04-10-2020, 07:56 AM
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(05-10-2020, 02:09 PM)twinciteeguy Wrote:At the end of update I have given 2 options. I will retain one of them depending on readers opinions/likes. So please comments and let me know what you think. My own view I will change If i get good no of comments opposed to my view.
But opinion of the guy who asked me to write this story matters most too. No veto power of course.![]()
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(05-10-2020, 04:07 PM)Man4u90036 Wrote: It would have been better if you have continued with your idea. Without revealing the lines, first one suited better after what aand all she did with Rohit. And there wasn't any discussion about impregnation. She just made it clear while having fuck
(06-10-2020, 06:33 AM)twinciteeguy Wrote:Thank you Manu4u. My own option is 2 since Smita wanted to avoid any complications in her marriage. Later she comes to know of real reasons for Rohit asking her to give him a baby and then the third issue will be Rohit's baby. By that time Manoj too has adjusted to their new lifestyle and happy ending. Let me wait and see. I am also very happy to see you back. Now that I revealed my view will be happy to received your views.
(06-10-2020, 07:42 AM)Man4u90036 Wrote: Of course, Going with second option will give a complete and positive ending to the story in future. But i wish you would have continued without giving options as you are clear with gist of story. The second would have surely surprised if you have not made it as one of the choices
Thanks
(06-10-2020, 11:28 AM)Man4u90036 Wrote: That's a good thing... Continue
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