Adultery A husband's mistakeRunning

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(03-04-2024, 03:26 PM)thunderblunder Wrote:  Sharath is such as asshole. All three, Meena, Raghav and Suk should put him in his place. No wonder Meena is slowly showing off to Raghav, maybe gravitating towards him, maybe one day Sharath will be taught a lesson.

[Image: Sakshi-Agarwal-3036.jpg] Here Suk is angry at Meena

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Meena did not know what he spoke, but she was very angry with Sharath. She was ok with a little teasing and fun, but betrayal of trust was not ok for her. As Meena entered her flat, Sharath was sitting on the bed grinning from ear to ear.
Meena: You fucking son of a bitch. What did you speak to Sukanya?
Sharath gave an irritating laughter. He was a handsome man, but his evil laughter made him look like a demon. He was shamelessly sitting naked. Meena was sure he called like this only, might have shaken his dick while speaking to her.
Sharath: Calm down and come here dear.
Meena refused.
Meena: Get out of her you bastard.
Sharath: I can get out my dear. But you should know what I can do.
He said and laughed like a ghost. Meena clenched her teeth.
Sharath: Come here and bend over.
Meena shut her eyes tightly and moved over to the bed and held the bed pillar as she bent before him. Sharath lifted her nighty and tore her panty. He adjusted himself at the entrance of the ass hole.
Sharath: Punishment for your insolence is that I’m going to fuck your cute ass hole.
Meena: No... Please no. Don’t do it. Please, No…
As she was protesting, he suddenly plunged into her ass hole without a warning or lubrication.
Meena: Don’t, pleaseeeee… She screamed, shutting her mouth.
 
Sukanya came out of the kitchen and saw Meena’s phone on the table. She did not want to answer any more calls from her phone. She also did not blame Meena for what that rascal spoke. She tried to calm down and took the phone to return to Meena. As soon as she opened the door, she heard Meena scream. It was a scream of a pain. Is there pleasure? She was not sure. She thought of rushing back to her flat, but again wanted to see if she is in trouble. She quietly moved to the source of sound. The door was open. As she moved to a spot where she would not be visible, she saw Sharath pounding Meena mercilessly.
Sharath: You deserve to be fucked and fucked mercilessly. I’m going to fuck every hole of yours. You cannot escape me. I’m going to rip your clothes in your own flat and make you kneel down.
Sukanya has had enough of the brutal monster. She quietly placed the phone on the table and tried to move away to the door.
Sharath: I’m going to fuck you like a bitch and stuff my cock into your sexy mouth, Sukanya…
Sukanya suddenly stopped in her tracks. She was shocked that he took her name while fucking Meena. She began to sweat in fear. Was he serious? How would he do it when she won’t cooperate? He is such a beast. She also hated Meena for being an accessory for him. She did not want to stay any longer. She began to move to the door. As she began to walk to the door, she saw Rohan sleeping. How can she fuck like a beast when her child was sleeping in the adjoining room? Just as she approached the door, Rohan began to cry. Looks like he woke up to their noise. She panicked and was terrified what would happen if they come out and see me here. The bastard was in heat and she feared to think what he might do. Would he force upon her? Would he fuck her like he did to Meena? Her brain did not work straight. She wanted to run away but her feet stayed where they were as if they were nailed.
Meena: Leave me. Rohan is crying.
Sharath: It won’t hurt if he cries for some time. I’m not leaving you in the middle.
He said and pounded her like a bull as the bed shook as if it was about to dismantle. He was powerfully thrusting into her ass. She was clenching her teeth in pain. He was getting to the peak. He held the nighty and tore it from the neck. She screamed in pain as the cloth held tightly at her neck as he tore it.
Meena: Leave me you bastard.
Sharath: After I’m done with you.
As he said he threw the shreds of the garment which was clinging to her body in vain. He held the strap of the bra and rudely pulled it. It squeezed her boobs and he threw the bra away too. He spanked her ass very hard.
Phat… phat… phat… The sound of spanking reverberated the room. He held the boobs from behind and pulled her nipple ruthlessly. She screamed in pain.
Sharath: Will you help me fuck Sukanya?
Sukanya’s heart started to beat so hard that she feared someone might hear it.
Meena: No, you fucking bastard. I will not let you ruin her life like you did to me.
Sukanya was glad that she was not a cruel and cunning witch like she imagined. But Sharath was not the one to give up. He began to fuck her like a monster and spanking her hard.
Sharath: Tell me. Will you help me fuck that bitch?
Sukanya was enraged when he used that word for her.
Meena: Never
Sharath: You value your friendship more than your own life and your child’s future right. Great frined you are.
He said and grinned cruelly. Meena sobbed.
Meena: Ok, I’ll help. I’ll help… She sobbed uncontrollably as he began to give short thrusts.
He finally came inside her and pulled his cock rudely from her ass hole. Sukanya knew that Meena would come for Rohan. She quickly and silently opened the door and exited as Meena feebly picked a fresh nighty and wore it without inners. She went to Rohan and fed him milk as she silently wept, thinking about the consequences.
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Hi friends. I have written this update as I had some time. But I'm not sure this is how I want to lead the story. I might alter the course of story. Please share your suggestions.
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(03-04-2024, 06:37 PM)thunderblunder Wrote:  Dude the story took a massively dark turn man. Please dont go down this path. We have enough stories in xossipy and the entire Indian/English/Bengali/Hindi/ etc etc  of these kind of stories with Blackmail, deceit, crime thriller, cuck, brutality, forcing etc etc. Meenas relationship with Sharath could have been a simple FWB/affair relationship for just the purpose of sex and companion ship. Now the story turned from a exciting sexy housewife transformation story into a netflix gritty crime thriller. Even though in the beginning it was revealed Sharath worked in sales and was a family man.

Maybe we as people dont like wholesome stories. But I feel we need that in our lives and also in our sex stories. I like reading the western english stories, but dont find the variety in Indian sex stories sphere. So please dont go down this path.

Thank  you for your honest opinion.
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(03-04-2024, 08:56 PM)zulfique Wrote:  Awesome. Thought she had affair. Is he blackmailing. What the shit.

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(03-04-2024, 11:20 PM)redarc Wrote:  yaa blackmailing and forced doesnt look good, seduction and cheating are more exicting

I agree with you. Thank you for your comment
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(03-04-2024, 11:31 PM)Muralimm Wrote:  Go with the flow don't drop
All the best

Thank you buddy. I'm thinking on that.
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(04-04-2024, 09:42 AM)abhirajfree Wrote:  Superb going . Keep posting

Thank you for your time. Will think about which way to take the story.
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(04-04-2024, 11:49 AM)tweeny_fory Wrote:  wow lovely n hot update bro...
when sukanya mentions she has an idea.. she is turning naughty
looking for more initaitation from suky ...

Sukanya is innocent and I intent to keep it that way.
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(04-04-2024, 01:59 PM)tweeny_fory Wrote:  oh fucking hot dude...
the words I will help are stronger .. with suki knowing the intention, is she easily going to give u or going to get entrangled in the web?

We have had quite a few stories with hardcore sex. I do not want to go down that path. Will decide on the progression of the story
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I posted the latest update in haste and half mind. When I look at the story from outside, I feel that the latest update does not gel with the soul of the story. 
I have seen a few readers enjoy the update and few unhappy with it. I respect readers sentiment. But the progress of the story does justify the characters behavior. Hence I shall share an alternative version and progress from there.
I hope all the readers enjoy the story.
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Xossipy doesn't allow me to copy my own update for editing. Hence I have to write the update afresh. Because all the updates I have written were directly in the update post. I do not have the story saved in my own space. I'll try to share an update by this weekend. Until then please post your views and feedback.
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For your information this is my first story in any forum.
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(04-04-2024, 09:02 PM)RCF Wrote:  In my opinion..there are dozens of stories on both sides of the coin. Seduction where Sukanya slowly but eventually starts affair..other side..blackmail and she gives into Sharath..both sides have been explored ample times on this forum. I would suggest you take mid way path where there won't be hardcore seduction as now Sukanya knows the plan from Sharath and Meena..also there shouldn't be any blackmail. Sukanya should keep it to her that she knows their plan while Sharath plans thinking Sukanya doesn't know his plans..but still Sharath gets succeeded in his games and Sukanya despite knowing the truth falls for him and is tricked. This path is very tricky and needs lot of good plot and not easy to come up with the screenplay.

Thank you for your comment. Please keep reading the upcoming updates
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(05-04-2024, 07:28 AM)pavanbadugu; Wrote:  Both the parts are well explored in many stories , give a twist to the story where sukanya confesses everything to her husband and they trick Sharath and save meena and in the process both enjoy light sexual moments and in the end
the husband gets to enjoy suk throughly and gets his hand s on meena too with wifes support

Thank you for your ideas. Will see how the next update pans out
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(06-04-2024, 12:41 PM)tweeny_fory Wrote:  definitely a different thought and i see the way the story may move, but this should not end up on suky getting exposed n doing more daring n naughty for her hubby..that was the main plan of the hubby

Please keep reading the further updates
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(06-04-2024, 09:08 PM)LustyLeo Wrote:  super updates come soon

Will try to post an update today
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(08-04-2024, 10:38 PM)xossissippi Wrote:  Great story writing! Absolutely loved the slow build-up so far.

The way you built up Sukanya's character is very amazing. She's shy and incredibly beautiful but rapidly adopting to please her husband, what a dutiful wife.
Can you also write her perspective as how she's feeling inside when things are getting heated. How erotic she's feeling, how her mind is taking over, how her breathing is high, how her pussy is leaking etc.

How she's torn between values and tradition and equally horny. These things add to eroticism. I incredibly love her character. Her character progression has been great up to now. She's slowly finding comfort in being without inners that is very erotic! The husband is training her well.

The seduction game set forth by Sharath is well written. The last update was extremely erotic especially the part where now Sukanya knows their game plan. Now what does she do?? Does she inform her husband about it or does she skip that part to husband and play along with Meena's games thinking that she'll outsmart them.

We are yet to see what is that "Husband's Mistake"! Can't wait for the next update,

don't bother too much by overwhelming response for the last update being turning into forced one... So far the seduction game has been strong and I trust the author's plan on how it will make sense in the future updates and why they're behaving the way they are behaving.

Thank you for taking your time out to write a response. The Husband's mistake will be a highlight update from where things take a different turn
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(08-04-2024, 10:39 PM)abhirajfree Wrote:  Kaha busy ho gaye, jald update dejiye...

Watch out for an update today
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(09-04-2024, 01:56 AM)Sanchita Wrote:  Wow nice keep going I can imagine myself from sukanya character

Thank you Sanchita. Glad you are able to connect. Keep reading the upcoming updates.
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