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02-04-2019, 10:55 PM
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03-04-2019, 01:39 AM
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Update 31
Sonam : to jaldi batao na. Seeema : aacha sun. Flashback rahul ke janam ki kahani...... Ab aageee........... Vahi Rahul apne ghar pohoch ta hai. Or saari packing karke nikal jata hai. Sonali ke pass Jaise hii rahul ghar se nikalta hai. Tabi Rahul ka phone bajne lagta hai. Rahul phone utta hai. Rahul : hello Payal : rahul kha hai tu abhi tak aya kiu nahi sonali didi bohot gussa hai. Rahul : bas payal nikal gaya hu. 2 ya 3 ghante mein pohoch jauga. Payal : jaldi aa Sonali didi pareshan ho rahi hai. Or agar tu jaldi nahi aya to muze mat boliyo Payal bacha lo. Rahul : haa haa Nahi kahuga main khud shamal luga Sonali didi ko Payal : tu aa to bachu fir pata chalega ki tu kese shamalta hai. Sonali didi ko Tabi Rahul : kya bohot gussa hai sonali didi. Payal : huuuu Tabi Piche se awaz a rahi hoti hai. Sonali : payal kya bol raha hai betu ( rahul ) Payal : didi aa raha hai rastee mein hai. Sonali : bohot bigar gaya hai , Ane do aaj isko chorugi nahi. Ache se pitai karugi. Hamesha sochta hai ki sonali didi to marti hii nahi hai. Aaj to ache se khabar lugi. Vahi Rahul : are baap re lagta hai. Aaj to mein gaya kaam se Payal : aaj to tere upar bomb fatne wala hai. Mere ko to tu mana leta hai Ab dekhti hu ki tu sonali ko kese banata hai. Or jaldi aa fata fat. Rahul : aa raha hu. Or phone cut ho jata hai. Or rahul jaldi se bus stand pohochta hai. Or bus mein baith jata hai. Or bus nikal jati hai gaon 1 ( rahul ke maa ke ghar) ki or Tabi Conductor rahul se bolta hai. Conductor : ticket To Rahul apni pocket se purse nikalne lagta hai. Tabi Achanak dekhta hai ki vo to jaldi jaldi mein apna purse ghar mein hii bhul gaya. Rahul ( mann mein ) : yaar ab kya karu purse to ghar par bhul gaya . Magar atm hai. Mere pass Rahul ( conductor se ) : bhaiya purse to mein ghar par bhul gaya Kya atm se kaam chalega. Conductor : bhai yeh bus hai koi hotel nahi jo atm se payment ho jaegi Or jaldi ticket lo warna yahi utar duga. Or conductor age chala jata hai ticket lene Rahul apne beg mein se kuch paise dekhta hai . Shayad kuch paise mil jae Magar paise nahi milte Rahul ( man me) : ab kya karu Tabi Rahul ki nazar apne bagal mein baithi hue Ek ladki par padti hai. Or rahul ke mann mein ek khatarnak khayal ata hai. Us ladki ne suit pehan rakha hota hai. Or seet par baithe baithe so rahi hoti hai. Or rahul ki nazar us ladki ke boobs ke pass rakhe hue purse par padti hai. Or rahul vaha se dheere se purse nikal ta hai. Or ticket ke paise lekar Us purse ko vahi rakh deta hai. Dheere se Or conductor se ticket le leta hai. Fir Thodi der baad ek dhaba aa jata hai. Fir Vaha bus 10 minute rukhne wali hoti hai. Or rahul ko bhookh lag rahi hoti hai. Kiuki rahul ne subha se kuch nahi khaya tha To fir Us ladki ke boobs ke pass se purse nikalta hai. Or thodo khane pine ke paise nikal kar fir Purse dheere se vahi rakh deta hai. Or lunch kar leta hai. Or vo bichari ladki abhi tak so ( sleep ) rahi hoti hai or us ladki ko to kuch pata hii nahi hota ki koi uske boobs mein hand dalkar purse bahar nikal raha hai. Or yeh kaam rahul itni sawai se karta hai ki kisi ko bhi rahul par shak nahi hota. Fir Bus chal deti hai. Fir Traffic signal par rahul ko ek jharmuri wala dikai deta hai. Or vo jharmuri wala bus mein chad jata hai. Rahul fir vahi se purse nikal kar jharmuri le leta hai. Or Purse fir vahi rakh leta hai. Tabi Conductor jor se bolta hai Conductor : gaon 1 ane wala hai. Ussi ke sath us ladki ki neend khul jati hai. Or vo ladki rahul ko dekhti hai. Ladki ( mann mein ) : kitna handsome ladka hai. Or bohot sarif bhi lag raha hai. Kitna bola se face hai iska. Tabi Rahul us ladki se bolta hai. Rahul : kyaa aap jharmuri khayegi Ladki : no thanks Mein khud jharmuri le lugi Or vo ladki apne purse ko nikalne lagti hai. Tabi Rahul ( mann me ) : kahi ise pata na chal jae ki iske paise meine nikale hai. Rahul thoda harbara jata hai Rahul : are aap kiu jharmuri legi. Aap hamare bagal mein baithi hai. Isliye hum padosi hue na Hum isse mein jharmuri share kar lete hai na. Ladki : thank u agar aap itni bol rahe hai to mein aapki baat mann jati hu. Vase aapka naam kiya hai. Tab jakar rahul ke jaan mein jaam ati hai. Kahi vo ladki apna purse khol leti to rahul to gaya tha kaam se Rahul : rahul Or aapka Ladki : shanya. Rahul us ladki se hand milate hue Rahul : nice to meet you shanya jii. Bohot hii khubsurat naam hai aapka bilkul aap ki tarha. ( Rahul us ladki ki thodi tarif kar deta hai.) Shanya khuss ho jati hai Shanya : thanks rahul Tabi Bus mein ticket checker chad jate hai. Or ek ek karke sabki ticket check karne lagta hai. Rahul ( mann mein ) : sala lagta hai aaj kismat hii kharab hai. Pehle purse ghar bhul gaya Fir jaise taise paise ka jugad kiya Ab lagta hai sonali didi baad mein pital kargi yeh ladki pehle meri pitai kar degi. Tabi Ticket checker rahul ki ticket check karta hai Fir Shanya se Ticket checker : mam apni ticket dikai yeh. Or shanya apni ticket nikalne ke liye apna purse nikalti hai. Tabi Rahul ( ticket checker se ) : sir isne ticket le rakhi hai. In sab ki kya jarurat hai. Ticket checker ( rahul se ) : yeh hamara kaam hai hume apna kaam karne dijiye. Or apne purse mein se ticket nikal kar ticket checker ko de deti hai. Shanya : yeh lijiye ticket Or ticket checker shanya ki ticket dekhkar age nikal jata hai. Tabi Shanya dekhti hai ki yeh mere pass khulle paise kese hai. Mere pass to 2000 ka note tha Yeh 1500 rupees kese reh gaye. Rahul aab apni aakhe ( eyes ) gol gol ghumate hue bolta hai. Rahul : vo kya hai na shanya Mere pass ticket ke paise nahi the mein apna purse ghar bhul gaya tha. Isliye mane vaha se ( ishara karte hue boobs ke pass ) paise nikale or ticket le leee. Fir paraya maal shamaj kar vahi rakh diye. Shanya shocked hokar Shanya : kyaaaa Magar ticket to 200 rupess ki thi. Rahul ( niche sir jhuka kar ) : vo maine subha se khaya nahi tha to fir vaha se 250 rupees nikale or lunch kar liya or kasam se meine us purse ko paraya maal shamaj kar vahi rakh diya. Shanya : magar fir bhi 50 rupess kha gaye Rahul : vo fir jharmuri khane ka mann hua to fir vaha se 50 rupees nikale or. Tabi Shanya gusse mein Shanya : paraya maal shamaj kar vahi rakh diya. Tume sharam nahi aai vaha se ( boobs ke pass se ) paise nikalte hue. Rahul haa mein garden hila deta hai. Shanya gusse mein Shanya : tume to mein bohot sarif ladka shamaj rahi thi. Tume sharam nahi aai vaha se ( boobs ke pass se ) paise nikalte hue. Or shanya utt kar rahul ka hand pakad leti hai. Shanya driver se bolti hai. Shanya : bhaiya bus roko Or driver bus rokh deta hai. Or shanya rahul ko bus se utar deti hai. Or apni sit par baith jati hai. Shanya ( mann me ) : ab yeh wali jagah ( boobs ke pass wali ) bhi shurakshit nahi hai. Logh ab itne advance ho gae hai. Ki vaha se bhi ( boobs ke pass se ) paise nikal lete hai. Vahi Rahul niche utar jata hai. Rahul ( mann me ) : chal kai na ab gaon 1 jyada door nahi hai. Magar mein ab jau kaise Or raat ke 8 baaj rahe hai sonali didi bhi gussa karegi. Tabi Rahul ki nazar ek ladki par padti hai. Jo scooty par khadi hoti hai. Or usko kuch ladke pareshan kar rahe hote hai. Tabi Rahul vaha aa jata hai. Or un ladko ko thikane laga deta hai. Tabi Vo ladki rahul se bolti hai. Ladki : thanks Rahul : yeh to mera farz tha. Ladki ( mann mein ) : yeh ladka kuch jana pehchana lag raha hai. Par yaad nahi aa raha. Fir Ladki : tum yaha naye ho. Rahul : nahi bas bohot saalo ke baad aya hu. Ladki : vase aapko kahi jana hai to mein aapko chor deti hue. Rahul : thanks Madad karne ke liye Mujhe gaon 1 mein is jagah par jana hai. Ladki : main bhi vahi ja rahi hu Mera ghar bhi vahi hai. Agar aap chaho to mein aapko vaha chor deti hu Fir Rahul us ladki ke piche baith jata hai. Or Ladki scooty chala deti hai. Thodi door jane ke baad jaise hii rahul ka ghar ane wala hota hai. Tabi Achanak se Scooty ke samne ek gadda ( hole ) aa jata hai. Jisse scooty thoda idhar udhar hone lagti hai. Or rahul ko girne se bachne ke liye kuch nahi milta Or rahul galti se us ladki ke boobs pakad leta hai jor se Or vo ladki ek dum se jhanjana jati hai. Or harbarate hue scooty rok leti hai. Or vo ladki rahul ko utarte hue Deti hai bolti hai. Ladki ( rahul se ) : mane tume lift dii Or tum ne mere sath yeh kiya ( matlab boobs pakad liye ) agli baar tum muze dikai diye na to main tumari ache se tage ( leg ) thod dugi Tum jante nahi ho muje Ki mein khon hu Pata nahi ladki dekhi nahi Pad jate hai uske piche Or Rahul ko vo ladki kuch bolne ka mauka hii nahi deti Or vaha se chali jati hai. Scooty mein baithkar. Rahul ( mann mein ) : bhanchod meri kya galti thi Isme samne gadda ( hole ) aa gaya Tha to muze pakadne ke liye kuch nahi mila to galti se is ladki ke boobs pakad liye Isme mein kya karta Sala pata nahi mere sath rozz kya hone lagta hai. Kuch karu bhi nahi tab bhi baate sunne ko mil jati hai Chal koi na ab to bas 5 minute ka rasta bacha hai pedal hii chala jauga. Or rahul pedal hii apne ghar ki taraf nikal jata hai. Or kuch minute mein apne ghar pohoch jata hai. New characters Kajal : rahul ki maa Age 38 saal Dekhne mein rang sawla hai. Or yeh house wife hai. Or sabse bohot pyaar karti hai. Sonali : rahul ki badi behan Age 20 saal Dekhne mein bohot hii khubsuraat Abhi yeh college kar rahi hai. Medical ki padai. Or rahul ko apne dilo jaan se chahati hai. Or rahul par apna pura hak jamati hai. Or rahul ko hamesha betu bulati hai. Or rahul sonali se thoda darta bhi hai. Or pyaar bhi sabse jyada karta hai. Kiuki ek sonali hii to thi. Jisne rahul ko har takleef se bachaya tha. Rahul kahi bhi ho Rahul ka dard sonali tak pohoch hii jata hai. Sonia : ,rahul ki dusari bhan Age 19 saal Yeh bhi dekhne mein bohot khubsuraat hai. Magar inke sath thoda ulta hai. Yeh rahul se pyaar to karti hai. Magar pareshan bhi bohot karti hai. Rahul ko Deepak : rahul ke dad Age 40 saal Yeh rahul se bohot nafraat karte hai Inhi ke bajase rahul yaha se gaya tha. Inko rahul ek photi aakh bhi nahi bhata Is nafraat ki ek baja hai jo aage chal kar pata chalegi. Now back to the story. Jaise hii rahul gate bajane wala hota hai. Usse pehle rahul ki maa ( kajal ) gate kholti hai. Kajal ( rahul se ) : aa gaya mera beta kitne saalo se dekha nahi tha. Tuze Tabi Ek ladki rahul se bolti hai. Ladki ( rahul se ) : tu yaha bhi aa gaya lagta hai bina lat ( leg ) ghuse khae nahi manne wala tu Tabi Kajal ghusse bolti hai. Kajal ( gusse mein ) :
03-04-2019, 02:56 PM
lagta hai ki ye bus vali ladki hai jo Rahul ko dekh kar bhadak gai hai
03-04-2019, 02:56 PM
very nice update.....
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Nice update
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04-04-2019, 07:20 PM
time nikaal kar update bhi do bhai
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Update 32
Ladki ( rahul se ) : tu yaha bhi aa gaya lagta hai bina lat ( leg ) ghuse khae nahi manne wala tu Tabi Kajal ghusse bolti hai. Kajal ( gusse mein ) : sonia kesi baat kar rahi hai apni bhai se ( Yeh ladki or koi nahi sonia thi jiske boobs rahul ne pakre the.) Sonia shocked hokar Sonia ( kajal se ) : maa yeh hamara rahul hai. Kajal : haaa Or sonia gusse mein apne kamre mein chali jati hai. Or jaise hii sonali ko rahul ka naam sunai deta hai. Vo belan lekar bhagte hue Rahul ke pass aa jati hai. Or rahul jaise hii ander aata hai to sonali ko dekhta hai. Jo belan liye khadi hoti hai. Kajal : sonali kamse kam rahul ko thodi der baith to jane de. Sonali : maa aap chup raho. Aaj mein betu ( rahul ) ko nahi chorne wali itni late kese aya. Yeh Or sonali rahul ke piche pelan lekar ane lagti hai. Vase hii rahul bhagkar ek khali tanki ke ander ghus jata hai. Sonali : betu tanki se bhar aaja Dekh mujhe or gussa mat dila Nahi to or pitai khaega. Rahul ( mann me ) : kitni jagah se pitte pitte bacha hu Lagta hai ab to hath per ( leg ) tutne wale hai. Kuch soch rahul dimak laga Sonali : jaldi bhar nikal dekh mujhe or gussa aa raha hai. Tabi Sonia bhi aa jati hai. Sonia sonali ke kaan mein kuch bolkar. Sonia ( sonali se ) : , didi rahul bohot bigar gaya hai . Aaj rahul ki is dande se pitai karo. Or sonia sonali ko bada wala danda dene lagti hai. Sonali : betu tu to bohot bigar gaya hai. Ab tu aise harkat bhi karne laga hai Ladkiyo ke sath. Sonia : sonali didi maro isko Patak patak kar maro. Is dande se. Aaj to iska bharta bana do. Sonali : sonia tuz se meine koi rai nahi magi hai to tu chup reh shamji. Or sonia chup ho jati hai. Rahul : vo vo Sonali : vo kya Rahul : vo didi meri koi galti nahi thi Vo kya hai na ki beech mein gadda aa gaya tha. Jisse mein girne laga tha To galti se mein sonia didi le vo ( boobs ) pakad liye. Sonali ( sonia ko ghoor kar ) : betu tu sach bol raha hai na. Rahul : aapki kasam didi Mein sach bol raha hue. Vase bhi is sonia didi mein hai kya jo mein iske sath aise harkat karu Sonia ( gusse mein ) : tera matlab kya hai Ki mein khubsuraat nahi hue. Rahul thoda se tanki se muh nikalte hue Rahul ( aakhe gol gol ghumate hue ) : maine aisa to nahi kaha. Sonia : fir tera bolne ka kya matlab tha. Rahul : sonia didi mera yeh matlab tha ki aap thodi moti ho gae ho. ( Yeh baat rahul ne haste hue kahi ) Sonia ( gusse mein ) : mujhe moti bolta hai. Tuze to baad mein dekh lugi. Sonali : betu bahar aaja Aaj Thoda parshad to milega tuze vo bhi is dande ke sath Pata hai mein kitna pareshan thi. ( yeh baat sonali ne dande ko masalte hue kaha.) Tabi rahul tanki se dubara jhakar dekhta hai To sonali usko bohot gusse mein dekhti hai. Rahul side mein apni nazar ghumata hai to rahul ko ruchi & nisha dikai deti hai. Or rahul ruchi & nisha ko ishara karta hai. Tabi Nisha ( sonali se thoda rote hue ) : didi hamare bhai ko chor do rahul bhaiya bohot masoom hai. Sonali ( nisha se ) : mujhe pata hai kitna masoom hai betu Or mere samne rone ka drama met kar tuze mein ache se janti hue Or Tune jyada chapar chapar kari na to isse dande se maar khaegi shamji apne bhaiya ki chamchi. Ruchi ( mann mein ) : ruchi kuch soch Apne dimak ke ghore dora Aaj bhaiya ki madad kardi to shayad baad mein koi fyda ho jae bhaiya se Soch ruchi soch. Haa ek idea aya Ruchi ( sonali se ) : didi aapko bataya tha na yamraj wali didi ke bareme usne hii bhaiya ko late kiya hai. Nahi to hamare bhaiya late kabi nahi hote. Yeh yamraj wali didi bohot chalak hai Bhaiya se puch lo Tabi Rahul : haa sona didu ( rahul sonali ko pyaar se sona bolta hai ) Bohot tezz hai iski yamraj wali didi Tabi Prerna vaha aa jati hai or sabki baat sun leti hai. Prerna : oee choti moti ( nisha & ruchi ) mere khilaf kya khichri paka rahul ho Mujhe kiu bali ka bakra bana rahi ho. Sonali didi meine kuch nahi kiya hai. Sonali ( gusse me ) : prerna tuz se to meine baad me baat karugi or tum dono chapar ganju ( nisha & ruchi ) jyada dimak mat lagao Nahi to abhi tumara tanduri chikan bana dugi bina mirch masale ke Or pakka dugi tumko Tum apna dimak or kisi par chalana mere upar nahi shamji. Or nisha & ruchi ab apna dimak lagana band kar deti hai. Kiuki unko bhi pata tha ki unka dimak sab par chal sakta hai par sonali didi par nahi Or chup ho jati hai. Prerna ( mann mein ) : lagta hai bohot khatarnak hai yeh sonali didi .inno ne to nisha & ruchi ko bhi chup karwa diya Inse bachkar rehna padega. ( Payal ne sonali ko prerna ke bareme sab kuch bata diya tha jitna payal ko pata tha.) Tabi Sonali ( rahul se ) : betu tu bahar nahi aaega na rukh mein hii ander aati hu. Rahul ( mann mein ) : aab sona didi ko shant karwane ka ek hii rasta hai. Rahul : sona didu aa raha hu. Sonali : jaldi aaa Tabi Rahul bahar nikalta hai. Or bhagkar sonali ko kas kar gale laga leta hai. Sonali aapne aap ko thoda chudane ki kosis karti hai To Rahul sonali ko or kas kar gale laga leta hai. Fir Sonali bhi dande ko chor kar rahul ko bhi kas kar gale laga leti hai. Rahul : sona didu ek baar maaf kar do Agli baar kabi late nahi aauga. Sonali : betu tuze aaj chor deti hue agli baar late hua na to chodugi nahi tuzko Itne saalo baad aya hai vo bhi late kya tuze meri yaad nahi aati. ( Yeh baat sonali ne naam aakho se kahi. Rahul sonali se alag hokar bolta hai. Rahul : sona didu tumari yaad to muze itni aati hai ki aisa koi pal nahi gaya jab maine tume yaad nahi kiya Jab muze tumari yaad aati thi mein hamesha aapki photo dekh leta tha . Magar aap ko pata hai main yaha kiu nahi ana chahata tha. ( Isse ke sath rahul ke aakho mein aashu aa jate hai. Sonali rahul ke aashu pohochte hue Sonali : mujhe pata hai betu jabi to mane apne dil par pathar rakhkar tuze yaha se bheja tha. Nahi to mein kabi tuze jane nahi deti Or un sab baato ko bhul jaa. Or jaldi se fresh ho ja or khana kha le Dekh kitna patla ho gaya hai. Lagta hai payal tera ache se dhyaan nahi rakhti. Rahul apne dard ko bhulkar maze lete hue. Rahul : haa sona didu payal na muze kuch khilati hii nahi hai. Hamasha pareshan karti rehti hai. Or khud khana kha leti hai. Payal ko bhi pata tha ki rahul jhoot bol raha hai. Sonali ( gusse se ) : payal Payal : Bhai abhi mere papers chal rahe hai isliye update likh nahi pa raha hue Fir bhi jitna ho sakta hai utna likh lar update de raha hue regular jaise hii mere papers khatam ho gaege fir update thik ane lagege. I hope u under stand Thote update ke liye sorry
04-04-2019, 10:31 PM
ok bhai
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04-04-2019, 10:44 PM
Is update me bhai bahan ka pyaar bahut hi achchhi tarah se dikhaya gaya hai
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