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Twinciteeguy..
This is awesome man... Continue... I know everyone likes to get reply and likes as those are the only ones that encourage you to wok more... But surely it spreaads...
This is at a good stage... I can't be selfish..
So if you want to discontinue after next 2 updates... Atleast write briefly how you want to end..
Thanks for the awesome story.... I hve been following other stories too,... Padmini,... Continue that.. It is also one of the beautiful writing
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(28-03-2020, 04:27 AM)sri65 Wrote: Oh...common buddy....all of us are locked up with this shit virus. Your story is great. Please complete it....
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I have posted as desired. Unfortunately author has not finished it.
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I'm yet to read this, but knowing you,
It would be good.
Pl continue.
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(28-03-2020, 07:10 AM)The Last samurai Wrote: Yaaa another story to look up to xossipy now great going plz continue......
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The Last samurai, I have posted completely. There will be no further updates.
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Yes, found original writing upto here. Do you have your views, if you have, complete briefly.
Anyway, you don't continue, like you already said.
Thanks for bringing this
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31-03-2020, 09:03 AM
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(30-03-2020, 07:24 AM)Man4u90036 Wrote: Twinciteeguy..
This is awesome man... Continue... I know everyone likes to get reply and likes as those are the only ones that encourage you to wok more... But surely it spreaads...
This is at a good stage... I can't be selfish..
So if you want to discontinue after next 2 updates... Atleast write briefly how you want to end..
Thanks for the awesome story.... I hve been following other stories too,... Padmini,... Continue that.. It is also one of the beautiful writing
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Man4u. I said 2 updates as the author wrote 2 parts only. Thx for mentioning Padmini story. Unfortunately many in this forum read and move on and only when updates stop, ask for updates. But at the moment I am not enthused.
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(30-03-2020, 08:03 PM)Man4u90036 Wrote: Yes, found original writing upto here. Do you have your views, if you have, complete briefly.
Anyway, you don't continue, like you already said.
Thanks for bringing this
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man4Uu. Glad u read original too. Yes I do have my views and thought of closing with few lines or a para. There are many interesting stories in Literotica. (complete and incomplete :
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(31-03-2020, 09:10 AM)twinciteeguy Wrote: [img][/img]
man4Uu. Glad u read original too. Yes I do have my views and thought of closing with few lines or a para. There are many interesting stories in Literotica. (complete and incomplete :
Yes. Twinciteeguy. Conclude e with your views in single or two if possible....
Thanks again...
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(31-03-2020, 09:10 AM)twinciteeguy Wrote: [img][/img]
man4Uu. Glad u read original too. Yes I do have my views and thought of closing with few lines or a para. There are many interesting stories in Literotica. (complete and incomplete :
Yes. Twinciteeguy. Conclude e with your views in single or two if possible....
Thanks again...
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(31-03-2020, 11:19 AM)Man4u90036 Wrote: Yes. Twinciteeguy. Conclude e with your views in single or two if possible....
Thanks again...
will do in a couple of days.
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02-04-2020, 12:13 PM
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(30-03-2020, 04:35 PM)ruby.bhatia Wrote: I'm yet to read this, but knowing you,
It would be good.
Pl continue.
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ruby. So much confidence in me. But funny part is you are asking me to write what I have not written at all. Anyway million thx for the confidence. I decided to put in a para and close as the original author has not completed the story.
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Their life settled into a loving routine. Deepa no longer felt something missing in her. She was so happy with her present life she shared with Raj and their son along with the baby growing in her, that she thought she would burst with it. Deepa went into labor on schedule and delivered a beautiful baby girl. Raj and Deepa were very happy and contented with this new addition into their family. One day, while Deepa was feeding her baby, Tom's wife called asking to talk to her. She immediately became anxious. What did she want?
They decided not to respond and Raj told her she is being nursed. She said OK and said will call again. The couple discussed, they are tense and finally raj said OK Deep, we landed here and we will talk and find out. He dialed her number and she responded first of all Congrats and said she wanted to talk to her. She said Hi Deepa and said congrats. You have done what I could not. Do not get tense, I am not going to make any demands which made Deepa Relax. Mr and hubby plan to come and see you both soon. Raj gave his acceptance and Deepa said both of you are welcome. They landed after a week.
Raj invited them both and he showed the baby to Tom and told him your baby Tom. He smiled and said no she is our Baby. Both Tom and Cindy spent time with the baby girl and also lavished the baby with lots of gifts like toys, clothes etc. As food is served, Raj took Deepa aside and said may be he needs some privacy with you. She blushed and said Cindy is there. Then ask him he said. As Cindy went to rest room Raj asked Tom whether he wants to send some private time with Deepa, he said oh yes surely. His face brightened as he said that. Cindy came at that time and said oh yes Raj he needs to spend time with the baby and Deepa, he is looking for that and as they retire to the bed room, you and I have to finish the unfinished job are you Ok. You are a devil Tom said. Well Tom we have to keep our part of the deal. Raj and Deepa smiled and soon Cindy led Raj to the guest bed room. Cindy is very proactive and gave Raj max pleasure as her hubby spent his time with Deepa.
Tom and Cindy spent next few days with the couple and left with Tom assuring again that he will take care of his/our baby. She also extracted a promise they will visit them saying Raj will be coming on work.
THE END.
(APOLOGIES TO SASOMA FOR THE LAST PARAS.)
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As you said, you completed with a para.. Good
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(02-04-2020, 11:03 PM)Man4u90036 Wrote: As you said, you completed with a para.. Good
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Man4u, Yes I did write, purely spurred by you and Ruby. Anyway at least a completed story.
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Thanks for a superb ending. Lots of love all around and none of the violence and sado-masochism that plagues other stories....!! great work!
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Ruby and others have asked for continuation and I thought this is only a repost I decided to continue and post updates. I do hope readers will respond even with constructive negative suggestions/comments.
So An Update is posted in the story Seduction of Nisha, the happy Housewife by elder guy. Hope readers will enjoy reading.
https://xossipy.com/showthread.php?tid=21307&page=6
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Here is a new story, again with white Boss. Hopefully you guys will enjoy reading.
Neha Taken by Hubby's White Boss by Indian wife.
Neha and Shashank Deshpande had been living in Los Angeles for last 3 years. Shashank had got a job offer from an American MNC as sales manager and since then had got a green card. After they had arrived in U.S. Neha also had got job as a secretary in a company.
Their life had been good. They had been married for 5 yrs now. Neha was 25 and Shashank was 28. Apart from the fact that they hadn't had a child, their life was pretty good. Their sexual life was also great. It was only marred by one fact that Shashank had a problem due to which he couldn't father her child. But he was not bad in bed even though his cock was just 5 inches in length. They had often explored each other's fantasies and talked about them pretty often. One of the wildest fantasies that Shashank had was seeing Neha with another man and being cuckolded by them. They had often talked about it. Neha had initially been somewhat hesitant to even discuss it. But as the days went by, even she became comfortable talking about it. They often discussed it, but Neha never thought it would be a reality. She had just said that she may consider it if she found the right man. But she had not found it as yet.
After first quarter of year 2009, Shashank's company threw a party. The sales numbers of the first quarter had been very good and the party was an occasion to celebrate it. Neha was waiting for Shashank in their home. It was about 7 PM and she had come early to prepare for the party. Just as she was about to call him on his cell, the door bell rang. She went and opened the door to admit him.
"I was just going to call you. Where have you been?" Neha said as she closed the door behind him.
"I am sorry honey. I got suck up in the traffic. What time did you come?" Shashank removed his shirt and hung it on the hook behind the door.
"I came at about 6 to get ready. I thought you would also come early. Anyway, now I am going to bathe. I have put your clothes on the bed. You use the other bathroom and get ready." She took a towel out of the wardrobe.
"What are you going to wear?" Shashank also removed another towel from wardrobe.
"I am wearing a sari." She replied and then went in the bathroom and closed the door.
Shashank also went in the second bathroom just outside the bedroom and started to bathe. He bathed quickly and came back in the bed room. He could still hear the shower in Neha's bathroom. He removed a set of undergarments from wardrobe. Just as he started to clothe, Neha came out from the bathroom. She was wearing just a towel covering her upper body. Another towel was wrapped in her hair. She came out and removed the towel from her hair. Then using the same towel, she lightly stroked her hair to remove water from it.
"So what is the plan? Where is the party? You never told me about it." Shashank was tying a tie.
"Didn't I tell you? It's on a boat. We are partying in the sea. You will love it." Shashank finished with the tie and started to wear the suit.
"Wow. That sounds great. And who will be there in the party?" Neha moved towards the wardrobe and sat on a chair in front of it. It contained a full length mirror. She opened the drawer and pulled out a dryer. Then she plugged it in the socket and started drying her hair. She had lovely jet black and shoulder length hair. They were a bit curly as well. The dryer was buzzing lightly as she moved her hands through her hair and dried it.
"Hey Shashank, I was waiting for you. I am good. How are you?" Rob turned towards Neha now.
"And you must be Neha. Shashank has your pictures all over his desk. How are you?" He smiled as he shook hands with Neha.
"I am good, thank you. Shashank talks a lot about you." Neha felt a strange sensation passing through her body as she felt Rob's touch. She felt Rob deliberately keep her hand in his hand as he spoke for some time. But what surprised her even more was the fact she didn't mind it. She almost felt good at his touch.
"You are looking beautiful. I am glad you could join us." He removed his hands from her and she almost felt bad about it. She couldn't exactly point it out, but there was something strange about Rob. He was quite handsome. His tallness added attraction to his personality.
"Thanks for the compliment. The pleasure is mine to join you." She smiled at him.
"So are you ready to go?" He pointed towards the small motor boat that had already docked just in front of them.
"Why, of course. I am just waiting to go?" She turned towards Shashank. "Let's go Shashank."
stay tuned......
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Though I concluded, I had some ideas on the first story Indian wife swaps with white Boss. May be If I find time I may write a small sequel to it. Meanwhile enjoy reading the second story.
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in 28 years green card. lol big fun of the year
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"I will go and get some cigarettes for us. You two go ahead. I will join you in 5 minutes." Shashank turned and started towards a shop we could see just behind us.
"So let's go then." Rob said and we both started towards the ferry that was supposed to take us on the cruise ship. She was glad that Shashank had left. She was afraid that he may detect a bit of uneasiness in her manner. She didn't want him to know that she was feeling some attraction towards Rob. They both walked towards the ferry and reached it pretty quickly. The ferry was just below landing stage. Rob jumped on the ferry first. Neha was feeling somewhat uneasy about jumping in her sari. Rob sensed her hesitation immediately. He came forward to help her.
"Come forward. I will help you get down." She was somewhat above his head. And He put his arms around her waist. She also put her arms around his shoulders as Rob lowered her on the ferry. They went in and mingled with the crowd but for most of the time they were alone talking to each other. Just as Neha thought about when Shashank would join them, the ferry started to move.
"I don't think I saw Shashank get on the ferry." She asked Rob with some concern in her eyes.
"Don't worry. Even if he missed this one, he will come by the next ferry. Don't bother to call him."
Rob took her hand in his hand and guided her towards the edge of the ferry. She felt cool see air on her body and shivered. Ferry turned and then moved slowly. Rob and Neha talked continuously. Neha found Rob an entertaining companion and almost started enjoying his company. He talked about various topics and was very well informed about almost every one of them. The time seemed to fly and soon she could see the cruise ship. Just as Rob told another funny anecdote, the ferry reached the ship. A hatch in the ship had connectivity with the ferry's upper deck and they both moved towards it with the crowd. Neha was very close to Rob and her body was almost crushed on his body. She was behind him and she could feel her breasts crushing against his back. She could smell his perfume and felt a strange feeling clouding her mind. Her hand was in Rob's hand and she was feeling very comfortable about it. She almost completely forgot Shashank. They all entered the hatch of the cruise ship and the climbed the stairs to reach the upper deck of the ship.
"Wow. It's wonderful." She remarked as they both came out into the open deck.
"I am glad you liked it." Until now it had been very crowded. But now the deck was very open and people had already dispersed all over the huge deck. They moved towards the edge of the deck where it was almost empty. Neha could see the ferry had already moved out and other ferry was almost reaching the ship. She knew that Shashank would be coming in it. She decided to call him to confirm it.
"We have reached the ship. Where are you?" She spoke in the phone as Shashank took her call.
"I am on the second ferry. Don't worry. I will come and join you in next 10 minutes."
"OK. Rob and I are waiting on the upper deck for you." She disconnected the call and put the cell phone in her purse.
"Do you want to have a drink?" Rob asked her they both settled on a bench just near the edge of deck.
"Sure. What do you like?" She asked him as she removed the bow from her hair and let it fall down on her shoulders.
"Well I like whiskey. What about you?" Rob watched as Neha gathered her hair on left shoulder. She was looking very sexy with her hair open. Rob had often seen her pictures on Shashank's desk and often fantasized about her. And now in reality she looked even better than in her pictures.
"I prefer vodka." She replied.
"All right. I will get both for us." He got up.
"If it's not much trouble to you, then please have it iced for me."
stay tuned..............
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