]

hot story... thnks for posting

[krish_999]

1. Each time atul goes to rajat's flat without knowing him, he forget something to know rajat about his visit.
2. Inverter incident had lot of loopholes like A house interverter can't give backup in whole decorated house on occasion of party with all extra electricity on.
3. Many incident which even author can't justify to overdone that you simply put cuck touch there because when cuck comes each logic goes background  like watching super heroes movies whether anything could be happen.
4. How easily radhika and ridhima agreed happily to become object of atul's pimp act. They both knowing that without logic ready to pleased him to get atul's client satisfed by pimping themself.
5. George blackmailing, while rajat is failed to get result of blackmailing randomly many time but george simply said "I know what you did last night" and she is ready to get fuck with him.
6. After tasting foud dicks since marriage with atul it is laughable to object with rajat.
7. Varun blowjob act in car, very very fantasy without any logic preparation or logic.
8. Getting car trip with manjot in front of office building just after 2 meeting with him. You don't do this in work place while you easily could use meeting room of office to talk to client if you are in compound of office.
9. george's masturbation on anvita when their first visit to george house.
10. Shreyas seduction suddenly, even with varun is very unnatural after having freindship with him for years.
11. prithvi's first stay in her house without any reason.
12. Detailed discussion with rajyavardhan (FIL) with anvita about anvita sex life with varun and her adultery/Infidelity while not a single line communicated with atul.  

You hide many detail of act like what happened with shreyas in party gone with atul where you hide their whole night adventure.

May be you are planning to explain all of them in ending to justify that.

Dear friend you seem to have a lot of doubts and I welcome all of them in a positive sense. Well I don't do this normally, but since they are mostly related to the past events, I'll try to tell you what I was thinking when I wrote them.

1. Each time atul goes to rajat's flat without knowing him, he forget something to know rajat about his visit.

First time he did forget his wristwatch, when Neeti had tried to lure him there. But, do you really think the wristwatch was mislaid? Do you think Neeti took him to his neighbor's flat and tried to seduce him just like that? I left it to reader's imagination to assume here Rajat might have used Neeti to trick Atul. In that case, Neeti should have deliberately taken it and hidden it.

Second time, it was the fancy earring he had bought for Anvita.  He was made to wait there before Anvita and Prithvi left the building. You now know why the delay happened, so it could be possible for Atul to become nervous again and forget something.

2. Inverter incident had lot of loopholes like A house interverter can't give backup in whole decorated house on occasion of party with all extra electricity on.

Yes, I didn't give much details here, but it's foolish to assume one inverter provided backup to the whole decorated house. During the wedding there must be a team hired to take care of everything. They must have got their backup measures. Remember, when Atul arrived at the wedding, the place was already running on backup. But in a marriage, the boys often come up with extra fitting decorations that leaks too much from the line. That's why they might have needed more batteries. It may be also wrong to assume they took inverter from Anvita's house only.

3. Many incident which even author can't justify to overdone that you simply put cuck touch there because when cuck comes each logic goes background  like watching super heroes movies whether anything could be happen.

The point refers to the ongoing issue, I would like to not to respond, for now.

4. How easily radhika and ridhima agreed happily to become object of atul's pimp act. They both knowing that without logic ready to pleased him to get atul's client satisfed by pimping themself.

Well, are you sure he pimped them? I think he saved Ridhima when he realised he might end up pimping. Radhika has never acknowledged sleeping with Nikunj. Both the ladies are on their own here. 

5. George blackmailing, while rajat is failed to get result of blackmailing randomly many time but george simply said "I know what you did last night" and she is ready to get fuck with him.

George's blackmailing worked in his favour mainly because it was a huge blow to whatever hope Anvita's FIL had instilled in her. George's intention was to strike immediately. In Rajat's case, Anvita has something to negotiate with him-about Neeti- which is stopping him from forcing on Anvita. George was open to bang, while Rajat is more inclined to seduction.

6. After tasting foud dicks since marriage with atul it is laughable to object with rajat.

What's the fun in making Anvita a slut? Being intimate with three doesn't guarantee the fourth any luck. There are many things working against Rajat here. Also, the three- Shreyas, Prithvi, Varun - all were well-behaving and none of them carry bad reputation like Rajat. She hates him. It's as simple as that.

7. Varun blowjob act in car, very very fantasy without any logic preparation or logic.

Many readers are saying it was natural due to her desperation or other various reasons, while some are saying it was illogical. The argument will last forever.

8. Getting car trip with manjot in front of office building just after 2 meeting with him. You don't do this in work place while you easily could use meeting room of office to talk to client if you are in compound of office.

I request you to put yourself in her place. Suppose, you're having a tough time in your new office. Suddenly there happens an event which increases your value in the eyes of your superiors. You know you don't deserve the respect that they give you but you are enjoying it. Now you are walking along the road, suddenly the other guy shows up saying he needs to talk to you. The fear of losing all the respect if you refuse to talk is dominating your mind. Will you get in to that car? 
I think the chances are fifty percent. You may or may not get in. Well, Anvita did, apparently.

9. george's masturbation on anvita when their first visit to george house.

He's a mad man, we have learnt it later. He's a man who was divorced because he was very unnatural in bed. He's full of lust. And he bangd his friend's wife who's also his friend's DIL.

10. Shreyas seduction suddenly, even with varun is very unnatural after having freindship with him for years.

Shreyas is the one who began it all. It didn't happen suddenly. It was very slow, in my opinion. It was one thing led to another scenario with each point of progression narrated in detail. Varun, from the very first of his appearance in the story, have always hinted how he was chasing her despite losing out to Atul.

11. prithvi's first stay in her house without any reason.

Innocence can deceive you, my friend.

12. Detailed discussion with rajyavardhan (FIL) with anvita about anvita sex life with varun and her adultery/Infidelity while not a single line communicated with atul.  

FIL caught her immediately after the incident. The discussion was not initiated by Anvita. 

I hope these clarifications help. With the above pieces of thoughts, I have no intention to argue that your thought process is wrong. I only mean to say this is  how I thought when I wrote those chapters. In fact I like to leave a lot for your imagination and I like it when you see what I didn't intend.

Keep reading and keep posting.
Krish.

[searuler]

Simply put, it should be titled 'Side effects of premature ejaculation vs. a woman of easy virtue'

[manasi]

Quote Krish: "When Anvita came out of the house, she stood in front of Rajat’s house. He’s still inside; crying over his loss. She knew. She wanted to go to him and fall into his feet. But she didn’t dare to face him.
She wobbled to the lift with a complete sense of loss."

Its heartening to see Krish is opening up to clarify some doubts over plots and characters in this thread contrary to his earlier thread :"Knowing ----------"

Earlier I had debated on the issue of Anvita blowjob in car and as accepted by author, debate continues. In Anvita POV, as quoted above, she is genuinely miserable after knowing that Atul Has witnessed everything. She genuinely feels for Atul's loss and wanted by his side. Only did not had the courage to face him.

Now, I have one woman psychological issue.

I have a question to all women readers. Normally what a loving woman will do in such a situations? I think, she will wait for her husband to her as early as possible and pray to God that he does not commit nuisance. As she does not have courage to knock Rajat's door, It was expected for Anvita to hide nearby a keep a vigil on Rajat's house. Or be in her own house and spend time like a dead body or at least keep an eye on the scooter in hideout.

I know, she has left her phone in her car and car is parked in marriage venue. She could manage Prithvi for sending the car back.

However she decided to go back to marriage venue and wait anxiously for Atul. My mind is somehow not able to digest. Am I wrong. Women readers, pl give your genuine reply considering yourself in the shoes of Anvita.

Eagerly waiting for.

[fasterboy]

Dear friend you seem to have a lot of doubts and I welcome all of them in a positive sense. Well I don't do this normally, but since they are mostly related to the past events, I'll try to tell you what I was thinking when I wrote them.


I hope these clarifications help. With the above pieces of thoughts, I have no intention to argue that your thought process is wrong. I only mean to say this is  how I thought when I wrote those chapters. In fact I like to leave a lot for your imagination and I like it when you see what I didn't intend.

Keep reading and keep posting.
Krish.

Very Very Thanks and your supportive gesture increased reputation in my eyes for you more. Yes I still have 2 or 3 points to argue but you cleared all doubts nearly 95%.

When a reader founds very good quality story more than required, he just becomes childish who can't tolerate even minor distraction as in his own point of view.

Now, I found there is no logic or ill-logic, it is just difference in point of view.  Like we all are going from point a to point b but through different ways and while in journey we just think our path is perfect and other-one may be choose more time taking path.

May be I burn you some time which were for writing updates. You response is so valuable.

[Wildman]

atul and anvitha both are not saint here.. atuls premature ejaculation is his problem, thts y he is not having sex with others.. but at same time he's not satisfying anvitha also.. anvitha needs real satisfication here.. i think varun or rajath are suitable for her.. prathvi is romantic, but thts not what anvitha required, she needs real dick.. so im waiting for real bang of anvitha with her full envolvement.. go krishhh.. make her dream true..

[love_couple]

Krish thank you so much for reverting on the earlier made comment. It really means a lot when Author like you reverts back and it genuinely make us readers feel that we are connected to you

So now at present Anvita is slightly confused or could say have started to believe a little that Rajat's words for Atul are turning out to be true and that he gets slightly turned on when he witnesses or imagines Anvita with someone else.
Here a few readers believe that Atul is not at all cuckold but story line is forcing him to be one , But I strongly believe he has traits of being a cuckold but he has been fighting himself since the start and does not want to believe it(if only he could lower down his male ego , he would know the truth) .If we remember one incident where George had masturbated on Anvita's stomach and Atul after witnessing him did not even take a single step ,rather he was as usual normal with George after that. If we talk about reality , can anyone bear this happening right infant of him?? I am sure no one would and surely would at least take a step.(Although many would say its Atul's nature to be very understanding but deep inside we all know no one would take it in real unless he somewhere likes it)
He became all normal even after what he saw Varun and Anvita doing on that roof . Isn't he too normal after every scenario?? But yes we witnessed, he always gets equally excited after every event and forgets every mistake Anvita made. (Can a person in reality get that excited that too just after witnessing his own wife with other man ?? One can only bear it, if his body is somewhere liking it( Atul's conscience will take time to accept it because of his male ego) . Its his this little unknown excitement which stops him from taking any serious action each time.

But I really have to say this. If Rajat by chance is able to get into Anvita's pants just by making her believe that Atul is a cuck and Anvita doing with Rajat ,only because she is assuming that Atul must be enjoying watching her with him , and same goes for Atul that if he allows it but without his inner consent just for Anvita's sake that she somehow she would get a great sex , then this sex between Atul & Anvita would really be disappointing & disheartening to experience . There would be no sexual excitement in this scenario because Atul somewhere will get heartbroken and later on Anvita too will regret when she would come to know Atul had not enjoy it .
Don't you think , it would be enjoyable and erotic (for readers & for Atul as well) only if Atul himself also gets excited and turned now somehow ( That totally depends on author how to make it possible if he wants to), Otherwise it would feel like a indirect bang of Anvita by Rajat which is no fun .I feel Anvita at least should ask Rajat to corroborate his statement and should challenge him to prove his made statement about Atul getting excited watching her with other Men( she might unconsciously want this and may even hate herself for wanting it that Rajat's statement wishfully turns out to be true because we can see she lately is getting quite excited by the idea ). I just hope she does not turn into slut or there would be no fun.


Dear Author I want to share something here .We readers are coming here & reading this story to get excited and to get turned on with a good story script of course which you excellence at but at the end of story if we come to know that everything happened just because of a misunderstanding and everyone (Anvita & Atul) are crying, regretting at end, then it would rather creates sexual frustration among us readers because believe it or not ,we all are here to see Anita somehow getting fucked and not just once but multiple times without projecting her as Slut and with scenario full of content and logic which you have mastery on and only you are capable of doing it with your magical writing skills. I do not think anyone would want her to get saved at end because that was not our Moto to come on erotica section.
I agree emotions , sentiments , a good logical content are necessary to make a story epic but If everything is regretful from protagonist's view and we at the end of story get to hear that all ended well and Anvita got saved like some Bollywood story drama, ,then its would not be worth it. Honestly it would turn out to be sexually frustrating for readers because I don't think anyone would want Anvita to go clean and untouched . We expect all the content, drama, emotions but erotica is equally important part too concealing the image of Anita as it has been from start that is of a loving wife.

I am sorry if I sound in a complaining mode but Krish you say that you are entering into the last phase of the story but don't you feel most of the story actually went describing Atul's job related trips?? It felt we all were left craving to know what is currently happening at Anvita's end and that craving and curiosity left us frustrated.
I don't know but sometimes it has been a little sexually frustrating and honestly that "sexual tension" which Keeps you on the excitement brink while reading a story has been missing lately.( because who would understand more than you that more than sex , the scenario which lead to sex is the reason for real turn on)
whenever any make out or sex scenario comes in , it gets quickly finished without much details (except that car scene of Anvi & Varun). I have to say ,sexual tension is missing out a little here. (its my personal view)

Some things have been confusing like ,we have observed that Anvita is even capable of swallowing cum and the way she does it shows she must have had a good past behind her which made her pro at it otherwise its not possible for any girl to swallow so effortlessly. I am curious why Atul never asked this from Anvits. I would have been curious to know if I were in his shoes.( not for questioning or judging her but just to know ,because Anvita has been with Atul since college days so where did she learn to swallow) . She can't possibly learn with just one encounter with her professor and we all know she was not been intimate with Varun either before Atul met her. So this thing always makes me curious.

I am may be sounding agitated here and mostly after hearing that you are writing the last phase of the story ,I am feeling a little uneasy and sad because its just you who is solely the reason to come to story section of this site. The kind of content you write and the way you put in your efforts , it really shows how much you love your work. There is so much left in the story and it would be really sad to keep this thing in mind that we are in last phase of the story : (