25-08-2021, 12:43 PM
(25-08-2021, 07:03 AM)Ricota Wrote: welcome back. you are the one i keep coming in this site for. wonderful update
Thank you sooo much brother
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(25-08-2021, 07:03 AM)Ricota Wrote: welcome back. you are the one i keep coming in this site for. wonderful update
keep supporting
(25-08-2021, 08:40 AM)Shabaz123 Wrote: Superb hot excellent update bhai
aise he sath jude rahiye
(25-08-2021, 01:02 PM)rehanboy16 Wrote: Welcome back. Why a great entry. I have almost lost interest in this website and now it feels like a new beginning. This is my all time favourite story and you have written it like no one else has ever attempted. The amount of eroticism in ever word, the description, the lust is just too damn hot.
Please don’t make us wait any longer. Eagerly waiting to read next.
Good Luck !!
sun ke accha laga ki ye story padh ke apko accha lagata hain meri bhi yahi koshish hain ki iss story ko padh ke daily life se kuch alag kisi ko accha lagta ho toh story likhne ka meaning hain , so ty for your support
(25-08-2021, 11:17 PM)Anvesharonny Wrote: Brilliant comeback post brother.the encounter scene between Namrata and Das were just wowww,jyada kuch baatchit nahi lekin mohoul garam kar diya Das ke havbhav aur expression se aur Namrata ke sundarata ka varnan to bahot badhiya tha.
Bas ek cheez mujhe khataki ke agar Namrata wo buddha aadami kon Hain ye pata nahi hota to aur maja aa jata,kyunki Namrata ko ab das ke intetion ka thoda andaza lag gaya hain agar ye na hota to Jo das karata wo Namrata ke liye surprise hota jaise Birju encouter main hua.Anyways aage kya hota hain ye dekhna bahot interesting hoga.
Das to ab dance pe chance maarega.
Byw I am reading your story once again and found that in update 4 Namrata ke mom naam Madhuri type hua instead of Suchita.
Eagerly waiting for next episode,Stay safe keep rcking. yr):
Brother aapke jaisa reader maine ab tak nahi dekha ( honestly speaking )
thanks for your suggestions , response , review, support
and apko boht sare plot Holes milenge agar aap story vapis read kar rahe honge toh , because this is my first story and jab start kiya tha toh koi Idea nahi tha bas joh man ko accha lagta aur likhne me maja ata voh likh deta tha but pata nahi tha ye story ko itne bade margine me likhunga
(26-08-2021, 11:41 AM)Anvesharonny Wrote: Actually we should thank you for writing such brilliant erotica,it's best erotica I have read on xossipy.
Haa thode plot holes Hain but I am not concerned with it Maine isaliye aapko bataya ke aap post edit karake name change karwa sakte ho taaki ye erotica perfect ho.Aur lift scene main bhi Birju aur savla 1-2 jagah interchange hua hain.
Haa aur Suchita ke baare main apane right decision liya madhuri ka character jyada glamorous hota.Aur main samaz sakta hoon ek character ko imagine karake story likhana aur usase related image dhundana kitna difficult Hain hats off to you for doing such job perfectly.
Just want to ask you which celebrity you see as Namrata??you started with Arya ambekar then preksha raina,Priyanka Jain etc etc.
(26-08-2021, 10:43 PM)raja shri Wrote: Bahut bdiya update .... brother...and welcome back....to wo Anjan shaks Das sir hai...bada tharki buddha hai....lgta hai ab agla no. Namrata ka lgne wala hai.....Das sir isse chhodne wale nhi....dekhte hai Das sir iske saath kaisa khel khelta hai.....
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(27-08-2021, 08:14 PM)rehanboy16 Wrote: This is an amazing observation and I couldn’t have imagined it this deep. But just to follow it up, I believe that Namrata is such an innocent and submissive character that even if she knew what his teacher is up t, she wouldn’t be able to say no to any of his advances makes it more kinky and erotic. Despite knowing that her teacher is a pervert, she continue to do as he says and pleases him to his hearts desire. her submissive nature and her teacher’s sexual advances towards her knowing she won’t say a word o anyone is next level eroticism.
Cant wait to see how Mr Das manipulate Namrata and uses her as his personal submissive doll.
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(30-08-2021, 09:18 AM)themaskeditor Wrote: Great going bro, and thanks a lot for continuing the story ahead
(30-08-2021, 01:22 PM)Jaan Wrote: Update accha hai bhai... Raga k entry ka v wait hae...!
(30-08-2021, 02:13 PM)Bhikhumumbai Wrote: wow. mast update.
(30-08-2021, 02:47 PM)Hannahji Wrote: Great going brother hope das plays dominant throughout
(30-08-2021, 11:21 PM)Shabaz123 Wrote: Awesome update bhai
(31-08-2021, 12:53 AM)doctor101 Wrote: Great hot update Das vs Kinjal and Namrata.
(31-08-2021, 12:55 AM)rpraj3135 Wrote: Great Update, Das's dominant sex is very hot yr): yr):
(31-08-2021, 01:04 AM)Anvesharonny Wrote: What a great build up,the interaction between Das and Namrata was brilliant,jis tarah se das Namrata ko dekh raha tha aur usi waqt usake mann se nikalane vale vichar aur in sab se anjaan Namrata in sabka aapne bahot ache tarike se varnan kiya.Upar se miss Kinjal ka das ke sath scene bahot badhiya tha aur usi seat pe Namrata ka baithana wah bahot badhiya intefaq tha.
Aur Das ki backstory bhi achi thi jisase Hume pata chala ke wo insaan bhediya kyun ban gaya hain.
Ab das ne to Namrata ko dance rehearsal karane ke liye khali class main bulaya Hain ,dekhte hain ab Das ki agali chaal kya hogi.
Eagerly waiting for new update,ab Raha nahi jata. yr):
(31-08-2021, 10:15 AM)Suryahot123 Wrote: Super conversation with super pic.... please update more
(31-08-2021, 04:33 PM)rehanboy16 Wrote: This is so awesome. It’s getting more hotter after each update. Your doing an excellent job justice to the story. Hats off to you.
your comments inspired me alot clp); keep supporting
(31-08-2021, 01:06 AM)Anvesharonny Wrote: And Congrats For 9 Lakhs + views on your story.
Stay safe and keep rocking.
(03-09-2021, 08:03 PM)rehanboy16 Wrote: Just red the update the second time and couldn’t control myself to appreciate the level of eroticism, just mind blowing. Every word you wrote provides a sense of kinkiness with perfectionism.
Namrata being a submissive girl with a body different from her other peers is what making Das uncomfortable between his legs. You are so accurate in stating why Das is getting mad horny for Namrata’s yummy body is because her body has been developed so early compared to other girls of her age. Men can always see girls who have been properly developed and yet are so naive that they don’t know themselves what kind of effect their curvy body is creating on horny perverts, like Das.
She will be manipulated with her full cooperation and will enjoy every second of it. That’s NAMRATA for you. So Kinky, chudakad, a proper undercover whore/slut/rand/gashti/kutiya who just doesn’t know it yet.
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(05-09-2021, 08:04 PM)rehanboy16 Wrote: Wah bhai aaj toh hadd par kar di pervert Das ne hawas ki. Ap ne joh describe kiya hai Das ka imagination Namrata ko leke uski tareef k liye words nahi hai. Aisa lag raha hai jaise sab kuch live aankhon ke saamne chal raha hai.
Mere hisab se Rukul Preet is situation mein best copy hai Namrata ki. Rukul Preet bilkul waisi hi hai jaise Namrata ko describe kiya hai. Wohi sanskari face, sanskari face mein chuppi aek mysterious larki jise samajhna mushkil hai, soft sexy delicious body, innocent face with too much butter, seductress, kinky smile…….aur boht kuch hai par apko idea ho gaya ho ga.
Das ki shaitani tharak, uski khatarnaak hawas, uska jangli pan, upar se Buddha, kaala….aur dusri taraf shareef sanskari 20 saal ki bharpoor jawani liye doodh se bhi gori naram gulabi Namrata. Uffff soch kar hi itna kinky feel aata hai toh Buddha Das joh is sab ko feel kare ga uski kya halat ho gi.![]()
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Ab toh bas intezar hai k Kaise Das Namrata ko uske andar chuppi hui aek gandi kutti chudakkad randi se milwata hai aur kaise Namrata Das ki har baat maanti chali jaati hai aek achi massom bachi ki tarha bina apne parents ko kuch batae.D:)
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Intezar rahe ga apke agle update ka. Till then take care and be safe.
aise he review dete raho and keep commenting comments se aagle update ko likhne ki prerna milti hain :) ty
(16-09-2021, 07:19 AM)Montiloat Wrote: Bhai update yr bht mst story hai continue kro yr
but jald he aayega
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