[Udaybhanu]

Nice plot waiting awesome picture selection

Thank you

Superb story...this story have potential to surpass your last story too...make it as kinky as possible for revenge... include Raghunath's daughter...Nasrath's sister...also awaiting the part where kallu learned hypnosis

I will try my best.

[Udaybhanu]

Nice update bro!

Thank you bhai

[Udaybhanu]

bahut bahut shandar aur lajawab tharika se likha shuro kya aapne bhai

Thank you bhai

[Udaybhanu]

SUPERB BHAI... IS LOCKDOWN MEIN AAP KA HI SAHARA HAI

Arey bhai bahat sare writer hai mere se bhi achhe wo story bhi try karo. Aur bhagwan kare jaldi lockdown hatey aur situation thik ho.

[Udaybhanu]

 Update 3.......



Kall.u ko ushke samne hi Raghunath pit raha tha aur Shyam ki chhikhe pura ilaka gunz raha tha.



Kallu....... Maalik chhod dijiye maalik galati ho gayi hai humse maalik chhod dijiye.


Kallu ki koi bhi baat Raghunath sun nahi raha tha aur Raghunath ko ek thappad lagata hai aur kehta hai........ Chhod du tere bete ko ushe dikhaunga ki mere bete pe haath uthane ka kya matlab hota hai.


Tabhi Raghunath ke aadmi log laxmi ko utha ke leke aajate hai. Laxmi apne baap aur bhai ka haalat dekh kar daar jaati hai aur kehti hai....... Maalik ye kya hai aap mere bhai aur baapu ko kyu maar rahe ho.


Raghunath........ Arey tera bhai teri bahat izzat karta hai tere bhai aur baap ke liye tu kya kar sakti hai.


Laxmi....... Kuchh bhi karungi maalik chhod dijiye unhe.


Raghunath......... Agar tu apna saree khol degi to tere bhai ko chhod dunga.


Laxmi ye sunke ushka hosh udh jaati hai....... Ye kya keh rahe ho maalik.


Raghunath....... Sach bol raha hu nahi maar maar ke jaan le lunga dono ki.


Laxmi darr ke maare apna saree khol deti hai. Aur Raghunath Shyam ka haath aur pair khol deta hai lekin ushme taqat hi nahi tha ki wo kuchh kar paaye wo muhbke bal zameen me pada hua tha aur ro raha tha.


Shyam haath jod te Raghunath se kehta hai........ Maalik chhod do meri behen ko. Wo abhi bachchi hai.


Raghunath laxmi ka badan ki wor dekhte huye kehta hai...... Ye kaha se bachchi hai, ye to kafi badi ho gayi hai.




Raghunath........ Chal ab apna blouse aur petticoat ko bhi khol degi to 3 lakh rupaye bhi dunga jisse tu apne MAA ka ilaz karwa sakti hai. Agar natak karegi to teri MAA mar jaaegi, soch le.


Laxmi rote huye........ Maalik me sab karungi mere pariwar ko bacha lijiye.


Kallu...... Nahi beti nahi yehi log hai jinhone Padma ki eshi halat kiye hai beti ye log koi madat nahi karenge.


Laxmi ye sunte hi thapad mar deti hai Raghunath ko. Wohi dur khadi Rambha bolti hai......... Ye bhi apne baap aur bhai jaisi hai ishko bhi sabakh sikhaiye nahi to gaon me hamari kya izzat rahegi.


Raghunath wohi sabke samne Laxmi ka kapde faad deta hai aur Laxmi apne baap aur bhai ke samne hi nangi khadi thi wo apne sarir ko apne haathon se dhakne lagti hai lekin Raghunath wohi par hi Laxmi ko niche leta deta hai aur apna chhota sa Lulli bahar nikalta hai jo ki 4 inch ka tha aur bahat patla bhi wo sabke samne hi Laxmi ka balatkar kar deta hai. Laxmi wohi zameen par pade ro rahi thi.


Shyam apna sarir ka sara taqat milake ek akhri baar Raghunath ko marne uthta hai lekin Raghunath apne aadmi se banduk leke sidha hi Shyam ko goli maar deta hai.


Laxmi....... Me tujhe chhodungi nahi Raghunath mere ye shraap hai ki jaise tune sirf maze ke liye mere pariwar ka naash kar diya bilkul bese hi tere pariwar ka bhi naash ho jaaega. Tu bhi tadpega apne bahu, beti aur biwi ke liye lekin tujhe kabhi Shanti nahi milegi.


Ye sunte hi Raghunath ka gussa itna badh jaata hai ki wo Laxmi ko bhi goli maar deta hai jisse Kallu ko aankho ke samne hi ushka Jawan beta aur beti dono mar chuke the.


Rambha tabhi 3 laakh rupaye laake Kallu ke samne rek deti hai.



Rambha....... Ye le Kallu 3 lakh rupaye ja aapni biwi ko bacha le.Hamshe takarane ka yehi natiza hota hai agar teri beti ko tu pehle hi leke aajta to tera beta nahi marta tujhe kya lagta hai mera pati aur beta yaha gaon ke kitne aurton ka izzat luta hai lekin koi tere pariwar jaisa nahi tha.


Ye kehta hua Rambha Kallu ka rashi khol deti hai to Kallu paisa leke sidha hospital bhagta hai.


Hospital me.........


Doctor....... Sorry aap bahat late ho gaaye hai paiso ke bina me operation nahi kar sakta tha aur ab patient mar chuki hai ab me kuchh nahi kar Sakta.



Ek hi din me Kallu ka pura pariwar khatam ho chuka tha ushka jeene ki umeed khatam ho chuki thi. Kallu apne Biwi,beta aur beti ka antim sanskar karta hai aur security officer bhi har baar ki tarah ish baar bhi baat ko daba deti hai.




Kallu ab puri tarah se tut chuka tha ab ushko jeene ki chah khatam ho chuki thi aur jiye kiske liye jo bhi tha Kallu ka wo ushka pariwar tha. Ab wo pariwar nahi raha Raghunath ka ahankar ne Kallu jaise ek aam aadmi ka sab kuchh loot liya tha. Raghunath kuchh nahi maze se apna life ji raha tha wohi Kallu apne family ke barbadi pe ro raha tha. 



After 1 year.........



Kallu sab kuchh chhod deta hai ushe hosh hi nahi tha sharab pike raste me sabko gaali dena chalu kr deta hai. Ghar a khet sab kuchh bech deta hai aur gaon ke bahar ek chhota sa jhopda bana ke rehta hai. Nahana aur daant ka brush karna to bhul hi gaya tha jiske wajah se ushke muh aur sarir se bahat jyada badbu aane laga hai wo itna Zyada ganda ho chuka tha ki ush par ab makhi bin binane lagi hai ushka daant pura kala pila ho chuka tha kyunki hamesha ya to tambakhu khata tha ya to sharab pita tha. Ab wo pura barbaad ho chuka hai. Ab ushka pehnawa bhi badal chuka hai kapde dhul mitti se gande rehte the kyunki wo sarab pikey hamesha raste me pada hua rehta tha. Ab ushka koi dost nahi tha ushke padosi bhi ab ushse dur bhagte hai. Wo sirf ek lungi aur shirt pehen ke ghumta rehta hai jo jagah jagah se fat chuka tha. Pure sarir par baal hi baal tha dadhi muchh sab badh chuke the ek pagal bhikhari lagta tha wo aur ushke ek bhikhariyo ka gang bhi tha jo gaon ki aurat logo ko dekh ke gandi gandi baatein karte the. Kyunki wo baatein hi kar sakte the kisiko paa to nahi sakte the. Aur Kallu unlogo ka bada dost ban gaya tha kyunki wo bhi unlogo ke saath baith kar kabhi kabhi bhikh bhi maangta tha aur gaon ki aurton ko galat nazar se dekhta tha aur jaake sasti randi chodta tha.




Kallu ka din ka surwat hota tha sarab aur juye se pura din wo jua khelta tha aur raat ko juye ke paise se sasti randiya jo 50 rupaye milti thi unhe chodta tha. Kabhi kabhi to 50 rupye ki randiya bhi ushse chudti nahi thi kyunki ek to itna ganda badbu aata tha ushme se aur ushke saath saath KALLU ke paas ek musal kala lund tha jo 10 inch lamba aur 4 inch mota tha jiski wajah se kai randiya ek baar chudne ke baad kisi aur se chud hi nahi paati thi kyunki bahat dard hota tha unsab Randiyo ko. Wohi kuchh Randiya Kallu ko dekhte hi ushse chudne ke liye tayar ho jaati thi kyunki ek baar chudayi se Kallu unhe wo sukh deta tha jo koi aur unhe nahi de pata tha. Itne badbu ke wabajud ye randiya Kallu ki diwani thi. Ishiliye kabhi kabhi Kallu se chudne ke baad bhi ushse paise nahi leti thi.




Kallu ka din ab eshe hi barbadi me bidta jaa raha tha, ki fir ek din.........








To be continued............

Wait for the next update.

[Udaybhanu]

Purani tahkuro wali hindi filmon jaisa scene laga...? good going

Thank you

[Udaybhanu]

Bht hi bakwas story ha yeh bhai! Ise mat likho

Mat padho bhai mei to likhunga jinko pasand hai

[Udaybhanu]

Bahut h shandar aur lajawab update

Thank you Raghu

[Udaybhanu]

Yaha pe to aurat hi aurat ki dushman hai. Rambha aur Nusrat qasam se bahut hi kharab hai. Nusrat ki shaadi kisi bikhari se karwao phir pata chalega ki garibi kitna ganda shraphota hai.

Ha bhai inko to saza milni hi chahiye aur ye saza hamara hero dega.

Chi!!! Kitna ghatiya aadmi hai yeh shaitaan log... Aur unse bhi ghatiya woh aurtein jo in sab ko support kar rahi thi. Ek aurat hokar dusri aurat ke sath aisi atyachaar ko enjoy kar rahi thi. Aurat ke naam pe kalank hai yeh!! Ayr woh namard salaa....... Mard woh nahi jo aurat ka izzat le, balki mard woh hai jo aurat ko izzat de.

Ab un sab shaitaan logo ki ulti gintii jald chalu hogi...
Tik tok tik tok...

Ye log gareebo ko kida samajhte hai, inko saza hamara hero dega wo bhi gin gin ke.

[Udaybhanu]

superb! Fantastic update! Well planned build up

Thank you

[Udaybhanu]

Bhai fantastic  update essa lag raha hai sab ankho ke samne ho raha hai movie type please add image and gif

Thank you sam840

[Udaybhanu]

C O N G R A T U L A T I O N S

100 REPUTATION

ACHIEVED!

clp);

Thank you Baban bhai

[Udaybhanu]

बहुत ही बेहतरीन कहानी है आपकी।

लिखते रहिए।

Dhanyawad bhai

[Udaybhanu]

bahut badhiya updaet

Thank you Vamp

wow! Very nice and awesome update

Thank you The Pervert

Nice update bro!

Thank you dgssfvgssry

[Udaybhanu]

Wonderful update! Very nice writings, well build up

Thank you Introvert

[Udaybhanu]

Update-04

Fir ek din sab kuchh badal jaata hai Kallu apne  bhikhari dosto ke saath baith ke bhikh maang raha tha ki wohi Mandir ke samne ek lambi si ek kaali car aake rukti hai aur ushme se Raghunath ki family bahar nikalti hai. Kallu unlogo ke dekhte hi apne gusse par se kaabu kho raha tha. Wo side me pada ek pattar utha leta hai aur sahi mouke ka intezar me Mandir ke sidhiyo ke pass bhikhariyo ke bich baith jaata hai.

Ki tabhi ek bhikhari bolta hai.........

"Kya maal hai ye dono saas aur Bahu. Ek naam Rambha hai to dusre ka Nushrat dono hi ek se badh kar ek hai. Ye rambha ka gaand to saree bhi sambhal nahi paa raha hai Karib 38 inch ki to gaand hi hai ek number ki chhinaal lagti hai ye to. Agar me Raghunath ki jagah hota to sirf ishki gaand hi maarta rehta."

Dusra Bhikhari..........

"Sala Raghunath bada mard banta hai shaadi ke itne saalo baad bhi bacha nahi de paya ishko. Me hota to din raat ishki chut me apna ganda badbuwala lund ko daal ke hi rakhta aur apna gaanda paani ishke chut me bharta rehta jab tak ishka pet mera bacha leke ful ke gubbara nahi hojata tab tak."

Kallu bhikhariyo ki baat sun ke pehli baar RAMBHA ko achhe se dekhta hai aur apne mann me sochta hai......

"Wah sach me ye to ek dum kadak maal hai. Umar karib 44-45 saal ki hai aur jaha jaha charbi hona chahiye waha waha charbi chad gaya hai. Kya gaand hai 38 inch ki to hogi hi, aur kya chuchi hai 36 ki to chuchi hogi aur ye patli si kamar par bhi thoda thoda charbi chada hua hai phir bhi 32 ki kamar hogi. Kabhi ish randi ki achhe se dekha hi nahi tha."

Kallu ye sab soch hi raha tha ki ek bhikhari ki baat ushke kaano par padti hai............

"Aur ishko dekho Raghunath ki Bahu hai ye, aur ye bhi kuchh kam nahi hai apne saas se bhi badhkar hai. Kya kismat hoga ushka jo ish ladki ki le raha hoga. 36-24-36 ki figure hi hai hai ishki saas ko pura takkar deti hai ye. Kai baar ishko dekh ke hila chuka hu sali har taraf se ek raand hi lagti hai me. Sala ishka pani 2 saal ho gaya hai lekin abhi tak ishko bacha nahi de paaya hai. Ek baar mujhse chud jaaye fir bacha hi bacha paida karegi."

Dusra Bhikhari...........

"Lekin hamare kismat me kaha indono ki gaand aur chut hai jinke hisse me hai unse to kuchh ho nahi raha hai hum log bas lund hila hi sakte hai indono ko dekh kar."

Phir Kallu ab Nushrat ko bhi achhe se dekhta hai........

"Sach me ye bhi kuchh kam nahi hai ye bhi apne saas ki barabar ki hai aur jab ye apne SaaS ki umar ki hogi tab to ye aur top lagegi. Ishke bhi mene kabhi dhyan se dekha nahi tha ye bhi kuchh kam nahi hai."

Bhikhari 3...... Aye ye tum log kya bol rahe ho agar Raghunath ya ushka beta sun liya to kya karega pata hai na. Gaon ke kai ghar ke aurton ko ye BAAP BETE ne balatkar kiya hai aur kitno ka murder kiya hai pata hai na. Inke ghar par nazar mat daalo nahi to jaan se jaaoge.

Ye sunte hi sab chup ho jaate hai lekin ab Kallu ke dimag me ek bada hi khatarnak idea aata hai.

Kallu mann me sochta hai........

"Ye Raghunath ka pura pariwar sala harami hai koi bhagwan aake inhe saza nahi dega mujhe hi inhe saza dena hai sharab ke nashe me doob kar mene 1 saal barbaad kar diya hai ab ek pal bhi barbaad nahi karunga. Ab meri Padma, Shyam aur Laxmi ki jaan ki kimat me inke Ghar ke aurton se wasool karunga. Ye logo ne jo mujhse chhina hai ab me unse wohi cheej chhin lunga."

Kallu ke dimag ab kuchh nahi tha ushe sirf aur sirf badla lena tha ab. Jo saza kanoon ushe nahi de paa raha hai ab wo saza Kallu dega lekin apne andaz se.

Kallu ab Raghunath ke gaadi ke pass hi ushka intezar kar raha tha. Jaise hi Raghunath ka pariwar aata hai bese hi Kallu daud ke jaake Rambha ke pairo me gir jaata hai aur kehta hai.

"Maalkin mujhe maaf kar dijiye maalkin mujhse aur mere bete se bahat badi galati ho gayi hai maalkin me ush galati ka saza kaat chuka hu maalkin mujhe maaf kar dijiye."

Rambha Kallu ki haalat dekh kar ushko pehchan bhi nahi paa rahi thi.

"Chhi kaun hai tu mera pair chhod."

Kallu rote huye kehta hai......

"Maalkin me Kallu hu dekhiye na mere kya haalat hi gaya hai mujhe koi kaam nahi mil raha hai mere zameen to maalik ne le liya hai ab mera beta bhi nahi raha jo mujh buddhe ko kaam karke khila sake. Mujh par daya kijiye maalkin mujhe mera sabaq mil gaya hai mujh par daya kijiye, koi bhi kaam de dijiye apke ghar me."

Raghunath haste huye apne mochho ki tao de raha tha ushe Kallu ka haalat dekh kar bahat khushi mil rahi thi. Fir wo bolta hai.......

"Kallu teri haalat dekh kar mere dimag ke tere liye ek hi kaam aarha hai, hamare ghar ke naale aur toilet saaf karne ka kaam bese bhi yaha logo ki kami to hai nahi bol karega."

Kallu rote huye.......

"Haa maalik kuchh bhi karunga wohi aapke Ghar ka toilet aur gandi naali saaf karunga me bas khane ke liye roti aur rehne ke liye apne ghar me ek chhota sa kona de dijiye maalik. Me kutte ki tarah aapka bafadaar rahunga."

Raghunath.......

"Dekha humse takrane ka natija ab tu kisan se jamadaar ban gaya hai thik hai kal se aajana mere ghar par tujhe Terra kaam samjha dunga me.

Kallu........

"Bhagwan aapka bhala karey maalik. Me kal pakka aajaunga Subah Subah."

Raghunath aur ushki family gaadi me baith ke nikal jaati hai aur Kallu ke chehre par ek khatarnak si hasi aajati hai. Wo mann me hi kehta hai.

"Ab tujhe batata hu mujhse takrane ka matlab kya hota hai. Tere ghar me ghush ke tujhe barbaad karunga."

Kallu ka nazar ab Raghunath ki Biwi aur bahu par thi kese Raghunath badla lega janne ke liye agla update ka intezar kijiye.

To be continued.........

[Udaybhanu]

Waah uday bhai waah....jitni taarif karo aapki kam hai....bhut umda writer ban rahe hai aap...gazab ka scrip or plot tayar kar rahe hai....ab kal se khel chalu hoga jab kallu ghar mai kaam karne aayega....u r wonderful writer uday bhai....aage bhi aise hi likhte raho...

Thank you Ajanmol bhai. Bas aapse hi sikha hu

[Udaybhanu]

The Back story is going superb!
Ab hoga khel shuru....... Ek acchey bhaley admi ka deemag jab sataak jata hai, jab uska sabkuch barbaad ho jataa hai aur usko badlaa lena hota hai tab us insaan se khatarnak koi nahi ho sakta... Ek haraami bhi uske agey baccha hota hai!

Bilkul hope sabko pasand aaye ye story

[Udaybhanu]

Amazing update! Wonderful, fantastic and super excellent story line. clp); clp); clp);

Thank you GHOSTHUNTER

बहुत ही शानदार और जबरदस्त कहानी।

मज़ा आ गया।

Thank you Mahi maurya

[Udaybhanu]

AWESOME BHAI... KALLU IN FULL FORM... AB TO NUSHRAT AUR RAMBHA GAI KAAM SE

Thank you bhai