Adultery The Rural Posting: Shipra's ordeal.Running

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(06-09-2024, 10:10 PM)maharsha25 Wrote:  For me this story has already gone haywire. The sex should have already happened by now before this chapter or the earlier one. Also too much conversations is such a turnoff. If the conversations revolved around shiprass Ass or boobs compared to namratas it would have been a great addition. I also agree with you in the part where Namrata lied to Shipra that she lost. instead I would have wanted Shipra to go ahead with the honry state she was in and succumb to her sexual desires instead of letting her know that she lost. she would have won and still would have made her own decision to fuck patode as well as Namrata. I have the same sentiment as you do but we have to appreciate the author for coming up with a narration every single week. it's pretty tiring to write a story every single week between your work schedules. Many aspects of this chapter were rightly not arousing at all to say the least. Also the writer has already pointed out that he will not be descriptive about sex which reduces the entire story to a softcore version. What I mean by hardcore is description of patodes penis in length, shipras boobs ass and body in detail and great fucking descriptions of fucking between the three of them. what's the harm in describing the sexual activity in detail ? I have seen many stories where the narration itself lacks description of fucking. I would say make Shipra nanga on a road at night and make her a fucking slut (not forcibly but out of her own choice) let her wake up and accept her true nature. cut the Ekta kapoor bullshit ! let's namrata fuck Shipra using a strap on and let her husband and patode watch ! Spank Shipra 100 times naked and make her humiliated. These are all ideas that can add more spice to teh story.

Firstly I never said there will be no descriptive sex scenes in the story. I have already written quite a lot of descriptive scenes in previous chapters and will write more in the upcoming chapters. But the type of hardcore sex scenes you are suggesting are not going to happen. 

Secondly, why should all the chapters be arousing? Yes it is an erotica but at the end of the day it is a full fledged story not a porno which starts with a sex and ends with sex. It's not that kind of story.

Thanks for your involvement in the story though, hand around you'll might like what's in store.
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(09-09-2024, 12:35 AM)xboard1986 Wrote:  This time plz post early

Next update on Sunday.
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(10-09-2024, 07:22 AM)Hornytamilan23 Wrote:  Hi suraj,

After some long thought, I got this idea. It is an suggestion as always I want you to hear.

I think people don't know how to ask. All these fiasco is because we desi people like slow seduction. Unlike the foreigners. We take an hour for foreplay. Navel Licking, smooching, Licking all over her body, playing with her hair. You know suraj, you are desi.

So this time make patode worship shipras body, let him raise the heat. Let him explore her sensuality. There won't be any complaints. Make him do cunnilingus. Shipra deserves some oral treatment. This time end with this.

Let her go to patode, after he gives her some support in her work. Let her give her body as a sense of gratitude. And patode knows how to take this to his advantage.

My dear, let things happen as they do, don't retreat.

Hmm... Let see what I can do Cool
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(06-09-2024, 11:50 PM)SubmissiveSwati Wrote:  so many opinions..
suggestions are ok, opinions on what it should be is completely misplaced.
If you do not like where it is headed, either write your own or dont read it.
as readers you may suggest some small adjustments , but if you are putting out an opinion that the theme, the core of the story is wrong or you dont agree with then there is no reason for you to hangout on this thread.

Thanks... Rightly said.
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(08-09-2024, 01:28 AM)neelchaand Wrote:  This is one of the best updates. After the outstanding build-up of the story, the erotica now enters the core theme, that is, Shipra's Ordeal in Rural circumstances. All of us have been craving simultaneous emotional and physical ordeals of Shipra in the hands of cunning rural males. Namrata's use as a Catalyst in Shipra's Ordeal is the best add-on in this erotica.

Most of the readers of this forum have been patiently waiting for Shipra's physical ordeals, hopefully in the next chapters, the author will be able to quench all of our thirsts regarding primal descriptions of multiple ordeals that Shipra and Namrata are destined to go through.

Big conversations are a bit of a turn-off in an erotica. The author can concentrate more on primal descriptions of the sexual uses of Shipra and Namrata to make this story the all-time best.

Many readers are giving long feedback with multiple situational suggestions.

The author must have understood by now that people can have different opinions. But giving long feedback to those opinions can break the rhythm and can affect his style of writing too... which would be the worst thing about this awesome erotica.

We all have to remember that ordeal/ ordeals are the core of this erotica which should be continued always.

Expecting some outstanding depictions of the multiple ordeals of Shipra and Namrata from the outstanding author in the upcoming updates to make this erotica the all-time best.

Thanks man
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The last chapter really caused a lot of heated arguments amongst the readers. I hope this chapter will satisfy all the readers following this story.
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And someone needed more conversion in the story so from here on, there will be more action less bullshit.
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Chapter 19: Terms of Submission

"Come on in Shipra," Namrata beckoned as she stepped aside, giving Shipra space to enter. "Someone is being waiting for you.... desperately, doubting if you would even show up" Namrata said softly with an undertone of something darker. 

Patode stood relaxed exuding smug satisfaction seeing Shipra at the door finally ready to submit to him. His gaze was ravenous, unashamed, drinking in every inch of her like a predator savoring the moment before devouring its prey.

"See, Patode? I told you Shipra would honor her word. Here she is," Namrata said, her tone dripping with confidence and a hint of playfulness, as if she had orchestrated this entire scenario from the start. Patode’s lips curled into a triumphant grin, his eyes gleaming with dark satisfaction as he stared at Shipra with a burning lust that he didn’t bother to conceal. She was his now, or so he believed, and every fiber of his being radiated with the thrill of that conquest.

With hesitant steps, Shipra crossed the threshold into Namrata’s room. Her movements were slow, almost reluctant, as if each step weighed heavily on her. She had freshened up, her face still damp as if she had tried to wash away the events of the past hour. The uncertainty in her movements, made it clear that no amount of water could cleanse the turmoil swirling within her. She had changed her top, concealing the nakedness she had felt so exposed in before. Her eyes though reflected something brewing inside her. It had a glint of defiance and a flicker of determination.

Patode's face radiated smug triumph as he looked at Namrata and Shipra, his eyes gleaming with dark satisfaction. He thanked his luck for delivering such exquisite, high-class beauties into his grasp, ready for him to ravish. The sense of power over these two women only inflated his already swollen ego, as he reveled in the thought of bending them to his will. "Well, well, Shipra ma'am," he drawled, his voice dripping with sleazy amusement. "It's good to see you're ready to honor your promise. But why did you even bother putting a top back on, knowing full well it's just going to come off again soon?" He chuckled darkly, his eyes raking over her body. "Those tits of yours... they looked so succulent without the top. Juicy, tender, so turned on. You might as well save us the trouble and loose that top and shorts."

Patode stepped closer to Shipra, his presence looming over her. With a swift, possessive motion, his hand cupped her right breast over her top, squeezing it softly but deliberately. “Hmmm… so much bigger than Namrata’s, yet firmer and juicier,” he murmured under his breath, his voice filled with crude satisfaction. His fingers kneaded her flesh through the fabric, as if testing her like an object meant for his pleasure.

While his left hand played with her breast, his right hand began to move downward with an unsettling confidence. With swift motion of his fingers he instantly unzipped Shipra’s shorts and slipped his middle finger inside. His intention was clear, and for a moment, it seemed as though nothing would stop him from claiming her entirely. But just as his finger slid inside grazing the tender soft skin of her sex through the little patch of pubic hair making its way to her slick slit, Shipra’s hand shot out with unexpected speed, catching his wrist in a firm grip. Her left hand stopped his advance, pushing his fingers away from her most vulnerable place. At the same time, her right hand intercepted the other hand fondling her breast, forcing him to withdraw.

The sudden defiance startled Patode. He had expected her complete submission, believing that she had already surrendered to him mentally and physically. But this unexpected resistance shattered that illusion. His eyes widened for a brief moment, surprise flashing across his face as he realized that Shipra wasn’t as broken as he had assumed. 

"Not so fast, Patode," Shipra shot back, her gaze now steady and unyielding. The hesitation and submissiveness that once filled her eyes were replaced by a spark of determination and a fierce struggle for control.

For Shipra, the act of defiance wasn’t just a mere reflex—it was something neither Patode nor Namrata had anticipated. It wasn’t born from fear or hesitation but rather from a deep-seated familiarity with situation like this, a toxic experience that had scarred her far deeper than either of them could imagine. Alongside the submissive and slutty side that had resurfaced, the side Patode had eagerly sought to exploit, there lay a part of her that was hardened, forged through painful memories she had long tried to bury. The scars of her past resurfaced along with her old self, not as weakness but as a force that compelled her to be cautious. There had been a time when she was younger, she had given in too easily, a time when her body and mind had been controlled by another, and that experience had left her with wounds she thought would never heal. But now, in the face of Patode’s unbridled lust and Namrata’s manipulation, those old memories clawed their way to the surface, dragging her out of the passive role they expected her to play.

While sitting alone in her room Shipra was reminded of the darkness she had once escaped, of a past life where submission had cost her more than she was willing to pay now. It was this toxic history that fueled her actions, a toxic history that clashed violently with the forbidden desires that had awakened in her moments ago. Both sides of her—one that craved control and the other that yearned for liberation—were battling for dominance.

“What is this, Shipra ma’am?” Patode’s voice carried a mix of surprise and frustration as he took a step back, his brows furrowing at the sudden defiance. “If you're not ready to give in to my demands, you shouldn’t have joined us.” His tone turned sterner as he added, “Let me remind you, Shipra ma’am, you can’t do this alone. You need me, and you—”

Before he could finish, Shipra cut him off sharply, her voice steady but filled with conviction. “I know, Patode. I don’t need you to remind me of the situation I’m in.” She stepped forward, meeting his gaze. “I will honor the terms of your proposal, but if you think I’ll start having uninhibited sex with you like Namrata, then you’re wrong.”

Shipra's words sliced through the room, shattering the illusion Patode had held of her complete submission. He stood frozen for a moment, his smirk faltering, clearly not expecting any resistance. Namrata, however, was not as surprised. She had known Shipra long enough to anticipate some form of defiance before the inevitable fall. She leaned back slightly, watching with a subtle smile playing on her lips. Namrata understood that while Shipra’s past might resurface but it wouldn’t be enough to cause her instant fall. However she knew this resistance was merely a delay, a desperate grasp at control before the tide of desire pulled Shipra under completely. Shipra might be drawing a line now, but Namrata knew how thin that line really was, and how easily it could be crossed once Shipra’s inner conflict reached its boiling point.

For Patode, however, this defiance was a challenge, one that sparked his desire even more. He had expected Shipra to crumble, but now that she coming this close was showing some fight, it only made the prospect of conquering her that much sweeter. His hunger deepened, but underneath it, there was a flicker of frustration and anger. He wasn’t used to women pushing back, especially not after he had them cornered.

"You know, Patode," Shipra began, her voice steady yet laced with an undercurrent of vulnerability, "you judged me right when you said I have experience in giving pleasure. But what you don’t understand is that it wasn’t from an affair. I’ve been a faithful wife ever since my marriage. Before I got married, I was in a relationship with someone, and in many ways, your actions and intentions remind me of him."

She paused, letting her words sink in as she met Patode’s gaze. He shifted slightly, perhaps expecting more resistance but curious nonetheless. Namrata remained silent, her eyes flicking between them as if watching a delicate dance unfold.

"I’ll admit is again," Shipra continued, "my body has betrayed me during our encounters, whether it was on that Sunday night or since then. I won’t deny it—I craved to be taken by you, filled by your... monster cock, and relive the pleasure I’ve been missing. But that’s not the whole truth. Yes, the cravings are there, but so are the haunting memories of what that relationship left me with. I was young, reckless, and did things for him... for my depraved desires that nearly destroyed me. I was broken, pushed into a darkness I almost didn’t come out of."

Her voice softened, but the strength of her resolve was unmistakable. "I was lucky, though. I managed to pull myself out of that abyss and started a new life with my husband. But here I am again, standing at the edge, being pulled back into a path of debauchery and depravity, driven by lust. The difference now is that I’m no longer the free-spirited girl I was. I’m not like Namrata, without the weight of responsibilities, without the pressure of society on my shoulders. I have a family, a husband who trusts me, and a life I’ve built."

Shipra’s expression hardened as she drew closer to Patode, her eyes narrowing. "I can’t risk losing everything I’ve worked for just to indulge in a fleeting moment of pleasure. Not unless you give me something more than just a few days of lust. You want me, and I’m willing to give in to this... to you, but there have to be guarantees and there has to be some limits. I won’t let this spiral out of control, like it did in the past. I need assurances—assurances that this fling won’t destroy everything I’m trying to protect."

In those few quiet, solitary moments in her room, Shipra came to a decision—one that was driven not only by her circumstances but by the hard-earned lessons of her past. There was no way out of the situation she found herself in, and yet, unlike her younger self, this time she would submit to her desires with a clear mind. She wouldn’t lose herself completely; she would remain in control. Her toxic relationship with Viresh had taught her one undeniable truth: once a woman submits to men like Patode or Viresh, it’s a downward spiral from which there is no return. Men like them were never satisfied with mere conquest. Their inflated egos and primal need for dominance demanded more than just bedding a woman—they sought to degrade, to break her spirit piece by piece. They thrived on pushing boundaries, on taking everything they could until the woman before them was reduced to nothing but a hollow shell.

But this time, Shipra was determined to ensure that history didn’t repeat itself. She could no longer deny her own desires—the lust, the thrill, the craving that had resurfaced—but she wouldn’t let Patode take the same kind of control over her that Viresh once had. She knew what it felt like to be dominated, to be reduced to an object of desire with no say in her own fate. And she vowed not to let that happen again. In this moment, Shipra needed to navigate the dangerous game she was playing carefully. She would submit, yes, but with some control over her and Patode's actions. Her mind was set—her body would bend to the physical cravings she could no longer suppress, but her will and her purpose would remain steadfast. She wouldn’t lose sight of her goal, wouldn’t let the lust take over completely. She would play the game, but she wouldn’t let herself be consumed by it.

This time, she would ensure that submitting to Patode didn’t mean losing herself in the process. If anything, she would use her submission as a tool, a means to an end, while maintaining control over her own destiny.

Patode’s expression flickered, a mixture of irritation and amusement dancing across his face as Shipra’s words settled in. He was relieved she wasn’t backing out of their deal but annoyed that she wasn’t crumbling into the desperate woman he had envisioned—begging for his touch, powerless beneath him. Instead, she stood her ground, still clinging to control, and it was something he hadn’t anticipated. Namrata, standing quietly in the corner, remained composed, her sharp eyes observing the exchange with an air of expectation, as if she had always known this moment would unfold in such a way.

"Guarantees?" Patode sneered, in almost a mocking tone. "What kind of guarantees could you possibly want, Shipra ma'am? You think you’re in any position to set terms now, after losing the challenge?"

But Shipra remained unfazed, her confidence unwavering. She was not about to let everything she had built be destroyed in one careless moment. "Yes, Patode," she began, her tone calm but firm. "I lost, and I know I it will be difficult to survive here without giving in to your demands. And that’s exactly why I need guarantees. I can’t afford to let this... arrangement cost me everything I’ve been fighting for. I need a confirmation from you, a commitment that you’ll hold up your end of the bargain. I may have been naive once, but not this time around."

Patode’s expression darkened, his playful demeanor vanishing as he straightened, his tone turning almost threatening. "You seem to be forgetting the dynamics here, Shipra," he said sharply. "Your needs—whether they’re work-related or physical—are entirely dependent on me. Why would I comply with your terms now, knowing well that you will eventually give in to me? You don’t have any bargaining chip here."

But Shipra didn’t flinch. Her gaze remained locked on his, steady and determined, her posture never faltering. She could sense the power he thought he held over her, but she also knew that she had something he desperately wanted—more than just control, more than the thrill of dominating her.

"I am myself the BARGAINING CHIP Patode. You want me," she said softly, but her words cut through the tension like a blade. "Desperately. That much is obvious. But let me remind you, Patode—this isn’t just about satisfying your lust or even my own cravings. There’s much more at stake here." Her voice dropped to a sultry, almost teasing tone as she continued, "If we’re going to do this, there need to be terms. And I know you’ll agree to them... because you know exactly what you’ll be getting in return."

For a brief moment, Patode’s eyes flickered with confusion. His irritation seemed to waver, giving way to something else—curiosity, perhaps, or a growing sense of greed. Shipra let the moment hang in the air, then dropped her gaze deliberately, her eyes trailing down toward her shorts.

The air between them thickened as she brought her hand to the waistband of her shorts, her fingers deftly unbuttoning it with deliberate slowness. With the zip already loosened, the fabric parted just enough to reveal a tantalizing glimpse of her bare skin beneath.

Patode’s breath hitched audibly, his earlier mockery fading as raw, hungry anticipation took its place. His gaze locked onto the sliver of exposed flesh, the promise of what lay beneath igniting a fire in his eyes.

"You want it, don’t you?" Shipra’s voice was a soft, seductive whisper, her lips curling into a knowing smile. "What’s between my legs... A married pussy of a loyal housewife. The unsatisfied, slutty cunt of your boss. You want to defile it, to ravage it and ruin it with that monster dick of yours. You want to fill it with your seed, don’t you, Patode?"

Her words were sharp, deliberate, hitting every nerve with precision. She wasn’t just teasing him; she was driving him deeper into his desires, into the very core of what he wanted from her. Patode’s eyes gleamed with lust, but there was an underlying hunger for dominance—a need to conquer, to take everything she was offering.

But Shipra wasn’t done. She stepped closer, letting him breathe in the intoxicating proximity of her body. "You’ll get to do all of that and much more," she whispered, her voice hushed and dripping with sensual promise, "but only if you comply to my terms."

The power dynamics in the room shifted slightly with each word she spoke, and Patode sensed it. This wasn’t just another conquest—this was something different. Shipra wasn’t going to fall apart like others had before her.

Namrata’s brow quirked in surprise, a glint of amusement in her eyes. She hadn’t expected Shipra to act such brazenly and boldly. She had never seen this side of Shipra, and due to it there was an undeniable admiration growing within her. She leaned against the wall, crossing her arms, her lips curling into a small, intrigued smile. Curious how Patode reacts, Namrata refrained herself from interrupting the situation.

Shipra leaned forward, her eyes locked onto Patode's, her voice low and dripping with challenge. "So, what's it going to be, Patode?" she asked, her tone a mixture of seduction and defiance. "You can stick to your ego and keep playing your games, or you can listen to my terms and have the best few months of your life. Two sexy, insatiable women at your side—what more could you want?"

She paused for a moment, letting her words sink in, watching as the flicker of interest danced in his eyes. "Sure, you can keep screwing Namrata," she added, her lips curling into a knowing smirk. "But let's be honest—no matter how much you enjoy that, you’ll never be satisfied knowing I’m just within your reach, but completely out of your grasp. And you can forget about it if you choose your pride over me. Even without your help I will keep pushing forward to succeed in whatever tasks comes my way and will also try to find some other way to continue my investigation."

Shipra’s heart raced in her chest, her pulse hammering against her skin as she maintained a calm exterior, trying to be bold and in control. In reality she had no solid leverage, no real bargaining chip beyond offering herself to manipulate Patode's desire and greed. She was playing a dangerous game, banking on Patode’s desperation to have her—hoping his craving to conquer her would override his sense of self-preservation or logic giving her a little control over Patode's and her own wild side.

She knew full well what could happen if he said no. If Patode refused, she had no backup plan. There would be no way out, no escape from the consequences that would inevitably follow. She would be left alone to ward off all the critical task of the branch which she understood well enough that won't be possible. Managing the tough rural branch had only been possible because of Patode’s help. His influence smoothed out the challenges, making her tenure easier to navigate. Without him, she would be facing an uphill battle—especially with Toppo constantly breathing down her neck, making her life more difficult with each passing day. And then there was the fraud happening right under her nose, which she could not ignore. And at last her promotion, already precarious, depended entirely on her performance here, and she knew well enough that she couldn’t survive the pressure on her own.

But it wasn’t just the professional stakes that weighed on her mind. The weight of her own lust pressed down on her, pushing her toward Patode, threatening to consume her entirely. She could feel it gnawing at her resolve, beckoning her to surrender fully, to give in to the cravings she had buried for so long. She dreaded repeating the same mistakes she had made with Viresh. This time, she clung desperately to the need for even the smallest shred of control. No matter how little power she could exert over the situation, she needed it—anything to stop herself from being swept away again. She couldn’t afford to lose herself, not when everything she had worked for was on the line. Her career, her family, her sense of self—everything depended on her ability to maintain focus and not let her desires blind her to her true purpose.

This was her last chance, and she knew it. 

The stakes were clear. She couldn’t afford to lose herself in her lust, but she also couldn’t afford to lose control of the situation. She was trapped between two equally dangerous outcomes. And so, she played her gamble with Patode. It was her only option—to find a middle ground where she could satisfy her desires without being consumed by them, while still keeping Patode close enough to ensure his help in managing the branch.

It was a gamble, yes. But it was the only gamble she had left to play.

The room was thick with tension, every second stretching out unbearably as Shipra held her breath, waiting for his response. The silence was suffocating, each heartbeat louder than the last as she watched him, her gaze unwavering. She had called the bluff, laid everything on the line.

Patode was not amused at all, it was the second time Shipra had resisted surrending to him. His irritation simmered beneath the surface, but it was overshadowed by the lust that burned even hotter inside him. Shipra’s seductive act, her teasing glimpse of her sex, had inflamed his desire to a point where logic and reason were starting to fade. And Despite his frustration, he couldn’t ignore the opportunity this situation provided. Getting in on Shipra’s investigation work presented a way  for him to influence the direction of her inquiry, to clear his own name and, most importantly, to get Saad Hasan off his back.

Patode glanced at Namrata inching towards them, she had been a silent spectator in the tussle for control between Shipra and Patode, though a small, amused grin played on her lips all along. She was clearly enjoying the silent battle unfolding between the two of them, observing with a sense of quiet anticipation.  As she strolled casually past Shipra and Patode, she circled around and stood behind Patode, her fingers lightly grazing his shoulder as if to calm his growing irritation. Her tone was smooth and playful, but beneath it was a hint of calculation as she spoke.

“There’s no harm in hearing her out, Patode," Namrata said, her voice low and teasing. "After all, you almost lost to her." She leaned in closer, as she glanced knowingly at Shipra, her eyes gleaming with subtle mischief. "Consider it a consolation prize to Shipra. Wouldn't it be more satisfying if she let you fuck her on her own terms, with nothing holding her back? No resistance, no hesitation... just pure, unbridled submission."

Patode’s irritation slowly began to fade, replaced by the enticing prospect Namrata was laying before him. “All right, Shipra ma’am,” Patode replied, his voice a mix of curiosity and restrained irritation. “Let’s hear your terms. But don’t think for a second that this means I’m agreeing to anything just yet.” His eyes darkened with lust as he continued, “I’m not going to let you tease me again like you did on Sunday.”

Patode made his way back to the bed, his steps slow and deliberate. As he sat down, Namrata joined him sliding closer to him, positioning herself intimately by his side. She was just as intrigued as Patode, her eyes fixed on Shipra with a mix of curiosity and amusement, eager to see what Shipra had in mind.

"Let's hear it Shipra," she murmured, her voice low and silky, "We're all ears."

Shipra exhaled, feeling a weight lift as she spoke. "I have only three conditions," she began, the anxiousness running throughout her body with each passing second subsided a bit. Her voice steadied tinged with a newfound sense of control. "And if Patode can manage to stop thinking from his dick long enough to actually consider them, I think we can all benefit—and enjoy the rest of our time here together."

Patode leaned back slightly, eyeing Shipra with a blend of skepticism and intrigue. His irritation still simmered beneath the surface, but neither of the women knew that he had his own reasons for playing along, reasons that forced him to subdue his primal urge to take Shipra by force in that very moment.

"I'm listening," Patode said, his tone restrained, trying to appear in control.

Shipra locked eyes with him, her gaze unwavering. "These conditions aren't just for me,' she added. "They're for all of us. This situation can either spiral into chaos, or it can be something we all walk away from without regret." She paused, letting her words settle in, relieved that in this moment, her gamble didn't fail.

"First and foremost," Shipra began, her voice steady but with a hint of urgency, "anything and everything that happens between us must remain a secret. Unlike the two of you, I have a family to think about. I cannot destroy my well-settled life for a few days of pleasure."

She paused, watching both Patode and Namrata for any sign of dissent. "We have to be careful, and we have to restrain our lust. No one can suspect anything, not at work, not anywhere. Our encounters will only happen when all of us are in agreement, and when it’s safe—when there’s no risk of anyone finding out." Shipra let the silence linger, waiting for their response, waiting for them to acknowledge the rules she was setting.

"Fair enough," Namrata complied without wasting a second but Shipra could sense the tension in Patode, the conflict between his lust and his desire to maintain his own power in the situation.

Patode leaned forward slightly, a sly grin spreading across his face as he fixed Shipra with a calculating gaze. "What if," he began, his voice dripping with mock concern, "I get too horny and need a release, but it’s not... safe to continue here, especially with that pesky runt Swapnil always lurking around?" His eyes gleamed with a wicked amusement. "Would it still be SAFE for you to indulge in our little carnal activities at some... other safe and secure place? I know Namrata wouldn’t mind."

As he spoke, Patode’s hand slid possessively around Namrata’s bare waist, pulling her closer against him. Namrata’s expression remained unfazed, a smirk playing on her lips as she leaned into his touch, clearly comfortable with the direction things were going. Patode’s cunning look didn’t go unnoticed by Shipra. He was testing her, pushing the boundaries of the conditions she had just laid out, trying to find a loophole to bend her will.

Shipra didn’t flinch, though. She had anticipated this. Patode’s nature was far from subtle, and he wasn’t the type to easily relinquish control. "I would’ve suggested you try controlling your urges, Patode," Shipra began, her tone a blend of sarcasm and teasing, "but with two of us at your disposal, I suppose that might be asking too much." Her words lingered in the air, deliberately provocative, as she watched the glint in Patode's eyes darken with lust.

"If you can’t control yourself," she continued, softening her voice just a notch to ensure he paid attention, "then perhaps we should consider a safer location. Somewhere discreet, where there’s no risk of Swapnil or anyone else snooping around. But let me be clear"—her eyes flicked between Patode and Namrata—"we’ll only move forward if all of us feel comfortable and safe. After all, you coming here daily will raise doubts sooner or later, even with your best efforts to keep things quiet."

"That's more like it" Patode said with a smirk, softly patting Namrata's hips, clearly excited at what he perceived as a small victory. His eyes gleamed with anticipation as he leaned forward, ready for more. "Alright, what's the next term?"

"Secondly—our... indulgences will follow a work-and-reward system," Shipra continued.

Both Namrata and Patode exchanged puzzled glances, their brows furrowing as they tried to grasp what she meant. Shipra, catching their confusion, elaborated with a calm but firm tone. "Let me break it down for you. I’m not doing this just to satisfy my physical urges. This arrangement, as per our agreement, isn’t just about lust—it’s about what I need to accomplish here, too. Patode, you need to assist me with all the branch work, including the investigation."

Patode tried to wrap his head around what Shipra was proposing. He was intrigued but still not entirely convinced, while Namrata raised an eyebrow, her curiosity deepening.

"And here’s where the reward comes in," Shipra continued, a hint of defiance flickering in her eyes. "With each achievement, each success in my work, I will reward you accordingly by getting more physical with you. But don’t expect me to  submit everything to you right away. I’m not going to hand you exactly what you want unless you deliver what I need."

Patode’s face twisted slightly with frustration. He wasn’t used to being made to wait for what he wanted, especially not after he thought he had the upper hand. Shipra, however, stood firm, her voice gaining strength as she spoke. "This isn’t just a free-for-all, Patode. You’ll get what you desire—but only when you’ve earned it. Consider it motivation for you to help me with the branch work and ensure everything runs smoothly. If you deliver, then I will, too."

"You think I’m that cheap, Shipra ma’am?" Patode shot back, his voice laced with irritation. "That I’d take advantage of your situation without honoring my words? Let me remind you—you’ve had such a smooth run at one of the most difficult branches, Kasegaon, ONLY because of my support. And now you want to play this game, making me jump through hoops?"

His gaze hardened, the frustration evident in his clenched jaw. "I can’t comply with this term. It feels like you’re trying to use me to get your way, while not honoring the terms of our original proposal. You think I’ll just sit around and wait for you to decide when you’re ready, while I do all the heavy lifting? No, Shipra. That’s not how this works."

Patode’s desire for Shipra took over him, the idea of having to wait—of being strung along on her terms—stoked a burning frustration within him. He wanted her now, not after some vague achievements or distant milestones.

"Believe me Patode," Shipra began in a soft tone trying to coerce him, "It's quite hard for me too to hold back my cravings for pleasure as well but let us not forget we have duties and responsibilities. We cannot chuck them. Especially not me- I have a lot riding on my performance here. And I know it by experience once I......we  go all out without restriction it would be nearly impossible for us to focus on anything else."

She held his gaze, her expression resolute. "Let’s not pretend you haven’t had your share of fun these last few days. You’ve seen me almost naked in embarrassing state, kissed me, groped me, and even got a hell of a blowjob."

Shipra took a breath, maintaining her composure. "I promise you’ll have your way with me. But only when I’m sure you’ve given it your all in helping me. If we’re doing this, it has to be on those terms. No shortcuts, no games. I need your commitment, just like you want mine."

“No… No… No… it’s not going to work for me,” Patode growled, shaking his head in frustration. His eyes narrowed, and his voice became harsher. “You’ve done nothing but tease me, Shipra ma’am. And that blowjob doesn’t count—it was part of a challenge, not a mutual, satisfying act.” His irritation flared, a mixture of lust and impatience taking hold as he leaned forward, about to fully voice his discontent Namrata interrupted his flow.

"What if Shipra does something which ensures her commitment towards this arrangement? Would that satisfy you, Patode?" Namrata, who had been silently observing, raised a hand gently, placing it on Patode’s chest her voice smooth and deliberate.

Patode's temper began to subside, his curiosity now piqued by Namrata's suggestion. He was certain by now that Namrata was on his side, and that gave him enough reason to reconsider. Relaxing slightly, he looked at her. "Like what?" he asked, the edge in his voice softening as he waited to hear what she had in mind.

Namrata's lips curved into a knowing smile. "Something that shows she's willing to make an effort, to prove she’s not just playing you. Something... symbolic, that ensures her dedication to this arrangement before things go further. What if she joins us today just like that Sunday night but without her Mangalsutra this time? You won't get to fuck her but it would be a solid gesture from her which I think will be enough to address your doubts. A win win for both of you."

“If Shipra ma'am is willing to do that,” Patode said, his voice dripping with malice as he glanced at the Mangalsutra hanging from Shipra’s neck, “I’ll be more than happy to listen to her third condition.” His gaze lingered on the sacred ornament, his eyes flashing with a blend of anticipation and arrogance. “Are you game, Shipra?” he asked, his chuckle revealing his excitement.

Patode’s amusement was palpable. He was eager to see Shipra’s reaction to the idea of removing her Mangalsutra, a symbol of her marital commitment towards her husband. The act of her willingly parting with this token would serve as a potent gesture of submission and devotion, a powerful sign that she was prepared to prioritize their arrangement over her fidelity. For Patode, this symbolic act would not only be a personal victory but also a boost to his male ego, providing a thrill of superiority knowing that Shipra was choosing him over her wimpy husband Alok, compromising her marital vows, for her physical needs. It would give him a heady sense of dominance, further fueling his desire and confirming his control over the situation.

Shipra cast an angry glare at Namrata, clearly frustrated by the morally compromising position she had been pushed into. However, she knew better than to protest, fully aware that any resistance at this point could jeopardize her precarious situation. She was already deeply entangled in this arrangement and couldn't afford to back out now.

"Fine," she said through gritted teeth, her voice tight with suppressed frustration. "But before we proceed, let me present my final condition."

"Third condition—Respect and boundaries," Shipra stated firmly, her voice steady despite the tumult of emotions beneath. "What I am about to engage in is already crossing a significant moral boundary for me. It's an act of adultery and cheating. However, I need to ensure that I am not perceived as an immoral woman. So I want you to treat me and Namrata with respect. Just because you're able to bed us doesn't mean we are of loose character. Furthermore, there must be clear limits on what you can do sexually. I am not willing to entertain any depraved fantasies of yours. If I find any act demeaning or humiliating, I will refuse it, and you must respect that decision. I am not prepared to lose myself or be subjected to any form of degradation for the sake of your perverse desires."

"Is that all? Can we finally have some fun now?" Patode asked, standing up, his impatience clear. He could feel the excitement building, knowing what the night had in store. Patode barely gave the last condition a second thought. To him, Shipra was already a slut, and he knew that once his cock was deep inside her, all her so-called "terms" would crumble. She’d be nothing more than his obedient little bitch, eager to please and ready to do whatever filthy thing he demanded. As he inched closer, the hunger in his eyes was unmistakable. He was ready to take what he saw as rightfully his.

Patode stepped closer, his predatory gaze locked on Shipra as he moved in to claim what he believed was his prize. He was only inches away, his breath hot against her skin, ready to take control.

"And one more thing," Shipra added quickly, her voice a mixture of urgency and tension. "You’ll always wear a condom when the time comes for you to..."

"Fuck you," Patode finished her sentence with a dark chuckle, leaning in to whisper the words in her ear, his lips almost brushing her neck. He was so close now, feeling the heat radiating from her. "We’ll see about that when we get to that point. But for now, let’s deal with this little symbol of your marriage." He reached for her mangalsutra, his fingers eager to unhook it. "Time to get rid of this so we can get down to business, don’t you think?"

Shipra froze, her mind racing, knowing full well she was about to step over a line from which there would be no return. The weight of the moment pressed down on her, her heart pounding in her chest as she felt Patode’s presence loom over her. She didn’t resist. She couldn’t. This was it. With trembling hands, she pulled her hair to the side allowing him to reach for her Mangalsutra, the symbol of her marriage. With a careless flick, Patode unhooked it from her neck, the delicate chain slipping through his fingers before he tossed it casually toward the table. The sound of it landing on the wooden desk echoed in the room, a final act of severance from everything she had held sacred.

The nervous energy surged through her body, tingling her skin. She felt exposed, not just physically but emotionally, knowing the only thing keeping her from plunging headfirst into this depravity was now gone. Last time, the Mangalsutra had been her lifeline, a fragile reminder of the boundaries she couldn’t afford to cross. But now, without that anchor, she was at the mercy of her own fragile self-control, which felt more like a thread about to snap.

Patode didn’t waste any time. With a predatory grin, he effortlessly swooped Shipra into his arms, her body light in his grip as he carried her toward the bed. Her mind was a storm of conflicting emotions—disgust, arousal, fear—all swirling together as she instinctively wrapped her arm around his neck for support. Her breath quickened, her pulse hammering as the reality of the situation became painfully clear. She couldn’t bring herself to make eye contact with him, not now, not with everything about to unfold.

As Patode laid her down on the bed, Shipra’s gaze flickered toward Namrata, who was watching the scene unfold with a look of quiet amusement. Shipra’s body tensed as she felt the weight of Patode’s form pressing down on her, his hot breath grazing her skin, his hands already exploring her trembling form.

This was it. There was no turning back now.


End of Chapter 19: Terms of Submission  thanks
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(19-09-2024, 09:55 PM)shake chilli Wrote:  Bro next update app kab tak doge please bata do


Koi force nahi he

On sunday bro
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(17-09-2024, 09:19 PM)Nutcraker40 Wrote:  This is like Indian inception with all these flashbacks great writing and build up but is smiles character really written out? Look at Indian with with Goldman story gave great background to the wife before sex so ever little detail can be imagined this story is good but doesn't do well with imagination seems little rushed might not be the word as its long at about dam time for something to happen but with that said do we care what's happening as much as we should after so long and so many chapters? Instead of adding we feel spread thin like butter I'm just trying to help I much rather you make a sonarika dhadroria story I want interfaith play and other fetishes like bdsm  has anyone squirted yet?what's the motivation is it only sex or is it something deeper perhaps patobe or someone else done this before has a history or a problem that would work better I want some hardcore sex break child's make her embarrassed have a nude pussy or ass pic float around... Ps I'm serious about the sonarika story cm me I can help even PayPal can be involved I know you're like me with not as much time as you wish lets work together after you finish this story meta make the best sonarika story to blur reality
Aakhir kehna kya chahte ho?  banghead:
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(15-09-2024, 11:50 AM)amirrulezmir Wrote:  nice update.

i would to request the author, to kindly let shipra retain her mangalsutra on her body. as this will give a victorius feeling to Patode. or when the actual day arrives either shipra should make him wear at his organ or patode should wear it at his organ while having sex with shipra. this will be even more triumphant moment for patode.

hope you update the next chapter soon

May be in upcoming chapters
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(15-09-2024, 03:23 PM)Hornytamilan23 Wrote:  Bro, I love the way you handle criticism and praise. You are unfazed by both of them. I was about to unzip, but you made me wait for another day.

Thanks man... Keep tuned in.
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(15-09-2024, 03:44 PM)Somnaath Wrote:  
One of my favourite story  yr):

Appreciate it bro  Namaskar
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(16-09-2024, 02:28 AM)iCuby Wrote:  Disappointed with the update. After so many days of waiting for an update, this update is really disappointing. So many dialogues, but so little actions.... The story didn't forward at all....

Try reading it... Skipping just to the erotic part will give you similar feeling.
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(16-09-2024, 11:40 AM)suryaspk Wrote:  Fantastic update.. even though there is no sex scene still I am satisfied how it's progressed.

I have a suggestion to the author.
Right now so much is stacked against Shipra. Arrangement with patode won't hold. If Shipra doesn't dance to his tune, he won't hesitate to break this deal to show who is the real boss here. Also there is no actual motive for him to betray Sahid Hassan. Shipra is destined to fail. Hope you bring some support for Shipra to balance the power struggle here.

Her support will come after a couple of chapters.
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(16-09-2024, 08:33 PM)violetviolent5 Wrote:  Hi Suraj,

I am reading your stories from long time. They are the best in the site without a doubt. The character arc of Shipra is excellent. Sometimes i want to wait for few months & then come back to read multiple updates at a time but i wasn't able to hold back myself, great writing my friend.
i'M WAITING FOR ENTRY OF BHIVA. Then the friend's circle and at ast may be Alok and her ex-boyfriend.

Thanks man, Bhiva will make appearance soon.
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(17-09-2024, 01:37 PM)Samuraj Wrote:  I think you are too early with Shipra and Patode sex, the story had a lot of promise but I think it will come down to the usual stories about domination, submission and making a whore out of Shipra. Up to 18 chapters the story was very promising with great dialogues but after the fake bet loss, it was reduced to the usual dominance story of which there are a million on this site. I'm sorry that you rushed with Shipra and Patode's sex. That's my opinion of course, thanks to the author for the answers to our comments.

When did they have sex??  The only one rushing here is you with your comment. Keep patience my friend don't jump to conclusions.
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Chapter 20: Between Loyalty and Lust

Patode’s towering figure cast a shadow over Shipra as he laid her down gently on the bed next to Namrata. His broad, muscular frame dominated the space, his hands firmly planted on either side of her body, caging her in beneath him. His face hovered just inches from hers, close enough for Shipra to feel the warmth of his breath on her lips.

The intensity of his gaze bore into her, making her feel exposed, vulnerable, and undeniably aroused. She could feel the raw hunger in his eyes, and it made her pulse race in ways she couldn’t fully control. Unable to bear the weight of his lust-filled stare any longer, she turned her face to the side, breaking the eye contact that had become too much to hold. Shipra’s chest rose and fell with heavy, anxious breaths, the only sound breaking the charged silence in the room.

Patode’s looming presence overwhelmed her senses, his proximity sending a jolt of nervous energy rippling through her body. Her skin tingled, every inch hyper-aware of the tension building between them. She could feel the heat radiating from him, the weight of anticipation pressing down on her as she lay beneath him, unsure of what his next move would be—yet unable to deny the excitement coiling in her gut.

Patode’s lips curled into a predatory grin as he broke the charged silence, his voice low and dripping with lust. “You know, Shipra, I’ve been waiting for this moment ever since I first laid eyes on you at that bus stand. I knew, right then and there that a woman as exquisite and sexy as you could only be truly satisfied by a man like me," Patode's voice dripped with arrogance, his eyes gleaming with lust. "I knew it from the start—you were going to be mine and that tight, unsatisfied little married cunt of yours, desperate for real pleasure, was just waiting to be stuffed by my cock. No one else could give you what you really crave, Shipra. Not the way I can."

His words hit her like a sledgehammer, crude and raw, making her pulse quicken even more. He leaned in closer, his breath hot against her ear as he continued his verbal assault, each word designed to break her down, to remind her of the power he believed he held over her. “All this time, every little game you’ve played, every tease... it’s just been building to this moment. You might have resisted, but deep down, you knew where this was heading.” he continued.

"Patode, we’re not going to fu—" Shipra’s voice trembled slightly as she turned her face back to meet his, trying to remind him of the terms she had just laid out. Her eyes, though clouded with a mix of fear and desire, hardened in an attempt to regain control.

But the words barely left her mouth before Patode put his finger on her lips silencing her mid-sentence. His finger brushed against her lips, lingering there for a moment before he moved his hand slowly down
Patode leaned in closer as he whispered with a dark chuckle, "I know, I know... Term 2—work and reward shit, right? Don’t worry, I remember it. I’m not going to do anything without your consent. But since you are here willingly to prove me your commitment let me have my share of fun." His tone dripped with mockery, making it clear that her so-called conditions were little more than a joke to him.

"I am a little curious though," His hand slid down her side, grazing the curves of her supple breast, his fingers lightly brushing her already hard nipples poking through the fabric of her Top without a bra underneath. He teased them with deliberate, feather-light strokes, each touch sending a jolt through her body.  "Would you be able to control your urges Shipra?" He sneered, his voice low and taunting. "Don’t you remember what happened last Sunday? How desperate you were? How you scrambled for that condom, practically ready to throw yourself at me? You wanted it so badly. If it weren’t for that Mangalsutra holding you back, we would’ve had an unforgettable threesome. And you would’ve experienced the best fuck of your life, indulging in the forbidden thrill of an extramarital affair, feeling that raw, taboo pleasure like never before."

Shipra struggled to suppress the tremors coursing through her body under Patode’s teasing, arousing touch and crude remarks. Her breaths grew shallow as she wriggled in an attempt to break free.

Patode’s eyes flickered down to her now bare neck, no longer adorned with the symbol of her marital bond. A slow, predatory smirk curled on Patode’s lips as his eyes hungrily roamed over Shipra’s tantalizing cleavage. In one swift, forceful motion, his fingers hooked the neckline of her flimsy top, yanking it with rough impatience. The flimsy fabric strained against her body, clinging for a moment before tearing apart into pieces. Her breasts spilled free with a sensual bounce, the movement drawing his eyes as they jiggled enticingly in front of him. "But we got that out of the way today, didn't we?" He pressed on, watching her firm globes with predatory satisfaction. "What’s stopping you now, huh? What’s stopping you from just letting go and giving me exactly what you’ve been craving? I've waited too long for this, and I know you've wanted it just as badly."

"Keep your overflowing lust in check, Patode," Shipra snapped, pushing him aside as she wriggled free from his overwhelming grip just as his hand was about to seize her tender breasts. His wild, impatient act triggered an urgent reaction within her. She instinctively pulled away, creating distance between them, her chest heaving. In a rush, she pulled the pieces of her top up covering her nakedness.

"Your are one loosing control here," Shipra's voice dripped with condescension as she narrowed her eyes at Patode. "You can try all you want to seduce me into going all the way. Let's see if you succeed. I'm here just within you reach—to stoke your desires, to make you burn with lust even more." Her words were sharp but laced with a teasing undercurrent. Slowly, she parted her legs, a deliberate, tantalizing movement that sent a ripple of tension through the room.

"You’ll crave it," she whispered, her eyes locking onto his, dark with desire, "but you won’t be able to taste it. Not until you stand up to your end of the bargain. And when I'll feel you have done enough l, I'll let you slide that thick cock of yours into my aching, wet cunt, and then... only then will I let you fuck me to your heart’s content." Her words were like a promise and a taunt, her body writhing seductively in front of him, a vivid display of temptation, but still just out of reach.

"You're playing a dangerous game, Shipra," Patode said, his voice low and measured as he rose from the bed. He moved deliberately, positioning himself behind Namrata, whose body tensed at his presence. His fully erect cock stood straight up, looking painfully hard, a clear reflection of his undeniable arousal. Shipra, in a similar state of yearning, found her gaze involuntarily drifting toward it, mesmerized by its impressive size and thickness.

Patode's eyes flickered toward Shipra, a subtle smirk curling his lips as if he could read the conflict in her mind, "Control," he added, stepping closer to Namrata, his hand curling around her hair possessively, "is a very fragile thing Shipra." Without breaking his gaze from Shipra, he tugged Namrata's head back slightly, forcing her to bend her body in submission. "I can see your are barely hanging on to it. And the thing you're underestimating will lead you into loosing it."

With one swift motion, Patode guided Namrata's head downward towards his crotch, forcing her to bend at the waist. 
Namrata was now on her knees her face inches away from Patode's cock. Her round, naked ass pointed upward, now fully in Shipra's line of sight. The curves of her body were illuminated by the dim moon light filtering into the room through the windows, every detail of her glistening, wet pussy visible, slick with arousal. Namrata's puckered butt hole was framed perfectly between her smooth cheeks, accentuating the raw, intimate nature of the scene. Each subtle shift of her hips made the view even more enticing, the tension in the room thickening as Shipra found herself unable to look away, her own desires bubbling to the surface.

"You might have experienced pleasure before—whether it was with your husband or your ex," Patode continued, his voice smooth and dripping with unsettling confidence as he thrust his cock into Namrata's mouth. "But what we’re indulging in here is something different... this isn’t your ordinary sexual encounter. What you’re underestimating here is the raw, primal intensity of crossing every moral line, of embracing the forbidden and reveling in the taboo."

He paused, allowing his words to hang in the air, the weight of them sinking deep into Shipra’s consciousness. Without missing a beat, his movements became more forceful, his grip tightening in Namrata’s hair as he began to thrust harder into her mouth. Each motion was deliberate, his cock plunging deeper, pushing past her lips with growing intensity. The wet, slurping sounds of Namrata’s mouth struggling to accommodate him filled the room, each thrust producing an obscene, squelching noise that only intensified the charged atmosphere.

Patode's eyes glinted as he spoke, the power of his words washing over both women, "Believe me Shipra, everything you've experienced so far—whether it’s the gentle lovemaking with your husband or the rough, uninhibited fuck with your ex—it’s all going to prove dull. Pathetic, even. Nothing compares to the raw, filthy pleasure of knowing you’re cheating. Giving your body to another man in ways your husband couldn’t even dream of. Doing the dirty, depraved things for him that you’d never dare with your husband."

He paused, letting his words excite both women before continuing, "It’s that rush, Shipra. That sick, addictive thrill when you cross the line. When you're spreading your legs for someone who isn’t your husband, defiling yourself, and loving every second of it. Needing it. Craving it. Pushing your boundaries, exploring the deepest, dirtiest levels of sexual ecstasy that you could never reach in your boring, vanilla marriage."

"This isn’t just about the physical pleasure or sex, Shipra" Patode groaned in pleasure, his voice thick with lust. "it’s the ultimate rebellion. The dirtiest, most delicious kind of betrayal. And trust me, no matter how hard you try to hide behind your excuses and conditions, it won't be long before you're on your knees, begging me to fuck you senseless. You’ll be desperate to feel it—to be taken in ways your husband could never even imagine. You’ll be aching for it—the kind of fuck that shatters every boundary, every inhibition. The kind that makes you forget who you are, who you're supposed to be. All that guilt, that fear of being caught, it’ll only turn you ...... on more .....and you'll surrender to me...... just like your friend," his words trembled as Namrata, now fully in her grove, gripped his cock tightly with one hand. Her mouth worked on him with hungry, ferocious intent, sucking him with a wild, desperate rhythm. Each movement of her lips, each flick of her tongue, seemed to drive him closer to the edge.

"It’s not a competition, Namrata," Patode grunted as he yanked his cock from Namrata's greedy mouth, her lips wet and swollen from her frantic efforts to make him cum like Shipra had. He could sense her desperation, the hunger in her eyes, but he wasn’t ready to give in just yet. He wanted to drag it out, to make them both suffer with need.

"That's enough with your mouth, my little slut," he growled, his cock throbbing as it hovered just inches from her face, glistening with her saliva. "We’ve got a long, filthy night ahead of us. I’m not about to waste it by cumming in your mouth this early." He chuckled darkly, enjoying the frustrated look on Namrata's face as she licked her lips, still aching for him.

His gaze shifted to Shipra, who had been watching the entire scene unfold, her own arousal evident. Patode flashed her a wicked smile, his voice dripping with lust. "Tonight, I’ve got many holes to fill," he taunted, his eyes locked onto hers. "And there’s one in particular I’m looking forward to—the one that’s been itching for something more, isn’t that right? A married one that’s been neglected, waiting for a real man to fuck it properly."

Shipra remained silent, Patode's vulgar words were having the desired effect on her. He climbed onto the bed, his cock still rock hard, twitching with anticipation. Shipra instinctively flinched, unsure of his next move, a mixture of dread and reluctant desire swirling within her.

"Relax, Shipra," Patode sneered, catching her reaction as he grabbed Namrata, roughly flipping her onto her back. Without hesitation, he spread her legs wide, forcing them over his broad shoulders. The obscene position exposed every inch of her dripping wet pussy, slick and ready for him.

Positioning himself at her entrance, his cock teased her swollen lips, brushing against her wet folds, making Namrata squirm beneath him. "Don’t worry," he growled, his voice thick with arrogance and lust. "By the time I am done with her, you'll be begging me to fuck your unfaithful cheating sloppy cunt, spreading your legs for me, just like this horny little slut."

He pressed forward, sliding the thick head of his cock into Namrata’s pussy, watching as she gasped, her body trembling at the intrusion. "I’ll fill you so deep, you’ll forget your husband even exists," he snarled, thrusting into Namrata with a brutal force that made her cry out. "By the time I’m done, you’ll only remember one thing—how fucking good it feels to be stretched and filled by a real man."

Hmmmm....uuuuhhhhh
Aahhhhhh....Ungghhhhhhh


The raw intensity of the scene unfolding before her, the filthy words pouring from Patode's mouth, and the obscene sounds of Namrata’s body giving in to him were too much for Shipra to handle. Every inch of her was on fire, the growing heat between her legs was becoming impossible to ignore. Her breath hitched as her body betrayed her, and before she could stop herself, her hand slid down her stomach, slipping between her thighs. Her fingers pressed against her wet folds aching for some touch.

Her fingers squeezed together, rubbing in small, frantic circles as she struggled to contain the mounting pressure inside her. The tingling and twitching only grew more intense with each of Patode's savage thrusts into Namrata, every moan and grunt driving Shipra closer to the edge.

Shipra found herself in the same predicament as last Sunday, but this time, there was no alcohol clouding her mind - as a convenient excuse. The only thing that had held her back then was her mangalsutra, a constant reminder of her commitment and the life she was bound to. It had been her anchor, pulling her back to reality just when she teetered on the edge of temptation.

But now, that symbol of faithfulness was gone, discarded along with her inhibitions. There was nothing left to ground her, nothing to stop her ever increasing pull to give in. She was left relying solely on her own fading willpower to resist the overwhelming lust that gnawed at her, urging her to give in. Each passing moment made the temptation harder to fight, her body aching for submission, her mind torn between her responsibilities and the dark, primal desires surging within her.

Patode's gaze remained fixed on Shipra, his eyes burning with a mix of lust and dominance as he relentlessly thrust into Namrata. His cock plunged deep into her slick, eager cunt with a merciless rhythm, each thrust driving Namrata closer to the edge. The sound of flesh slapping against flesh echoed through the room, blending with Namrata’s high-pitched moans, which grew louder with every brutal push.

Patode grunted with exertion, his muscular frame flexing as he held Namrata in place, her legs trembling from the intensity. Her fingers clawed at the bed sheets, trying to steady herself, but the pleasure was overwhelming. Her cries filled the room, a stark contrast to the heavy, animalistic grunts escaping from Patode’s throat. He never took his eyes off Shipra, watching her intently, as if daring her to react, to give in to the carnal tension that was building between them.

Each powerful thrust sent ripples through Namrata’s body, her back arching as Patode’s cock slammed into her, filling her over and over again. The bed creaked beneath them, struggling to keep up with the punishing pace, but Patode showed no signs of slowing down. His focus never wavered from Shipra, who stood frozen, caught between her growing arousal and the battle within her mind to maintain control.

Patode smirked through his grunts, seeing the Shipra's resolve weakening. "Don’t fight it, Shipra," he growled, his words punctuated by each punishing thrust into Namrata's trembling body. "You’re already close to giving in. Just say the word, and you’ll be in her place, legs spread wide, dripping wet, begging for more." Patode drove his cock  deep into Namrata with powerful thrust, shoving all 9 inches to the hilt, eliciting a scream of pure ecstasy from her.

"Ohhhhhh... Godddddddd... Fuckkkkkk... fuckkkkk... fuckkkkk..." Namrata moaned, her body spasming in pleasure as waves of an intense orgasm rocked through her.

Her thighs trembled violently, her entire frame quivering as she gave in completely to the relentless pleasure. Patode slowly pulled his cock out of her soaking, creaming pussy, his shaft glistening with her sticky juices, the thick mixture of her arousal coating him. Her pussy, now gaping and drenched, twitched as his cock popped free, leaving a trail of her wetness smeared along her inner thighs. Namrata, panting and trembling, collapsed onto the bed, curling up as her fingers desperately rubbed her swollen clit, trying to extend the pleasure coursing through her. Eyes shut tight, her body twitched with aftershocks, lost in the surreal bliss of her release.

Patode, breathing heavily from his exertion, wiped the sweat from his brow as he sat on the bed. His eyes immediately sought Shipra, watching her with that same predatory look. He took a moment to catch his breath, then turned his attention fully to her.

"All it takes is a little consent Shipra," he taunted, his voice dark and dripping with arrogance. "You don't have to say it, just nod and I will make you experience what it truly means to be an unfaithful wife, the rush of being a cheating slut and a whore to your desires."

He slowly inched towards her, his eyes burning into hers. "That tiny little finger of yours..." he whispered, his voice a low, menacing growl, "it’s not enough to satisfy you, is it? You need real meat. A thick, hard cock to fill that dirty little hole of yours." His voice oozed dominance, daring her to resist. "So, what’s it gonna be, Shipra?"

Shipra's gaze was fixed on Patode. Her fingers worked feverishly between her legs without stopping. Her other hand gripped her barely covered breast tightly, her fingers curling around the soft flesh, squeezing it. Her mouth hung slightly open, her lips parted, trembling, but no words came out. She was caught in a whirlwind of lust and confusion, her body betraying her, her mind unable to form a single coherent thought.

"What's the word, Shipra?" Patode growled, now towering over her, standing on his knees, looking down with a lustful gaze that mirrored her own. Their eyes locked, a silent exchange of desire hanging in the thick air between them.

In one swift motion, he grabbed the torn remnants of her top and tossed them aside, his movements quick and deliberate. Moving closer, he took hold of his throbbing cock by the base, the veins pulsing under his grip. Without hesitation, he gently slapped it against her swollen breasts, the slick precum smearing across her erect nipples, each touch sending shivers through her body.

"You're mine now," he murmured darkly, his voice filled with ownership as he rubbed his hardness against her sensitive skin, marking her with his touch, making his claim undeniable.

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Namrata jolted awake as her phone rang, the shrill sound cutting through her half-asleep haze. Groggy and disoriented, she pushed her tired, aching body up from the bed, her limbs feeling like dead weight after the chaos of last night. The bright sunlight from the windows made her squint her eyes. It took a moment for her to figure out where she was, her mind still muddled from both the rude interruption and the wild night she had barely recovered from.

She groaned in frustration, the phone still ringing incessantly. With a sigh, she tossed the bed sheet off her completely naked body and, with wobbly legs and a bit of a stumble, made her way to the table where her phone sat. Annoyance bubbled up inside her; whoever was calling was about to get an earful. But as she picked up her phone, the bright light from the screen hit her squinting eyes, and in an instant, all her sleepiness and irritation vanished.

It was Alok's call.

The unexpected call caught Namrata off guard, and for a moment, she froze, her mobile trembling in her hand. She stared at the screen, her mind racing. Instinctively, she glanced toward the bed, expecting to see Shipra and Patode still tangled in the aftermath of last night. But to her surprise, the bed was empty. They were both gone.

A wave of confusion hit her, and the incessant ringing of the phone only added to her growing panic. She could feel her heart pounding in her chest as the realization dawned on her. Last night, she'd hastily deleted his text, in order to avoid any distraction for Shipra. But Alok must have sensed something was off, and now he was calling, likely full of questions.

Namrata’s pulse quickened. She knew that ignoring the call would only raise suspicion. With a shaky breath, she steadied herself, trying to clear the fog in her mind. Her finger hovered over the screen for a moment before she took a deep breath finally mustering the courage to answer.

"Hello, Namrata... where the hell are you both?" Alok's voice was sharp with frustration and concern, his words cutting through the line. "I’ve been calling since morning. I called last night too, and texted Shipra, but she’s not responding. Is everything okay? Where is she?"

Namrata’s heart raced as she tried to gather herself, her mind scrambling for a plausible excuse. She knew Alok wasn’t just worried—he was suspicious. Forcing herself to remain composed, she responded in the calmest tone she could muster.

"Good morning, Alok...," Namrata said, her voice smooth and composed, her mind racing to keep up with the situation. "Calm down a little, there's no need to worry." She paused, trying to buy herself a moment to think, then continued, "Your wife wasn’t feeling well last night. She had a terrible headache, so I gave her some medicine and she went to bed early. I think the medicine knocked her out pretty good—she’s been sleeping ever since."

Namrata could hear Alok breathing on the other end, his concern not entirely eased. She quickly added, "She’s in her room right now. If you want, I can wake her up, but honestly, I’d rather let her rest a bit longer. She seemed pretty exhausted."

There was a brief silence on the line before Alok exhaled, clearly relieved but still searching for something. "No, it’s okay," he replied, his tone softening. "Did she say anything to you yesterday?"
Namrata’s mind clicked into place. Alok wasn’t just asking about Shipra’s well-being—he was fishing for information. It didn't took long for Namrata to guess something might have happened between the two and it all made sense. They must have had a fight, and now he wanted to know if Shipra had confided in her.

"She tells me everything, Alok," Namrata said, slipping effortlessly into her usual role, her confidence returning. Her eyes sparkled mischievously as she glanced over at the table and saw Shipra’s mangalsutra lying there, discarded from the night before. The symbolic piece, once a reminder of marital commitment, now lay carelessly, almost as if it no longer mattered. Namrata twirled it around her finger, an idea forming in her mind.

"It’s good that you’re concerned," she continued, her tone taking on a slightly teasing edge. "But you should know Shipra is perfectly capable of handling herself. And from now on, she’s going to do things on her terms, as per her wishes. You might want to start giving her a little more freedom, Alok." Namrata's words were playful but edged with a taunt, her gaze fixed on the mangalsutra as she twisted it idly in her hand.

"What does that suppose to mean?" Alok asked, his voice stiffening. He didn’t like her tone, that much was obvious. Namrata’s cryptic words and condescending attitude grated on him, feeding into the tension between them. He’d never liked the way she spoke to him—always smug, always with an air of superiority.

"Nothing, Alok," she replied with a sly chuckle, savoring the control she had in this moment. "I’m just saying Shipra has a lot on her plate right now. And in the future, if you can’t reach her... well, just understand that she’s probably busy with someone." She let the implication hang in the air before adding with a knowing smirk, "I mean something, of course."

Her light laughter echoed through the line, a deliberate effort to antagonize him. Alok was silent for a beat, clearly irritated by her double-edged comment. Namrata knew full well what she was doing, enjoying the subtle power she wielded over him. To her, Alok represented everything she despised—controlling, arrogant, and trapped in his orthodox thinking. He was the embodiment of everything she fought against in men, and she relished every opportunity to remind him that Shipra didn’t need him as much as he thought.

“Well, Namrata, unlike you, she has someone she can rely on—someone who truly cares for her well-being. A family,” Alok said with an exaggerated calm, each word dripping with sarcasm. His tone made it clear that he was taking a jab at Namrata's more liberal, modern approach to relationships. “No matter how busy Shipra gets, she’ll always have time for her family. I’m sure she’ll call me the moment she wakes up.”

Namrata clenched her jaw, the thinly veiled insult landing harder than she expected. Alok had a way of insinuating that her choices—her independence, her refusal to settle for a traditional life—were somehow lesser. And here he was again, acting like his marriage to Shipra made him superior, like Shipra would never dare stray from the path he’d carved out for her.

"Yeah, Alok," she began, her voice steady but laced with irritation, "I’m sure Shipra will call you... right after she’s done taking care of everything else she’s been juggling. And you don't have to be so concerned, she now has someone other than you to rely on for ALL her needs." Namrata couldn’t help but try to get back at Alok even if it meant hinting him about Shipra's amorous activities. "She has me and I will make sure she doesn't miss you or her family much. She's finally out of your control Alok, let her be herself for a while." Namrata said in a casual tone.

There was a pause on the other end, but Alok didn’t back down. “Control?” he said with a smug chuckle. “Oh, Namrata, that’s where you misunderstand. It’s not about control. It’s about love, responsibility. Something I’m not sure you fully understand. Unlike you, who’s been chasing meaningless thrills, she knows where her priorities lie.”

Namrata's irritation flared, her grip on the mangalsutra tightening. Alok’s words cut deeper than she wanted to admit, especially because they hit a sore spot. But she wasn’t about to let him win this verbal sparring match.

"Oh, Alok," she said with a slow, deliberate chuckle. "You really think that, don’t you? That Shipra’s whole world revolves around you? That she’ll always come running back, no matter what?" Her tone was sharp now, almost mocking. "Maybe you don’t know as much about what Shipra as you think you do. Priorities change with time and need, Alok"

Alok’s voice hardened. “What exactly are you implying?”

Namrata smirked, knowing she was pushing all the right buttons. "I’m just saying," she purred, "there’s a side of Shipra you’ve never even come close to seeing. A side she’s kept hidden from everyone, especially from you. And now that she's out of your control, that suppressed part of her is blossoming rather wildly. You might think she’s too busy to pick up your calls, but trust me, she’s busy all right. Busy discovering what it’s like to be with someone who doesn’t hold her back."

Alok’s voice dropped, now more serious, a hint of uncertainty creeping in. “What rubbish are you talking about, Namrata?”

Namrata let out a small laugh, twirling Shipra’s mangalsutra around her finger again, knowing the image would infuriate him. "It's not rubbish. I’m just telling you to be ready. Because the day will come when Shipra won’t rush back to you. Maybe she’s already getting a taste of freedom... and maybe that freedom involves someone else."

She could practically hear Alok’s blood boiling on the other end of the line, his silence filled with growing tension. Namrata felt a twisted sense of satisfaction. This conversation wasn’t just about Shipra—it was about challenging everything Alok thought he had control over. She had no intention of backing down, even if it meant dropping hints about last night’s indulgences with Patode.

"Enjoy your morning, Alok," she added with a final, taunting laugh. "I’m sure Shipra will call you... eventually." She disconnected the call without waiting for Alok to reply.

"That bitch," Alok muttered through gritted teeth, his hand tightening around his phone as if he could crush it in sheer frustration. He knew she had said it deliberately, just to get under his skin. She always did. But this time, her words hit harder than usual—because they fed into the seed of doubt that had already been planted in his mind.

"Always talking nonsense," Alok fumed under his breath. He knew Namrata had a habit of pushing his buttons, playing her little mind games. But this time, something about the way she spoke felt different. Her taunts weren’t just the usual jabs. What did she mean, Shipra was discovering something new? Busy with someone else? His thoughts twisted as his imagination began filling in the blanks. The idea of Shipra—his Shipra—being involved with someone else made his stomach churn.

Alok couldn't get this sick feeling out of his mind and wished Shipra would call him clearing all his doubts.

Namrata, feeling a rush of satisfaction after agitating Alok, threw her phone onto the bed. But her mind quickly shifted to another pressing thought—where were Patode and Shipra? Her memory of the previous night was still hazy, and although she couldn't recall all the details, one thing she remembered was that Patode had followed Shipra to her room late in the night.
A flicker of excitement coursed through Namrata as she considered the possibility—

Had they finally fucked last night?

Did Shipra, her ever-faithful best friend, finally break down and let Patode take her?


Has Patode finally managed to seduce her enough for her to forget all about the terms and condition of their arrangement.\?


Has her friend finally been satisfied sexually and experienced what she has been missing with Alok?


The thought sent a thrill down Namrata's spine. She hurriedly slipped into an oversized t-shirt, her mind racing with vivid images of what might have transpired between them. The idea of Shipra, the loyal wife, finally succumbing to Patode's relentless pursuit was intoxicating. With each step, her anticipation grew, and she couldn’t suppress the arousal building within her.

As she reached the verandah, her suspicions were confirmed—Patode’s shoes were still there. Namrata's excitement heightened; he hadn't left. The idea of Shipra finally indulging in the forbidden stirred a heady mix of curiosity and lust within her. She made her way to Shipra's room, moving as quietly as possible, her heart pounding in her chest. The door was slightly ajar, just enough to peek inside.
Namrata pushed the door open gently, her breath catching as she entered the room. The first thing she noticed was Shipra's shorts discarded carelessly on the floor. Her pulse quickened at the sight, her thoughts racing. But what truly shocked her—and excited her beyond control—was the scene on the bed.

End of Chapter 20: Between Loyalty and Lust  thanks
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(25-09-2024, 03:24 AM)iCuby Wrote:  The story is a masterpiece, my favourite right now. ButYou're dragging.... It's just repeatating.....

Yeah I feel the same.... But I can't help it ... When I start writing it keeps getting lengthier... I guess that's my writing style... I am pretty new at writing so lot's of room for improvement...... I'll try and make it crisp from Chapter 22 though... Next chapter will be lengthy one as well.

Thanks
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(23-09-2024, 08:59 AM)Dilbar420 Wrote:  It would have been better if used a gif

Will add a few in next chapter
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