04-12-2021, 11:20 AM
(04-12-2021, 06:03 AM)Thangaraasu Wrote: Thanks for completing the story.
Naina is more playful, teasing in this version. The real emotions was only from Siraj.
The last scene where they parted did not make a punch like original. Not sure it is because its second time read.
Actually this is the story of two different variants ...... Siraj, a seasoned veteran known as Playboy in his organization but with strong ethics and with vast experience with gals ...... where as Naina is quite nave and sexually starved for long time of which she was quite unaware and also not aware of the basic needs of a person and required amenities for a healthy leaving ..... They both are north and south poles ..... so such reactions from them is evident .......
As far as the punch from the last scene ...... I could not understand your feelings ..... I think it was just the original with a slight change in added naration .... do not think that diluted the closing punch .... will u pl explain that little bit in details ........