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(22-05-2019, 01:18 AM)seansean007 Wrote: In today's fast paced world,it is very difficult to spare some time to write stories.I don't get much time to write but I also love this story so don't feel like abandoning it.I don't know when but I will try to complete it someday when I get time.May be in the form of an erotic novel.
I won't write any more here as once started,the constant demand of readers for updates become frustrating.Starting a story is like commiting 7-8 hours every week for a normal length update only to be read by readers in a few minutes and then see them asking for updates till the next update comes and the cycle keeps repeating.
It is better that I keep myself away from all these and write as and when I feel like with complete freedom.Hopeully one day I will complete this and then share it with others.
Thanks for showing love to this story.I will appreciate if no one tries to make it into a story of his own by writing his own version.
Sean bro, bas at least ye scene to complete Kar do. You owe atlat lethat much to those readers who did not pissed you off with constant demands. Atleast don't let those readers hanging. Please just this one scene between Anita and Hariya. Baad me apne novel me please do expand it by all means. Kam se Kam seedhe seedhe Mana to mat Karo ki is site par likhoge hi nahi.... Hoping you will reconsider
Bas ye scene..
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(22-05-2019, 01:18 AM)seansean007 Wrote: In today's fast paced world,it is very difficult to spare some time to write stories.I don't get much time to write but I also love this story so don't feel like abandoning it.I don't know when but I will try to complete it someday when I get time.May be in the form of an erotic novel.
I won't write any more here as once started,the constant demand of readers for updates become frustrating.Starting a story is like commiting 7-8 hours every week for a normal length update only to be read by readers in a few minutes and then see them asking for updates till the next update comes and the cycle keeps repeating.
It is better that I keep myself away from all these and write as and when I feel like with complete freedom.Hopeully one day I will complete this and then share it with others.
Thanks for showing love to this story.I will appreciate if no one tries to make it into a story of his own by writing his own version.
I agree with your concerns, bro. Story writing is creative work. The constant demand for the updates can hamper the quality and ruin the fun of writing. Sometimes it can be very frustrating. In my personal experience, the writing gets a bit slow towards the end of the story because you have to tie a lot of loose ends together.
I deal with this by completing many chapters in advance before start posting them here. When I post chapter no 1 here, I would be working on chapter no 5. This will reduce the pressure of your head. This has worked well so far for me.
What I am suggesting is, you don't have to stop the story. Take a break and come back when you have 3-4 chapters in your hand. If people are demanding updates, it is for a single reason: your story is very good. Take it as a form of appreciation.
Just sharing a few thoughts.
Krish.
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seansean007 Wrote: [url=https://xossipy.com/showthread.php?pid=478194#pid478194][/url]In today's fast paced world,it is very difficult to spare some time to write stories.I don't get much time to write but I also love this story so don't feel like abandoning it.I don't know when but I will try to complete it someday when I get time.May be in the form of an erotic novel.
I won't write any more here as once started,the constant demand of readers for updates become frustrating.Starting a story is like commiting 7-8 hours every week for a normal length update only to be read by readers in a few minutes and then see them asking for updates till the next update comes and the cycle keeps repeating.
It is better that I keep myself away from all these and write as and when I feel like with complete freedom.Hopeully one day I will complete this and then share it with others. sean bhai aap pls story complet karo logo ne aap ki story ko bahut pasand kiya hai aap is story ko complete kijiye jab aap ke pass time ho tabhi update dijiye ...
Thanks for showing love to this story.I will appreciate if no one tries to make it into a story of his own by writing his own version.
THIS WAS THE REPLY OF SEAN BRO ON THIS THREAD ONLY . . . . . AND STILL PEOPLE ARE DEMANDING AN UPDATE.
SO GUYS, WHY YOU ALL ARE BOTHERING HIM AGAIN AND AGAIN . . . . . . HE TOO HAVE PERSONAL LIFE LIKE WE ALL.
PLEASE STOP DEMANDING FOR AN UPDATE. WHENEVER HE WILL HAVE TIME, HE MAY OR MAY NOT COMPLETE THE STORY.
नशीली आँखें
वो प्यार क्या जो लफ्ज़ो में बयाँ हो
प्यार वो है जो आँखों में नज़र आए!!
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Whenever you are ready, if you are ready Sean Sir
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(11-01-2019, 12:24 AM)val.coutinho Wrote: Anita Raj ke paas jaati hai to Raj usko dekhte hue kehta hai,''tum bhi na kya kya khaati rehti ho''...........Anita Raj ki baat sunkar kehti hai,''main jab se yahaan aayee hoon ek baar bhi paani puri nahin khayee thi,ye saaf suthra aur tasty paani puri bana raha tha to maine kha liya,tumko nahin pasand to tumko khaane ke liye kaun bol raha hai,mujhe pasand hai to main khaati hoon''........Raj Anita ki baat sunnkar bas muskurate hue uske liye gaadi ka darwaza khol kar use baithata hai aur phir khud driving seat par baithkar drive karne lagta hai..............dono pati patni jab restaurant mein ghuse tab gatekeeper ne unhe salute kiya aur uska bhi dil Anita ki khoobsurti aur iss tarah se saree pehne dekhkar dhadak gaya...........bhale hi uss restaurant mein sirf ameer log hi khaane aate the magar wo sab aurtein Anita jitni khoobsurat nahin hoti thi aur khoobsurat hoti bhi thi to itni badan dikhau kapde nahin pehenti thi.......kabhi kabhi hi badan dikhau kapde pehne aurtein wahan aati thi.................Magar kyun ki wo high level restaurant ka gatekeeper tha iss liye usne Anita ko zyada ghurkar nahin dekha..........Anita ko restuarant ke ander khaate kuchh mardon ne dekha magar wo log bhi zyada der tak Anita ko dekhna uchit nahin samajhe aur chup chap khaane lage............magar Raj ke kahe mutabik ek do aurtein Anita ki khoobsurti aur itna sexy andaz mein saree pehne dekh jal gayee...........Iske alawa wahan kuchh nahin hua aur dono pati patni dinner karke waapas ghar aa gaye...........Raj din bhar ghar par rehne se thoda fresh feel kar raha tha aur aese mein raat ko usne Anita ko achhe se choda...........Anita ko yun Raj ka der tak chodna acchha to laga magar phir bhi use utna mazaa nahin aaya.........use kuchh kami lag rahi thi.........Raj ne bas uski taangon ke beech lete hi choda aur aese mein Anita ko zyada mazaa nahin aaya.............Raj use chod kar so gaya wahin Anita use dekhkar sochti hai,''Raj ne to aaj der tak meri li,achhe se sex kiya,magar phir bhi mujhe mazaa kyun nahin aaya''.......wo aese hi usko dekhti hai aur phir chhat ki taraf dekhne lagti hai.........uski aankhon ke saamne ab Jeetu ki chudai ghumne lagi........uska yun gandi baatein karna,uska paseena chaatna aur aese uski gaand par thappad maarkar chodna sab Anita ki aankhon ke saamne aane laga.........Anita ki badan mein romanch bhar gaya aur uski choot farakne lagi yeh sochkar..........wo phir sochti hai,''yeh kya ho raha hai,Jeetu ke saath sex karne wali ghatna ko yaad karke mujhe mazaa kyun aa raha hai,meri pussy phadak kyun rahi hai,nahin nahin aesa nahin ho sakta,main beqaar ki baatein soch rahi hoon'' aur usi tarah sochti huyee Anita so gayee.
Agla din Monday tha............Anita Raj ke jaane ke baad time dekhti hai..........wo soch rahi thi ki Jeetu uss din ki ghatna ke baad dubara ayega ya nahin........wo aese hi 10:30 tak uska intezaar karti hai magar jab wo nahin aata hai to wo nahane chali jaati hai..........wahin dusri taraf Jeetu apne chhote se jhopdi mein ek charpayee par leta Anita ke baare mein soch raha tha...........uske aankhon ke samne Anita ki jawaan gori aur maadak badan hi dikhai de rahi thi ..............wo uss lamhe ko yad karne laga jab wo Anita ko chod raha tha.............uski jawaani ke maze loot rahs tha,uski gori badan aur raseele honthon ko choom chaat raha tha.............wo aese hi sab kuchh soch raha tha ki uske chinese mobile par message aata hsi.............jab wo message dekhts hai to pata hai ki wo Tipu ka whatsapp par message tha.........Tipu usse poochhta hai ki wo sahi se Anita ke ghar kaam kar raha hai ya nahin aur sath hi bolta hai,''Jeetu memsaahab dil ki bahot achhi hai,thoda bhi ghamand nahin memsaahab mein, agar kabhi daant bhi de to bura mat maan na aur wahaan kaam karna mat chhorna,memsaahab jaisi achhi malkin jakdi nahin milegi''............Jeetu Tipu ke mesaage ka jawaab deta hai aur phir dono idhar udhar ki baatein karne ke baad baad mein baat karne ka bolkr message karna bandh kar dete hain.............. Jeetu kuchh sochta hai aur phir whatsapp ke contact mein jaakar Anita ka naam ''memsaahab'' mein click karta hai aur uski display picture dekhkar uska dil dhadakne lagta hai................wo uski display picture mein click karke baaya haath se apne shorts ke ander se lund nikaalta hai aur Anita ki photo dekhkar lund sehlane lagta hai..............Anita uss photo mein lag hi rahi thi aesi ki koi bhi mard lund par haath rakhne par majboor ho jaata uski photo dekhkar ............Anita uss photo mein nahakar ek backless blouse aur saree pehni baal tauliye se sukha rahi thi........Anita photo mein sideways khadi thi magar uski peeth uss photo mein camera ke taraf thoda zyada thi...................wo muskurate hue backless saree pehne apni kandhe par girakar baal ponnchh rahi thi jisse uski peeth poori dikh rahi thi aur saath hi sath uski gaand aur chunchi ki ubhaar bhi saaf saaf pata chal rahi thi..........uski blouse thodi thodi bheegi thi aur peeth aur kamar par paani ke kuchh bundhe thi jise dekhkar Jeetu ka lund akadne laga aur wo use haath mein lekar haath upar neeche karke apne lund ko sehlane laga.
Wahi udhar Anita nahakar saree pehen kar tayyar ho gayee aur jaise hi living room mein gayee to door bell baj utha..........door bell bajte hi uska dil dhadak jaata hai aur wo darwaze ki taraf dekhne lagti hai..........wo darwaze ki taraf dekhti hi rehti hai ki phir se bell baj jaata hai...........wo jaati hai aur darwaza khol deti hai aur saamne Jeetu ko khada paati hai...........wo aaj bhi paan kha raha tha aur seedha Anita ki chehre par hi dekh raha tha.............Anita side hokar use ander aane deti hai aur phir darwaza bandh kar deti hai.............Jeetu ek nazar Anita ki nangi pet par dekhta hai aur phir store room ki taraf chala jaata hai..........Anita use dekhte hue kehti hai,''store room ka darwaza khula hai'' aur yeh kehte hue wo living room mein rakhe sofe ki taraf chali jati hai.............Jeetu kuchh seconds use dekhta hai aur phir store room ki taraf chala jaata hai.............wo baahar apna shirt nikaal kar rakh deta hai aur Anita sofe par baithe use dekhti hai aur tabhi Jeetu bhi apna shirt ko rakhte hue use dekhta hai..........dono ki nazr milti hai aur Jeetu paan khaate hue use dekhta hai aur phir store room mein chala jaata hai.............Anita chup chap sofe par baithkar magazine padhne lagti hai magar uska dhyaan magazine par kam tha aur uske dimagh mein ajeeb ajeeb khyaal aa rahe hote hai..........Wo ek nazar store room ki taraf dekhti hai aur phir magazine padhne lagti hai..........kareeb 15 minute baad jab wo nazar magazine se hatati hai to Jeetu ko apne taraf aate dekhti hai............uska poora badan paseene se bheega tha........Anita ka dil dhadakne laga use apne taraf aata dekh.............Jeetu uske paas aakar bolta hai,''memsaahab paani milega?''............Anita bas use dekhkar ''haan'' mein sir hilati hai aur uthkar kitchen ki taraf chali jaati hai..........jab wo uthkar Jeetu ke paas se gayee to uski naak mein phir se uske badan ki badbu sama gayee..........uska ganda paseena ka badbu sunghte hi Anita ki dil dhadakne ke saath hi badan mein romanch bhar gaya.............Jeetu Anita ki matakti gaand ko dekhne laga.........Anita jab fridge se paani ka bottle nikal rahi thi tab wo ghoomkar Jeetu ko dekhti hai aur use apni gaand par dekhte paati hai..............Jeetu phir uski chehre par dekhta hai aur dono ki nazre milti hai.........Jeetu phir uski gaand dekhne lagta hai............Anita chup chap paani ka bottle le jaakar Jeetu ko deti hai............Jeetu bottle leta hai aur isse pehle ki Anita dininh table se glass laati Jeetu waise hi bottle se paani peene lagta hai..........Anita bas waise hi use paani peete dekhti hai aur uski naak mein Jeetu ke badan se aa rahi badbu jati hai jisse wo madhosh hone lagti hai aur poore badan mein masti ki laher daudne lagti hai................Jeetu paani pee raha tha to uske munh ke side se thoda bahot paani uske nange seene par gir raha tha................Jeetu paani peekar Anita ko dekhta hai jo uske seene ko hi dekh rahi thi.............Jeetu use bottle dete hue kehta hai,''lijiye memsaahab aap bhi paani peejiye''.............Anita use dekhkar bas ''na'' mein sir hilati hai to Jeetu apna haath se munh saaf karte hue wo bottle wahin sofe ke saamne table par rakhta hai aur Anita ki taraf badhne lagta hai..........aese Jeetu ko apne taraf badhta dekh Anita ka dil dhadakne lagta hai aur saath hi Jeetu ke badan ka badbu bhi tez ho jaati hai magar Anita peechhe nahin hatti hai...........wo waise hi khadi rehti hai aur Jeetu ki aankh mein dekhti rehti hai............Jeetu uske paas jaata hai aur apna ganda haath Anita ki chikni gori kamar par rakh deta hai..........Anita ke liye yeh koi nayee baat nahin thi.........uski kamar par to mard hamesha hi haath rakhte the magar iske bawjood Jeetu ke chhune se use kuchh alag sa mehsus hua............uski kamar jo bahot hi saaf suthri thi ab Jeetu ke paseene se bhare gande haath ke chhune se chipchipane laga.............Jeetu Anita ki kamar par haath pherne lagta hai aur Anita ka pura rom rom romanchit ho uthta hai.........Jeetu aese hi uski kamar par agle ek minute tak haath pherta hai aur phir Anita ki honthon ki taraf apna honth le jaane lagta hai............Anita ko chunchi uski saans tez hone ke kaaran upar neeche hone lagti hai aur jab Jeetu ke honth uski honthon se ek inch ke faasle par tha to wo apni haath Jeetu ke seene par rakhti hai aur use peechhe karti huyee bolti hai,''Jeetu yeh sab theek nahin hai,humein yeh nahin karna chahiye,tum jao aur store room ki safai karo''................Jeetu Anita ko ek pal dekhta hai aur phir bolta hai,''kyun memsaahab?main ghareeb hoon isliye?''................Anita uski baat sunnkar sir ''na'' mein hilati hai aur jab wo baat poora karta hai to wo bolti hai,''nahin Jeetu aesi baat nahin,agar aesa hota to main peechhli baar tumhare saath yeh sab nahin karti,baat yeh hai ki humein aesa nahin karna chahiye bas''..............Jeetu apna sir jhukata hai aur phir ek nazar Anita ki upar neechi hoti chunchiyon ko dekhta hai aur waapas store room mein 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Sean bro kab continue karoge ye story
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Please update do Sean bro ya koi accha writer iss kahani ko aage bada sakta
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Waiting bro please continue
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I think this is the end of this thread/story dont expect sean to continue as i think he will not write any more abt this story or swati... if he had to write he would have written in short updates long time back so its my suggestion to all dont request and dont expect..... i take this story to be dead from here.
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(22-05-2019, 01:18 AM)seansean007 Wrote: In today's fast paced world,it is very difficult to spare some time to write stories.I don't get much time to write but I also love this story so don't feel like abandoning it.I don't know when but I will try to complete it someday when I get time.May be in the form of an erotic novel.
I won't write any more here as once started,the constant demand of readers for updates become frustrating.Starting a story is like commiting 7-8 hours every week for a normal length update only to be read by readers in a few minutes and then see them asking for updates till the next update comes and the cycle keeps repeating.
It is better that I keep myself away from all these and write as and when I feel like with complete freedom.Hopeully one day I will complete this and then share it with others.
Thanks for showing love to this story.I will appreciate if no one tries to make it into a story of his own by writing his own version.
Please Bhai ab aur mat tadpaao.... Please kuchh to batao Anita aur Hariya ke beech aage Kya hua us raat
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Any update to this story? This was one of the best yet incomplete story
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Yes please this story start now it's very hot storie
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Anita singh ko dobara kaun sab chahte hain..
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