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28-08-2020, 11:27 PM
Betrayals & Sacrifices: Update 12- Keep Friends Close, Foes Even Closer
Friday, 9.30 am, near Shohail's colony...
Shohail spotted Ronny who was getting on his bike. Ronny lives in the same colony as Shohail. He also tutors his both daughters in the evening 6 days a week.
He called out Ronny,
Shohail: Hey, Ronny, how are you? How are your family?"
Ronny: Good morning Shohail bhai. Everyone is good. How are you?"
Shohail: I am fine also. Where are you going?
Ronny: I am going to Agrabad Clubhouse. Builder Dilip bhai is a candidate for the upcoming City Corporation Election. His son Shimul is my friend. He asked me to help in his father's campaign.
Shohail: Yes, I know him. He has done a lot of charity in this city for the last two years. He is a good man. Saw some posters of him. By the way I am also going to the same direction. Would you please drop me on the way?
Ronny thought for a minute but could not find anything to say to avoid him. So he agreed to drop him off. Shohail sitting on the back of the bike got something out of his pocket making sure that Ronny could not see on the mirror. He then put that little chip inside the back sit. After 10 minutes Shohail told Ronny that he reached his destination and got down from his bike. After Ronny went on Shohail checked his phone and entered into an app. He turned on his bluetooth and could clearly hear everything. He was satisfied with his work and got on the bus to Newmarket. After getting down in the new market area he called one of his assistants.
"Reshmi, did you do what I told you?
Reshmi answered, "Yes sir, I did. But it was not easy. I desereve a raise after this."
Shohail laughed a little hearing this," Let me get a raise first. You just do what I tell you." He disconnected the call after giving some instructions to his assistant.
Friday, 10.30 am, Newmarket
Shohail was in front of a surveillance equipments store. He had already preordered everything he needed. He was a regular customar here so the owner knew him personally. He collected everything he needed and called his guy. After a brief 2 mins call he disconnected and called Arjun this time.
Arjun: What's up Shohail?
Shohail: Where are you?
Arjun: In the hotel. Had some work here.
Shohail: My guy will be in your apartment at 6 in the evening. He has the keys. You make sure that everyone is out of there before that.
Arjun: But there are security 24/7 on the gate and cctv cameras are also on. How will your guy manage to go in unnoticed.
Shohail: Don't worry nobody will see my guy going in and out. He is experinced in these kind of things.
Arjun: Ok, if you say so. I trust you.
Shohail: By the way, the equipments costed 10000 and my guy will charge 20000. I mainly called you for that. My guy wants his money as soon as he finish the job.
Arjun: I thought you were doing it for me, a friend for free. Now you are charging for it. You are a greedy man.
Shohail: Ha ha ha... Knowledge is not cheap my friend. I am not chraging anything, it's my friend that charging this money.
Arjun : Ok I will send it on your bkash.(bkash is an app that is commonly used for money transferring in Bangladesh)
Shohail: Ok, bye.
Arjun: Bye.
Friday, 9.30 am, near Shohail's colony...
Shohail spotted Ronny who was getting on his bike. Ronny lives in the same colony as Shohail. He also tutors his both daughters in the evening 6 days a week.
He called out Ronny,
Shohail: Hey, Ronny, how are you? How are your family?"
Ronny: Good morning Shohail bhai. Everyone is good. How are you?"
Shohail: I am fine also. Where are you going?
Ronny: I am going to Agrabad Clubhouse. Builder Dilip bhai is a candidate for the upcoming City Corporation Election. His son Shimul is my friend. He asked me to help in his father's campaign.
Shohail: Yes, I know him. He has done a lot of charity in this city for the last two years. He is a good man. Saw some posters of him. By the way I am also going to the same direction. Would you please drop me on the way?
Ronny thought for a minute but could not find anything to say to avoid him. So he agreed to drop him off. Shohail sitting on the back of the bike got something out of his pocket making sure that Ronny could not see on the mirror. He then put that little chip inside the back sit. After 10 minutes Shohail told Ronny that he reached his destination and got down from his bike. After Ronny went on Shohail checked his phone and entered into an app. He turned on his bluetooth and could clearly hear everything. He was satisfied with his work and got on the bus to Newmarket. After getting down in the new market area he called one of his assistants.
"Reshmi, did you do what I told you?
Reshmi answered, "Yes sir, I did. But it was not easy. I desereve a raise after this."
Shohail laughed a little hearing this," Let me get a raise first. You just do what I tell you." He disconnected the call after giving some instructions to his assistant.
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Friday, 10.30 am, Newmarket
Shohail was in front of a surveillance equipments store. He had already preordered everything he needed. He was a regular customar here so the owner knew him personally. He collected everything he needed and called his guy. After a brief 2 mins call he disconnected and called Arjun this time.
Arjun: What's up Shohail?
Shohail: Where are you?
Arjun: In the hotel. Had some work here.
Shohail: My guy will be in your apartment at 6 in the evening. He has the keys. You make sure that everyone is out of there before that.
Arjun: But there are security 24/7 on the gate and cctv cameras are also on. How will your guy manage to go in unnoticed.
Shohail: Don't worry nobody will see my guy going in and out. He is experinced in these kind of things.
Arjun: Ok, if you say so. I trust you.
Shohail: By the way, the equipments costed 10000 and my guy will charge 20000. I mainly called you for that. My guy wants his money as soon as he finish the job.
Arjun: I thought you were doing it for me, a friend for free. Now you are charging for it. You are a greedy man.
Shohail: Ha ha ha... Knowledge is not cheap my friend. I am not chraging anything, it's my friend that charging this money.
Arjun : Ok I will send it on your bkash.(bkash is an app that is commonly used for money transferring in Bangladesh)
Shohail: Ok, bye.
Arjun: Bye.
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Friday, 10.30 am, Agrabad Clubhouse...
Ronny with some of his friends was playing carrom and discussing about the campaign of Dilip Rai. Dilip Rai's son Shimul was there also. The other friedns were Prakash, Rasel and Shakil. After sometime their discussion went towards the girls of their college. Who was more beautiful, who had bigger boobs or asses. This was their typical topic of conversation, nothing out of the ordinary. Shimul had no interest in this because he had no shortage of women. His dad has a long list of women coming in their farmhouse every week. He gets share of those whenever he wants. His father was never secretive about his sex life to his son. Only his younger sister and mother thinks that his father is a honest man. He knows fully well what his father does. He doesn't care what his father do, because his lifestyle became easier because of it. So, how he can get interest in just the talks of how a girl looks when he can experience it on his wish. But his ears perked up when he heard his friend Shakil speak something about Ronny.
"What are you saying man, is it true Ronny!" exclaimed one of the guys. "Of course it is true man, don't you believe me? Ronny is mad about that milf. Last week he even showed me the bra and panty ge stole from her house." Shakil spoke again.
Ronny was surprised and angry that Shakil just told those guys what he said to him in confidence. He shouted at Shakil," Will you shut up your big mouth you idiot. You speak one more word and I am going to break your ugly nose. Shakil answered," Bro chill, we are all your friends, we all have fantasies. It's nothing wrong. I just want to share our fantasies with each other and have fun.
All four of them started to argue among them regarding this matter. Shimul then jumped in and made them all silent. He told the other guys to continue the game and brought Ronny into another room saying he needed to cool his head. After giving his friend some time to cool down he spoke to him slowly..
Shimul: So who is this incredible women that Shakil was talking about?
Ronny: He did not say incredible.
Shimul: Well, he said hot milf. But if you like her then she must be incredible. So, who is she? How did you meet her?
R: She is our neighbour. She has two daughters and a son.
S: Three children? Is she old or something? Are you into grannys now?
R: No man. She is in her thirties I think. Her daughters are 10 & 7 and the son is only 8-9 months old.She is not very fair or dark. May be 5 feet 2 or 3 inches height. But what is most awesome about her is her huge boobs and ass. Her figure is like some of those busty milf pornstars. You have to see to believe. I only saw her topless once through their bathroom door. I still can not remove that image from my head.
S: How did you manage to see that?
R: 2 years ago one saturday noon after I came back from the temple my mother sent me to her house to get something. When I knocked on their door their daughter Mini opened the door. I asked where their mother was and she told me her mother was bathing. I said ok I will wait for her, you do what you were doing. Both of the sisters were playing with some toys in the living room. I thought to have some water as I was coming from outdoor heat and the fan in the room was not helping. I felt thirsty so thought about getting some water. I saw a mug full of water in one corner of the room. When I went to get water I heard water splashing noise. I got curious as I could see the bathroom from where I was standing. I could not control my feet as I tiptoed towards the bathroom. I looked back and saw the girls were playing without noticing me. I stood before the bathroom door, which was a little old made of tin plates. It had two three small holes in one corner of the door. I peeked through the door and saw bhabhi inside the bathroom. The view inside made me hard in an instant. She already finished the bath and was drying herself wearing a dry salwar pants. Her boobs was so big but looked firm. Water dripping down two dark brown nipples looked so hot and erotic. It is the best moment of my life till date.After drying she wore all her clothes I came back to the living room. That was the start of my fantasy. This past two years I don't know how much I masterbated imagining fucking her in every position I could imagine. In my fantasy she is my slut, my whore.
S: Wow. I got hard just by listening you. You have been dreaming it for two years do you want to make it come true?
R: I want to, but I know that is not possible.
S: What if I can make it reality. You fucking her anyway you like.
R: What, how can you do that? How is it possible? She is a homely woman she would never willingly do it.
S: She will come to you by herself, this much I can guarrenty you.
R: Ok, then pls pls pls buddy. Make it happen. I will forever be greatful to you.
S: What's her name? What is her husbands name? And what does he do?
R: Her name is Mariam. Her husband's name is Nayeem ., Shohail. He is a lawyer.
Hearing this name a smile came in Shimul's face.
S: Shohail is the husband's name? This became more interesting.
R: What?
S: Don't worry, I will make arrangements and inform you. She is a gift to you from me. You now go and play with the others. I will come in a min.
Ronny saw Shimul calling someone on his way out of the room. While closing the door he heard, " Hey dad, I have a very good news for you..."
Ronny did not listen the rest of the conversation as he came to the other room by then. He did not need to. He was in some other world day-dreaming about his Kamdevi.
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Next two updates will be...
***Betrayals & Sacrifices: Update 13- Keep Friends Close, Foes Even Closer - Part 2
***Betrayals & Sacrifices: Update 14- Entering Krishnaa
***Betrayals & Sacrifices: Update 13- Keep Friends Close, Foes Even Closer - Part 2
***Betrayals & Sacrifices: Update 14- Entering Krishnaa
10-09-2020, 07:12 PM
13-09-2020, 03:34 AM
Sorry for the delay guys. Not making any excuses, but I was really occupied in a family emergency. I am back now, will try to move forward with the story. Thanks for your support, praises and critics. I will include the date with the days so that it helps to keep track of the story. Hope you all will enjoy.
PREVIOUSLY...
(S: What's her name? What is her husbands name? And what does he do?
R: Her name is Mariam. Her husband's name is Nayeem ., Shohail. He is a lawyer.
Hearing this name a smile came in Shimul's face.
S: Shohail is the husband's name? This became more interesting.
R: What?
S: Don't worry, I will make arrangements and inform you. She is a gift to you from me. You now go and play with the others. I will come in a min.
Ronny saw Shimul calling someone on his way out of the room. While closing the door he heard, " Hey dad, I have a very good news for you..."
Ronny did not listen the rest of the conversation as he came to the other room by then. He did not need to. He was in some other world day-dreaming about his Kamdevi.)Betrayals & Sacrifices: Update 13- Keep Friends Close, Foes Even Closer- Part 2
6th April, 2018. Friday, 11.30 am, Agrabad clubhouse, Chattagram...
Shimul was on the phone with his father first and then his Jalal uncle. After his conversation with his friend Ronny he found out some interesting news. The lawyer that has been the thorn in his father's throat for the last few days, has a busty homely wife. The kind that his Jalal uncle likes most. And he can always get a share whenever he likes. He also wanted to help his friend get some pussy. After finishing the phone call with Jalal uncle he got back to the front room where his other friends were playing. He saw shohail and Rasel were getting ready to go out.
Rasel: Hey, Shimul. Who were you talking to for so long. You said that you don't have any gf. Are you really telling us the truth?
Shimul: No dude. I was talking to my dad. You guys are going already?
Shakil: Yes, we have to go home, shower then go to the mosque as today is friday. We can't miss Juma ,,.,(Friday,s special prayer).
Shimul: Oh man, I forgot about that. Ok you guys go.
Prakash: I will also go. My mother just called. She needs me to do something in the house.
After they left Shimul smiled mischievously while looking at Ronny.
Ronny: What's up with that smile of yours. You look creepy.
Shimul: You want to know why I don't enjoy the daily discussions of you guys?
Ronny: No idea. You are not a saint, when we walk around, you eat all the girls with your eyes somtimes. But when we talk about girls you don't show a bit of care. You are a confusing character.
Shimul: Ha ha... That's right. Ok, let's go some place. Where you will see why I don't enjoy your daily banters.
Both of them got out of the clubhouse and rode their own bikes to Jalal's farmhouse. The watchmen knew Shimul and they saluted him when both of them entered inside the gate. They met Jalal khan inside in the front hall room. Ronny saw a middle aged slightly pot bellied man of around 5'10", with a broad shoulder and huge biceps. He had like a menacing aura around him.
Jalal: Aree Shimul baba, come I was waiting for you. That must be your friend Ronny. Hey Kalam get some snacks for Shimul baba and his friend.
Shimul: Uncle it's ok. We already had some snacks on the way.
Jalal: I insist boys. Have some, you will be doing some serious humping. I am going out now. I have some work after finishing ,,.,. Kalam will be here, he will get you anyone you like.
Saying that and instructing something to Kalam he went out the door. Ronny asked Shimul what that all was about. Shimul just smiled and told him to get ready to lose his virginity. Ronny became a little nervous and happy hearing it. Kalam took them to a small room nearby. There was lot of screens that showed all around the farmhouse. In a room there was seven female resting in different beds. All of them were fully nude. Six of them were in their mid thirties to early forties and one was 19 years old. Both of the young men was looking at the women one by one with greedy eyes when suddenly Ronny gasped.
Ronny: Oh my God!
Shimul: What happened Ronny?
Ronny: D.. D.. Do you know who the women in the leftmost corner is?
Kalam: Her boobs sag a bit, but her pussy is quite tight for a woman in her forties. She is a perfect milf. She was the one most difficult to break among all seven of them. But after her 3rd day here she has turned into a cock hungry slut.
Ronny: No, not that. Do you actually know who she is?
Shimul: You are so dramatic all of a sudden. Who is she?
Kalam: She is some College teacher or something like that.
Ronny: Yes, she is our accounting professor. And that girl over there is her daughter. They were supposed to go to a family hoiday for a week.
Kalam: You should have seen them getting gangbanged together this morning.They were trying to out do each other. They were sucking cum out of each others pussy like they had been starving for months.
Shimul: This gets more kinky now. Fucking a professor and her daughter together. It's like out of some hot porn scene. Ok, Kalam bhai we choose these two. It's first time for my friend. I want it to be special.
Kalam: Don't worry babu, I am bringing them in the next room. You guys wait there. Your sluts will reach you there in five minutes. They will do whatever you say.
As Kamal went out Ronny was a little distraught . He spoke to himself in a low choking voice..
Ronny : Man, this is fucked up. Shakil is going to kill me if he learns about this.
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6th April, 2018. Friday, 1.30 pm, Kotoali security officer Station, Chattagram...
Mr. Dilip has come in meet the new OC of the Kotoali security officer Station. He knew that the OC was a female one. But he did not expect what he was seeing. Altough she was a little on the darker shade but she was a beauty. She was on the same level of his 5'7" height. How did this cute little rose became a high ranking security officer officer? He did not want to look like a perv so he tried to keep his focus on her face.
Dilip: Hello madam, I am builder Dilip Rai. I am actually running for the Mayor post in the upcoming City Corporation Election this year. I just came here to greet the newest OC in my ward.
Oc: Yes Mr. Rai I heard a lot about you.
Dilip: I hope it's all good you heard about me.
Oc: Yes yes of course. I know all about the donations and social activities that you have been doing for the last two years.
Dilip: It's nothing madam. I just do what's my duty as a citizen and a human being.
Oc: So, anything else Mr. Rai?
Dilip: Actually madam there is. I have some issues regarding a small piece of land. I want to open a hospital for the help of the poor people living in this area. But a greedy eye doctor is claiming that he is the owner of that land. He even filed a case against me. See, as the elections are nearing, if news of this case comes to media's attention then it will not be good for me. On the other hand, I can't stop helping people under the pressure of some doctor's bullying. So, Madam only you can help me now.
Oc: Ok.
Dilip: Ok, what madam?
Oc: I will look into your case and do whatever I can in your case.
Dilip: Thank you madam, thank you. You are a lifesaver. This city will be forever grateful to you.
Oc: Mr. Rai, I said I will look into it, but I didn't say for free.
Dilip: I know madam, you will not be disappointed. I will give you...
Oc: No no no, I don't want money, this time. I just want a favor.
Dilip: What kind of favor madam?
Oc: There is a doctor, a gyno to be precise. I don't know where she lives in this city, but she has a chamber in Star lab. And her name is Razia Sultana.
Dilip: I am just a builder madam. What can I do?
Oc: You have friends. They can help. I want to see her broken, I want to see her like a slut, a prostitute. I want her life to be hell as she has made mine.
Dilip: But madam, how can I....
Oc: Mr. Rai, think of this as a favor. I will be forever grateful to you. Trust me, having me in debt is going to increase the chances of your becoming a mayor tenfolds. This is a picture of her when she was 18. She must be 26-27 by now.
Dilip: Ok madam, if you say like that then how can I dare refuse. I will certainly see what I can do for you.
Saying so Dilip stood up and came out to his car. He was happy as he did what he came to do here.
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6th April, 2018. Friday, 2.30 pm, Infront of Star lab....
One of Jalal Khan's vans were parked in front of the hospital. Jalal khan was in the back with two of his bodyguards and his right hand man Kalu. Kalu is an expert of guns and bombs. His exeptional skills with guns makes him a top weapon in Jalal khan's arsenal. They saw Rahim (Razia's receptionis) coming out of the Lab's gate. The guy he kept to follow Razia, saw her leave 15 minutes ago. So they knew her receptionist will also come out in few minutes, hence the waiting. As Rahim walked 50- 60 meters towards the tempo stand the van got in front him and suddenly two hands grabbed both of his hands and pulled him into the van. There he saw four rowdy looking men and started to panic.
Rahim: please don't do anything to me. I don't have much Taka(money) also. Please leave me Sir.
Jalal: Relax, we are not going to do anything to you. Just you have to do some work for me.
Rahim: What Sir?
Jalal: First don't call me Sir, call me Jalal bhai.
Rahim: Ok, Jalal bhai what do you want me to do.
Jalal: That's more like it. Kalu, explain to him, what he has to do to be in Jalal bhai's good grace.
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6th April, 2018. Friday, 5.50 pm, In front of The Das Apartments...
There was a little accident in front of the main gate. A micro got hit by a tempo and got some damage on the back of the micro and front of the tempo. Lot of the passerby gathered around thus making a crowd in front of the gate. Mihir and Basu both of the watchmen went out of the gate and watched for 2-3 minutes. Then they started to try to clear the crowd but it was proving to be difficult. Both of the parties in the accident were blaming each other with loud name callings. While the watchmen were busy three men went inside the building ground wearing sports cap. One of them went inside the control room from where all the cctv cameras were monitored. First he presses some buttons there that freezed all of the monitors at the same time, then he signaled the other to procede inside. One of them got on the lift and other one went towards the watchman's shade where champa and basu lived. All three of them got out of the gate in about 20 minutes. By the time the crowd started to part away. After another ten minutes there was a call in Arjun's cell from Shohail. Shohail told him that his work was done and cut the call. Shohail then paid two guys their promised money and parted with them. Then he gave money to the tempo guy and micro guy to make necessary repairs and also their own promised pay. After all that he only had two hundred tk left from what Arjun had sent him earlier. His mobile beeped with two back to back massages. One was from bkash stating that he got 20000 tk more in his account and the other one was from Arjun. He stated," The earlier one was for the payment of your men, this time it is your payment. Although I am your friend, now I am your client. So, be a true professional and accept your own hard earned money. Good evening."
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Next two updates....
***Betrayals & Sacrifices: Update 14- Entering Krishnaa
***Betrayals & Sacrifices: Update 15- Binisha's Day Out
15-09-2020, 04:36 PM
(13-09-2020, 04:26 AM)kamdev99008 Wrote: great...........
so the 6th april 2018 is the landmnark day
1- ronny unknowingly disclosed about yasmin (sohail's wife) in front of sohails rival jalal
2- security officerwoman offered a deal to dilip ............ against razia
3- dilip bargained in deal with security officerwomen........... sohail's defeat
4- arjun get installed cams in his apartment
so much activities going on at the same time...........
and all the persons involved are connected with each other..............directly or indirectly
interesting
i'm more eager to know the inside story of binisha's betrayal and arjun's family involvement.....even his real mother's involvement..............
because this is not only unexpected.......but unthinkable also
other parallel thriller escapades are some common .............. but ithink all of this mess is connected with each other....
waiting eagerly for next update
All of the tangled webs will be untangled.... Slowly.
15-09-2020, 04:46 PM
(13-09-2020, 12:24 PM)Uday Wrote: Hi bro,
that is awesome of tempo build up. I hope you don't get confused with so many of characters & twists. I thought the lawyer as Krishna but now eager to know who is actually is.
Also with the bugs installed, may be Arjun will come to know the reasons of Betrayal or is it Banisha's sacrifice for he sake of family..?
Also to see how Nisha is going to enjoy her outing with young guys![]()
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Hope to get more updates in the coming days.
Good work, keep the tempo.
I needed all of these characters for the story to unfold. So there is no chance for me to get confused. It's upto you guys to decide who is the Krishna of this story. I am sure there will be more than one character in the future to try to fit in the "Krishna" role. But here I said "Entering Krishnaa"- a small difference in the name. Will that make a difference? Let's see...
Few updates we had seen less of Binisha. After 'Entering Krishnaa', we will have an whole update dedicated to Binisha.
Already working on the next update. Hope you guys enjoyed the story till now, and will more in the future.
16-09-2020, 07:48 AM
(16-09-2020, 06:31 AM)Siva82 Wrote: Love this story and narration.
Since I can’t remember all character correctly. I read the story again. Listing out the character present in the story below for reference.
Hats off to author for giving such complex nice story
Arjun - Male - Main character
Binisha - Female - Arjun Wife
Dev and Nokul - Male - Arjun Twin Brothers
Mahendra Lal Das - Male - Arjun Father (Dead)
Supriya Lal das - Female - Arjun Mother
Mishty - Female - Arjun Step mom - Mother of Dev and Nokul (Dead)
Champa - Female - Maid in Arjun home
Basu - Male - 2nd shift Watchman of Arjun Apartment complex - Champa husband
Mihir - Male - 2nd shift watchmen of Arjun Apartment complex
Selim and Rajan - Male - 1st shift watchman of Arjun Apartment complex
Jashim and Kader - last shift watchman of Arjun Apartment complex
Razia - Female - Arjun Friend - Doctor Profession
Murad Hasan - Male - Razia Husband
Rahim - Male - Receptionist in Razia Office
Shakil and Rasel - Male - Murad gym Friends
Shohel or shohail - Male - Razia Friend - Lawyer
Mariam - Female - Shohel Wife
Mini - Female - Shohel Daughter(Kid)
Jami - Female - Shohel Younger Daughter (Kid)
Reshnmi - Female - Shohel assistant
Gopal Sen - Male - Kid who meet with Accident
Suvandra - Female - Gopal sister
Gopal mother
Mrs Yasmin - Female - Attorney
Jalal Khan - Male - Goon and Gang leader
Dilip Rai - Male - Builder
Ronny - Male - Shohel daughter tutor
Shimul - Male - Dilp rai son
Prakash, Rasel and shakil - Shimul Friends
Kalam - Male - Goon working for Jalal Khan
Kalu - Male - Gonn right hand man for Jalal Khan
security officer OC - Female
You just made life easier for me. A very sincere thanks to you for your efforts. I appreciate it a lot.
18-09-2020, 09:49 PM
Sorry for the delay, guys. Had some internet issues while posting the update. I forgot to save the update to draft before posting, so lost the whole writing. Please wait one more day. I promise to post it tomorrow evening. Sorry And Goodnight.
19-09-2020, 10:58 PM
Betrayals & Sacrifices: Update 14- Entering Krishnaa
9.30 am 22nd February, 2018, Tejgaon security officer station, Tejgaon, Dhaka...
Mr. Shamsur Rahman the security officer Comissioner of Dhaka was sitting in the Oc's chamber. With him, there was the Oc of Tejgaon thana Mr. Vikram Nath and Mr Yousuf khan the Comissioner of Chattagram security officer. Both the Commisioners was long time friends and batchmate. All three of them were studying a case file that have been closed the day before. It was a kidnapping case that was staged by a notorious gang who have been responsible for atleast 17 kidnappes and three murders for the last three years in Dhaka district.
This kidnappers used public holidays to kidnape and get ransoms. Yesterday was 21st February, International Mother Language day which is ceremoniously observed throughout the whole country. A team of just 6 security officer officers busted the whole gang of 15 goons and also saved the kidnapped child. Specially the leader of the security officer team was brilliant with her leadership and managing to outsmart and outmatch four goons in a four on one gunfight.
Mr. Shamsur asked Mr. Yousuf after reading the case file...
Shamsur: So, is this woman amazing or what?
Yousuf: She sure is. She was always bright even before becoming a security officer officer.
Shamsur: Ok, you said you wanted her in a case. But I don't think she will be willing to go. She is hell bent on not returning to Chattagram. Before coming in this security officer station she personally told me that she is ready to go to hell but not chattagram. She will not accept this transfer.
Yousuf: Nope, she may say no to you but I have a trump card that will make sure she is ready to come with me.
Shamsur: What's that?
Yousuf: You don't worry about that, just make sure that her name does not come to media in tonight's press conference. Her getting in limelight may not be good here in this case. And this a fake file that I have prepared for her. If I can get her ready for the transfer then this is the file I want you to keep in her records. You keep the real one in THE VAULT.
Shamsur: Ok, I will manage it.
Yousuf: Bye. I am gonno meet her now.
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The same day 1 am...
So uncle, all these case files you have brought here no one can connect Jalal or Dilip in any way. If this Jalal in fact is doing all this then he is doing a very good job of not leaving any clues.
"That's why I want to bring you in this case dear. I know you love challenge. You love misteries. You live on the adrenaline rush. Besides, these videos is spreading more and more on the internet. This illegal porno bussiness is destroying a lot of families. Women are supposed to be loved not forced. I hate that I can't do anything for those families. I request you dear, please help me. Please help those families." -Said Yousuf.
Ok Uncle, I mean Sir. I accept this transfer and I promise to do anything in my power to stop those people. I will return to Chattagram. It's been a long time since I met my family. I also need to settle some old score with a certain some one.
"Wow, that was unexpected. A stubborn kid like her agreed without much fuss. I guess good for me." Yousuf thought to himself.
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31st March, 2018, Saturday 5 pm, Sen residence....
Subhadra got up from her afternoon nap with a phone call from one friend of her's. She washed her face and went outside in the drawing room. She saw that her mother was cooking some snacks and tea in the kitchen. Her brother Gopal usually plays cricket in the nearby playground at this time. She thought to sit infront of the tv for some time. At that moment the door bell rang. She opened the door and screamed with joy after seeing the person standin at the door.
Subhadra: Wow. Maa.... Maa... look who is here. Come fast maa look who came.
Her mom came out of the door while wiping he hands in a towel and asked with a slight irritated voice.
Mom: What happened pagli(stupid girl)? Why are you shouting?
Subhadra: Look mom, didi is here.
Mom: Pinky, you? Come come come dear. Why didn't you call us? Why didn't you say that you were coming?
Subhadra: Mom, still Pinky! Neighther Didi nor me is a little girl anymore. Stop calling us with those silly nicknames. At least call didi Krishnaa. She is a security officer officer now.
Mom: You bunch will always be little girls for me. I will call you whatever I want.
Subhadra: By the way didi, this was a nice surprise. Normally we have to visit you when we want to meet you, but now you came here by yourself! You came in this city like after ten years right?
Krishnaa: 10 years, 9 months and 21 days.
Mom: You have become a stone. You don't care about us. You just care about going to job and catching criminals. I bet you don't eat properly also. See how thin you have become since last year. I won't let you leave me for atleast one month this time. And I will cook and feed you.
Krishnaa: Mom I spend several hours in the gym to keep fit and you are saying me to get fat. Typical mom talks. And the real surprise is that I am not going anywhere else very soon. I have been transferrec here in Kotoali security officer Station. And I also got promoted as the Officer in Charge. I will report to duty from tomorrow itself.
Shubhadra and her mom became overjoyed hearing this news. They congratulated Krishnaa and felt happy that she will staying with them from now on.
Krishnaa: Mom, where is Gopu?
Mom: Where else? Practicing to be the next Sakib Al Hasan.
Subhadra: I will call him and tell that you have come.
Krishnaa: Ok, I will go freshen up now. I will have to call Yousuf uncle afterwards.
9.30 am 22nd February, 2018, Tejgaon security officer station, Tejgaon, Dhaka...
Mr. Shamsur Rahman the security officer Comissioner of Dhaka was sitting in the Oc's chamber. With him, there was the Oc of Tejgaon thana Mr. Vikram Nath and Mr Yousuf khan the Comissioner of Chattagram security officer. Both the Commisioners was long time friends and batchmate. All three of them were studying a case file that have been closed the day before. It was a kidnapping case that was staged by a notorious gang who have been responsible for atleast 17 kidnappes and three murders for the last three years in Dhaka district.
This kidnappers used public holidays to kidnape and get ransoms. Yesterday was 21st February, International Mother Language day which is ceremoniously observed throughout the whole country. A team of just 6 security officer officers busted the whole gang of 15 goons and also saved the kidnapped child. Specially the leader of the security officer team was brilliant with her leadership and managing to outsmart and outmatch four goons in a four on one gunfight.
Mr. Shamsur asked Mr. Yousuf after reading the case file...
Shamsur: So, is this woman amazing or what?
Yousuf: She sure is. She was always bright even before becoming a security officer officer.
Shamsur: Ok, you said you wanted her in a case. But I don't think she will be willing to go. She is hell bent on not returning to Chattagram. Before coming in this security officer station she personally told me that she is ready to go to hell but not chattagram. She will not accept this transfer.
Yousuf: Nope, she may say no to you but I have a trump card that will make sure she is ready to come with me.
Shamsur: What's that?
Yousuf: You don't worry about that, just make sure that her name does not come to media in tonight's press conference. Her getting in limelight may not be good here in this case. And this a fake file that I have prepared for her. If I can get her ready for the transfer then this is the file I want you to keep in her records. You keep the real one in THE VAULT.
Shamsur: Ok, I will manage it.
Yousuf: Bye. I am gonno meet her now.
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The same day 1 am...
So uncle, all these case files you have brought here no one can connect Jalal or Dilip in any way. If this Jalal in fact is doing all this then he is doing a very good job of not leaving any clues.
"That's why I want to bring you in this case dear. I know you love challenge. You love misteries. You live on the adrenaline rush. Besides, these videos is spreading more and more on the internet. This illegal porno bussiness is destroying a lot of families. Women are supposed to be loved not forced. I hate that I can't do anything for those families. I request you dear, please help me. Please help those families." -Said Yousuf.
Ok Uncle, I mean Sir. I accept this transfer and I promise to do anything in my power to stop those people. I will return to Chattagram. It's been a long time since I met my family. I also need to settle some old score with a certain some one.
"Wow, that was unexpected. A stubborn kid like her agreed without much fuss. I guess good for me." Yousuf thought to himself.
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31st March, 2018, Saturday 5 pm, Sen residence....
Subhadra got up from her afternoon nap with a phone call from one friend of her's. She washed her face and went outside in the drawing room. She saw that her mother was cooking some snacks and tea in the kitchen. Her brother Gopal usually plays cricket in the nearby playground at this time. She thought to sit infront of the tv for some time. At that moment the door bell rang. She opened the door and screamed with joy after seeing the person standin at the door.
Subhadra: Wow. Maa.... Maa... look who is here. Come fast maa look who came.
Her mom came out of the door while wiping he hands in a towel and asked with a slight irritated voice.
Mom: What happened pagli(stupid girl)? Why are you shouting?
Subhadra: Look mom, didi is here.
Mom: Pinky, you? Come come come dear. Why didn't you call us? Why didn't you say that you were coming?
Subhadra: Mom, still Pinky! Neighther Didi nor me is a little girl anymore. Stop calling us with those silly nicknames. At least call didi Krishnaa. She is a security officer officer now.
Mom: You bunch will always be little girls for me. I will call you whatever I want.
Subhadra: By the way didi, this was a nice surprise. Normally we have to visit you when we want to meet you, but now you came here by yourself! You came in this city like after ten years right?
Krishnaa: 10 years, 9 months and 21 days.
Mom: You have become a stone. You don't care about us. You just care about going to job and catching criminals. I bet you don't eat properly also. See how thin you have become since last year. I won't let you leave me for atleast one month this time. And I will cook and feed you.
Krishnaa: Mom I spend several hours in the gym to keep fit and you are saying me to get fat. Typical mom talks. And the real surprise is that I am not going anywhere else very soon. I have been transferrec here in Kotoali security officer Station. And I also got promoted as the Officer in Charge. I will report to duty from tomorrow itself.
Shubhadra and her mom became overjoyed hearing this news. They congratulated Krishnaa and felt happy that she will staying with them from now on.
Krishnaa: Mom, where is Gopu?
Mom: Where else? Practicing to be the next Sakib Al Hasan.
Subhadra: I will call him and tell that you have come.
Krishnaa: Ok, I will go freshen up now. I will have to call Yousuf uncle afterwards.
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4th April 2018, Wednesday, 10.30 pm Dilip Rai's house....
It was dinner time and all the members of the Rai family was in the dining table. Dilip Rai's family consisted of himself, his wife, his elder daughter Sonia, middle son Shimul and younger daughter Sristy. Midway his daughter Sonia started a conversation with him...
Sonia: Dad I need your help in something.
Dilip: Well that is new. You, asking for my help? I thought that was Shimul and Sristy's thing.
Sonia: Dad, I am serious.
Dad: Ok dear, tell me what it is.
Sonia: There is a boy named Dev in our college. He humiliated my best friend Radhika by proposing to her then laughing at her in front of everyone. You know so many powerful people. I want you to scare him and make him say sorry to Radhika in front of the whole college.
Dilip: Ok I will see to it.
Shimul: Leave it to me dad. i will handle this matter. Radhika di is my best friend Ronny's older siter. I will make him say sorry to radhika di.
Sristy: What are you going to do? You don't even study in our college.
Dilip's wife: Yes tell me also na. What are you going to do? You are a student not a goon.
Shimul: Relax mom. I am not going to do anything bad. And Sristy, the Vp of your college's is elder brother of a very close friend of mine. I am just going to scare Dev with my friend's help and make him say sorry to Radhika di as Sonia di wants. I am not going to break his bone or something? I am not a goon.( "I am going to break his leg and then drag him to Radhika di and make him cry at her feet. Nobody fucks with my friends and family and get away with it." Shimul thought to himself.)
And they continued in some other topic after that.
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7th April, Saturday, 9.30 am, Razia's house...
Shohail, Razia, Murad and Arjun gathered there for some discussions. They were already at it for the last hour or so.
Arjun: Ok guys that was all about my situation. Now lets talk about your land case Murad. You were going to meet the new oc in the thana today right.
Shohail: Yes, in fact we should be going there as soon as possible. We shall devise our strategy after meeting the Oc.
They started towards the security officer station in Arjun's car. After 5 minutes a call came in Arjun's phone. Arjun parked the car at roadside and received the call. The call was from Dev and Nokul's college. They asked Arjun to immediately reach the college and meet the principle. They did not say the reason but said that it was something very important.
Arjun: Guys, the call was from Dev's college. They asked me to go there urgently.
Razia: So, what are you waiting for? Go. We will manage the meeting with the oc ourselves.
Shohail: It must be something important if they called you this urgently.
Razia: I hope Dev is ok.
Arjun: Me too Razi. No matter what my brothers did to me, I don't want anything bad to happen to them. If they are pushinable then I will be the one punishing them. I won't let anyone or anything else to harm them.
Murad: We understand your feelings Arjun.
Arjun: Ok, let's hurry. I will drop you guys at the ps on the way.----0----
40 minutes ago, in front of Dev's college...
Dev got down from the local bus and walked towards the college. Shakil was also coming from another road saw Dev and caught up to him
Shakil: Hey, Dev buddy. What's up. Where is Nokul today? He isn't with you.
Dev : He isn't coming today. He went to Cox's bazar to a picnic with some friends of his from the Bussiness studies group, C section. And I am ok. What about you?
Shakil: I am fine. Thanks.
Dev: Where is that gf of yours? Did not see her this week. How is she?
Shakil: She went to her mother's village home with her family. I can't reach her on phone. She used to say that there is some connection problem there. But this time I can't reach her at all.
Dev : When was she supposed to return?
Shakil: This tuesday.
Dev: Ok wait till then.
They reached the college campus but before entering into the campus 6 guys blocked their way in the gate. Ronny, Rasel and the Vp's younger brother Akash was with them. Dev did not know the othe three boys.
Ronny: Dev let's walk to that side of the playground. I have something to say to you.
Dev: Say it here itself. Why do you need to go aside to say something. Nobody will be eavesdropping on you.
One of the boys held Dev's arm and said," move to the side as he said or it won't be good for you."
Shakil: Shimul, what are you doing? This is college, everyone is watching.
Shimul: You stay out of this Shakil.
Dev felt a little curious now since this boys was clearly trying to scare him. He thought he should play along with them for now and see where it goes. So he moved towards a corner of the play ground with them.
Dev: What is it, say now.
Shimul: You think you are a real playboy huh?
Dev: I play on fridays in our local playground. Does that make me a playboy?
Ronny: Don't try to act smart, Dev.
Dev: Who is acting? This is the real me. I am smart.
Shimul: This guy is asking for it. We would just have to beat the cockyness out of him.
Saying so, Shimul swang hard with a cricket stump that had been handed to him by one of his friends during their conversation. Dev saw it coming and blocked the hit with the bottom of his shoes. He stepped two steps behind him. Dev asked them to stop it. There is no meaning of hitting him without any reasons. Shakil also requested Ronny and Shimul to stop this damn fight and talk like grown ups. Shimul thought he had the upperhand with six vs one. He signalled his friends and they surrounded him. Shimul again walked towards Dev swinging the stamp with full force. Dev now sprinted to Shimul, grabbed his wrist with his left hand and gave him an uppercut with the right. Then he kneed him in the gut and with his left hand twisted the stamp out of Shimul's hand. Shimul's head spinned with the uppercut and he immediately sat on the ground with the knee to gut. The other five stopped in their tracks seeing this happen in 4-5 seconds. Dev now swang the stamp over his head in the air and asked them to come towards him now. Ronny and the others checked on Shimul and made him get up on his legs. Ronny then looked towards Dev with angered eyes and ran towards him," You cocky bastard, you humiliated my didi in front of the whole college and now acting like you don't know hot to even turn over the fried fish. You made my sister cry and now I am going to make you sorry now." Hearing Ronny's sister's name Dev froze and in the meantime Ronny punched him in the face twice and once in the stomach. He now stopped Ronny's both hands with his hands and told him," Stop it Ronny, I am sorry ok. Stop fighting and listen to me." Ronny was not ready to listen to anything that Dev says.
Meanwhile, a lot of the students gathered around them seeing the commotion. The principle while walking in the campus saw this crowd and approached towards it. When he saw Ronny and Dev he called the two guards. He came near them and told the guards to take this two to his office. He dismissed the other students and told them to go to their classses. The first class will be beginning soon.
After bringing them to his office he inquired the students their name and told the peon to call their respective guardians immediately.
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In the meantime in the security officer station....
Razia, Murad and Shohail went to the head constable. Shohail introduced himself and told him that he called and requested to meet the Officer in Charge today and madam agreed to meet me. The head constable went inside madam's room and told them to go in when he got out. When they entered the room they saw the oc madam sitting in her chair. Seeing her Razia thought she knew her for a second and raised her eye brows when sh realized who she was. The oc also recognised Razia at the same moment.
Razia spoke,
Razia: Krishnaa di, it's you isn't? You are the oc? Oh my God, you did become a security officer officer.
Krishnaa: Razia, is that you?
Razia: Yes di. Where did you go all of a sudden all those years ago. Me, Arjun, we searched so long for you.
Krishnaa: We can catch up later. Now first have some tea.
Krishnaa called the tea boy and told him to get four cups of tea.
Krishnaa: So now, tell me about you. Who are this two gentlemen.
Razia: This is my husband Murad Hasan a eye sergeant, and this is my friend and lawer Mr. Naim ., Shohail. We actually came here to discuss a case with you and ask for your help.
For the next twenty minutes they discussed the case and Krishnaa promised to help them anyway she can. Then they talked about their personal lives a bit and left after exchanging phone number with each other.
After they left Krishnaa was sitting in her chair and wondered why Arjun amd Razia did not marry each other. Why they were married to different spouses? Surely they can't be just friend now after their long history together. She thought they were keeping their spouses in the dark about their relationship. She knew closely how good this two were in keeping their affair secret from the world. Her hatred toward Razia grew more yet again. She spoke up to no one in particular in the empty room.
Krishnaa: I will destroy your life Razia if it is the last thing I do in the world. I will turn your perfect little world upside down. I will make you wish for death but I won't let you die at any cost. I will enjoy every second of burning your world into ashes. Razia, You don't know who just entered your life. Not any goons, builders or politicians, I am the BIG BAD of your story.
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Next two updates...
* Betrayals & Sacrifices: Update 15- Binisha's Day Out.
* Betrayals & Sacrifices: Update 16- Some Secrets Discovered.
20-09-2020, 03:44 AM
(20-09-2020, 01:51 AM)kamdev99008 Wrote: so you connected everyone............. :D
security officer officer is krishna........sister of subhadra ........... having old connection with arjun & razia......
razia calls her as di (elder sister) but krisha have jealousy secretly with her.....may be krisha had a crush on arjun those days
arjun & razia have an old history of long affair............but married to different spouses .........still fried without hinting about their affair to their spouses
dev also teased a girl ..........sister of the friend of dilip roy's son
all links are connecting .......with cord of REVENGE
Krishnaa is not jealous of Razia but she hates her with passion. On the other hand Arjun and Razia refer each other as best friends when there are only just the two of them are present. We will be able to know what actually happened years ago.
All the links were supposed to be connected. That is the story. Thanks for your comment. I love it when my readers try to guess what might have happened and what will happen. Thank you
23-09-2020, 08:39 PM
(23-09-2020, 11:43 AM)kamdev99008 Wrote: Eagerly waiting for next update
Binisha's day out
I have started working on the next update. You guys have been so understanding of my slow & small updates. It is great for me. Thanks for the support. Kamdev99008 Sir, I am replying your comment but I mean it for everyone who reads my story and takes time to comment. Thank you all.
Having said tha, I encourage everyone to comment in details about what they expect from the story & what they think of the incidents that happened so far.
Everyone, have a goodnight & good life. God bless you.
27-09-2020, 07:44 PM
I will post the next update later this week. Sorry for this delay. I will make sure that the upcoming update will be worth your wait.
Till then, be safe, be healthy & be happy everyone.
Till then, be safe, be healthy & be happy everyone.
06-10-2020, 04:49 PM
I will post the next update on Friday. Two more days to go...
09-10-2020, 08:27 PM
09-10-2020, 09:58 PM
Betrayals & Sacrifices: Update 15- Binisha's Day Out- Part 1
5.30 pm, Friday, 30th March, 2018, Das Residence...
Every Friday afternoon Arjun's mom and some of her friends from the building meets in the teacher lady's flat at the first floor. Together they read The Bhagabat Puran, Vishnu Puran, Mahabharat, Ramayan etc. such religious books. In the meantime, Binisha and the rest of the family plays ludo in the afternoon. Some days Arjun also joins with the twins and his wife. Other days it's Champa who joins in the game when Arjun is out in his hotel in the busy days. They play normally two vs. two games. For the fun of the game they bet 100 tk or more as the winning team takes all. But recently they started to make the bets bit more adult themed day by day when Arjun is not at home. They put the bets written in small papers and keeps them in a small pot. The losing team has to open the pot and perform whatever was written as the bets.This Friday also as usual the twins were playing as a team against Champa and Binisha.
Dev: Yes yes today we won this game. Now you have to do what we want. Last week you both were so cocky. Now we are going to show you.
Nokul: Yeah, more like they are going to show us.
The two tasks for Champa was that whenever their brother and mother will not be in the room Champa have to work all nude around the house for the next week till the next game happens. And in the second task that Dev given her was that she have to prepare tea from tomorrow morning for the rest of the week with her own breast milk.
Champa was stunned after reading the papers.
Champa: Hey Dev da this is ridiculous. How can I work in the nude. What if Mashi(Arjun's mom. Mashi means aunt) or Arjun dada sees me. Arjun dada may be in the work all day but what about mashi?
Nokul: Just wear a maxi in the day, and a orna(long scarf) on the top. You can move and wear it in seconds. You don't need to wear anything underneath just like boudi does nowadays when dada isn't around.
Champa: How can I make tea with my milk? I am not a cow. I don't give liters of milk. And what is my son going to drink, ha?
Dev: Come on Champa di it's easy. Your son is already 1 years old. he can have other food besides your milk now. You just have to make sure that your husband don't drink it all.
Binisha: Ha ha ha... You boys became so much perverted in this four months! Where do you get this weird thoughts from? Can you boys get anymore kinkier.
Saying that Binisha opened her two papers. And then she sighed and said...
Binisha: Oh man... I just had to ask that.
All of them laughed at her remark...
5.30 pm, Friday, 30th March, 2018, Das Residence...
Every Friday afternoon Arjun's mom and some of her friends from the building meets in the teacher lady's flat at the first floor. Together they read The Bhagabat Puran, Vishnu Puran, Mahabharat, Ramayan etc. such religious books. In the meantime, Binisha and the rest of the family plays ludo in the afternoon. Some days Arjun also joins with the twins and his wife. Other days it's Champa who joins in the game when Arjun is out in his hotel in the busy days. They play normally two vs. two games. For the fun of the game they bet 100 tk or more as the winning team takes all. But recently they started to make the bets bit more adult themed day by day when Arjun is not at home. They put the bets written in small papers and keeps them in a small pot. The losing team has to open the pot and perform whatever was written as the bets.This Friday also as usual the twins were playing as a team against Champa and Binisha.
Dev: Yes yes today we won this game. Now you have to do what we want. Last week you both were so cocky. Now we are going to show you.
Nokul: Yeah, more like they are going to show us.
The two tasks for Champa was that whenever their brother and mother will not be in the room Champa have to work all nude around the house for the next week till the next game happens. And in the second task that Dev given her was that she have to prepare tea from tomorrow morning for the rest of the week with her own breast milk.
Champa was stunned after reading the papers.
Champa: Hey Dev da this is ridiculous. How can I work in the nude. What if Mashi(Arjun's mom. Mashi means aunt) or Arjun dada sees me. Arjun dada may be in the work all day but what about mashi?
Nokul: Just wear a maxi in the day, and a orna(long scarf) on the top. You can move and wear it in seconds. You don't need to wear anything underneath just like boudi does nowadays when dada isn't around.
Champa: How can I make tea with my milk? I am not a cow. I don't give liters of milk. And what is my son going to drink, ha?
Dev: Come on Champa di it's easy. Your son is already 1 years old. he can have other food besides your milk now. You just have to make sure that your husband don't drink it all.
Binisha: Ha ha ha... You boys became so much perverted in this four months! Where do you get this weird thoughts from? Can you boys get anymore kinkier.
Saying that Binisha opened her two papers. And then she sighed and said...
Binisha: Oh man... I just had to ask that.
All of them laughed at her remark...
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7th April, 2018, Saturday, 6.30 am, Das residence...
Binisha woke up early today because today is the day of the picnic. She had to bath and do some prayers and then make breakfast for everyone. Her husband will leave for his work at 7.30 as always. After sending off her husband she will also have to get ready and she and Nokul will leave the house at 8.30. The picnic bus will start at 9.00 am from the New Market. It will be very difficult for her to be ready at proper time so she asked Champa to come in the morning today to help her today. Now it was 6.30 and both of them were in the kitchen preparing breakfast.
Champa: So boudi, you are going to Cox's Bazar today right? Have you ever gone there before?
Binisha: Yes, I went there on our honeymoon. It is very nice there. Do you know that Cox's Bazar sea beach is the longest sea beach in the whole world!
Champa: Wow, really? Is it longer than the Patenga sea beach? (Patenga is Chattagram city's local sea beach.)(Cox's Bazar is in Chattagram Zone)
Binisha : Of course stupid. Patenga is tiny compared to Cox's Bazar. It is much bigger and grander in Cox's Bazar.
Champa : You had so much fun there na?
Binisha: Yes, I really did.
Champa: I was just thinking something else when you say it boudi.
Binisha: What?
Champa: You went there on your first honeymoon with dada. And now you are going there with the younger brother in 2nd honeymoon?
Binisha: Not funny Champa. I am not going alone with Nokul. There will be 20 more male and female friends with him. So, there will be no hanky panky.
Champa: Come on boudi you should know better than that. Those are college going boys & girls. They are going to be naughty. And Nokul da is also taking you as his girlfriend not older sister.
Binisha: Let's see what happens. Now lets hurry up and finish. Some hungry mouths will be coming soon.
They finished their preperations in the next 10 minutes and started to call everyone for breakfast. Binisha went to her bedroom and saw that her husband was in the shower. She arranged Arjun's clothes and kept them on the bed for him to wear. She brushed clean Arjun's shoes the previous night. She also arranged all the papers he will be taking with him.
After breakfast Arjun gave 10000 tk to Nokul and 10000 tk to Binisha to take with them. While giving permission to go on this picnic he didn't know what his brother and wife were upto behind his back. He thought it has been a long time since his wife has had some outing. And as she said many times before how much she loved the beach he told her to go and have fun there. And now he regretted even letting her go alone with his brother. But he thinks he can not forbid her to go now as she might suspect something is off. Before leaving for work Arjun went towards his mom's room & as usual took her blessing. Binisha walked to the door with him and gave him a quick kiss on the lips after making sure no one could see them.
Binisha: Bye, shona. See you tonight. Love you.
Arjun : See you tonight. Hope you will enjoy the beach today. Bye.
As Arjun was turning to go Binisha caught hold of Arjun's hand from behind. When Arjun looked confused she told him...
Binisha: Well, aren't you forgetting something Mr. Husband? I just said I love you.
Arjun: Oh, sorry. I love you too Mrs. Wife.
Binisha: Perfect now. See you. Have a good day.
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Same day, 8.15 am, Das residence...
Nokul, Dev and his mom Supriya all was in the drawing room. Nokul was ready and waiting for his boudi to come out. Champa was in Binisha's room helping her getting ready. When Binisha came out to the drawing room the twins was speechless. She was looking gorgeous. Binisha was wearing a salwar kamiz of two shades of purple. The salwar pant was like a leggins as if it was glued to her feet like a second skin. The long kamiz was a little body fitting on the top portion with two cuts on both sides on the lower portion from waist to almost to the ankles. She normally does not wear any undergarments at home because she can not tolerate heat at all, but now she wore a nice set of black lace bra and thong. She wore a long see through orna over her bust pinned to her both shoulders. Overall, she looked classy and sexy but not slutty. Dev and Nokul have not ever seen her wearing salwar suit before and they were mesmerised with her. Everyone in the room complemented her saying she looked beautiful. She actually looked like a college going girl. Nokul just had a little problem with her look.
Nokul: Boudi excuse me, but I think you mistakenly wore sindoor and shakha(A special kind of white bangles worn by married ***** ladies) today. Remember, you are going as an unmarried girl.
Binisha: Sorry, but how can I not wear shakha and sindoor, I am a married woman. It is said that if a woman does not wear shakha-sindoor all the time, her hisband's life can be at danger.
Nokul: But everyone will know you are married that way.
Supriya: Wait a minute. Nokul, you are taking your boudi to a picnic. It should be obvious to your friends that she is married to your brother or else how she could be your boudi.
Nokul: But mom, I haven't told them that. I told them I am taking a friend with me.
Supriya: What? Why would you do that?
Dev: Relax mom, those are college boys. They would laugh at him if they know he is taking a guardian with him while going to a picnic.
Nokul: Yeah mom. I will be their laughing stock. I thought boudi loves beaches, then how does it matters if I tell them that she is my friend? They are not going to check by coming to our home.
Supriya: Whatever, I can not let Binisha out of the house without applying sindoor. I can not risk my son's safety for anything in the world.
Champa: Boudi why don't you apply sindoor in the middle of your vermillion and then comb the hairs from one side. That way you will be applying sindoor but no one can see it.
Nokul: Yes boudi you can try it. The problem is solved then.
Binisha: I guess that can work, but what about the Shakha(white bangles).
Nokul: Ok, wait a minute. I have an idea. I think I know what to do.
Saying so he went into his bedroom and brought something with him.
Dev: Hey, that's mine. I bought it for...
Nokul: For who?
Dev: Never mind. Boudi can use it. But you must give those back later.
Binisha: What are those.
Nokul: See these white bands. You can use them instead of Shakha. Nobody will suspect it.
Binisha: Is it ok mom?
Supriya: I guess. Ok, now you hurry up and comb your hair as Champa said. Champa, you go help her dear.
Champa: Ok, Mashi.
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Same day, same time, at the main street near Arjun's building....
Arjun was sitting in his car watching everything happening at his house. He could understand Nokul but could not understand his mother or Binisha. Nokul wanted to take her with him at any cost. That was straight and simple. But his wife is going there as an unmarried girl. She loves me, won't go without sindoor and shakha but yet going there anyhow as my younger brother's gf. They are making a big issue of simple shakha-sindoor but ignoring the main thing. One person's wife should not pretend to be someone else's gf. What is she thinking? Doesn't she care if someone we know may see her with him? I wish I could see how she behaves with him at public pretending to be his girlfriend. Will they be all lovey-dovey? On the second thought I don't want to see that. It is bad enough that I had seen her having sex with someone else. I don't know if I can tolerate her being romantic with anyone else. Here they are going out now. I can't see her anymore. I should also be going to Razia's.
And Arjun saved last half hours feed in his phone memory.
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9.10 am, New Market, Chattagram....
Arjun and Binisha reached New Market area and saw the minibus they were supposed to board. Nokul's group hired the bus for the whole day. Nokul's friend Imtiaz was in front of the parked bus. He called Nokul several times in the last 15 minutes. Imtiaz saw Nokul approaching and shouted...
Imtiaz: Hey idiot, don't you have a watch at your house? You live 10 minutes from here and still managed to be the one coming last. And...(He paused after he saw Binisha walking from behind to Nokul's side)
Nokul: Sorry mate. I had to pick her up on the way. Meet her, this is my girlfriend Nisha. Nisha, this is my friend Md. Imtiaz Ahmed.
Imtiaz composed himself and extended his hands towards Binisha..
Imtiaz: Hello, Nisha. It's a pleasure meeting you.
Binisha: Same here. I hope you don't mind but only my parents and MY MAN are allowed to call me Nisha.I am Binisha Das for the rest of the world.
Binisha looked at Nokul from the corner of her eyes as she said that.
Imtiaz: Ok Ma'am. Binisha it is. Welcome. I hope you will have fun today with all of us.
Nokul: Ok, let me introduce you to the rest of the gang.
It was almost nine thirty in the morning. The roads and streets will be crowded and overflowing with people within an hour at the busy New Market area. They were getting on in the bus when Binisha saw something on the left side on the footpath and quickly started to run that way. She saw two men walking and talking in the footpath. They were nearing a parked vehicle. And a man was running behind them with a knife in hand. She shouted towards them at the top of her voice," Hey mister, look out. Look out. Hey...." Both the men heard her shout and turned barely in time to stop the other man. One man caught the knife with his hands injuring himself in the process. The other guy with him punched the assassin in the face and he dropped to the floor like a potato bag. Other students got down from the bus and walked towards them. Some passerbys also gathered there.
"Are you alright mr. I mean Sir?", Binisha said to the injured man. Nokul also got there by then and said,"You are bleeding a lot sir, you should see a doctor." The man smiled at Binisha and spoke to her without even acknowledgeing Nokul," Thank you kid. You just saved my life. I am forever grateful to you. So, what is the name of the beautiful angel that saved my life? Binisha was a llittle shy hearing her praise but managed to say," My name is Binisha Das sir." "Where do you live Binisha?", he asked again. Nokul chipped in at that time," Sir sorry, we are really getting late. Let's go Binisha."The man said,"Ok then Binisha, this is my card. Anytime you have any problem, anything you need, just give me a call." "Ok sir. Thank you. Please get yourself some first aid soon.Bye." Saying that Binisha, Nokul and rest of the students got on board the bus & it started for it's destination. Everyone of Nokul's friends excitedly intriduced themselves with Binisha. Well everyone except for one. We will come back to that later. The girls took her in with them. Nokul wanted to sit with her but he was dissapointed as his friend Mili made her sit with the ladies group in the back. Two of the boys had guiter with them. They played guiter and some of them sang songs, shouted and basicaly had fun. Binisha thought she went back in time to her college days. The enthusiasm and the power of teen youth had contaminated her as well. All of the 20 students in the bus was between 18 to 20 years old. But she felt like she was one of them. Everyone was very nice to her except one girl wearing glasses in a blue salwar suit. Binisha thought the girl named Jonaki was somewhat cold towards her. Anyhow if the start to this journey is so much fun then she is going to enjoy today to the fullest. Next stop is going to be Cox's Bazar, the city with the longest sea beach in the world and she was very much eagar to enjoy the beach to her hearts content.
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The bus reached Cox's bazar by 12.30pm. It was decided they will go to Labony Beach Point where they will first see the waterfall there and then have lunch. After lunch they will go down the beach. After seeing the sunset they will come back. The bus will start at 7.00 pm for home. After reaching Labony Point they walked to the waterfall by foot. All of them were divided into few small groups. Binisha was walking with Mili, Jonaki and one other girl named Rokeya. Imtiaz and Nokul was walking few feet behind them.
Imtiaz: I can't believe it man.
Nokul: What?
Imtiaz: Sorry, I was talking to myself.
Nokul: Who talks to himself so loudly? Anyway what is that you don't believe?
Imtiaz: I can't believe that such a bomb is your girlfriend.
Nokul: Why? What is there to not believe?
Imtiaz: I mean what did she see in you? She is way out of your league man.
Nokul: Well I don't want to brag but I am tall, smart, handsome, acdemically brilliant and one other thing that I can't tell you about. I have quite a few thing going in my way that girls seem to love.
Imtiaz: You dog. I know what other thing you are talking about. You are the man.
They fist bumped each other after saying that.
Nokul: So when are you planning to not be a virgin anymore?
Imtiaz: You know we live in Bangladesh, not America right? People stare when they see a boy and girl walks holding hands in our city. People will say that you are a pervert if they know a boy and girl had sex before marriage. Shame for you and your whole family. Such a city we live in where 80% of the boys from middle class families are virgin before marriage. I am a part of that 80%.
Nokul: We are not in Chattagram now. This is Cox's Bazar, the beach city. Do you want to change your situation? Do you want to stop being a virgin today?
Imtiaz gulped nervously and spoke...
Imtiaz: I want to but it is impossible. Mili is carefree and fun loving but not in that department.
Nokul: Have you ever tried?
Imtiaz: No, but...
Nokul: You never know until you try.
Imtiaz: What about Jonaki and Rokeya those two sidekicks of hers?
Nokul: They won't be any problem. Now lets go walk with our girls. Both of them are ignoring us on purpose. Let's try to find out what are they pissed off about.
Imtiaz: I already know why mine one is pissed off. You try to find out your problem. Let me see if I can cool off Mili.
Nokul: Yeah. Let's go.
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Although I promised to post a big update I had to break this update into two parts. I will finish editing the 2nd part tomorrow night and post it tomorrow. I hope you enjoy reading the first half of Binisha's day out.
10-10-2020, 04:35 PM
(10-10-2020, 11:44 AM)Uday Wrote: I forget to mention " Arjun wanting to go and meet Rajiya"...something fishybetween them as suspected by Krishna..
One thing confuses me, " sometimes by the words of Banisha shows she is forced to indulge in those activities, sometimes she is much more excited & wanting more of those to have"...I don't know what is going on
First Read this part from "Entering Krishnaa" Update...
7th April, Saturday, 9.30 am, Razia's house...
Shohail, Razia, Murad and Arjun gathered there for some discussions. They were already at it for the last hour or so.
And then read this part from the latest upate...
7th April, 2018, Saturday,..........
Same day, 8.15 am, Das residence...
Same day, same time, at the main street near Arjun's building....
Arjun was sitting in his car watching everything happening at his house. .................................................Here they are going out now. I can't see her anymore. I should also be going to Razia's.
Hope now you can connect the time and see why Arjun was going to Razia's.
10-10-2020, 08:58 PM
(10-10-2020, 05:17 PM)Siva82 Wrote: @Worldlover waiting for update 2 of day out today. I will give my detailed review post reading update 2 Boss
I will post the next update on monday night. I did not get any time today and will also be busy tomorrow. So Monday night, the next part is coming. 100% Sure.
12-10-2020, 05:14 PM
Thanks to everyone who commented or liked my story. All of your comments are the earings of the writers. But to be honest I am actually dissapointed at the number of comments. I don't know my story was good enough or not but I actually expected a lot more comments.
Well, there is still a long way to go in the story. I will try to improve the quality of the storytelling so that the readers become compelled to comment in my thread. This is a challenge to myself. Lets see what happens.
Well, there is still a long way to go in the story. I will try to improve the quality of the storytelling so that the readers become compelled to comment in my thread. This is a challenge to myself. Lets see what happens.
12-10-2020, 07:23 PM
(12-10-2020, 05:43 PM)Uday Wrote:
Bro..
chill, don't worry. Every story has got its set of readers like the fans of a particular movie star. They tend to follow and give their comments. The rest are passerby's, may be some one will stay when see something he/she likes and become a fan and start commenting.
You have exceptional story telling skills (it's different than the rest of the stories) and you mastered it. It is like a jig-saw puzzle and you are placing the pieces in right places at the right moment. You are matching the past, present perfectly with the timings, places, people. You didn't leave anything unused. But the problem in this type of narration is reader may forget what happened an hour ago as the updates is irregular. Please don't get offended, I am not blaming or criticizing. If this story comes as a novel, I bet people will not leave the book until they finish.
You know basically this is a porn sight and most of the people including me come here to read some hanky panky stuff which is lacking a little bit here ( the other day that was reason I said "something fishy between Arjun & Razia" not that I didn't follow the story).
You should learn how to cook tasty biriyani from banishalike wise this story also needs some masala to spice it up.
I don't know, but don't make Banisha a slut, going and spreading legs to anyone comes on her way or by the demands of her brother in laws.
Also you can include some naughty talking, fun at Gopal's birthday party...may be Krishna opening up, Subadra showing some interest in Arjun etc..etc...
Otherwise this is excellent, keep going.
I understand when you say people come in this site to read hanky panky stuff. I want to build up the story first and keep the nicer things for later. I like your suggestions and as I said before sex and hot erotic sex will come for the need of the story. I am going to go ahead as I have planned the story from the biginning. Hope all of you will stay with me and enjoy till the end.
And for the record, I don't mind the criticism. I like to know people's point of view. I think I can get motivated and grow from both praises and criticism.
Thank You Uday bro.
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