[Udaybhanu]

Ok dosto jaisa ki mene wada kiya tha ki me bahat jald hi NUSHRAT AUR KALLU ka story arc likhne wala hu. Wo wada me pura kar raha hu so dosto mere ish story ko bhi utna hi pyaar dijiye jitna mere purane story ko de rahe hai.

[Udaybhanu]

Bhai maano ke na maano lekin Nusrat ki Kallu ki sab kuch hai. Kallu aur Nusrat ki hi happy ending ho. Kareena nahi Nusrat aur Kallu ka love ending.

Demand ke hisab se hi story likhunga me

[Udaybhanu]

Bhai main to sirf keh raha tha. Lekin ek baat hai bhai life mein happy ending banta hai. Agar Kallu nahi to Hariya ya phir bikhari sahi lekin koi is aurat ko apna le aur shaadi karke lifetime apne paas rakhe lekin Kallu isiliye kyonki Kareena se pehle is aurat ne ise sab kuch diya to yehi Kallu ka bachcha deserve karti hai aur sindoor aur mangalsutra bhi.

Basic bhai Thank you apna suggestion dene ke liye kuchh na kuchh to hoga hi Nushrat ke saath. Connected rahiye.

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WAITING BHAI U R THE BEST HERE

For the new story.

Thank you dosto bahat jald pehla update aajaaega.

[Udaybhanu]

C O N G R A T U L A T I O N S 

Thank you Baban bhai

Best of luck uday bhai....

Thank you Ajanmol bhai

Mera bese ye pehle se hi plan tha ishiliye parallel me dono story ko aagey badhaunga.

[Udaybhanu]

Bc pic kha se laya bhai dekhte hi lund bgawat kar baita 

Really...... Ek toh aisi khoobsurat haseena, upar se aisi dress... Ufffffffffffff..... Hum mardon ko kya kya sahen karna parta hai yaar

Hehehehe internet bhai bengal ki bahat badi heroine hai ye sirf heroine hi nahi MLA bhi hai. Lekin story bilkul fantasy hogi.

[Udaybhanu]

Koi maane ya naa mane bengali girls chahe woh koi actress ya non celeb..... Jo khoobsurat hoti hai woh itni khoobsurat hoti hai ke ufffff kya batau. ❤

True hai Baban bhai

[Udaybhanu]

Udaybhanu ji ... kiya kheyal hain ?

Parimoni Bangladeshi actress bahat achhi hai. Bahat achha khayal hai dost.

[Udaybhanu]

Update 1......






Introduction.......






Ye kahani ki surwat hoti hai salo pehle jab Kallu ka bhi ek aprivar tha ek beta ek beti aur ek Biwi bhi thi.

Beta ka naam SHYAM

Beti ka naam LAXMI

Biwi ka naam  PADMA.


Aur Kahani ke dusre kirdaar.......


MLA Raghunath (Ye aadmi Kallu jis ilake me rehta hai waha ka MLA hai jaise ko maximum politician hote hai ye bhi Bada hi jaalim aur lalchi aadmi hai. Masum janta ki mehnat ka paisa sarkar se laake bade maze se khata hai.)


Raghunath ki Biwi....... RAMBHA.



Ye Raghunath ki dusri biwi hai pehli biwi kuchh saal pehle hi guzar gayi to Raghunath ne apne power ka istemal karke ye shaadi kiya tha.


Raghunath ki beta....... Nikhil....

Ye jaalim aur laalachpan me apne baap se bhi 2 kadam aagey hai. Ye apne baap ke liye political murders bhi krta hai. Ab tak ishke naam ke 14 Murder aur 20 bang ka case chal raha hai lekin. Ye sirf file banke security officer station me pada hua hai. security officer bhi Raghunath ke ghar pe haath daalne se darti hai.


Raghunath ki Bahu....... Nushrat



Nushrat aur Nikhil ek hi College me padhte the ishiliye dono me pyaar ho gaya aur dono ne shaadi bhi kr liya. Nushrat kuchh kam ghamandi nahi hai ushe kamjor aur majboor logo ko parishaan karna me bada maza aata hai.

Raghunath ki beti bhi hai jo seher me reh kar padhai kar rahi hai aur ushka introduction story ke demand ke hisab se aagey hogi.


Baaki ke character story ke progress ke saath introduce karunga.




STORY.......


Jaise ki hum purane story se jaante hai ki Kallu kitna ghinona aadmi hai. Koi bhi aadmi pehle se hi kamina ya harami nahi hota hai haalat kese ek sidha aadmi ko itna kamina bana diya hai wo hum ish kahani se jaanenge.


Kallu bhi ek aam aadmi tha jiski ek biwi thi ek beta tha ek beti thi bhara pura parivaar tha. Lekin kismat ka khel esha hua ki ushka sab kuchh loot gaya.


Kallu ka ek khet tha jisme Kallu aur ushka beta shyam dono hi kaam krte the jo bhi income hota tha pura pariwar khusi se rehta tha lekin pichhle saal bahat jyada sukha pada jisse pura gaon ka paani sukh gaya to gujara nikalne ke liye sare gaon wale waha ke MLA Raghunath ke paas gaye. Raghunath ne paisa to diya lekin badle pure gaon walo ke kheto par kabja kar diya. Aur ab pura gaon apne hi khet me naukar ban ke liye huye paiso ka bhuktan kar rahe hai. Gaon ke log pareshani me to the lekin MLA ke khilaf koi bhi jaane ki himmat nahi kr paa raha tha. Sabse jyada log Raghunath ka beta Nikhil se darte the kyunki kamina gaon ki har ladki ko buri nazar se dekhta tha aur apne baap ke liye political murders bhi krta tha.



Fir ek din sab badal gaya......

PADMA....... Laxmi o laxmi me Bazaar ja rahi hu tu baapu aur bhaiya ko khana bana lena dono ko aaj jaldi se khet me jana hai. Maalik bulaye hai jaldi se jaane ke liye.

Laxmi....... Thik hai MAA tum jaao me sab kar lungi.

Thodi der me Kallu aur Shyam khana khake jaldi se kaam ko nikal jaate hai. Gaon ke sare log majdur banke Raghunath ke kheto me pahunch chuke the ye dono baap bete thodi deri me pahunchte hai ishiliye kheto ka pehra dene wale Raghunath ke aadmi dono ko bahat gaali dete hai.

Aadmi 1- Madarchod dono BAAP Bete itna deri se aaye ho khet me kaam karne lagta hai Nikhil baba ka jute ki pitai bhul gaye ho dono.

Kallu..... Nahi nahi sahab esha julum mat kijiye. Agli baar se aur jaldi aaenge.

Aadmi 2- Chalo jaldi se kaam karo kheto me thodi dere Nikhil baba bhi aajayenge yaha.


Kallu aur Shyam dono hi khet me ghush jaaye hai Shyam ko bada gussa aaraha tha.

Shyam...... Baapu aap kyu hamesha gaali khane ish harami MLA ke khet me aajate ho. Agar hamara khet wo kabza kr liya hai to jaane dijiye khet ko. Hum log seher chale jaayenge aur waha kuchh na kuchh kaam karke apna guzara kar lenge.


Kallu...... Beta gussa mat kar ye zameen hamari MAA hai aur kheti ke alawa hume kuch aur bhi to nahi aata hai.


Tabhi ek lamba sa gaadi aata hai jiske ander se Nikhil nikalta hai.

Nikhil ke saath aaj ushki biwi nushrat bhi thi jo kale rang ka goggle pehen ke gadi ke ander bethi huyi thi.


Shyam....... Dekho jara maharani ko gaadi me baith kar bhi chasma pehni huyi hai itna ghamand kisika nahi raha hai ishka bhi nahi rahega.



Kallu.... Chup hoja beta koi sun liya to bahat pitayi hogi.

Nikhil............ Aaj kaun late aaya tha kaam par.

Aadmi 1... Ji maalik wo budhha Kallu aur ushka beta Shyam aaj bhi late the.

Nikhil..... Dono kutto ke account se aaj 300 rupaye minus kar do.

Shyam..... Maalik itna kathor mat baniye ghar me meri budhi MAA hai aur ek chhoti behen hai un dono ko kaam karne me thoda late ho jaata hai.


Nikhil...... Kya umar hogi teri behen ki.

Shyam..... Ji 25 saal ki hai jald hi shaadi karwa dunga.

Nikhil..... Shaadi karwane ki kya jarurat hai haweli pe vej de ek raat ke liye phir pura mahina kaam kiye bina baithna dono BAAP Bete.


Ye sunte hi shyam ka khun khaul uthta hai. Wo kichad utha ke Nikhil par fek deta hai.

Nikhil...... Teri ye himmat tu mujh par haath uthaya dekh kya rahe ho 100 kode lagao ish namak haram ko.


Kallu daud ke aake Nikhil ka pair pakad leta hai......
 Maalik daya karo Malik galati ho gayi hai mere bete se maaf kr do Maalik.


Lekin Nikhil ek bhi nahi sunta aur Kallu aur Shyam dono ki jam kar pitayi karwata hai wohi gaadi ke ander baithi Nushrat ko maano koi asar hi nahi pad raha tha wo dono Nirdosh BAAP Bete Ko pitne ka Video bana rahi thi mobile se.


Fir jab Nikhil ka gussa shant hua tab wo bolta hai......... Dono ko aaj koi paisa mat do aaj bhukha rehne do dono ko tabhi pata chalega mere upar kichad fekne ka natija.


Nushrat...... Chalo na Nikhil ab kya yehi pura din nikaloge. Aaj tum mujhe gaadi chalana bhi sikhane wale ho tum. Jaldi aao na.


Dono Pati patni gaadi me nikal jaate hai. Aur gaadi Nushrat chala rahi thi jisko gaadi chalana nahi aarha tha wo kabhi left me chala rahi thi to kabhi right me ghuma rahi thi lekin fir bhi drive ko gaon ke raste me chalana sikh rahi thi.


Thode samay baad shaam ho jaati hai aur Dono BAAP Bete bina aaj ka tankha liye ghar wapas aate hai to dekhte hai ki ghar ke samne bhid lagi padi hai.

Dono ko kuchh samajh nahi aata hai dono daud kar jab ghar ke ander jaate hai to dekhte hai ki Kallu ki biwi Padma bed par padi huyi hai aur ushke shir par gehri chot lagi hai.



To be continued............

[Udaybhanu]

very very nice and excellent start! Brother, please  add a super beautiful daughter of Raghunath.

Brother as the story progresses she will also be added. And thank you

woow! Superb! Excellent and wonderful starting!!

Thank you bro

Well well!! Now we are going to enjoy another blockbuster story. Excellent start!

Thank you Introvert.

[Udaybhanu]

lajawab shuruaat

Thank you so much bhai

[Udaybhanu]

Shandar, lajawab shuruaat

Thank you Raghu bhai

Simply superb uday bhai....aap toh jadugar hai....hats off....ab dekhna hai aage qa hota hai....

Thank you Ajanmol bhai aap bhi kuchh kam nahi ho. Me jadugar to aap to tantrik ho. 

[Udaybhanu]

Bhai add daughter as alia bhatt or shraddha kapoor or some young bollywood actress

Bilkul bhai ek poll dalunga jisko jyada vote milga wohi beti banegi. Don't worry completely readers ke upar hogi 3rd character ishiliye to khali chhoda hu. Sare readers ke liye.

Tabhi sochu aisi khoobsurat aurat kallu je sath kaise...... Ab sab connection samajh me aa raha hai.waah uday bhai... Kua shuruaat hai. Actually humara mind set hota hai ke ek character ko abtak jis nazaar se dekhta ayaa, achanak usko ek alaag hi roop mein dekhne miley toh thora mushkil hota hai usko alaag nazar se dekhna. Lekin Koi bhi janam se ghinona ya ghatiya nahi hota... Koi apne marzi se hota hai, ya toh koi majbur ho jata hai kyunki dunia usey majboor karta hai.

Mujhe toh woh gaana yaad aa gaya -

Main bhi sharafaat se jeeta magaar
Mujhko sharifo se lagta tha darr
Sabko lagaa main kamzor hoon
Main aaj isliye kuch aur hoon...

Nyaak nahi............ (Rest is history)

Baban bhai aap se hi sikha hu story me twist dena.

[Udaybhanu]

SUPERB

Thank you bhai

[Udaybhanu]

Nusrat aur Kallu lagta hai ek doosre ke liye bane hai. Waqt ke saath badla, hawas aur phir end mein love.

Bahat zald hi update aaega stay connected

[Udaybhanu]

Nice start... cant wait for the seduction part

Thank you Mgaya aap wo original wale Mgaya to nahi ho jinhone Aslam ki Rand Dr Kamya likhe the.

Nice start bhai......

Thank you bhai

[Udaybhanu]

I am...Maine likhi thi aur baad main xmask ne continue ki thi

Big fan bhai apke story ka lekin wo story ko bhi adhura kyu chhoda aapne

[Udaybhanu]

Kirdaar abhi bhi baki hain !!  :shy:

Bikul bhai

[Udaybhanu]

Never intended to...but then due yo some family issues...was unable to allocate time for the story...Also neg commets considering the theme were more then encouraging comments...and then XMask picked it up... so it was not stopped...and I was not feeling guilty ...to leave story...?...tried starting another story.. but realised...it wont be easy to give time like that since i started job and got married..!! So just stopped writting.. !!
Sorry.. but will write something when I have time to write one...I have few ideas ready...just outline!

It's ok bhai I completely understand your situation. But thanks anyway your are also my inspiration

Kallu ko khalnayak aur agresive banao Story ka

.Sab hoga bhai ye Kallu ka arc hai

[Udaybhanu]

Update 2



Kallu aur Shyam dono apne ghar ke bahar lage bhid ko dekh ke chaunk jaate hai aur daudte huye ghar ke ander ghuste hai to Padma ki haalat dekh kar pura pariwar darr jaata hai.


Padma ka shir fata hua tha jiske upar kapda bandha hua tha aur pura sarir pe chot laga hua tha.


Shyam gusse se....... Aye laxmi MAA ko dawakhana leke kyu nahi gayi tu.


Laxmi....... Bhai paise nahi hai mere paas ishiliye me aapka intezar kr rahi thi Hariya Chacha ko phone me bola hu wo apna tempo leke aarahe hai.


Kallu...... Tu hariya ko kyu boli bada hi kamina inshaan hai. Gaon me abhi bhi chori krta rehta hai. Ushe logo ke halat par koi taras nahi aata hai.


Shyam...... Koi baat nahi baapu abhi MAA ko bas dawakhana leke jaana hai baaki baat baadme dekhenge.



Thodi der me tempo leke Hariya aajata hai.


Hariya...... Kallu leke aaja teri biwi ko paise nahi lunga tujhse bachpan ke dost jo hai hum dono.


Kallu...... Agar meri biwi ki eshi haalat nahi hoti to kabhi bhi teri madat nahi leta. Thu hai teri dosti par.


Hariya....... Tu abhi bhi mujh par gussa hai kyunki mene tere ghar se chori kiya tha aur wo bhi sirf 1100 rupaye. Chal thik hai tu maafi de ya naa de abhi bhabhi ko leke dawakhana chal.   Aye shyam dekh kya raha hai bhabhi ko leke aake tampo me bitha tera baap aur mera jhagda to puri zindagi chalti rahegi.


Fir kuchh gaon walo ki madat se Padma ko gaadi me bitha ke sab log hospital leke aajate hai. Jo ki thodi dur seher me tha.


HOSPITAL ME.......


Doctor....... Bahat blood loss ho gaya hai aur brain me blood clotting kr gaya hai ishiliye immediately operation karna hoga aap paiso ka intezam kijiye jaldi. Nahi to patient ko hum bacha nahi paaenge.



Kallu, Shyam aur laxmi ye baat sunke unka hosh hi Ud jaata hai.

Shyam...... Karib kitna paisa lagega.

Doctor...... Total 3 lakh ke karib kharcha aaega jaldi kijiye.

Shyam aur Kallu, Laxmi ko wohi hospital me chhod ke turant hi Raghunath ke ghar bhagte hai.


Hariya apne tempo me betha ke dono BAAP Bete ke saath aata hai Raghunath ke ghar.

Raste me......

Hariya....... Kallu chinta mat kar bhabhi thik ho jaaegi. Raghunath sahab ko sab chiz bolna wo jarur madat karenge tera.


Shyam...... Baapu aap chinta mat kijiye me hu na MAA ko kuchh hone nahi dunga.


Kallu, Shyam aur Hariya teeno Raghunath ke ghar pahunch jaate hai.

Security...... Arey kaha chale aaye ho dono chalo bhago yaha se.

Kallu..... Bhai hume ander jaane de bahat zaruri kaam hai maalik se.


Wohi dur khada Raghunath ki Biwi Rambha khadi thi.





Rambha...... Kaun ayaa hai.? Ander aane do.


Kallu aur Shyam......... Dhanyawad maalkin thoda maalik se milna tha.


Rambha........ Kutte suna hai aaj tere bete ne mere bete par kichad feka tha.

Ye sunke Kallu ka shir niche jhuk jaata hai.

Rambha...... Bolna suwar tum log bhul gaye ki hum log kaun hai hum log jaha thukte hai waha tum log kaam karte ho aur tumlogo ki itni himmat ki tum logo ne hamare pariwar par kichad uchhala hai.


Kallu ghutne ke bal baith jata hai aur bolta hai........ Maalkin mere bete se galati ho gayi hai hume maaf kar dijiye. Bas maalik se milne dijiye.


Raghunath......... Kya hua hai Rambha kaun aaya hai ?


Rambha........ Kuchh majdoor aaye huye hai aapse milne.


Raghunath......... Kya hua hai aur kyu aaye ho yaha.?


Kallu....... Maalik gajab ho gaya hai meri madat kijiye. Meri Biwi dawakhana me hai kuchh paise chahiye operation karne ke liye.

Raghunath........ To kitna paisa chahiye ?


Kallu....... Maalik 3 lakh.

Raghunath....... Hehehehe sala suwar kahika paisa chahiye wo bhi 3 lakh hehehehe


Rambha......... Oji sunte ho ye wohi ladka hai jo aaj Nikhil par kichad uchhala tha.(Shyam ki isara krte huye)


Shyam haath jod kar Raghunath ka pair pakad leta hai........ Maalik mujhse galati ho gayi hai meri saza mere MAA ko mat dijiye.


Raghunath....... Thik hai thik hai chalo mere bete ka gaadi me kuchh gandagi laga hua hai tum dono jao aur gaadi ko saaf kar do fir me paisa dunga.


Dono BAAP Bete turant hi gaadi dhone nikal jaate hai jab wo dono gaadi ko dekhte hai to darr hi jaate hai. 

Kyunki gaadi ke samne ke hisse me khoon laga hua tha. Pata nahi gaadi par ye kiska khoon tha.


Raghunath...... Jaldi karo nahi to paisa nahi dunga.


Dono turant hi gaadi dhone lagte hai aur gaadi pe laga khoon ko achhe se saaf karte hai. Saaf hone ke baad dono Raghunath ke pass jaate hai.


Kallu...... Maalik gaadi saaf ho gayi hai ab mere paise.


Raghunath apne jeb se 1 rupaye ka sikka nikal ke dekta hai.


Raghunath....... Leja yehi hai tera paisa.

Fir dono RAMBHA aur Raghunath hasne lagte hai.


Tabhi Nikhil aur Nushrat bahar aate hai.


Nikhil...... Kyu buddhe mil gaya paisa chal bhag yaha se.


Shyam....... Ye julum mat kijiye Maalik aaj paisa de dijiye me puri zindagi aapke kheto me kaam karunga muft me.


Nikhil hasta hua........ Kyube kutte kaha gayi teri hekdi kichad feka tha na mere pe. Ja apni behen ko leke aa tab jaake ek mahina meri rakhel banne ke badle 3 lakh le lena.



Ye baat sunke shyam ko itna gussa aata hai ki wo Nikhil ko pakad ke pitna chalu kr deta hai. Shyam kafi hatta katta tha to wo Nikhil pe lafi bhari pad raha tha shyam ka ek thappad se Nikhil behosh ho jaata hai.


Lekin tabhi Raghunath ke aadmi aake Shyam aur Kallu dono ko pakad ke baandh dete hai.



Nushrat... Teri itni himmat suwar ki tu mere pati par haath uthaya.

Ye bolte huye Nushrat Shyam ke pairo ke bich me ek laat marti hai. Aur Shyam dard  ke mare niche gir jaata hai.

Nushrat haste huye....... Teri MAA ko aaj mene hi apne gaadi se udaya tha. Kya kr lega kutte tu??
Tum dono bewakuf apne hi MAA aur biwi ka khoon saaf kr rahe the hamare gaadi se.

Aur ye kehte huye Raghunath aur ushke sare log hasne lagte hai. Aur Nushrat to maza le rahi thi ye sab ka.



Kallu aur Shyam dono hi wohi par pade ro rahe the.

Kallu...... Maalik paise dene ki jarurat nahi hai hum dono ko ab jaane dijiye me kahi aur se paisa udhar le lunga.


Raghunath....... Kallu baat ye hai ki paisa to me dene wala nahi tha tujhe lekin tere bete ne mere bete par haath uthaya hai wo bhi ishiliye kyunki mere bete ne teri beti ko apna rakhel banake rakhna chahta tha ishiliye.

Ab tum dono ki saza yehi hai ki ab tumhari beti ko me aur mere aadmi sab milke apni ek raat ki rakhel banaenge.

Ye sunte hi Kallu aur Shyam dono ke aankho me aansu aajate hai.

Shyam...... Raghunath sirf ek baar mere haath khol de tera jabaan khinch lunga me.

Raghunath...... Esha hai kya. To thik hai tere samne hi teri behen ka izzat uatarega mera beta aur me aur fir mere ye aadmi bhi.

Ye kehta hua Raghunath apne aadmi logo ko ishara kr deta hai ushke aadmi sab gaadi leke hospital ki wor jaate hai. Aur kuchh aadmi Kallu aur Shyam ko pit rahe the.



To be continued...........

[Udaybhanu]

Bhai ya story adultery hai ya thriller......

Koi thriller nahi hai bhai sidha sa story hai ishiliye pehle se hi sab clear hai.

This prequel is going superb!!
Ab kallu ka character kuch kuch samajh mein aa raha hai..... Ke uske liye jawaan aurat kya hai... Hamesha har khoobsurat aurat ke chere pe sirf ek hi chehra nazaar ataa hai usko. Uska mental situation ab samajh me aa raha hai.

Bilkul baban bhai esha hi hai

Areeyyy yeh to bahut boora hua Kallu ke saath. Yaar Nusrat itni gandi soch ? Kasam se poora parivaar gandi soch aur dil rakhte hai. Sharam aani chahiye inko.seriously......

Badla mazedar hogA Kallu ka