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I am writing regularly but not seeing much likes or comments on the post, so I am not sure if the story is being well received or not.
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Yes, there will be more sex in the story... be patient please... I don't want to rush things.
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Let's see where it leads to... I have a specific plot in mind... it will likely have some of those elements involved.
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Thank you... if you have read my other stories... you would know how I like to write, and sex is just secondary to the story and emotions. If I am not able to convey why the characters are doing what they are doing, then it doesnt make for a good story. Sex is part of our daily lives, and therefore will be part of any story.
Sometimes my approach can make for a boring story, or even painful for me to write. And I know I dont get a lot of readership, but its' fine, I can't write what I can't.
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@Harshit - I will get back to that story as well, don't worry.
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Chapter 9
Mummy ne meri plate mein ek aur parantha rakha.
Main - Mummy main aur nahi kha sakti... please..
Mummy - Kha le na... fir pata nahi kab mere haath ka khana khane ko milega.
Main lagbhag do ghante pehle hi apne ghar par pag fere ki rasam ke liye pahuchi thi. Aditya raat ko mujhe lene aane wale they. Yeh rasam isliye bani hoti hai ki ladkiyan shaadi ke baad apne mayke jaakar apne gharwalo se khul kar baat kar sake, woh jaan sake uske sasuraal mein sab theek tha na.
Par jabse main ghar wapas aayi thi kafi bujhi hui si thi par Mummy ne mujhse sasural ki zara bhi baat nahi chhedi thi. Main unse kal raat jo hua uske baare mein baat karna chah rahi thi par samajh nahi aa raha tha baat ko kaise chhedu.
Mummy - Bata fir... Aditya ji ko kya acha lagta hai... wohi banwa lenge...
Main - Hmmm... nahi pata...
Mummy - Baaki sab bhi aa rahe hai na saath mein? Teri dono nanad... aur badi nanad ke husband...
Samar... Samar naam hai unka... main bolna chahti thi par ruk gayi.
Main - Nahi pata...
Mummy - Pata kya hai tujhe fir? Wahan bhi aisi khoyi khoyi thi kya? Kya sochenge tere sasuraal wale?
Main - Mummy...
Mummy bas apne mann ki baat bole jaa rahi thi - Chehakti hui kitni pyaari lagti hai tu... ghar ki bahu ke chehre par agar muskaan ho toh ghar ke sab log khush rehte hain...
Main - Mummy.... suno na...
Mummy - Pata nahi tere Papa bhi kahan busy ho gaye? Aaj ke din bhi business... beti ghar aayi hai...
Maine aakhir thoda zor se bola - MUMMY! Mujhe aapse baat karni hai.
Mummy meri tez aawaz sun kar ek pal ke liye hairaan reh gayi - Baat toh kar rahi hun... bol?
Main - Mmm... aise nahi... andar kamre mein chalkar baat karte hai na...
Hamare ghar ke naukar aas paas hi they aur mujhe yahan khule mein woh sab bolne mein sharam aa rahi thi.
Mummy - Dekh abhi bilkul time nahi hai... woh log 2 ghante mein aa jayenge...
Main kafi helpless sa mehsoos kar rahi thi - Mummy...
Mummy - Beta... bol na tu...
Main thoda sa hichkichayi - Woh... mmmmhhh... aapne mujhe bataya kyun nahi?
Mummy - Kis baare mein?
Main - Unki... unki woh rasam... pehli raat ki...
Mummy ne meri baat puri tarah ansuni kar di aur kitchen mein jaate hue kuch le kar aayi - Yeh le... yeh achar acha hai...
Ab mera paara badta jaa raha tha - Mujhe nahi chahiye achar! Aap meri baat toh suno... aapko pata tha woh sab aur fir bhi aapne...
Mummy - Dekh Suhani... woh tere sasural ki pratha hai... usme mera bolna nahi banta... aur jo kuch bhi hai woh sab tere aur Aditya ki bhalai ke liye hi hai...
Main - Bhalai? Aapko pata bhi hai... main kaisa mehsoos...
Paas se ghar ka ek naukar guzar ke gaya aur main chup ho gayi.
Mummy - Ab woh tera sasural hai... aur achi ladkiyan apne sasural ki baat idhar udhar nahi karti...
Mujhe unki baat kafi chubh rahi thi, woh aise kaise bol rahi thi, jaise unhe koi parwah hi na ho - Par mummy...
Mummy - Nahi Suhani... mujhe is baare mein koi baat nahi karni... aur tu bhi is sab ke baare mein na soche na baat kare toh behtar hai. Ab tu us ghar ki bahu hai... aur teri responsibility hai apne ghar ki izzat apne haath mein rakhna.
Main gusse mein bhaari saansein le rahi thi. Fir se lecture.
Mummy - Wahan ki baatein wahan bhool jayo... aur yahan ki baatein yahan... aur sabko khush rakhne ki koshish karo.
Main plate ko gusse mein sarka kar apne kamre mein jaane lagi... mera kamra... mere ghar ka kamra. Sab kuch abhi bhi waisa hi tha jaisa main chhod kar gayi. Ek din hi toh hua tha abhi... par fir bhi sab kuch kitna ajeeb sa lag raha tha.
Maine darwaza band kar liya aur dheere dheere subak subak kar rone lagi. Mummy ne meri baat sunni bhi nahi chahi. Koi nahi samajhna chah raha tha ki main kaisa mehsoos kar rahi thi.
Apne kamre ke palang par kuch der meri aankh lag gayi. Aur fir aisa laga agle hi pal Mummy mujhe utha rahi ho.
Mummy - Suhu... Suhaniiii.... Aditya ji aa gaye hain... baaki sab bhi... uth jaldi se...
Maine apni aankhen malte hue muh banaya - Kya hua... mujhe nahi jaana...
Mummy - Chal jaldi se apne baal aur kapde theek kar aur bahar aa jaa...
Isse pehle main kuch aur kehti kamre mein ek chehakti hui aawaz aayi, Drishti ki. Shayad woh Mummy ke peeche peeche andar tak aa gayi thi.
Drishti - BHABHI!!!! Kaisi ho aap... aree aap toh fir se so gayi...
Mummy - Aa jayo Drishti beta... apni Bhabhi ko jagayo zara...
Drishti - Wow... yeh aapka kamra hai... itne saare soft toys... aapko ache lagte hain?
Main uth kar bed par baithi, Drishti mere kamre ki har cheez ko gaur se dekh rahi thi.
Mummy - Tum dono baat karo... main bahar dekhti hoon.
Drishti muh banate hue boli - Bhabhi.... pehle aap so gaye they... fir yahan aa gaye... fir ab bhi baat nahi kar rahe... naraaz ho kya mujhse?
Main - Nahi... aisa kuch nahi... bas thoda tired hoon...
Drishti - Yeh Bhaiya bhi na! Ek hi raat mein aapko itna thaka diya... honeymoon ka hi wait kar lete... par waise shayad wait karna mushkil hota hai na shaadi ke baad.
Main bas halke se muskurayi, samajh nahi aa raha tha Drishti ko kya jawab du.
Drishti mere paas aakar baith gayi - Bhabhi... sorry agar aapko meri baatein annoying lag rahi ho toh... bas meri saari friends ki bhabhi hain... aur woh unse sab kuch share karti hain... saari baatein karti hain... toh mujhe laga...
Kafi innocent si thi Drishti, aur main usse gussa nahi reh sakti thi - Sorry ki zaroorat nahi hai, tum mujhse bhi khul kar saari baat kar sakti ho...
Drishti ka chehra turant chamak utha - Saari... acha... poochu fir main...
Main has padi, aur kisi tarah apne emotions chhupate hue boli - Well... lagbhag saari... main kal raat ke baare mein tumhe kuch nahi batane wali...
Drishti ne disappointed hone ka natak kiya par turant hi woh mujhe apne doston aur yahan wahan ki saari baatein batane lagi. Mujhe uski baaton mein koi interest nahi aa raha tha, par jaise Mummy ne kaha tha, mera kaam tha apne chehre par ek muskaan rakhna. Main beech beech mein sawaal puchne ki koshish karti taaki use lagta ki mera interest bana hua hai.
Thodi der baad meri Mummy ne aakar kaha - Suhani... Drishti... tum log bhi bahar aa jayo... naashta laga diya hai...
Drishti turant khadi ho gayi aur maine khade ho kar apni saree aur baalon ko mirror mein dekh kar theek kiya aur fir uske saath bahar aa gayi.
Bahar aakar maine dekha ki hamare living room mein Aditya aur Jiju ek saath baith they. Mere wahan aate hi dono ki nazrein meri taraf gayi. Maine eye contact hote hi doosre taraf dekha, jahan Prachi Didi baithi hui thi.
Prachi mujhe dekhte hi - Lo... Suhani bhi aa gayi... Suhani... maine Drishti ko mana kiya tha andar jaane ke liye... par yeh bas bhaag kar andar chali gayi...
Main halke se muskurayi - Koi nahi Didi...
Prachi Drishti ko dekhte hue dhamki di - Mummy ko batayungi main is sab ke baare me.
Drishti ne bas Prachi ko jeeb chidha ke dikha diya.
Meri nazar wapas Aditya ki taraf gayi, woh ek smart si shirt aur jeans pehne hue they, kafi smart lag rahe they. Par unke theek barabar mein baithe Jiju formal shirt pant mein they, jaise kisi business meeting se aaye ho. Saath baithe baithe pata chal raha tha ki Jiju Aditya se lambe chaudhe they. Shirt ke andar se hi unke strong arms saaf pata chal rahe they.
Mummy - Suhani... ab tu hi khila sab ko... koi kuch le hi nahi raha hai...
Main beech ki table ke paas jhuki aur sabki plates mein snacks laga kar serve karne lagi. Maine pehle plate laga kar Prachi Didi ko diya aur fir Drishti ko, aur fir Aditya ko, aur fir aakhir mein Jiju ko. Unko serve karte waqt main kisi tarah bas apne haathon ko kaanpe se rok rahi thi. Unki nazrein meri choodiyon par tiki hui thi.
Prachi - Tum bhi lo na Suhani... aur yahin baith jayo... Aditya ke paas...
Main ek plate lekar Aditya ke barabar mein baith gayi. Drishti khadi ho kar hum dono ki saath mein pic lene lagi.
Drishti - Wow Bhabhi... aap itni pretty lag rahi ho!
Aditya - Aur main? Main acha nahi lag raha...
Drishti - Bhabhi jitne nahi! Aur Jiju aap toh aaj bilkul ghar ke bade buzurg ki tarah lag rahe ho...
Jiju - Areee... itna bhi buddha kyun bana rahe ho mujhe... tum logon ki age ka hi hoon yaar...
Drishti - Aap itna chup chup jo baithe ho aaj... aur meri age ke toh bilkul nahi ho!
Jiju - Acha ji... toh kya age hai meri?
Drishti - Mmmm.... bhabhi se guess karwate hai pehle... Bhabhi aap batayo na...
Maine bauhein uchkate hue Drishti ko dekha - Main kaise.... nahi please...
Drishti - Aree bas guess hi toh karna hai... please... come on...
Aditya - Come on Suhani... just guess?
Main sochte hue boli - Nahi pata... 32...
Un mein se koi bhi yeh guess nahi kar sakta tha ki mera dil kitni tez dhadak raha tha.
Drishti ne aankhen meechte hue sar hilaya - Cloooseee... not quite...
Jiju - Aree.... bilkul sahi toh bataya hai... 32 hi hai...
Drishti - Aap na... rehne do Jiju... aap jitne young dikhte ho na... utne ho nahi...
Jiju - Abhi toh keh rahi thi ki main ghar ka bada buzurg lag raha hoon... aur ab keh rahi hai ki young... apna mind bana le...
Drishti - Main aapse gussa hoon... ab se bas bhabhi aur meri team hai... aur aap usse out...
Jiju - Mujhe kyun team se out kar diya? Mujhe bhi toh team mein rakh na...
Drishti - Nahi... ab aap poori tarah out ho...
Jiju - Acha... toh theek hai fir main aur Suhani milkar ek nayi team bana lenge... Kyun Suhani?
Mere gaal ekdam sharam se laal ho gaye. Us kamre mein Drishti ko chhod kar sabko pata tha ki mere aur unke beech kal raat kya hua tha, fir bhi Jiju aise lightly mujhse baat kar rahe they!
Drishti - Bhabhi... ab aap chun lo... ya toh main ya Jiju?
Mere liye iska jawab dena bilkul mushkil nahi tha, aur maine jaldi se kaha - Ofcourse tumhari team!
Drishti khushi se koodne lagi - Yayyy!! Go Team Hottie!
Ufff... kitna bachpana tha is ladki mein. Team Hottie! Aisa naam kaun deta hai, aur woh bhi itne saare logon ke saamne. Sab log has rahe they, Jiju bhi.
Jiju ne meri taraf dekhte hue kaha - Oho... Suhani ne bhi dhoka de diya... mujhe aisi umeed nahi thi...
Aditya has ke bola - Koi nahi Jiju... hum apni nayi Boys team bana lenge...
Prachi - Acha... fir main kahan jayungi?
Sab log hasne lage. Kuch pal baad kisi aur topic par aapas mein hasi majak hone laga, is baar driving par, aur kaun kitna kharaab driver tha. Main bas chup chaap muskurati hui sab kuch sun rahi thi aur agar koi kuch bol deta toh beech mein kuch kuch bol deti. Teeno bhai behen mein kafi pyaar aur closeness thi, bilkul waisi family jaisi mujhe chahiye thi.
Bas... kaash... kal raat... woh sab na hua hota.
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Chapter 10
Raat ke khane ke baad main sabke saath apne sasuraal ke liye nikli. Jiju gaadi chala rahe they aur Aditya aage unke saath baithe they. Main peeche, Prachi aur Drishti ke theek beech mein baithi thi.
Drishti - Jiju... thoda fast chalayo na... itna kya slowly chala rahe ho...
Jiju - Maine jyada fast chalaya na... toh tum gaadi se bahar udd jayogi...
Drishti - Rehne do... aap bilkul fun nahi ho...
Prachi - Drishu.... kyun bolti rehti hai... Suhani kya sochegi tere baare mein.
Aditya - Haan sach mein! Suhani... tum na iski bak bak se thak jayogi do hi dino mein. Khair hum log parso Mauritius jaa rahe hain... kuch din toh isse chutkara milega.
Drishti - Acha... nahi... main nahi jaane dungi Bhabhi ko...
Jiju - Aur tumhari Bhabhi ka mann ho jaane ka toh... rok logi unhe?
Drishti ne innocently poocha - Aap sach mein jaana chahti hain?
Prachi - Kaisa silly sa sawaal hai Drishu... ofcourse woh jaana chahti hain... unka honeymoon hai...
Honeymoon ka naam sunkar main sharam se car ki seat mein gadh gayi. Aage ki taraf dekha toh car ke mirror mein meri aankhen jaa kar Jiju se mili. Maine turant aankhen neeche kar li.
Drishti - Honeymoon par jo hota hai... woh yahin kar lo...
Sab log hasne lage, mujhe bhi halki si hasi aa gayi.
Prachi - Ufff... tera kuch nahi ho sakta yaar... god help you!
Drishti ne topic badalte hue kaha - Acha... abhi ghar chalkar cards khele?
Prachi - Nahi nahi... Adi aur Suhani ko aaram karna hai... aur hum log bhi apne ghar jaa rahe hain!
Drishti - Aap log aaj hi jaa rahe ho?
Prachi - Haan abhi ek baar jaana hai... kal aa jayenge...
Drishti - Bhabhi... aap bolo na... roko na inhe...
Mujhe samajh nahi aa raha tha main kya bolu beech mein. Main khud itna tired feel kar rahi thi ki bas bed par gir kar sona chahti thi. Par bed ka khayal aate hi yaad aaya ki yeh wohi bed hone wala tha jahan kal... main aur Jiju.... oh god!
Gaadi ghar ke aage ruki aur Adi gaadi se neeche utra. Doosri side se Drishti bhi neeche utri. Main utar hi rahi thi ki meri sandal gaadi mein kahin atak gayi aur main ladkhadate hue neeche utri.
Jiju ke muh se turant nikalna - Aaram se!!
Adi ne jaldi se aakar mera haath pakad liya - Tum theek toh ho!
Main - Haan... main theek hoon...
Jiju - Chalo... ab tum log aaram karo... hum kal milte hain... take care... goodnight...
Prachi - Goodnight Suhani... good night Adi... have fun!
Maine sharmate hue neeche dekha, par sharam ke saath saath ek guilt bhi aa rahi thi.
Drishti - Aur mera Goodnight?
Prachi - Tujhe bhi Goodnight!
Jiju - Apne boyfriend se jyada der baat bat karna... so jaana...
Drishti jhepte hue - Jijuuuu... maine aapko bataya na... woh mera boyfriend nahi hai... aap na Bhabhi ke saamne meri saari image kharab kar rahe ho...
Jiju haste hue - Kal batayunga main Suhani ko tumhare boyfriend wali kahani... bye...
Jiju ne muskurate hue mujhe aur baaki sab ko bye kiya. Jiju ko gaadi mein jaate dekh ajeeb sa lag raha tha. Main us feeling ko samjha bhi nahi sakti.
Hum log ghar ke andar ghuse aur kuch der Saas se baat karne ke baad unhone mujhe upar jaa kar sone ke liye kaha.
Main - Main ek baar jaa kar change kar leti hoon...
Aditya - Haan haan... tum change kar lo... main aata hoon 10-15 minutes mein...
Drishti mujhe lekar upar ke floor par aa gayi.
Drishti - Bhabhi.... yeh next wala room mera hi hai... kuch chahiye toh mujhe bata dena...
Main - Thanks...
Drishti mujhe aankh maarte hue boli - Aur... koshish karna ki aaj raat so paayo... ya nahi bhi so... jisme aapko jyada fun lage... fun toh waise jagne mein hi hoga...
Maine use ek feeki si muskaan di aur apne kamre mein aa gayi. Almost waisa hi jaisa main chhod kar gayi thi. Bas bed par ek tshirt padi hui thi, shayad Aditya ki thi. Maine use utha kar chair par rakh diya. Bed bilkul saaf suthra, us par kal ki tarah koi fool nahi they, aur na hi woh laal nishaan jo subah tha.
Maine abhi bhi ek bhaari saree pehni hui thi. Aditya ke kamre mein aane se pehle main change kar lena chahti thi.
Maine jaldi se apna suitcase khola aur usme apni night dress dhoondne lagi. Jo dress haath mein aa rahi sabhi kafi revealing aur sexy thi. Jisme mere kandhe poori tarah nange hote, aur mere boobs bhi kafi hadd tak dikhayi de jaate, ekdam silky satin smooth wali nighties.
Main yeh pehen kar nahi sona chahti thi. Yeh pehenna toh Aditya ko signal dene jaisa hota ki woh mere saath... ufff... nahi nahi... main aaj raat us sab ke baare mein sochna bhi nahi chahti thi.
Main soch rahi thi ki mujhe kuch sahi sa pehenne ko milega bhi ya nahi ya fir saree mein sona padega. Tabhi mere haath ek pink color ka pyjama set aa gaya. Yeh bilkul theek tha raat ko sone ke liye. Main jaldi se use lekar bathroom mein gayi aur apne saree utaar kar pyjama set pehen liya.
Main saree ko fold karke bathroom se bahar nikli hi thi ki dekha ki Aditya already kamre mein aa chuke they aur apne kapde badal rahe they. Unka kurta utra hua tha.
Maine turant doosri tarah muh karte hue "Sorry" kaha.
Aditya - It's Ok! I know... mere liye bhi kafi odd sa hi hai kisi ke saamne kapde change karna!
Main - Main bathroom mein wait kar sakti hoon...
Aditya - Nahi nahi... uski koi jaroorat nahi hai... bas done hoon... tshirt hi pehenni hai
Aditya ne jaldi se ek tshirt pehni aur meri taraf gaur se dekha. Unke chehre par ek badi si muskurahat thi par saath hi ek curious sa look bhi. Jaise woh soch rahe ho ki maine yeh PJ's kyun pehne they.
Aditya - Bohot pretty lag rahi ho!
Maine dheere se jawab diya - Thanks!
Aditya ki aankhen mujhe hi ghoor rahin thi, upar se neeche tak. Jaise woh kab se is pal ka intezaar kar raha ho jab hum akele ho.
Aditya - Kafi… kafi hectic ho gaya sab… hai na?
Main - Hmmm….
Aditya - Tumhe room kaisa laga?
Aditya is room ke baare mein pooch raha tha! Yeh room, jahan meri senses ekdam se pagal si ho rahi thi.
Main - Theek hai… acha hai….
Main apni Mummy ki baat yaad karne ki koshish kar rahi thi, bas muskurate rehna tha.
Aditya - Aayo… baith jayo.
Maine bed par pade unke kapdo ki taraf ishaara kiya.
Aditya ne jhepte hue unhe uthaya - Oh Sorry! Ab tak itna messy ho kar rehne ki aadat thi… ab tum aa gayi ho toh dheere dheere sab sort out ho jayega.
Main dheere se chalte hue Aditya ke side se guzar kar bed ki doosri taraf pahuchi. Wahin jahan main aaj subah uthi thi. Doosri taraf toh… toh… Jiju soye hue they. Bed par baithte hi sab fir se flash ho raha tha. Mere haath kaapne lage.
Main - Aditya….
Aditya - Adi… tum mujhe Adi bula sakti ho.. actually Adi hi better hai!
Main - Adi… main kafi tired feel kar rahi hoon. So jaye kya?
Aditya - Haan… no problem… so jaate hai… actually main bhi kafi tired hoon.
Main - Haan… aur fir… woh honeymoon bhi jaana hai na… parso?
Shit… pata nahi main yeh kyun bol gayi. Par mere yeh bolte hi Aditya ki ankhon mein chamak aa gayi.
Aditya bed par doosri side aa kar let gaya - Haan, hum log Mauritius ghoomne jayenge, tum pehle kabhi gayi ho kya wahan?
Maine naa mein sar hilaya.
Aditya - We will there for 5 days… It will be amazing. Beach hoga… fun hoga…we will get to know each other…
Maine dheere se sar hilaya.
Aditya meri taraf sarka aur mera haath pakad liya. Mera dil thoda tez dhadakne laga - Suhani… bas ab aaj se hamare married life ka start hai! I love you so much! Main bas tumhare aane ka kab se intezaar kar raha tha.
Hum dono ek doosre ki aankhon mein dekh rahe they.
Aditya - Tum itni pretty ho… I am so lucky to have you!
Main gehri saasein lete hue uski taraf dekhti rahi.
Aditya - Kya hua? Aise kya dekh rahi ho… kuch kaho na…
Mujhe ache se pata tha ki woh mujhse kya response chahta tha par chah kar bhi woh shabd bolna mushkil ho raha tha.
Main - Adi…. Thank you…
Uske chehre par ek halki si disappointment aayi.
Maine turant kaha - Sorry… woh actually mera dimaag hi nahi chal raha hai… subah shayad thoda better feel karu?
Aditya - Haan… nahi its ok. Main light off kar deta hoon.
Aditya ne kamre ki lights off kar di aur maine apne upar bed par pada kambal kheench kiya. Kamre mein bas ham dono ki saans lene ki aawaz aa rahi thi. Hum dono ke pair ek hi kambal mein, ek doosre se kafi door. Aaj raat phir ek stranger ke saath bed share karna kafi ajeeb sa lag raha tha… kal se bhi jyada.
Aankhen band ki toh ek baar fir kal raat ki images dikhne lagi. Maine turant unhe apne dimaag se nikaala aur bas sone ki koshish kari. Aditya bhi shayad yehi koshish kar raha tha. Hum dono hi itne thake hue they ki bohot jaldi hi hame neend aa gayi.
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I will update Chapter 10 text slowly... as it does not allow to save draft, I wanted to post something for now, and then update, so my work is not lost.
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Woh toh Aditya ne confirm kar hi diya tha na - 4 people - Suhani, Aditya, Prachi and Samar
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I am going to write now... but unsure if it will be complete to post. I can post something incomplete too. Next chapter is the airplane journey.
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Aaj toh aur nahi aayega... I am exhuasted... bohot likh liya... mind is closed now. Maybe wont be able to write for the next 2-3 days, and next week is festival week, so we will see...
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Chapter 14
Flight kafi lambi thi, 8 ghante ki, main aaj se pehle itni lambi flight mein kabhi nahi baithi thi. Snacks aur Khane ke beech mein maine koshish kari ki main so jayu ya bahar dekh lu. Aditya aur mere beech jyada baat nahi ho rahi thi, par baad main Prachi Didi mujhse side se baat kar rahi thi.
Khair... jaise taise flight khatam hui, aur main abhi se kafi thaka hua mehsoos kar rahi thi. India ke hisaab se shaam ke 5 baj chuke they, par wahan shayad time thoda sa early tha.
Luggage collect karne ke baad hum chaaro saath mein khade they.
Jiju - Suhani... tum kafi tired lag rahi ho... all good?
Main - Haan Jiju... sab theek...
Jab bhi woh mujhse baat karte ya main unse baat karti, ajeeb sa lagta.
Prachi - Abhi bas thodi der mein hotel pahuch kar bas aaram kar lena.
Adi apni smile chhupate hue bola - Haan... aaj toh shayad kuch ho nahi payega... aaram hi karenge.
Main uska matlab samajh gayi... aaj raat... woh aur main...
Jiju - Mujhe toh kafi bhook lagi hai... plane ka khana itna bekar tha... hotel pahuch kar... thoda change karke pehle dinner kar le?
Main turant bol padi - Haan...
Aur Adi saath mein - Nahi... mera matlab hai ki Suhani kafi thak gayi hai na... toh room mein hi order kar lenge...
Prachi - Haan... tum log room mein hi order kar lena... aur jab time mile tab khaa lena...
Main - Room mein? Neeche restaurant hoga na... wahin kha lenge na...
Adi ko shayad mera yeh bolna acha nahi laga tha aur uska chehra utar gaya tha.
Prachi shayad situation ko samajh gayi - Jaise tum log theek samjho... room mein jakar decide kar lena...
Jiju - Yahan pahuch kar aise sochna jaise hum log yahan ho hi nahi. Tum log apna enjoy karna. Maine isliye apna room bhi bilkul alag floor par book karaya hai.
Adi - Nahi nahi Jiju... aisa kuch nahi...
Jiju - Aree, isme formality ki koi baat nahi hai. Waise bhi main toh kuch business ke kaam mein busy rehne wala hoon... mujhe kal ek flight lekar yahan se jaana hai... par Prachi hogi yahan...
Main ekdam se bol padi - Oh acha... toh fir hum Didi ko akela toh nahi chhodenge...
Adi - Haan... obviously...
Adi ne yeh kaha toh tha par uski aawaz thodi low lag rahi thi. Hum logo ne ek taxi kari aur hotel pahuche. Wahan hum dono couples apne apne room ki keys lekar alag alag floor par chale gaye. Hum log lift se pehle utre aur apne kamre ki taraf jaane lage. Yeh hotel shayad beach ke kafi paas tha, ya yahan swimming pool tha, kyunki mujhe apne hi floor par ek-do ladkiyan sirf Bikini mein bedhadak ghoomti dikhayi di. Maine gaur kiya ki Adi ki nazar bhi ek pal ke liye unki taraf gayi thi. I mean... yeh completely normal tha, kaun apne aap ko 2 piece bikini mein ek gori ladki ko dekhne se rok paata.
Ham apne kamre ke bahar pahuche aur Adi ne card scan karke kamra khola. Adi andar ghusa aur main uske peeche peeche. Maine ek do kadam kamre mein aage liye aur mere peeche darwaza click hone ki aawaz aayi.
Main palat bhi nahi paayi thi ki Adi ne mujhe achanak se peeche se zor se jakad liya, apni baahein mere kandhe par lapet-te hue.
Adi - Ohhh... Suhaaani...
Unka muh meri gardan par aa gaya aur wahan kiss karne laga. Mere muh se bas surprise ki ek chhoti si ahhh nikli, par woh shayad unhone suni nahi. Woh meri gardan par kiss karte rahe aur aage badate hue kamre mein andar le gaye. Wahan hum dono ekdam se bistar par neeche gire aur main palti. Adi ne mere upar aate hue mujhe hug kar liya aur unke honth jaakar mere honthon se mil gaye, meri saanson ko rokte hue.
Unke haath ekdam se peeche se mere sweater aur top ke andar ghus kar meri skin ko mehsoos karne lage they. Meri kamar, meri peeth, mere bra ke hook tak pahuch gaye, is beech mujhe kas ke pakde hue kiss karte hue. Meri skin par unke touch ne poore shareer mein ek halchal si macha di, aur mere haath bhi pagal hote hue unke baalon mein ghoomne lage. Aur hum dono ke honth ek doosre se alag nahi ho rahe they.
Woh mera top utaarne ki koshish kar rahe they, par woh kahin atak raha tha. Unka ek haath bahar nikla aur neeche meri ass par aa ruka, jeans ke upar se use dabata hua. Unka muh bhi mere muh se alag hota hua mere top ke upar se mere boobs ko choosne lage. Adi ke andar ek hadbadi thi, ek betaabi, jaise woh kabse apne aap ko yeh karne se roke hua ho.
Achanak se unke daant top ke upar se mere boobs ki sensitive skin se takraye, aur main apni saans rokte hue bed par thoda sa uth gayi, meri peeth bilkul tirchi ho gayi - Uhhhnnn... Adi....
Adi bechain hota hua mere upar aa chuka tha, apne neeche has hissa mere shareer se ragadte hue.
Adi - Suhaaniii.... mmmm.... tum itni hot ho... ufff....
Main - Ahhhnnn... Adiii... ruko na...
Adi - Come on baby... ab rukne ke liye mat kaho... Mmmmm...
Adi ne fir se mere honthon ko chooma, uske haath jaise meri tshirt faadne ko betaab ho rahe they.
Tabhi kamre ke phone par ring bajne lagi... tring tring... tring tring... Adi ne kuch pal mujh par focus banane ki koshish kari, par ghanti baje jaa rahi thi. Woh frustrated hota hua mujhse alag hua aur phone ko uthaya.
Doosri taraf se kisi ladki ki aawaz mujhe halki halki sunai de rahi thi. Main gehri saansein lete hue abhi bhi palag par seedhi leti hui chhat ki taraf dekh rahi thi. Andar ki aag... ek bhook... jo ekdam se jag gayi thi, dheere dheere abhi bhi sulag rahi thi, par saath hi jaane kyun ek relief bhi tha ki sab beech mein hi ruk gaya, pata nahi kyun.
Adi - Nahi... nahi... it's ok. Haan... hum aate hai...
Adi ne zor se phone patak kar neeche rakha aur frustration mein apna chehra zor se masla.
Maine dheere se pucha - Kiska phone tha?
Adi - Didi ka... dinner ka plan pooch rahi thi...
Main uth kar palang par baith gayi - Fir... aapne kya kaha?
Adi - Hmmm... hum aate hain thodi der mein... par pehle... jo beech mein reh gaya tha... use toh poora...
Adi fir se meri taraf lapka aur meri side mein baithte hue mera chehra pakad kar mere gaal ko apne daanton se halka sa kaanta.
Adi - Ufff... kitni soft ho tum baby...
Mujhe uska mujhe baby bulana acha nahi lag raha tha - Adi... ruko na... abhi neeche chalte hain... baad mein... aaj raat ko...
Adi - Kya yaar... apni hi biwi ko pyaar nahi kar paa raha hoon main!
Main uski frustration par halke se hasi - Adi... aap subah nayahe bhi nahi they... kafi smell aa rahi hai... please aap ek baar naha lo... aur fir neeche se wapas aa kar... uske baad toh...
Adi - Uske baad toh poori tarah tumhe nahi chhodunga...
Adi ne apne haath meri chest par rakhte hue mere boobs ko halke se dabane shuru kar diya. Sab kuch bina mujhse pooche, bina kuch kahe.
Main - Uhhhhnnn... Adi... ufff... nahi... ummm... aap nahane jayo please...
Adi - You are such a mood spoiler! Acha theek hai... aisa karo... tum neeche chali jayo aur jaldi se Didi aur Jiju ke saath jaldi se order place kar do... main bas naha kar aata hoon... fir wapas aakar hame koi disturb nahi karega.
Adi mujhe ek aakhri baar honthon par kiss karte hue khada hua aur apne kapde wahin room mein mere saamne utaarne laga. Meri saans abhi bhi thodi bhaari thi aur main use kapde utaarte dekh rahi thi. Shirt... jeans... fir andar ki banyan... aur fir aakhir mein uska underwear bhi. Sab kuch kuch palon mein utar gaya tha.
Andar uska lund aadha khada hua tha, thoda sa teda... us par nazar padte hi maine aankhen neeche kar li. Aur Adi apne lund ko halka sa stroke karte hue mere theek saamne aakar khada ho gaya.
Adi ne halke se mere baal stroke kare - Suhani...
Maine apni nazrein fer li - Hmmm....
Adi - Kya hua... dekho na ise... kaise tadap raha hai tumhare liye...
Adi ki is frankness se mujhe ajeeb sa lag raha tha par woh ab mera pati tha aur uske liye shayad yeh koi badi baat nahi thi.
Main - Adi... jayo na... jaldi se naha kar aayo... main neeche jaati hoon...
Main khadi hi ho rahi thi ki Adi ne meri kalai pakad li - Dekho na ise ek baar... hold karo na... you will like it... I will like it...
Mere gaal sharam se laal ho rahe they - Adi... please... abhi nahi...
Adi ne meri ass par halke sa haath maara - Such a tease... ek baar muh mein le logi toh kya problem hogi...
Maine ekdam se chaunkte hue kaha - Muh mein! Nahi... yuck...
Adi - Don't tell me tumne kabhi blowjob nahi kiya?
Maine kisi tarah Adi se nazrein milayi aur sharmate hue apna sar naa mein hilaya.
Adi - Oh god Suhani! You don't know what you are missing...
Maine apni kalai Adi ke haath se chhudai - Main neeche jaa rahi hoon... aap jaldi se aa jaana...
Main jaldi se kamre ke darwaze ki taraf pahuchi aur bina apne aap ko mirror mein dekhe ya peeche palte bas kamre se bahar nikal gayi. Mera dil bas zor se dhadak raha tha.
Bahar maine darwaza band karte hue door se tek lagayi hi thi ki mere saamne se ek kaale ladko ka group nikla.
Un mein se ek meri taraf dekhte hue bola - Hey Babe! What's up, all good?
Uski nazrein mere seene ki taraf thi aur mujhe realize hua ki main itni jaldi kamre se bahar aa gayi ki apne kapde bhi sahi karna bhool gayi thi. Maine jaldi se apne top ko adjust kiya.
Main - Yeah... all good...
Kaala aadmi - Cool... see you later pretty girl...
Woh aadmi mujhe ghoorta hua aage nikal gaya aur main ghabrate aur sharmate hue wahin darwaze ke bahar khadi reh gayi thi.
(This post was last modified: 06-11-2026, 12:36 AM by
Celebrorn. Edited 1 time in total.)