[heygiwriter]

Marvellous...

Thanks

[heygiwriter]

மல்லிக்கு கர்ப்பம் உறுதி ஆயிடுச்சு… அதுவும் முக்கியமா, அந்த குழந்தை ராஜீவோடதுதான்! ❤️ இதுதான் இப்போ கதையிலேயே பெரிய twist.

மல்லி ராஜீவோட உணர்வுகளை ஒரு நிமிஷம் சந்தோஷத்தின் உச்சிக்குக் கொண்டு போறா… அடுத்த நிமிஷமே அவனை வேதனையில தள்ளிடுறா. ரங்கராட்டினத்துல ஏத்தி சுத்துற மாதிரி இருக்கு அவனோட நிலைமை.  பாவம் ராஜீவ்… தன்னாலதான் மல்லி கர்ப்பமாகி இருக்கான்னு தெரிஞ்சும், அந்த சந்தோஷத்தை கூட முழுசா அனுபவிக்க முடியாம தவிக்கிறான்.

அதுவும் ராஜீவோட குழந்தை ரொம்ப strong போல!  கௌதம் எவ்வளவு முயற்சி பண்ணினாலும், “எங்க அப்பன் மாதிரி… என்னை எதுவும் பண்ண முடியாது”ன்னு strong-ஆ நிக்குது போல.

கௌதம் என்ன ஆனான்னு தெரியல… கண்டிப்பா hurt ஆயிருப்பான். ராஜீவ் வர்ற வரைக்கும் மல்லியோட இருக்கப் பார்ப்பான்னு நினைச்சேன்,  நைட் வரைக்கும் இல்லாம ஈவ்னிங்கே வெளிய போயிருக்கான்னா, கட்டாயம் மல்லி அவன்கிட்ட ஏதாவது பேசியிருப்பா போல 

எப்படியோ… மல்லி கர்ப்பம் தான் இப்போ கதையோட பெரிய turning point.  இனிமேல் ராஜீவ் என்ன ஆட்டம் ஆடப் போறானோ அதுதான் கதையை அடுத்த கட்டத்துக்கு கொண்டு போகப் போகுது!

இதெல்லாம் பரவாயில்லை… ஆனா பெரிய surprise என்னன்னா, Heygi bro “Next week தான் update”ன்னு சொல்லிட்டாரே!  அதைத்தான் எங்களால தாங்கவே முடியல bro .


கொஞ்சம் கருணை வச்சு சீக்கிரமா பதிவு போடுங்க bro… நீங்க update போடுறதுக்குள்ள இங்க பல பேருக்கு மல்லி–கௌதம் விஷயம் நினைச்சு நினைச்சே BP ஏறிடும்… including me! .

Please bro, ASAP update பண்ணிடுங்க… அடுத்த வாரம் வரைக்கும் எங்களால wait பண்ண முடியாது! 

THALAIVAA avalo  scene illa. 10 oda 11 avadhu story ah treat pannunga. podhum 

Rajeev will play mind game. epadi avanga nadichu emathunangalo apadiye rajeevum seivan. The love rajeev shower will pain malli. self realisation hit agura varaikum drama pogum. mathapadi ini periya twist illa all about actions, realisation, recieving what they sow. end of the story. They will correct every wrong they do. But will relationship remain same dhaan question. Adhu mattum ennalaye judge pana mudila. as i write the actions would change. lets see. 

For now. peace veli ulaga velaigala paapom :) Thanks to all readers. Thanks to all critics, Thanks to all story lovers. 

[heygiwriter]

நண்பா






வாழ்த்துக்கள் .

Nandri nandri :")

[heygiwriter]

நண்பா  

உங்களாலேயே ஜட்ஜ் பண்ண முடிலனா கெளதம் சொல்ற மாதிரி ஓபன் relation போய்டலாமே . உண்மை எல்லாம் தெரிய வரப்ப,  ஒன்னு பிரியனும் இல்ல எல்லாத்தையும் ஏத்துக்கிட்டு வாழனும். மறந்து வாழறது சிரமம் . ஏத்துக்கிட்டா மறுபடி ஒரு வாய்ப்பை தேடி மனுஷனோட புத்தி தடுமாறும்

எனக்கு தெரியல நண்பா .. நிச்சயம் நீங்க ஏதாச்சும் வித்யாசமா யோசிப்பிங்க

There was a scope at one point. But i'm not sure if that will land exactly there in future episodes. i mean both arc happens within a limited scopes.  

[heygiwriter]

Everything falls in place however During initial times of pregnancy there will be nausia often. Malli did not get it in last 3 weeks. Doctor will suggest avoid sex upto 3 months. But in the last 3 weeks she had extreme sex with Gowtham. How does she know about pregnancy suddenly. If she had vomited pati would have known. How did she gets the pregnancy kit without going out.

Nalla velai. 

Eppadi malli phone avalo neram charge mudiyaama irundhuchu rajeev flight yerurappanu yaarum kekala :D 

romba logic paaka venam. Its a fictional story. I didnt give muich details. I just had one thing in mind, what if Malli was putting everything to honor for a thing which had already happened. Thats why i gave her giddiness nausea earlier in between several places. People would have read it as outcome of scenes happening there but its due to preganancy with storm of emotions and happenings she could not focus on that. Also additionally i mentioned about irregular periods at several places. which reduces her doubt. And about kit, it doesnt matter, she always had one, a women who always wish for that for years will naturally have a stock of it. i didnt give it a second thought to explain. 

Again all these are fiction. over the top unrealistic, just see if this fit into story world where screenplay made you forget errors.

[heygiwriter]

Today any update nanba

no

[heygiwriter]

Meantime lets have a small fun feedback. 

How do you want the story to get a closure ? or what do you wish :)

[Please avoid extreme thing, yes they will pay for their act, but my stories i prefer to end with a more positieve... even if that is sexual..or quite contradicting to star. Yup i wont split them:D ... but we have 4 people here., 3 main figures.   the characters are human first, lets just wish  them happiness and peace at the end for them :) ]

[heygiwriter]

calm down guys romba extreme thoughts vendam :) Emotionally or sexually extreme irukalam. but things will be smoother than you think. avalo harsh ah yosichu eluthamaaten bro. Chill panna vara edathula edhuku kalavaram :D

TV serial la vara madhiri climax epdiosde la Subam nu potu 4 peru chill panra maadhiri dhan closing scene in my mindu

[heygiwriter]

  INdru Update irukaaaaaaaaaaa nanbhaaaaa

illa thalaivaa.

[heygiwriter]

Naalu pera. Moonu perthane. Appo vidyavum.game la varala

She is already there.

[heygiwriter]

நண்பா

ஒரு ரெகுவஸ்ட் .... நீங்க சொல்றது பாத்தா foursome இருக்குமா சும்மா சொன்னேன் . விஷயம் என்னனா எமோஷனல் angle சீக்ரம் கிளோஸ் பன்னிட்டு சும்மா fun&Sex னு எடுத்துட்டு போங்க . ரெண்டு couple ஏதாச்சும் fun பண்ணட்டும் seriousness இல்லாம. இங்க இவளோ பேர் சண்டை போன்றது dissapoint aguradhu எல்லாமே அந்த எமோஷனல் angleநாலதான் அங்க தான் மாரல் ஸ்டாண்டிங் எதிர்பாக்குறாங்க . அது இல்லாம funa கொண்டு போங்க

Idea nalla iruke :D but they will be friends and become a family after all the fights figuring out who is love, who is lust, relationship, fight, revenge, sacrifice, split, renuion. etc.... kadasilya Engal veetil ella naaalum ..... laalalaa

[heygiwriter]

Goutham will accept it right? as he thinks pregnancy as his own. 

She hasn't cheated, she was forced into it while she is upset as Rajeev addressed her as alut.

Anyway, heygiwriter is thinking otherwise... Lets stop over discussion...

i always found it interesting when you write some story, few people never leave out their thoughts that comes along with the character and judgement around it. Even when you throw 1000 reasons, it will still follow them. 

When i write too many reasons just to justify she was froced into a situation that she has to do this way. some still believes otherwise. or simply in other terms the reaons seems unacceptable for them. then we cannot explain it. we shall just move away as we have no proper reason, and it was precieved that way

[heygiwriter]

ஹலோ நண்பா எனக்கு ஒரு சந்தேகம் இருக்கு...

ஆரம்பத்துல மல்லியோட பிரா எப்படி கவுதம் பெட்டுக்கு அடியில போச்சு. இது பற்றி கௌதமும் மல்லியும் பேசும்போது ராஜீவ் கிட்ட நான் பொறுமையா எடுத்து சொல்றேன் அப்படின்னு மல்லி சொல்லுவா.  ஆனா இப்ப வரைக்கும் அதை பத்தி எதுவும் சொல்லவே இல்லை.

Irukke boss.  :)

[heygiwriter]

OXY im making a detailed comment on your post

[heygiwriter]

Rajeev may love Malli, but he is still human. He has personally witnessed something deeply traumatic face fucking of Malli and it would not be realistic or fair to his character—to expect him to immediately accept Malli as though nothing happened.


He knows Malli was manipulated and tricked into the first incident. But his pain comes from more than that one event. He had clearly asked her to stop sleeping with Goutham and to respect the boundary he set. Yet, from Rajeev’s perspective, that boundary was crossed repeatedly: when Goutham had sexwith her after Rajeev left the office early to hire Vidya, at the waterfall, and again while Rajeev and Vidya were away trying to uncover the truth.

She is okay to spread the legs when she and goutham are alone. She will do same unless and untill she beleives that she got pregnancy from him but she still loves Rajeev though, slaps herself twice for spreading legs with Goutham.

So the issue is not simply whether Rajeev loves Malli. It is whether he can trust her again after seeing what he saw and after feeling that his limits were ignored. What character of person would instantly accept all of this in the name of love, without anger, confusion, humiliation, fear, or heartbreak?
If Goutham gets Malli alone again, Rajeev’s fear will naturally be: what will stop the same pattern from repeating? That concern does not make Rajeev cruel or unloving. It makes him emotionally realistic. His characterization should reflect the fact that he is carrying memories and images he cannot simply erase because Malli may have had feelings for him.

OXY let me explain. 

This is same Rajeev whose dick raised at thought of someone with Malli in very initial episodes. But as soon as he know the price of such fantasy he fought againts the idea and even started doubting.. but somewhere fate landed him in exact place. 

Malli nowhere intentended to make Rajeev to watch it. She was first tricked using situations around them, but rememebr she was bitten by the good man savior image of gowtham and she offered kisses, soon every advantages finally made her losse in the game. She was put into situation just to hide on fault, and it continued. 

Rajeev accepeted her state (the fake one) but he asked for boundary, Malli was conscious but we have gowtham who made it failed several times. Rajeev didnt delay it he immediately called it out. So Malli indeed stopped it. She honored Rajeev words. But Gowtham yet again sabotaged it this time his trick was he told its last of it, like farewell. So malli honored it like she doesnt want to hurt anyone she agreed for final farewell one. 

That's why she confidentally said lets go to our home, gowtham wont come in their life. She had given a clsure but unexpectedly she was pregnant. 

From Rajeev pov - He was against it, He agreed for her, He set boundary, it was not honored, so he decided to leave her or start his own way, but when he found malli is going to be parent, he decided to stick with her, but he was not ready to leave her go easy when he found she still had sex (farewell one) in his absence, as he doesnt know truth, he is here to punish. That is why he decided to hide the truth of him as real father.

From Malli POV - She fears standing as some cheating or a women in affair, so she decided to hide it by  enabling gowtham's further exploitation, once she started realizing this is taking different route she decided to stop it, she didnt bother to even hurt gowtham or his grandmother, but gowtham grandmothers health made her to agree for trip, where unexpectedly she was confronted by gowtham who emotionally speak about hw he it was unfair for him and need better closure, to not make him hurt, she decided to finish it there. Now she finished it and when she though all has ended well, she got pregnant and a new fear installed in her will ever Rajeev found about weeks or days of formation of baby. 

Rajeev exactly gonna punish her by keeping her in constant fear. thats why he hide the report. 

Now coming to main question : Will he accept her.  Yes he will, but it would take long route, a person who truly in love wont bare to see their loved ones suffering especially in their own hand. and who said malli is enjoying she suffers on her part. and hiding info is jst one percent of what he will do. He dont turn evil just to punish it and for Gowtham he will make sure to make gowtham feel how he felt. Againt nothing going to be cruel or villanism. Just a remember of what you sow will what you reap. However Vidhya will complicate it as she is the tool here. End of story. Malli and Rajeev will understand each other better than any and they will fix every wrong to right again.. 

[heygiwriter]

That is why i am asking let Rajeev be as Goutham character and goutham end up taking care of Malli and child.. Rajeev end up with Malli occasionally.. 

Bend the character which is irresponsible to as responsible.. Why Rajeev should accept humiliation, betrayal and cheating pretext of love. Lets the tables turn arround. If readers are okay to accept reunion between rajeev and malli why can't they accept separation on good note?

Make pleasure permanent for everyone.. Why Malli has to denouncing pleasure  and friendship of goutham. I was requesting the open relationship between three and rajeev as good friend.. Make world believe what it believes..

Tables will turn around. 

Venumnu sonnavan, Venamnu solluvan. 
Venamunu sonnavan vambadiya thinipan 

:) Just mark this comment :D :):

[heygiwriter]

The friendship will not break even after any cheating. Luckily it was Rajeev baby, if it is not the friendship will continue only because malli wants gowtham friendship more than Rajeev. Gowtham is special friend of malli. He has shown her pleasure that she never faced in her 5 years marriage. Multiple orgasms. Also very caring protective rich etec etc. if Rajeev ask to choose him or gowtham malli can't say no to Gowtham

No you are mistaken at this point Malli completely denounced her friendship with gowtham. When she phoned Rajeev, she announced gowtham episode is over in their life. She was ready to move out. 

She did what had to be done for everyone good. Gowtham was not caring or protective, he is but only in the initial phase of story when he saw both malli and rajeev as friends. He can be claimed as friend even when he lusted for malli (Morally/technically no friend should lust a friends wife....)

the moment when he wanted to take control or punish rajeev impose his fantaises he just made his humane got kill ed by himself. When he lost control he lost himself. So dont equate the old gowtham with new one. New one cannot be called as friend. He has no real feelings. all he has is lust and anger.

[heygiwriter]

Bro, but "engal veetil ella naalum" scenario won't workout in my opinion with all 4 chilling together.

Your audience for this story can be classified as:

1. Cuck Gooners: People who want to see Rajeev as a Cuck and Gowtham as a dom and lifelong Malli getting pounded and Rajeev getting humiliated.
2. Pure Sex-scene Gooners: People who think Gowtham was right and as a bull Gowtham should have Malli as he is the one who will give them a lot of sex scenes to fap to this story. To them sex scenes matter more than emotions.
3. Pure Love Gooners: People who want Rajeev and Malli's love to win and no matter what, they want this couple to be happy and peaceful with their baby.
4. Story Fans: People who want a logical end to this wonderful story. The emotional fallout of whatever has happened wouldn't logically justify a "Everyone Chilling Together" ending. Everyone can be happy in their bubble with their own happy ending, but being happy together means that the entire journey has no emotional payoff, because the manipulation, betrayal and malice no matter for what reason, cannot be completely nullified for Rajeev and Gowtham to accept each other, nor an arrangement of woman-sharing coming into play = This is the exact spot where the story will cease to exist as a good story and will end on a Goon note.


Decision is yours, as much as the story is yours! I am pretty aware you know your audience and your own preference to write how you deem fit.

adhuku thanga writer nu oruthan irukaan :D ivanga ellarayum satisfy panni arusuvai koduthaa venamnu solvingalaa ? situation nu onna yen writer create panranga. :)

[heygiwriter]

Come on man you taken good point here..

This is what I m saying when writter changed malli character to DUMP land say Gowtham using her so she bending.

Initially Author wants to write complete cheat story later he changed the story line.. she made malli as hypnotized kiddo.. ( Inbtwn the story)

You can clearly see the difference 

MALI IS THE ENABLER / ENCOURAGER FOR GOWTHAM.. ( No girl ll give bra for friend even he is saviour or god like person)

later some misup..

SHE BECAME HYPNOTIZED GIRL FOR GOWTHAM 

HOPE Atleast WRITTER will end the story to uncover this all to RAJEEV & PUNISH MALI THROUGH PUNISHING GOWTHAM WITH THE HAND OF MALI..

How do you know i wanted to write complete cheat story did i mentioned anywhere? no one know expect an writer on what they had in mind.  Im wondering how you declare like you know exactly what i thought. except one story none of the storys had influced me in middle to change.

[heygiwriter]

Finally vidhya will marry Gowtham. Rajeev and malli unite. Already pati has good wrapport with vidya like malli.
Gowtham fucked malli
Rajeev fucked vidya
LHS=RHS
Equation tallied. Revenge complete.
En pondatiya nee othe un pondatiya nan othen. Inimel nama friends.

manikanaka ukkanthu kadhai edluthuna orey post la mothama odachu vittan :D