28-11-2020, 07:55 PM
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. Give respect to writers in this site. Give a best complement to get more updates from them, and don't insult them. :) (29-11-2020, 05:00 PM)Mahesh61283 Wrote: Waiting for your update
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. Give respect to writers in this site. Give a best complement to get more updates from them, and don't insult them. :) (03-12-2020, 11:45 AM)Hydguy Wrote: Nice story. Awaiting next
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Sad kummun Wrote:Hi brother..... hope u r doing good....
మీరు రాస్తూన్న కథని ఫాలో అవుతున్నా.... plot చాలా ఆసక్తికరంగా ఉంది.... కానీ episode to episode emtion ni carry చేయడంలో ఎక్కడో వెలితి వున్నట్టుగా వుంది.....
veera ki జరిగిన అన్యాయం దాని తర్వాత జరిగిన పరిణామాలు చాలా బాగా రాశారు......
Recent episode lo మూడో వ్యక్తిని treat chese విదానం violent ga వున్నప్పటికీ (which it should be) gap vallano emo peddaga connect kaaledu....
I know its difficult to write a story as a first timer... but as a reader i can only tell whether i like it or not...
Its just my opinion... don't take otherwise...
NOTE: కథలు రాసేవారే తక్కువ అందులోనూ రెగ్యులర్ updates ఇచ్చేవారు మరీ తక్కువ.....
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. Give respect to writers in this site. Give a best complement to get more updates from them, and don't insult them. :) (16-12-2020, 10:51 PM)M.S.Reddy Wrote: Manchi vallaku eppudu manche jaragalani korukunta bro
(16-12-2020, 10:53 PM)M.S.Reddy Wrote: Meeku Mee kutumbhaniki manche jaragalani nenu koru kutunna. all the best u r bright future bro
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