[sarit11]

breville1

Thanks for that extremely long and exciting conclusion. So vividly written that the reader can really feel a that they were a part of it. Anand's slow and delicious arousal of Sanjana shows his mastery of the art.

Keeping her waiting on the edge, making her call Vivek, making him ask for his wife to be fucked, making them both want Anand to fuck her, was incredibly erotic and full of suspense, breaking down the last walls of the traditional relationship.

Vivek's arousal imagining Sanjana fucking with another man is not a particularly unique characteristic defining a cuckold. It is very normal, a common fantasy, to be aroused watching a naked woman, watching a naked woman having sex (porn watching) or pleasuring herself. However, the intrigue and interest in this story is how Vivek and Sanjana end up actually enjoying that fantasy. Personally, I had hoped that somehow this would be avoided, as can be understood from my various comments but I accept that that would have made for a less enthralling story.

Also, I feel that making Vivek lick and suck out Anand's cum from Sanajana's pussy could have been left out, even though I know many like that as part of humiliating the husband. Vivek having been in the room with them, having enjoyed watching them could have been used to engage in threesome play of various kinds without bringing in humiliation. Anyway, by Anand ultimately making both husband and wife agree and enjoy having him fuck Sanjana was already the ultimate humiliation of a along held and loving husband/wife relationship.

Anand's magnanimity was simply awesome in the end. By Anand not actually keeping Sanjana as his mistress, by him deciding to go to Britain and giving Sanjana and Vivek back their job and financial security, was an incredible gift for allowing him to take his pleasure. The ending went a long way to satisfying the cuckold hungry hordes and die hard traditionalists alike. The bull became a bulbul??!! Ha!

As for who came back for the gold contact card, it could be either one of them but my pick is Sanjana, though I'm sure many would say Vivek. After all he was the one that wanted the fantasy. But he did manage to keep things in check for a very long time which is typically the case for most husbands. Though he did get his satisfaction in the end too, it was primarily driven by their financial situation. Certainly his own fantasies crept in too.

Sanjana, on the other hand, was systematically brainwashed by Anand such that in the end she literally went berserk to have her satisfaction. She tasted something she would never get from her husband (however, thanks to the writer for letting him have a decent sized cock and being a decent fucker), something that she began craving for maniacally. So now that Anand has effectively done his "wham bam thank you mam", I think she will miss him a lot, a lot more than Vivek (who now has a sexually wild and totally satisfying wife).

Anyway, thanks for a really great story and certainly looking forward to other stories that you may write.

[sarit11]

fasterboy

Whole plot is built and start from financial crisis which could lead them maximum losing their over budget house. However while have no job vivek and sanjana were well qualified and at-least they could do low earning job below than their qualification, get a enough amount to carry them live with their children. But they choose to loose wife's chastity to save house. In last all knowing that crisis and vivek's jobless status was planned by anand they simply ignore that fact besides thanks to him Oh kind mr anand for leaving sanjana after fucking while you could have sanjana & kids lifetime. What to justify not getting vivek hero in public opining you put unnecessarily cuckold plot that from nowhere suddenly appear & stuck to grudge vivek. ]
And well well mr. anand. He has a special x-ray, gama, beta and all other galaxy's ray through which his eyes clearly scans to women from outside their garment that which-one is able and needy to take his gigantic organ. Also whom husband is not pleasurable to their wife so it's duty to anand to satisfy them.
At best A man above 60 year who is chain smoker and drink full scotch bottle ( 4 quarter in single sit) for year but not even got erectile dysfunction ( it is common to heavy drinker or smoker) and bulling his cock like bull does in chauraha than young men who doesn't smoke

breville1
Excellent!! Excellent!! Glad you put your thoughts down. So many of us get involved in the stories we read. We compare them to our own real life experiences and beliefs. An indicator of how well the writer is doing. Of course, no one gets prizes for writing but there is satisfaction in knowing that it has the readers interest, that it is popular one way or the other. We need writers and readers to keep in touch.

This story, is simply a story, touching on scenarios we can all imagine. The writer has created scenarios that reflect something taboo in our society. And we all know how interested we are in taboo matters!! Don't we all have some fantasy or the other involving someone else's husband or wife?

In this story, financial circumstances lead to accepting an indecent proposal. As you rightly point out (and I did too in previous comments) that there were other avenues for them to pursue without accepting Anand's conditions. However, the writer wanted a story with certain elements, losing his job, the financial circumstance, the wife being employed for her looks, the husband feeling aroused by the indecent proposal (elements of cuckoldism fantasy are very popular for some reason though not so common in reality - I think!) , the wife falling for Anand's relentless charm, etc. leading up to a superb sexual crescendo.

We know things like this are happening all the time, people using their positions of power. And this is what he wrote....it is for us to discuss our feelings now. For the record I do agree with your sentiments and I often feel emotional but the author wrote what he wanted.

[sarit11]

breville1

rombyzomby [img]file:///images/buttons/viewpost.gif[/img]
The end in my opinion is directed by the limited time writer had. He was fair enough to come back and gave a possible end to the story. The way it got stopped I thought it would be among many other in-completed stories.

Yes, we must commend the writer for coming back to finish the story....and it was an extremely long finish.

I read the end again and I must confess Anand does have some valid points for moving on. He is old and realizes that having a young married mistress with a child and husband would never be a successful venture. However, he is a bull, a hunter, has an eye for women and is in a powerful position. A heady mix for taking advantage and getting his way. So he enjoys stalking Sanjana and Vivek, enjoys Sanjana to the max and making them both want him to fuck Sanjana. Physical and cerebral pleasure!!

Having created the financial problem for Vivek and Sanjana, he had no problem in getting them out of that problem having achieved what he wanted. Both were competent in what they were doing and Sanjana had excelled in her position. No need to break the family. And having finally consummated his plan, he loses interest. There is no longer any thrill in just continuing to fuck Sanjana. A hunter needs to hunt a fleeing prey, not one that simply comes to him when he calls. Going off to Britain was just a convenient ending. Because a story needs an ending.

So I'm happy with the way the story ended.