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Hello Game40it,
Just completed reading your story. Sorry for late reading and respond.
You are one of the best writer in this forum. The way you establish the characters in story was good and the most impressive thing in your story was the conversations between the characters. It simply amezing. Every word exchanging between the characters was truly thoughtful and meaningful too and it will explain how the person handil the situation, how it drives to next step very thoughtful.
This story was completed long time back, I am expecting new story from you soon don't take too much gap my friend please start a new story ASAP.
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17-12-2021, 02:48 PM
Totally adore you for the story. The way the couple has handled the situation and the man Mahesh is, respect for spouse, is amazing.
Thanks a lot for this mind blowing epic romantic erotica
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One of the best narrated story on this site !
Happy to read it !
Thanks for writing !
Waiting for next story ! All the best!
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Can you share pdf of other stories.... it will be great.... and thanks for your effort. Great story and great work.
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Thank you all. I have not come to the English Stories site for quite a long time. I just happened to be browsing through this site when I saw that this story still had responses from readers. This was completed quite a way back. I have currently been busy writing a story on the Tamil site. That story is nearing completion and should be over within the next two weeks. After that I had promised readers there that I would do a translation of my story here 'The Impact of Lust' into Tamil. I am pretty certain I will write a story in English soon after that. Even this story 'A Wife's Anxiety' was one of my first stories in Tamil. Gratifying to see that there are readers who are continuing to enjoy this story.
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Hi Game40it,
This story has the finest English language depiction of a wife’s thought process as she proceeds to mate with another man who is not her husband. The depiction of the aftermath and her behavior after she faces her husband the following morning after the 1st time she sleeps with Siva is just an exquisite piece of English language description of her emotions.
The description of the situation and Sweta’s mental processing of the situation when Siva takes her again in presence of her husband is also extraordinary….Sweta as we sensed all along and what was established in the end is that she is a strong, emotionally intelligent and intuitive woman, then why would she allow Siva to even enter her home let along have sex with her in front of her husband…..why did such an emotionally intelligent woman NOT realize that the husband wasn’t stopping Siva because SHE had warned him that if he wants to continue to be married with her, then he will not stop her.
However, without the 2nd episode of sex with Siva in presence of her husband, the intensity of the happy ending won’t have been so touching. Appreciate that Sweta was true to her character in the end.
Thanks for writing this emotionally powerful and touching story. Thanks for NOT dwelling too much on sex scenes as repetitive depiction of “big cock in tight pussy” type narrative becomes monotonous and boring.
Sincerely,
Intrepid
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