(04-08-2024, 05:14 PM)SanjuR Wrote: Nice update bro. Please continue.
Sukanya discloses everything to her husband. After that he makes sukanya nude and make her high. Once she reaches high. He send her to knock Meena house like that only and goes to Sharath ....
Make it more erotic as she is ok with Sharath.
(04-08-2024, 05:48 PM)fuckandforget Wrote: Hot start of relationship between sukanya and sharath.
Now suk can message Raghava not to come home in the night and come after two days and she can take sharath to her home and fuck her for the two days and three nights and clear the debts. After that poor Raghava will not feel her pussy tight and she will not feel her husband dick. She will be left with no option to go back to sharath again and again and finally get impregnated by him. The biggest gift she can give for saving her life.
(04-08-2024, 09:45 PM)me.you Wrote: Hi Rahul,
I guess this is your first story. For all writers, their first stories so special they dont like to end it. Somehow they will find a reason to continue. But, for this story the ending was perfect. you make so many imagination to readers, thats is the success of that story. if you like to continue the story with same charactors , sukanya bang with sharath or others and Raghav bang with meena and others, please better open a new thread. Atleast for us ( sukanya lovers) let this story completed as it is. U can continue with new thread with new scenes whatever needs. Its a humble request, and i guess every one will accept this. Because there is no any harm to story if you start a new thread. You can start like " husband mistake Part two". But Please let this thread end with this ending. I hope you are not running behind ratings and viewership. i think my request is legit and no harm to any one.
(05-08-2024, 06:37 AM)opheliyaa Wrote: It is always better to leave certain things to the imagination of readers for the story like this. The husband might be broad minded but, I think restarting another affair with a man who is already in love with a widow is something not needed. Just my opinion.
(05-08-2024, 09:47 PM)me.you Wrote: Hi Rahul, Dont think we are demotivating you. Its a small request from our side. we always apreciate ur work. Always try to write with minimum justice like this story. I am not a reader who always say super update , hot update. My comments are always constructive.I hope i did not hurt ur self.
(06-08-2024, 01:30 PM)tweeny_fory Wrote: lovely bro.. it was soft erotica n loved the small touches an emotion building between them....
i think slowly suki n sharath will get to gether....
eagerly waiting to know what raghav has in his minds.. may be more daring games in home or have a joint game between both couples?
(08-08-2024, 02:24 AM)magneticpersonality Wrote: Excellent narration.
Superb progress in the story.
Waiting for more erotic kinky stuffs in public places like Theatre, Amusement Parks etc..
Will be a good idea to have some erotic moments in a bus travel, if possible then kindly consider.
(15-08-2024, 07:58 AM)andhratochennai Wrote: nice update..
but it feels nice to read, if sukanya feels shy and emrassed everytime she meets sarath reembering the fact that he had seen her nude and she tries to cvover her body from him again......
sarath story would have taken in different way giving him ways to seduce sukanya slowly and it would have been more nice if sukanya doesnt want to have sex with him but fall in that by situation over time...
I didnt like the line that sukanya taking the move in water to place his hand on her boob..
now it is not so exciting when sarath touching her...
please bring someshyness in sukanya..
Thank you so much for this story...
but i am disappointed for vimals death and his very bad rowdy behaviour in the last..
