[Royalkingfire]

Once again another great structure of writing jitni tarif karu utni kam hain aisa laga first episode slow build-up tha . But iss episode ne alag he raftar pakad liyi. clp);

I mean kitna unpredictable present kiya hae namrta ka character vo bhi first update se

And ab to mano namrta ko pane valo ki race he lag gai

Karan
Professor dube
Raga

And Das vale mention ne surprise kar diya . Aese aur back details aage pdhne me mja ayega 


And one more thing joh pdhke kuch laga 

Namrta ne dono bhi bar Abhi ko answer nhi kia ki voh us jagh ko kese janti hae jaha vo kiss krne gye the 

Kya namrta vaha pehle bhi ja chuki he agr ha to kiske sath ? 


Maja ayega age  keep writing  clp);

THANK YOU SO MUCH KASHIKA 

Your explanation always on point 

Aese comments se motivation milta hain meri baki readers ko bhi request hain ki episode read karne ke bad plz comments kijiye usse pata chalta hain maine jo likha hain voh aap tal deliver huva ya nahi 

Comment choto hoga toh bhi chalega 

Aur apke suggestions ka hamesha swagat hain  

[Royalkingfire]

DEAR READERS 


Lagta hain sabka iss kahani se intrest nikal gaya hain ..gine chune log he update ke bad response karte hainn koi bhi suggestions nahi deta ...and comment nahi karta issliye iss kahani ka safar bas yahi tak tha . Mujhe bhi boht work load hain . Aap bhi sab safe raho and itne dino tak support karne ke liye thanks 

[Royalkingfire]

Aap ye kahani bahut achi likh rahe ho ES forum per bahut se aise writer hai jo update time per nahi de pate hai mai bhi unhi writers me se ek hu per aap sabse ache writer ho aap kahani ko continue rakhe
Aap kisi ke suggestion ka wait na karo aap bahut acha likh rahe ho

Why you saying this bro??Your loyal story readers will comment here no matter what happens.
Your story have top 3 most views on xossipy forum which tells you how much readers love reading your story.Most people don't comment because of shame,fear etc.
I hope you take back your decision and it's just a April fool joke.And if you stop updating your story then it will be unfair on your loyal story fans.

THANKS BROTHERS FOR YOUR HONEST REPLY ABOUT STORY 



BUT DON'T TAKE IT SERIOUSLY ITS APRIL FOOL MESSAGE :)



Khani tabhi band hogi jab complete hogi 



MUJHE COMMENTS SE FARAK NAHI PADTA YE MAINE PEHLE BHI KAHA HAIN ...BASS STORY KO ENJOY KARO AND JAB DIL SE KUCH KEHNA HO TAB COMMENT KARO YA FEER PERSONALLY APKA FEEDBACK DO YE MERA SAB READER KO KEHNA HAIN 



AND RECENTLY WE CROSSED 7 LAKH VIEWS ON THIS STORY IT'S A GREAT ACHIVEMENT FOR US ....SO THANKS ROYAL FANS ....

[Royalkingfire]

DEAR READERS....







NAMRATA ek PAHELI 

EPISODE :- 03


Coming     soon....


3 APRIL. ( MIDNIGHT) 

[Royalkingfire]

NAMRATA ....EK....PAHELI :- EPISODE 03

















RAGA : AAARE MADAM AISE khadi mat raho aao yaha baith jao...isss stool pain..







NAMRTA :- nahi main thik hu aise he aap jaldi jaldi karo 






RAGA :- jaldi ka kam shaitan ka hota hain madam aur main bata chuka hu ki iss ko thik karne main time lagega..toh aap itminan se baithiye yaha..







NAMRTA ko raga ki baat manani padti hain     






NAMRTA aapna gadarya huva badan leke uss stool ki taraf badh jati hainnn.....raga ki najre mano NAMRTA ko chus rahi thi voh NAMRTA ke badan ke ek ek ang ko bade maje se dekh raha tha....







Usss stool ki aur badhte vakt NAMRTA ka madmast figure raga ke lund main tandav kar deta hainnn....aise pehli bar kisi accha ghar ke ladki ko usne pass se dekha tha aur maja le raha tha.....









NAMRTA ko vaha ka mahol bilkul accha nahi lag raha tha......ek toh vaha ke badbu  uske nak main dum kar chuki thi aur upar se aise ghatiya jagah pe baithna pad raha tha...






Par kuch bhi NAMRTA dil ki boht acchi thi.....usse aise garib beghar logo pe bachpan se taras aata tha aur unke liye uske dil main ek soft corner tha par actual main usse nahi pata tha ki itne gande rehte hain ye log joh ki usne kabhi imagine bhi nahi kiya tha........








NAMRTA vaha ja ke baith jati hainnn....voh ekdum bhangar jagah thi baithne ke liye ...aur vaha niche thoda upar raga baitha tha NAMRTA ko aapne ghatiya jhopdi main aisa dekh usko boht aanand ho raha tha.......









Abbbb RAGA ki puri najre NAMRTA ke bade bade gaand ke shape pe thi usko voh aakar pagal bana raha tha aur upar se namrta ki katil muskan uske lund main halchal paida kar rahi thi...... tight leggings NAMRTA ke hotness ko aur badha rahi thi aur.... High level ki garmi namrta ko gila kar rahi thi.....aaaj mano NAMRTA ke against sab tha...aur RAGA ke najro main ek aamir ghar ki ladki uske samne bebas baithi thi uski madat lene ke liye...







RAGA :- naaam kya apka...madam ji....






NAMRTA :- mera nam NAMRTA .....hain baba...







RAGA :- voh bada he sundar nam hain NAMRTA Madam....






NAMRTA :- mujhe madam mat kaho ...aapke poti ke umar ki hu main...






RAGA :- nahi kafi bade Ghar ki lagti ho aap toh apka acche se man toh rakhna chahiye






NAMRTA :- koi jaroorat nahi hain baba...mera kam hain apke paas toh apki respect karna mera kam hain 









RAGA :- kafi hoshiar ho beta yahi college main padhti ho kya...







NAMRTA :- ha baba yahi baju vale college main padhti hu...








RAGA :- voh toh boht bada college hain beta 






NAMRTA :- ha.....







RAGA :- ek bat kahu bura toh nahi manogi...







NAMRTA :- kahiye nahi manungi bura..







RAGA :- tum kafi sundar dikhti ho....aur boht mast bhi...





NAMRTA ke chehre pain ek gulabi sharam aaa jati hainnn....aise pehle he mulakat main aisa usko kisi ne nahi kaha tha...voh aapni najre churane lagti hainn...aur RAGA ko ek Sharmili muskaan deti hainnn....








NAMRTA ko abbb usss jagah pe sab Ajeeb ajeeb lag raha tha....aisa lag raha tha ki mano voh kisi dal dal main thi...aur vaha se nikalne ki rah dekh rahi thi par RAGA ke tarif vale bat ne usse thoda muskuraya....tha....






Raga man main :- 



( Ahhhhhh bhenchod itna kadak mal kaise ho sakta hainn...koi...ahhh bhagwan ne khud chal ke te mal teri taraf bheja hain isse aise mat jane de RAGA kitne dino tak sasti randiyo ko chodega...aur kitne dino tak yaha baith ke gharelu ladkiyo aur aurto ko dekh hilayega basss abbb nahi ye mal fas sakta hai ....q ki boht Sharif dikh rahi hain ye ladki .....varna yaha aise ek bhikari ke pass nahi aati aur baith ti bhi nahi ) 





NAMRTA:- kya soch rahe ho baba....karo na mera kam jaldi jaldi...







RAGA :- beta yaha boht dhoop hain .....q na hum andar jate..hainn...







NAMRTA :- andar kaha baba..yahi thik hainn..







RAGA :- dekho tum bhi garmi se bhig gayi ho... andar kam garmi lagegi.....









NAMRTA :- par....baba...







RAGA :- par bir kuch nahi beta....yaha...bimar pad jaogi dhup main chalo andar ...







NAMRTA :- na...um...baba...







RAGA :- q ek Garib ke jhopdi main aane ke liye sharam aati hain beta....mana hum garib hai kido jaisa rehte hain lekin hum bhi insan hainnn...







NAMRTA :- maf karna baba...par main aisa nahi sochti ...aap galat samjh rahe ho...







RAGA :- toh chalo andar .....








NAMRTA vaha se khadi ho jati hainnn...aur andar jane ke liye nikalti hainnn ...raga man me boht khush tha aaj pehli bar kisi sundar Sushil Sanskari gharelu ladki ke pav uske jhopdi ko lagne vale the.......








Yaha abb NAMRTA ki halat baichani se kharab ho chuki thi usse samajh nahi aaa raha tha akhir usse kya karna chahiye ....par usse joh sahi lag raha tha voh kar rahi thi...







NAMRTA usss ghatiya se jhopdi main jati hainnn...aur usse alag se badbo aane lagti hainnn....har jagah kabada tha ekdum se gatar jaisa voh dekh usko ulti jaisa hota hainnn .....







Vaha ek purani se khatiya thi jiss pe boht sare gande kapde the aur dher sari gandgi thi ....








RAGA :- baitho beta...yaha...







NAMRTA :- yaha iss khatiya pain...







RAGA :- haaaaa....vahi hain mere passs 







NAMRTA vaha ek kone main baith jati hainnn....
















RAGA man main :- 


(Ahhhh kya deen hain aaj jisse khatiya pain main deen bhar nanga sota hu.....jiss pe main roj lund ko hila ta hu aur aurto ko dekh apna mal chodhta hu....vaha aaj ye kamsin ladki baithi hainnn....) 



RAGA lagataar NAMRTA ke badan ko ghure ja raha tha NAMRTA ke ubharo ko dekhne main usse bada maja aaa raha tha .....








Yaha NAMRTA ko bhi ajeeb sa smell aaa raha tha par abb ye smell nak main ghumne laga tha mano kisi ajeeb chij ka smell tha......






Garmi ke vajah se NAMRTA ka badan bhig chuka tha...usko aapne jangho main gilavat sa mehsus ho raha tha ABHI ko kiss karte samay uske chut ne joh kam ras choda tha voh abb NAMRTA ko takleef de raha tha.....







RAGA :- chalo beta abb nikalo aapni ....jaldi se ..






NAMRTA ye sun thoda chouk jati hainn...aur Achariya ke bhav ke sath raga ko dekhane lagti hainnn...







NAMRTA :- kya kya ...baba...






RAGA :- saare hill nikalo aapni ....thik karni hai. Ya nahi..





Ye sun NAMRTA ko ajeeb aur sharam sa mehsus hota hainnn....







NAMRTA :- ha ha....baba... nikalti hu....



NAMRTA thoda niche jhukti hain uske nigahe aur raga ki nigahe ek dusare se Bhid jati hainnn....mano ek angar ho..












Raga NAMRTA ke thik niche baitha huva...tha... Janeen pain aur NAMRTA uss gandi khatiya pain thi ... NAMRTA aapni hill nikalne ke liye .....aapne pair ko thoda upar kar leti hainnn.....aur uska badan niche jhuk jata hainnn ...aur ye drishya dekh .... RAGA ka bada sa lund lungi main khada ho jata hainnn...







Aur NAMRTA ka dupatta niche sarkh jata hainnnn.....



NAMRTA ke aamo ki badi se lakir .... RAGA ke samne thi mano ....malai ka glass tha uske samne raga ka lund lungi main machalne lagta hainnnn ...






NAMRTA ke dono aamo ka vajan niche jhuk jata hainnn...






NAMRTA ko aapne dono urjo ko bhar mehsus hota hainnn....uske gardan ke upar ka sara pasina uske chati ke yaha behta huva chala jata hainnn...aur uske ....aamo ke bich ke lakir main voh pasina behne lagta hainnn ...








Raga aapne Hawas ko rok nahi paata aur voh ghur ke NAMRTA ke bade bade aamo ko dekhne lagta hainnn...







NAMRTA bhi raga ke ankho main dekhne lagti hainnn...





Usssss bebas buddhe insan ke ankho ko dekh NAMRTA ko vichitra se ghin aati hainnn....uski bebasi NAMRTA ke baichaini main badal jati hainnnn.... NAMRTA uss samay kuch sochne ke layak nahi thi....usse bas uss buddhe insan ke ankho ki gehrai dikh rahi thi joh usse swadisht ras malai ke roop main dekh raha tha ..








Par NAMRTA ke ankho main sharam aur aag ke angar ka mishran tha....uski nigahe .... nashile thi par voh bhikari buddhe ke liye nahi khud ke liye thi....khud ke roop ke liye joh kuch der pehle ABHI ne dekha tha....joh NAMRTA ke bartav main...tha...







Par issss bich ussss gande kale .... bhikari ke maje ho rahe the joh NAMRTA ke thik samne tha.....aur NAMRTA bhi uske boht karib thi.......







NAMRTA ke badan ki khusboo sidha uske lund ke kale tope ko mehsoos ho rahi thi......







RAGA ki najre mano namrta ke kapde utar rahe the.....par abb NAMRTA ke bhav main badlao aaa jata hainnn....ek nashila sa ghussa uske chehre pain tha joh dekhne layak tha.....







Uski aankhe mano RAGA ko satark kar rahi thi ....ki ...hata lo aapni najre mere uroj se ......








Par RAGA ko aisa drishya jindagi main fir kaha dekhne ko milne vala tha....abbb toh usne had kar de uska ek hat aapne lungi pain chala jata hainnn....aur NAMRTA ke nigahon ke samne voh aapne bade se lund ko andar se adjust kar deta hainnnn...







Ye dekh NAMRTA puri hil jati hainnn....aur uski hill bhi nikal jati hainn.....ghusse ke jagah uske chehre pain sharam thi ki aapne se kayi guna bada insan uske samne aise harkat kar raha hainnn...






NAMRTA :- ye lo baba ...dekho aur jaldi thik kar ke dedo..








RAGA :- jaror thik karunga beta....






Aur raga NAMRTA ki hills aapne hato main pakad ke usse tadne lagta hainn.....uske aukat je bahar tha ye kam ...itne mehnege hills usne aapne jindagi main kabhi hat main nahi liye the......







Yaha NAMRTA apne aaju baju main dekhne lagti hainnn...aur usse ...uss khatiya pain aurat ke kapde dikhte hainnnn.....








Voh RAGA ki taraf dekhti hainnn ...voh uss hills ko tadne me vyast tha....






NAMRTA usss kapdo ko dhayn se dekhti hainnn....




Ek blouse tha....ek sasti se saree.... NAMRTA voh saree utha ke dekhti hainnn.....toh usse boht he surprise ho jata hainnn....aur...usss...chij ko dekh kar uske man main halchal mehsus Hoti hainnnn ....




Voh dekhne ke bad NAMRTA ke pure sharir main halchal mach jati hainnnn....



Vaha ek aurat ki panty thi joh ki puri safed mal se sani huvi thi..... NAMRTA jhat se use ussi saree se dhak deti hain aur shant baith jati hainnn...






Ussss panty ka smell NAMRTA ko aapne nako me mehsus hota hainnn....aur ....mano ya na mano voh smell NAMRTA ko ek alag he maja deta hainnn.... NAMRTA aapne badan ko dekhti hainn....joh iss jhopdi ke andar ke garmi se pura bhig chuka tha.....







NAMRTA :- baba ....apka pariwar kaha hainn...





RAGA :- beti mera koi pariwar nahi hainnn...





NAMRTA ko surprise hota hainn...feer yaha aurat ke kapde kaise....





NAMRTA :- apki biwi ...bacche 





RAGA :- koi nahi hain mera kabhi shadi he nahi huvi ...hamari jindagi tum logo ki tarah nahi hain beta boht dard hain isss jindagi main....man toh boht tha uss time sundar ladki se shadi karne ka par ek gareeb chaprasi ko kon ladki pasand karegi...aise he umar kat ti gayi aur sharir buddha ho gaya beta....






NAMRTA ko ye sab sun boht bura lagta hainnn...aur uss bhikari ke liye ek hamdardi mehsus Hoti hainn..






RAGA :- agar tumhari tarah uss time koi khubsurat pari itni khubsurat ladki mil jati toh jaroor shadi karta tumse



Yaha raga ne bade chalaki se shabdo ke sath khela tha...

[Royalkingfire]

NAMRTA voh sun man he man muskurati hainn...usko RAGA ki ye bat samjhi toh nahi lekin aapni tarif sun chere pain katil muskan jaror aayi 





Joh dekh raga ka bhi lund machal jata hainnnnn...



RAGA :- karti na tumhari jaise ladki shadi mujh se ki nahi





NAMRTA :- pata nahi abb main kaise bata sakti hu ye sab 





RAGA :- accha thik hain mat batao .....vaise bhi hum jaise logo ko kon bhav deta hainnn....






NAMRTA ko raga ka aisa kehna thoda bura lagta hainnn....aur voh uss bare main sochne lagti hainn....usse mehsus hota hain hamari jindagi kitni acchi hainnn...inn jaise logo ka kya hota hoga...khane ko nahi ...acche kapde nahi ...ek pariwarik jindagi nahi.....abbb NAMRTA ke dil main raga ke liye hamdardi mehsus ho rahi thi....








RAGA :- madam ...suno...






NAMRTA :- are baba mujhe madam mat bolo main boht choti hu aapse ....






RAGA :- toh kya kahu main apko ...





NAMRTA :- NAMRTA kaho sirf.....





RAGA :- accha NAMRTA toh tum bhi mujhe sirf RAGA bolo baba mat kaho boht ghatiya lagta hain voh 






NAMRTA :- apko kaise main nam se bula sakti hu ..






RAGA :- Q nahi bula sakti tum NAMRTA tumhari jaise kamuk khubsurat ladki ke muhh se baba sunanna accha nahi lagta ...





Aapne liye kamuk shab ka prayog NAMRTA ko sharm se lal kar deta hainnn....aur sach main uss aghosh main voh ek kamukata Bhari najro se raga ko acchariya se dekh rahi thi....






Uske hato ke vajah se uske dono bade bade aamo ke darshan raga ko badi aasani se ho rahe the aur mano ek pyas Bhari najro se namrta ke ankho main angar machal rahe the.......







RAGA :- NAMRTA ...isss hill ko thik hone main time lagega...







NAMRTA :- aisa kya huva baba...







RAGA :- mujhe baba mat kaho NAMRTA.....





NAMRTA :- ok ok... aisa kya huva.....RR..aa...ga.






NAMRTA ke muhh se raga nam bada he kamuk lagta hainnn....




RAGA :- vohh ...agar main ye hill tumhe kal dunga toh chalega ....





NAMRTA :- par main ghar kaise javu...





RAGA :- mere pass ek acchi hill hain 





NAMRTA :- accha par mujhe aayegi kya voh...






RAGA :- pehan ke dekh lo ...acche se jhuk ke...






NAMRTA :- accha thik hai dikhao...





RAGA thoda aage hota hainn...aur aapne khatiya ke niche se ek gande bag se badi he khubsurat hill nikalta hainnn..






RAGA :- ye lo NAMRTA dekho pehan ke accha lag raha hain ya nahi...







NAMRTA uss hill ko dekhti hai. Dikhne main toh acchi thi...





NAMRTA voh hill pehan ne ke liye fir se jhuk jati hainnn....





Aur ussss bar RAGA NAMRTA ke kafi karib tha...usko NAMRTA ke badan ka gadrayai huvi mehak aati hainnn...joh uske lund ko aur kadak bana deti hainnn....isss bar aisa lag raha tha NAMRTA ko bhi pata tha ki raga ki najar kaha par hainnn....







Voh bhi aisa dikha rahi thi mano usse kuch nahi pata ..




UFFFFFFFFFFF NAMRTA ke dono bade bade aamo ki voh darar raga ko aapne lund pain hat rakhne ke liye majboor kar deti hainnn...





Aapne lungi ke upar se aapna bada sa khulla hatiyar raga voh lakir dekh dekh jor jor se masalne lagta hainnn ....






NAMRTA ko nahi pata tha uske niche baitha raga uske badan ko dekh kya kar raha hainnnnn...raga ke samne NAMRTA ki gadariyi huvi janghe the joh RAGA ko aise harkat karne pain majboor kar rahe the......






RAGA :- NAMRTA tum badi he khubsurat ho ... tumhari jaise apsara maine mere jindagi main nahi dekhi....





NAMRTA ko aapne bare main Achanak se aisa sun ...boht Achariya hota hainnn....voh thodi der asehaj ho jati hainnn...uske chehre ke upar ka innocentness dekhne layak tha.....






Mano ... NAMRTA ko voh bat andar he andar aanad de rahi thi....




Tabhi NAMRTA raga ke taraf dekhti hai. ....aur uska hat kaha hain voh bhi dekh leti hainnn...aur achanak usse dar sa lagne lagta hainnn.... raga ko abb koi dar nahi tha...voh samaj chuka tha ye ladki boht bholi hain kuch nahi keh payegi...






Aur huva bhi aisa .... NAMRTA thodi der ke liye raga ke usss bade huve ubhre huve jagah ko dekhti hain aur aapne najre chura leti hainnn....




NAMRTA :- chalo RAGA main nikalti hu...kal aavungi aapne hill lene...






RAGA :- thik hain NAMRTA kal acche se aana...acche se main tumhe dunga...





NAMRTA khadi hoke bahar nikalne he vali hoti hain ki ....rook jati hainnn....




RAGA bhi usse dekhta hainnn.... NAMRTA aapne bag ko utha leti hainnn....





Tabhi raga....aache se aapne lungi ko thik kar leta hai. Tabhi uske man me shaitani khayal aata hainnn....






NAMRTA jab phir se raga ko dekhti hain toh usse boht ghin aati hainnn... NAMRTA ko vaha se jald se nikalna tha par uske najro ke samne se voh hat nahi raha tha.... NAMRTA ke pure badan main ek bijali doud jati hainnn....gala sukh jata hainnn...





Q ki raga ...mano anjane main baitha...tha...par uska bada sa haitayar saf saf uske lungi se dikh raha tha...






NAMRTA voh dekh jhat se aage badh jati hainnn...




Namrata ko jata dekh raga ke chehre pain Kamini muskaan thi....aur voh bhi aapne lund ko dekhta hainnn ..







NAMRTA ke pure badan kap kapa raha tha itna bada kala aur mota dekh usko ghin se aane lagi thi....usss chij ki smell usse aapne nak main mehsus ho rahi thi...






Tabhi jate huve NAMRTA ko raga aapne lund se salami deta hainnnn .....





Raga ke lund ne aaj boht kuch pass se dekha tha....raga apne lund ko hat main pakad kar jor jor se masalne lagta hainnn....




Usse NAMRTA ki khusboo aapne lund pain mehsus ho rahi thi ...







Ahhhh sali ka kya pasina tha.... ufffffffff pehali bar kisi ne mere lund ko aisa tadpaya hainnn...ahhh...uske bagal ka pasina kya kayamt tha Bhagwan ahhh man kar raha tha abhi kahatiya pain sula ke uss kamini ka pura bagal chat lu.....aaapne kale bhuke jaban se iss ke pure dress ko bhiga du.....aapne kale lund ko iss ke gand ko pareshan kar du...ahhhh....








RAGA ke hatiyar ki nas nas tan chuki thi... NAMRTA ke jate huve gaand ko dekh uska lund aapne kam ras ko chodne ke liye machal raha tha ..



  


Ahhhh kya matak rahi hai iski gaand....ohhh mere iss jhopde main ye garmi se itni bhig gayi thi....iski gaand bhi gili ho gayi hogi.....iski janghe bhi ....kya maja aayega iske pasine se latpat gore jangho ko chatne mainn...





Ahhhhhhhhhhhhh......





Aur tabhi jate huve NAMRTA ke taraf RAGA ke lund ki pichkariya udne lagti hainnnn....











Ahhhhh ye mal ko me hasil kar ke rahungaa...ahhhhhh





Aur dekhte he dekhte RAGA ke najro se NAMRTA gayab ho jati hainnnn....





RAGA ka sara ....maal NAMRTA ke branded  tuti huvi hills ko bhiga deta hainnn.......


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Yaha ....ek room main ek shaks ke alag he planning chal rahi thi ...






Uske hat sone ki chidiya lagi thi voh bas vahi photos ko dekh raha tha...man ki aag uss pics ko dekh ke shant ho rahi thi....





Ahhh abbb dikhaunga uss item phataka ko ki tu hogi ACP ki beti par hum bhi kam nahi hainn....abb dekhta hu tu kaise nahi aayegi iss Karan ke niche madarchod ki sari gurmi nikal dunga...aur iski shuruvat kal se hogi.....


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Jate vakt NAMRTA ke man main boht sare vichar aaa rahe the....uska dimag kam karna band kar chuka tha ... ABHI se voh boht pyar karti thi.....par par.... NAMRTA ko samjh nahi aaa raha tha...jin logo se voh accha bartav karti hainnn...voh log usse shaitani najro se q dekhte hain aur ye v4 pehle bhi uske man main aaya tha jab uske Jeevan ka pehla performance usne diya tha.....




1.......YEAR AGO.........




ANCHOR :- OHHHHHHHHHH WOWWWWW WHAT A STAGE BURNING PERFORMANCE BY OUR NEW FRESHER MISS NAMRTA.......




Charo taraf chillane ki aavaj thi....stage ki lighting namrta ko boht sundar bana rahi thi....kafi ladko ko aapne performance se NAMRTA ne garam kar diya tha.....






Usssss rat NAMRTA ka roop kafi dekhne layak tha.... namrta ki kamuk navel ka maja uss din sab ne liya tha...par asli khel toh uss performance ke bad tha...jab pasine se latpat namrta stage ke niche aati hain aur changing room main ghus jati hainnn...





Tabhi uska mobile bajta hainnnn.....aur ek message tha ..



Person :- boht khub maja aagaya tumhara performance dekh ke jaisa socha tha usse bhi badiya tha...





NAMRTA :- thank you....aapki vajh se possible huva..





Person :- toh kaha ho tum 





NAMRTA :- changing room main hu...




Person :- kya change karna hain tumhe...





NAMRTA :- voh voh ....dress ...





Person :- nahi ....yaha aaajao ...





NAMRTA :- kaha...samji nahi main kuch ..

[Royalkingfire]

Person :- abbb meri bat nahi manogi tum NAMRTA 




NAMRTA :- manungi....




Person :- toh aajao...yaha...ussi dress main jiss main tumne abhi abhi dance kiya...





NAMRTA :- kaha aana hainnn...





Person :- vahi jaha ...pain tumhe tumhare andar aur bahar dono khubsurti ka pata chala tha...vahi aana...jaha pain maine tumhe asli NAMRTA se milaya ...jaha tumhe aana pasand hainnn...





NAMRTA ke chehre pain ek muskaan aati hainnn...aur ek dara huva kahyal bhi jisse NAMRTA ki muskaan gayab ho jati hainnnn.....aur ankho main ghabrahat mehsus Hoti hainnn...







Yaha ....ek ...bade he ajeeb se jagah pain ek khursi thi....aaju baju ki jaagh puri khandar dikh rahi thi Ghana sa andhera tha....aur ek lighter jal raha tha....dhire se usme ek cigarette jalti hainnn.....





Cigarette ko thame huve hat kafi kale the ....mano kisi buddhe insan ke ho...voh aadmi ganja tha....umar 58 sal ki hogi....uss kamre main charo taraf andhera tha ek hat main mobile tha aur mobile pain NAMRTA ki photo thi....



Aur aur .....ussssss...kale buddhe ka....nichla badan pura nanga tha....uski pant ghutno tak thi....aur aapne kale mote hatiyar ko aapne hato main thama huva tha....







Voh kala lund mano kisika intazar kar raha tha....usss lund ki nase tap chuki thi.... NAMRTA ke pic ko dekh voh aur machal raha tha.........






Yaha... NAMRTA usss khandar main aaa chuki thi...




Abhi abhi diye huve performance ki vajah se uska pura badan bhig chuka tha....uske dono aam pure tarah se gile ho chuke the....voh transparent dress bhi bhig chuka tha ..kamar pain pura pasina tha...




Par feer bhi NAMRTA ka look katil tha ... kamukata rom rom main thi.... lipstick ka colour uses aur bhi kamuk bana raha tha....uski janghe pasine se puri bhig gayi thi... isliye voh dress pura chipak chuka tha ..... ...






NAMRTA :- kaha ho aap mujhe dar lag raha hainn..






Aur usss room main baithe buddhe ke chere pain Kamini smile aaa jati hainnnnn..........





TO BE CONTINUED.......




STAY SAFE........ to

[Royalkingfire]

Kya jabrdast update or suspence.. ye vo lecturer hoga i think.super like always ur skills and everything.
Bs jb kisi ka namarta ko dkh k seduce hona explain krte ho tab almost repeat mode mai hi chlta hai bht lamba. Words aage piche hoke..  jaldi clear krke vha se length kam hogi or story jyada likhi jaiyegi.. i know mai ache se smjha ni skti k kyu kehma chahti hu. Bt jsa aapko shi lge u go.. waiting for next

THANK YOU RADHA FOR COMMENTS AND SUGGESTION 

ha i understand apko kya kehna hain and i am agree with you ki sometimes kuch things repeat hote hain but character development bhi jaroori hain . Agar main raga aur NAMRATA ke bich first meet main he kuch dikhaya hota toh voh illogical aur connect nahi hota apko . And NAMRATA ka bhi abhi developing phase chalu hain so i accept ki kahani ki phasing and movement slow hogi . 


But good things takes time  :)


Thank you for suggestions aise he COMMENTS kijiye ...aapke comments se mujhe kuch sikhne ko aur bat deliver karne ko asani hoti hain so thank you once AGAIN 

[Royalkingfire]

What A Fabulous Update.Aapke writing ki jitani tariff karu utani Kam Hain.
Firstly brilliant build up scene between Namrata and Raga,the way you describes the situation with pics is inch perfect.The conversation between Raga and namrata was good,and Raga somewhat reminds about the character of Birju.You didn't wrote sex scene between Namrata and raga in 1st meeting woh bahot acha laga bilkul reality jaisa laga.
Then Comes the best part of the story Stranger Buddha calling Namrata and inviting her to his room.
Woh Buddha toh Harami Das hoga .
Interesting call conversation between namrata and das on phone.Ab ye janana bahot interesting hoga 
Ke Uss buddhe ne Namrata ko asali namrata kaise dikhayi??Isape toh lamba episode banata Hain boss kyunki pehali meeting main to Buddhe ne namrata ko usaki sundarata Nahi dikhati hogi?Aur namrata pehele usase jab mili hogi toh wo Shy rahi hogi Aur kaise buddhe ne use dance performance Ke Liye manaya hoga janana interesting hoga.
Aur iss sab main ye secret abhi Tak Nahi open hua Hain Ke namrata ko chudai ka pehela lesson sikhaya kisane hoga??
Ab aage Kya hota Hain dekhana interesting hoga.Story past Aur present main bahot achi jaa rahi Hain.Sabhi log namrata ko pane Ke Liye bekarar Hain ab wo kon safal hota Hain dekhana interesting hoga.
Eagerly waiting for next update.
Keep it up.Kudos To your writing. yr):

Thank you brother.... clp);

ONCE AGAIN outstanding analysis 

Keep supporting

[Royalkingfire]

Can’t stop myself from reading and thinking about the next possible scenarios. This scene in the dark basement i think will be the soul of this story. This just sounds so erotic. 

A beautiful shy and horny female student is being manipulated by an old pervert teacher who always fantasised about taking his sexily shy student Namrita to the basement and fulfill his deep dark desires and lust using her young curvy body. She is hesitant to go but cannot refuse as her nature is very submissive. Plus she thinks she cannot say no to a teacher. The teacher always knew of Namrata’s submissive nature always fantasised about how he can manipulate her. 

As we can see in the scene that it’s not her first time going in the basement with that pervert, therefore she now has a little sense as to why she was being called in the basement alone. This shows that she now can be easily convinced to do whatever he desires. It would be awesome to read how it all started at the beginning and how she was able to reach where she is now with that pervert. 

Just another thing that i want to add is that involving Namrata with Karan is not a good idea, especially when all his friends are also involved in this. She has a reputation plus she’s a daughter of an ACP. Guys this age are very naive who won’t keep any secrets and tarnish her reputation. Girls in colleges are also aware of this and would rather be involved with guys such as teachers and unknown guys from outside colleges who she believes will not expose theirs illicit acts. Just my observation. She is in the developing phase of her youth and sexuality and Karan is way too young, naive and hyper that he wont do any good to Namrata’s character. 

Just my small input. Please don’t take it the wrong way. And disregard if you don’t agree with it. 

The scene with the shoe repairer is also beyond eroticism. She is disgusted by his gaze but also not sure how to react to it and to tell him not to stare. This will make her more submissive in front of him eventually will fall to his advances. He can take advantage of her anyway he want in his small dirty bunker and she being submissive and curious about all these new sexual things happening to her will make him more dominant to use her full. 

Can’t wait for the next update. 

Thank you brother

Amazing analysis and review 

KEEP supporting

[Royalkingfire]

DEAR READERS..


PICHLE 1 MONTH SE ISS KAHANI KA KOI UPDATE NAHI AAYA HAIN USKE LIYE MAIN AAPKI TAHE DIL SE MAFI MANGTA HU...

MAHARASHTRA MAIN SITUATION HAR DEEN KHARAB HO RAHI HAIN ...PICHLE EK MAHINE SE KAFI RELATIVES AUR FAMILY MEMBERS ISS SITUATION SE DEAL KAR RAHE HAIN . H

HAR EK DEEN SAB KE LIYE ALAG ALAG HOTA HAIN . SO SAB APNI APNI CARE KARO 

BATA NAHI SAKTA UPDATE KAB AAYEGA PAR YE KAHANI INCOMPLETE NAHI RAHEGI YE MERA VADA HAIN 


KEEP SUPPORTING....


STAY SAFE ....

TAKE CARE.......

[Royalkingfire]

DEAR READERS........


 kuch bhi likhne se pehle main aap sabki tahe DIL  se mafi mangta hu pichle 4 months se iss kahani ka koi bhi new update nahi aaya hain 

Corona ke second wave main mera boht personal loss huva uss se ubharne main samay laga 1 months se main hafte me iss site ko visit deta tha iss kahani pe comments and personal message tabhi bhi chalu the 


Itne bade gap ke bad kahani ke update dena dur ki baat par man bhi nahi huva sochne ka mere pas kahani continue karne ka koi why nahi tha , but apke personal messages and kahani ke prati prem ko dhyan me rakhte huve me ye message likh raha hu .


Aur bat rahi update ki toh . Honestly speaking writing ek kala hain aur ek kalakar apne kala se jyada der dur nahi reh sakta but other side is uski vajh se uske kala ko protsahan dene vale ko takleef hoti hain joh apko meri vajh se jhelni padi 


Filhaal kahani ek mid stop pe khadi hain so i don't know kaha se pick-up kiya jaye , there is so many possibilities and point of views 


Iss situation main kahani ke prati aap sabki ray (suggestions) jane bagair main koi bhi kadam nahi utha sakta 


So kya lagta hain apko kya karna chahiye comment here or DM me 


Once again aap sabne ye prove kiya hain aap is thread ke sabse mature and thinkable audiance ho 


                         ........ :- ROYALKINGFIRE

[Royalkingfire]

Well your story is AWESOME, padh kar hum apne gum bhool jate hai. I want you to continue the story with your own imagination. It is your writing skills that we love and that has brought the story to this level. aur bahut sa foreplay rakhna.

Thank you brother 

[Royalkingfire]

BTW I love the character and exploits of suchita. Also being your first story you have nailed it.

Hamm   sir  jii   ap kalakar   or  ham raider   ham galtiya bi nikalnge  or   wah wai  bi karnge  so ap khud  hi   apni   lqst  upadte  dekh ke storyy aage bathaooo  nddd  


   Meri  khud ki yahi rai he ki   story  me   jyada  carectar  aad mat  karnaa  or   jo    ladaki  or maa  jo abi chal   raha  hi men roll me rakhnaa

@royalkingfire story apki jabardast hai....mere suggestions se tumne story Jha roki thi ...whi se continue kro dost....
Story apki hai yr.....so jaisa tumne socha hai ...waisa likho....kyuki hr reader ki soch alag hoti hai story ko lekar..... So jitna jldi ho sake  come back ....and again continue this story....bahit miss kr rha hu apki sory ke update ko.....

Thank you all of you   

Keep supporting , thanks for comment.

[Royalkingfire]

Ab aate hain aapki story pe.
In the beginning of the story we introduced Namrata as sweet,shy,sanskari ,Sharif girl.
Even with the encounter with Birju and savla we always saw innocent face of Namrata.Even in diwali encounter episode we still thought Namrata as sweet sanskari but in safar saga we introduced to new Namrata Jo Sanskari dikhane ka natak karati hain lekin Hain chalak Lombadi.
And in flashback saga now we witnessing how Namrata is transformed into chalakh lombadi Aur iss flashback saga main bahot naye characters introduce hue Abhi,Karan,Dube sir ,raga etc.Ab story bahot intresting mode pe aa gayi Hain.Ab mujhe kya lagata Hain ya meri suggestions main aapko bata hoon.
1.iss flashback saga main bhi flashback aa gaya jab Namrata ne dance performance Kiya aur usse ek aadami ka message aaya jisane use khandar main bulaya jise namra pehele se hi jaanati hain.kyunki uss aadami ne message main likha tha ke us jagah aana jaha aana tumhe pasand hain aur jaha tumne apni andar aur baher ki khubsurati ko jana tha so Mera guess Hain ye ki wo buddha aadami Shayad das sir hoga.jisake bare main abhi ne bataya tha,kala buddha 58 saal ka.
2.Agar wo aadami das Hain to ye dekhana intersting hoga ke usane namrata ko peheli baar seduce kaise kiya hoga.kyunki Namrata pehele se to aisi hogi nahi wo pehele sanskari,shy,sweet rahi hogi.fir das ne use kaise dheere dheere seduce kiya ye janana interesting hoga.Aur sunsan khandar jaise jagah main usane Namrata ke sath kya kya kiya hoga ye sochte hi uttejana aa jati Hain.
3.Agar wo aadami das nahi to kaun ho sakta hain ye aap hi bata sakte ho wo koi buddha college peon,Fake pujari ya baba koi bhi ho sakta hain.
4.Aur Namrata ne uss addami ke sath college main bhi enjoy Kiya Hain ye hume abhi Namrata ke scene se pata chalta Hain kyunki college ki wo jagah bas Namrata ko pata thi.aur use wo jagah kuch kiye bina nahi pata hogi.
5.Aur story main jo baaki character Hain like dube sir,Karan,raga,abhi inhe supporting character hi rakho.Aur blackmailing angle bilkul mat dalo.
6.Story jaise pehele thi waise hi rakho more foreplay and seduction.koi force sex mat add karo.
Aapne last update Jo Diya tha usise aage kahani badhao Baki aap to master Hain story likhane ke jaisa aapko lage waise likho.kyunki aapki writing ke hum kayal Hain.
yr):

Thank you my brother 

Apke iss comment se story ko aage padhane main boht help hogi iski value words main nahi bata sakta

[Royalkingfire]

DEAR READERS......


AAPKE comments padh ke boht accha laga iss kahani ke prati apka prem aur connection main samjh raha hu issiliye main yaha ye story continue karunga 


Boht lambe gap ki vajah se thoda recap dekh lete hain 


Iss kahani ki kuch main character hain jinhe humne DIWALI ENCOUNTER ISS SAGA main developed hote dekha jaise ki 

1) NAMRATA

2) SUCHITA

3) BIRJU (WATCHMEN  OF SOCIETY, DEAD IN  PRESENT ) 

4) SAVLA ( SERVENT OF NAMRATA'S FAMILY) 

Aur iss saga main kuch supportive character the 

5) ABDUL ( suchita's lover ) 

6) SANJAY ( NAMRATA'S father) 


Iss DIWALI ENCOUNTER SAGA  ka response next level tha aur ye mera personal favourite bhi hain

Iske bad aayi "SAFAR SAGA " joh ek successful experiment tha 

Isme hamne 

SUCHITA ka hard-core encounter dekha ek gande Bhikari se train ke toilet main  ( jaha SUCHITA ko bad main samjha voh Bhikari se pregnant toh nahi huvi ? ) 

Aur ye experiment SUCHITA lovers ko kafi pasand aaya joh ek total fantasy writing thi as a writer maine pehli bar kuch alag likha tha  


Second half of story main hamne ek naye lead character ko dekha 

1)DCP MISHRA 

Jisne iss kahani ki main lead NAMRATA ko uske jawani ka maja diya ( ya NAMRATA ne liya ) 


Aurr iss point pe kahani present se past main chali gayi 

" NMARTA EK PAHELI " ISS saga main jisme hamne ab tak 3 episode dekhe aur boht sare new characters

1) VARSHA ( NAMRATA'S CLG FRND)

2) ABHI ( NAMRATA'S BF) 

4) RAGA ( CHAPRASI / BHIKARI) 

5) PROFESSOR DAS 

6) Karan 

7) UNKNOWN CHARACTER IN KHANDAR 


yaha tak kahani aake ruki hain par iss scenario ko maine tab socha tha aur ek writer ke ideas badlte rehte hain so in characters main se boht se character ka ab jikra bhi nahi hoga aage jake so ye chij as a reader aap samjh lena 


Aur current ongoing story main NAMRATA ek khandar main ja rahi hain aur ek unknown character vaha NAMRATA ka wait kar raha hain joh character mere liye bhi unknown hain 

@AVENSHARONNY  bhai ne iss character ko kafi acche se explain kiya hain upar vale comment main unhone possibility diyi ki vaha koi bhi ho sakta hain 

Jaise ki 

Professor Das 

Clg ka peon 

Clg ka koi aadmi 

Unknown bhikari / baba / fake pujari  joh NAMRATA ko janta ho 


So aap sabke upar main ek kam chod raha hu aapke fantasy aur logic ke hisab se uss unknown character main aap kise dekhte hain joh clg aur NAMRATA se sambandh rakhta ho because aage ki sari kahani past main chalegi joh NAMRATA ko develop karega 


Plz comment for that character 

After that sotry ka update aayega 


Kon hoga uss KHANDAR main ? 

Jiss ke liye NAMRATA dance ke bad clg ke piche vale KHANDAR main pasine se lat pat hoke ja rahi hain 





Aapke jawab ka intajar rahega 



              ROYALKINGFIRE.           

[Royalkingfire]

Welcome Royalking Bhai..??
apke laut aane se is platform me ek nayi jaan daldi hai..??

namrata ki journey jo aapne abhi tak twist and turn se likhi hai wo abhi tak kamaal hai..muze malum hai ki uski aage ki journey bhi aisi hi kamaal ki hogi..

kuch suggestions:
story jaisi likhi hai waisi hi continue karo..abhi ke namrata ke saath relation sirf casual hi rakho..Karan ki blackmailing  jada mat badao..Karan ka character kam kardo..RAGA ya Das Sir character interesting rahega..muze lag raha hai ki RAGA aur das sir dono ko bhi barabar chance milna chahiye..lekin end mein dono me se ek namrata ko pura pata hai ye likh sakhte ho...
side by side namrata ke flashback me Birju, Savla comparative roll mein kidhar the ye bhi dikha sakthe ho..

hope ye journey surwaat se end tak apni sima tak pohochegi..???

royalking bhai apko fir se ek baar shubh kamanaye aapke story ke liye..?✌✌ hum apke follower apka hamesh saath denge..??

Thanks brother  and thanks for suggestion  

[Royalkingfire]

Ab aate hain aapne jo pucha uss sawal pe ke Namrata kiske sath khandahar main ho sakati hain???


Sabse pehele jisake sath Nahi honi chahiye ye main bataunga.



1.Karan : Mujhe blacmailing aur jealousy ka idea acha nahi lagata iss character ko Namrata se dur hi rakho.

2.Dube Sir : Dube Sir se better mujhe das sir ka character lagata Hain.

3.Raga : Raga ki entry abhi Hui Hain so wo pehele possible nahi hoga.

4.Abhi : ye to padakhoo Hain isse side main hi rakho 

5.Peon : Ye ho bhi sakta hain aur nahi bhi personally mujhe peon ka character Savla aur Birju jaise lagata Hain. story thodi repeatative ho jaayegi.Aur waise bhi Namrata ko peheli baar seduce karane ke liye usako ekant chahiye aur wo sabke samene Namrata pe dore nahi daal sakta,aur Namrata jaise high standard wali ladaki aise aadami se apane aap ko dur hi rakhiyegi.


Ab Kaun Ho sakta hain.


1.Das Sir  : Ye aadami ho sakta hain, buddha,kala,harami.Ye aadami Namrata ko tution padhane ke bahane chance maar sakta hain.Aur dheere dheere usse seduce bhi kar sakta hain aur unki biwi na hone ke karan wo Namrata ko emotional karwa sakte hain,aur khandhar main le Jake apani fantasies Puri kar sakta hain.Aur usake kehene par hi Namrata ne wo dress peheni thi.


2.Fake pujari/Bengali Baba   : Maine ye character isaliye bola ke isase kahani main ek naya intersting character aa jayega.Namrata ke parents Namrata ke padhai ke issuie ke baare main usake pass le gaye ho aur wo Namrata ko dekh ke paagal ho gaya ho aur puja karane ke vividh tariko se roz Namrata ko seduce karata ho alag alag tarike se Aur Namrata bhi kuch nahi bol sakati kyunki dheere dheere use bhi Maja aane lagega aur wo buddha pujari hone ki wajah se koi usape shaqe bhi nahi kar sakta.aur wo Namrata ko khandar le ja sakta hain. aur tum isame buddha pujari aur Suchita ka angle bhi mix kar sakate ho.


As per current scenario namrata just 12th pass Hui Hain,usse seduce karane wala buddha mature hona chahiye.Kyunki aise kisi raah chalte aadami ko Namrata apane sharir pe hath nahi lagane degi.
Jo bhi usako seduce karega usake pass patience hona chahiye aur jisake sath akela waqt nikalane ke liye Namrata ke parents raazi ho.Agar peon ya koi low grade wala aadami ye karega to ye story real nahi lagegi.kyunki ye bahot ajeeb lagega ki Namrata ka taka kisi low grade aadami ke sath bhida ho wo bhi College ke 1st year main ye baat usake liye aur usake family ke liye kitani sharmnak hogi agar baher aayegi to.So Namrata usake sath time bitayegi jisase wo Maja bhi le sake aur baat baher bhi nahi aaye. aisa mujhe lagata Hain.


Baki Tum beech beech main bus conductor ke sath bus ke andar ekad dusara seductive scene daal sakte ho..

Aap jo bhi likho kamal ko likhoge ye hume pata Hain aur hum aapke sath hain.

Eagerly waiting for next update.stay safe keep rocking. yr):

Thank you once again brother


Now maine decision le liya hain and aagle storyline pe kam chalu kar diya hain so thank you all of u 

Jinhone comments and suggestions diye 

[Royalkingfire]

NAMRATA ....EK....PAHELI :- EPISODE 04





REVIEW ......



Person :- abbb meri bat nahi manogi tum NAMRTA




NAMRTA :- manungi....




Person :- toh aajao...yaha...ussi dress main jiss main tumne abhi abhi dance kiya...





NAMRTA :- kaha aana hainnn...





Person :- vahi jaha ...pain tumhe tumhare andar aur bahar dono khubsurti ka pata chala tha...vahi aana...jaha pain maine tumhe asli NAMRTA se milaya ...jaha tumhe aana pasand hainnn...





NAMRTA ke chehre pain ek muskaan aati hainnn...aur ek dara huva kahyal bhi jisse NAMRTA ki muskaan gayab ho jati hainnnn.....aur ankho main ghabrahat mehsus Hoti hainnn...







Yaha ....ek ...bade he ajeeb se jagah pain ek khursi thi....aaju baju ki jaagh puri khandar dikh rahi thi Ghana sa andhera tha....aur ek lighter jal raha tha....dhire se usme ek cigarette jalti hainnn.....





Cigarette ko thame huve hat kafi kale the ....mano kisi buddhe insan ke ho...voh aadmi ganja tha....umar 58 sal ki hogi....uss kamre main charo taraf andhera tha ek hat main mobile tha aur mobile pain NAMRTA ki photo thi....



Aur aur .....ussssss...kale buddhe ka....nichla badan pura nanga tha....uski pant ghutno tak thi....aur aapne kale mote hatiyar ko aapne hato main thama huva tha....







Voh kala lund mano kisika intazar kar raha tha....usss lund ki nase tap chuki thi.... NAMRTA ke pic ko dekh voh aur machal raha tha.........






Yaha... NAMRTA usss khandar main aaa chuki thi...




Abhi abhi diye huve performance ki vajah se uska pura badan bhig chuka tha....uske dono aam pure tarah se gile ho chuke the....voh transparent dress bhi bhig chuka tha ..kamar pain pura pasina tha...




Par feer bhi NAMRTA ka look katil tha ... kamukata rom rom main thi.... lipstick ka colour uses aur bhi kamuk bana raha tha....uski janghe pasine se puri bhig gayi thi... isliye voh dress pura chipak chuka tha ..... ...






NAMRTA :- kaha ho aap mujhe dar lag raha hainn..






Aur usss room main baithe buddhe ke chere pain Kamini smile aaa jati hainnnnn..........




ABBBBB AAAGE...........






Uss khandar main jate vakt Namrata ke man main ek aisa dar tha joh usse khaye ja raha tha …usss rat ka andhera usse dara raha tha mano keh raha ho mat jao uss andheri khai main joh tumhari jindagi puri tarah se badal dega par Namrata ke andar ki utsukta aur uske andar ka kisi chij ke prati akarshan usse uss khandar ke andhere main dhakel raha tha usss vakt Namrata ke man main kai sare vichar chalu the 





Ki kaise voh issss andhere main aa pohchi , kaise uski khushal jindagi main ek romanch bharne vala par bada he khatarnak mod aaya aur kaise voh inn sab chijo main andar jati chali gayi jaise voh abhi usss andhere khandar main ja rahi thi …..







Andar baitha huva insan abhi bhi aapne cigrette ko aaram se fuk raha tha….aur aapne kamine chere pain ek alag he muskan de raha tha mano usko aaj voh milne vala ho joh usko aapne jindagi ke sabse kimti chij se rubaru karvayega aaj voh khud ko ek haivan samaj raha tha par uss haivaniyat ke piche kafi mehnat thi joh usse aaj isss jagah par layi thi . Usssi mehnat ki vajah se ek kamuk par kamukta se anjan apsara uske pass khud chal kar aa rahi thi …..







Aakhir kya tha ye sab …kon tha voh aadmi …q ja rahi hain Namrata uske pass voh bhi aapne college ka function chod ke 







Yahi khayal aur sawal Namrata ko khaye ja raha tha akhir pichle kuch dino se sidhi sadhi simple sanskari Namrata isss khai main aake q atak gayi aur tabhi uske dimag main khayalo ke tar doudne lagte hainn







Ye vakt tha tab ka jab Namrata ne isss bade se college main admission liya tha matlab aaj se kuch 1 month pehle 



Namrata ne apne 12th board exam me top kiya tha isiliye usko isss bade college main admission mila aur voh kafi khush thi .


Aaj uske college ka pehla din tha aur voh kafi utsuk thi aapne education ke naye jivan ko shuru karne ke liye , college main voh kafi bandhi bandhi se rehti thi sabko pata tha ki voh ACP ki beti hain aur sab use vaise he treat karte the par ab namrta ko voh nahi chahiye tha 


Voh naye college aur nayi chijo ke pari utsuk thi 

Apne college ke pehle din Namrata ne sundar sa sanskari salwar kameez pehna tha aur sach batavu toh Namrata usme apsara ki tarah lag rahi thi 





Violet colour ke uss libaz main namrta makkhan se lag rahi thi doodh jaisa gora rang aur skin mano paneer ki taraha smooth thi uski ye jawani ufan ufan ke apni jubani de rahi thi 

Doodh jaisa gore rang pe voh salwar kameez aapna jalwa dikha rahi thi 


Yess khubsurat kameez ke niche Namrata ki jawani sundar se duppate se dhaki huvi thi par usss kameez ke niche dabe huve asli doodh ka kehar usss dupatte ke upar se bhi pata chal raha tha 


Aur salwar main chupi jawani ki voh ada toh kuch aur he the upar se pehne huve hills uss jawani ko aur badhava de rahi thi 



Aise saj dhaj ke namrta aaj aapne college ko jane ke liye nikli thi aapne dad Sanjay aur mom suchita ke pair chuke usne Aaj din ki shuruwat kiyi thi 


College main pohchte he Namrata ne aapne class ko dhund liya pehla din tha aapne adat ke mutabik namrta first bench par baithi thi lecture start huve 


Ek ke bad ek sir , madam aate gaye aur namrta ka man uss college ke education aur padhai main lagne laga ..



Aadhe lecture khatam hone ke bad day break huva .....




Namrata ka college ko dekhne ka man huva aur namrta uss bade se college main ek chakkar marne lagi 



Jane anjane main boht se student namrta ko tirchi najro se dekh rahe the , namrta ki chal sabko lubha rahi thi , namrta ka lachila badan sabko akarshit kar raha tha par namrta aapne main mashgul thi 




Namrata ke kuchi duri par ek adhed umra ka insan jaldbaji main chal raha tha sar ke upar ke aadhe bal ujade huve the , kala sa rang tha , patla sa sharir aur old type kapde pehne huve the agar kapde acche na hote toh koi bhi usse buddha keh deta par college main hone ke karan ek aadmi jaisa lag raha tha dikhne main umar jyada lag rahi thi 



Uss aadmi ko pasina aaya huva tha aur fat fat pair dalte huve voh aapne tension main chal raha tha 



Yaha namrta bhi aapne kamuk se chal chalte chalte sab dekh rahi thi 



Aur ussi vakt usss kale aadmi ki najar namrta pe girti hain aur uski chal dhimi se ho jati hain...


Jaldbaji main hokar bhi voh aapne pairo ke gati dhimi kar deta hainnn...aapne mathe ke upar ka pasina aapne hato se poch deta hainn aaur aapni dono najro ko usss khubsurat bala ke upar tika deta hainnn...




Namrata ko dekh usss buddhe aadmi ke muhh se ek he shabd niklta hainnn...


Waahhhhhh kya khubsurti hainn......



Namrata ko voh dekhta he reh jata hainn.

Namrata jaise jaise uss aadmi ke karib aa rahi thi vaise vaise uss aadmi ko namrta ki madhur se khushboo mehsus ho rahi thi 


Ab tak toh voh namrta ki khubsurti ko dekh raha tha par namrta jaise jaise najdik aa rahi thi vaise vaise uske najro main boht kuch dikh raha tha 


Makkhan sa gora badan apsara jaisa nurani chehara gora rang uss gore se chere pe lipstick ki halki se shade aur salwar kameez aur dupatte ka libaz ufffff kya khubsurti hainnn.....


Namrata ko karib aata dekh usss aadmi ke muhh main kuch shabd aaye 

Ufff "32-28-34" shandarrrrrr.....


Namrata  ko koi Idea nahi thi ki koi use dekh raha hainn


Par usss aadmi ki najre abhi bhi ...namrta pe tiki huvi thi 



Namrata uss aadmi ko pass karne he vali thi ki usss aadmi ke najre namrta ke sabse nayab hisso pe padti hain...









Namrata ke jawani bhare ubhar usss aadmi ke najro ko pagal kar deti hainnn...


32 ke perfect ghere vale aam usss kameez main chupe huve the jiss pe se halka sa duppata hata huva tha uffff kya golakar aakar vala kaccha aam tha


Tabhi uski najar lachile chal par jati hainn jaha 28 ki kamar ka gher uss kameez ke upar se dikh raha tha 


Aur najar niche aati hain toh aadmi ka muhh khula ka khula reh jata hainn...


Uffffff kya janghe thi ...uss jangho  ka aakar aur usss kameez ke niche aur salwar ke upar se ubhra huva namrta ka gaand vala aakar dekh voh aadmi aapna sara tension bhul jata hain aur 


Kuch he palo main namrta usss ke najro se dur ho jati hainnn....



Tabhi voh aadmi hosh main aata hainnn...aur uss pal ko sochte huve usse aapna tension vala kam yad aata hainn aur jaldi jaldi chalne lagta hainn..



Uske nak main namrta ki khushbu mano baith se gayi thi .......par usss khubsurat bala ko dekhne ke bad voh aapne pav jaldi jaldi chalte huve apne kam ki jagh pohch jata hainn...



Kuch he der main time ho jata hain aur namrta aapne class ki taraf chal padti hain aur aapne bench pe jake baith jati hainnn...

Ab sirf 3 lecture bache the aur namrta ma aaj ka pehla din khtam hone vala tha 

Kaise toh kar ke 2 lecture nikal jate hainnn...aur abb sirf aakhri lecture bacha tha class me thoda shor tha namrta aapna matha bench pe tika ke uss shor se pareshan hoke aankh band kar aaram kar rahi thi 



Tabhi namrta ko mehsus hota hain ki class ka shor kam ho raha hain aur dhire dhire pura class shant ho jata hain namrta ko lagta hain Achanak kya huva ...

 Tabhi namrta ke kano pe cham cham kar ke pair ke paijano ki aavaj aati hain namrta aapni ankhe khol dekhti hain toh uske samne ekdum khubsurat mohtarma thi .....


Usss mohtarma ki chal kuch alag se thi aur voh auart black board ke table ke yaha aapna register aur saman rakhti hainn...aur apne khubsurat otho se shabd nikalti hain..



Helllo ... everyone ...my name is kinjal Roy and i am your class teacher.......


Class me baithe sab bachhe ekdusre ke muhh ko dekhte rehte hainn...


Q ki unke samne ek boht he khubsurat bala khudko teacher bata rahi thi aur upar se voh unki class teacher bhi thi usss madam ne ek pink colour ki sadi pehni thi aur lipstick bhi pink thi upar se gora rang aur pink tight kasa huva blouse uski khubsurti badha raha tha .







Namrata bhi usss teacher ki khubsurti ko najdik se dekh rahi thi aur uss teacher ko dekh namrta ko kafi accha laga q ki ab tak sab lecture male teacher ne liye the.


Kinjal :- aise shock mat hojaiye sab me apka pehla lecture lene vali thi as a class teacher but kuch emergency ke vajah se nahi le payi but anyway me apki iss pure year ki official class teacher hu actually hamare kafi experience ek sir hain joh apko padhane vale the but unfortunately unko kafi work load hain so that's y . I am your class teacher now 


Sab ladke uss khubsurat otho ke bato pe dhyan de rahe the waahh kya aavaj tha uss mam ka ....



Namrata man me ( wow kya khubsurat mam hain age se 26-28 ki lag rahi hain ...and kya fashion choice hain mam ka wow ) 


Aur kuch he der main bate karne ke bad lecture khatam ho jata hain and namrta apne ghar ki aur nikal padti hainn......



5 DAYS LATER -----: -




Abbb namrta college se kafi ghul mil gyi thi uski ek hii-bye vali friend bhi ban gayi thi jiska nam varsha tha par unme jyada bat nahi hoti thi beacuse namrta aage baith ti thi aur har koi aage baith ne se darta tha 


Namrata ki in 5 dino main miss kinjal favourite teacher ban chuki thi unka padhana , bat karna , fashion sense , body language sab namrta ko pasand aata tha ek respect sa aata tha namrta ko miss kinjal ko dekhne ke bad 



Aaaj namrta ne Black colour ki kameez aur niche tight leggings pehni thi har vakt ki tarah iss bar bhi namrta ki khubsurti kehar dha rahi thi namrta ka badan usss kameez aur leggings main kafi tight dikh raha tha aur uss kameez ka gala bhi kafi deep tha par dupatta hone ke karan chinta ki bat nahi thi 








Agar dupatta na hota toh namrta ka ye roop dekh kisi ka bhi khada hoke namrta ko salami de deta uske kandhe pure khulle the aur halki si dor thi joh kandho aur aamo ka bhar utha rahi thi .....niche ki hills namrta ke gaand ko aur bhi sunadr aur ubhar de rahi thi
Tight kameez main namrta ke aamo ki darar aagar dupatta hat jaye toh kisi ko bhi saf dikhai degi .....



Aaj namrta ko late ho gaya tha voh jaldi jaldi college main entry karti hainnn...aur aapne class ki taraf badhti hainnn....



Par tabhi namrta ke hills ki hook nikal jati hainnn.. aur uske pair ke paijan uss hills main atak jati hian ...


Namrata :- yar isse bhi abhi atakna tha...


Aur tabhi samne se ussi deen vala bujurg aadmi aaa raha tha ...usse kuch door se he ek dimag me baithi huvi mehak aatai hainn...aur voh tham sa jata hainnn...aage dekhta hain toh uske samne vahi khubsurat bala thi jisse usne kuch din pehle dekha tha 




Namrata aapne hills ko thik karne ke liye niche jhuk kar baith jati hainnnn...



Voh kala aadmi namrta ke aur chal padta hainnn.....



Aur usse aapne ankho pain yakin nahi aata bahar se pure aur khubsurat dikhne vali ye ladki kon hain aisa sawal usse padta hainnn..



Namrata ab pura jhuk ke aapne hills ko thik kar rahi thi ..


Aur tabhi uss aadmi ke najro main kamukta bhari chij dikhai deti hainnn....aur uske pant main kuch halchal se mach jati hainn...aur uske andar ek alag se aag paida hoti hainnn.uske najro ke samne joh tha voh dekh kisi ka bhi lund tight ho jaye 












Ufffff namrta ka jhkune ki vajah se uske 32 ke kacche aamo ki perfect shape dikh raha tha aur kase huve uss kameez main namrta ke dono boobs ke darar uss aadmi ke lund main aag paida kar rahe the 

Namrata ke jhuke huve badan se uss aadmi ko badi he kamuk smell aa rahi thi aur namrta iss sab se anjan thi voh aadmi namrta ko abb kafi karib se dekh raha tha aur tabhi namrta hills ko thik kar ke uthne lagti hainn....aur usss aadmi ka lund aapne pant main pura akad ke namrta ke usss khubsurti ko aur unnn perfect aamo ko salam thokta hainnn....m









Namrata ke dono aamo ki gehrai dekh voh aadmi madhosh ho jata hainnn...ufff kya gehrai thi unnn do aaamo ke bich uss khubsurti ki kisi ko bhi pagal bana ne ke liye ye scene kafi tha 


Namrata ki badi gehraai dekh voh kala aadmi aapne aap ko sambhal leta hainnn...aur uss gore badan ko dekhta he reh jata hainnn...namrta ki najar usss aadmi pe padti hain par voh tej chalte huve class ki aur chali jati hainnn....yaha voh aadmi namrta ko jata dekhta he rehta hainnn.......


Aadmi :- ufffff kon hain ye bacchi lagta hain new student hain iss naye sal ki aaj isne dusri baari pareshan kiya hain mujhe 



Yaha namrta class me pohach ke aapne bench pain baith jati hainnn....


Pure din ke lecture ho jate hain abb sirf akhri lecture bacha tha aur voh namrta ki favourite teacher miss kinjal ka tha aur namrta bhi kinjal miss ke lecture ke liye utsuk rehti thi baki ladke kisi aur vajah se kinjal miss ke lecture ke liye utsuk rehte the .


Par tabhi notice aati hain ki aaj last lecture nahi hoga yani ki Kinjal miss lecture lene nahi aayegi aur tabhi sare class ka chehra gir  jata hain namrta ka man bhi udas ho jata hain par ghar jaldi jane ka khyal usse khush kar deta hainn..

 
Dhire dhire pura class khali ho jata hain aur namrta bhi class se bahar nikal jati hainnn..tabhi namrta ko mehsoos hota hain usse washroom jana padega isaliye voh ladies toilet ke aur aapne kadam badha leti hainn college ab pura khali ho chuka tha namrta toilet ke yaha pohach jati hainn.



Voh usss toilet ka darwaaja apne komal hato se dhakel deti hain voh iss side ke toilet main pehli bar aayi thi staff room ke baju main hone ke karan yaha sirf ladies teacher aati thi 


Namrata ek toilet main ghus jati hainn....aur urine kar ke khadi ho jati hain aur voh udhar se nikalne he vali hoti hain ki uske kano pain halki se aavaj aati hainnn..



Ummmm nahi ....


Voh aavaj itni dhimi aur halki thi ki namrta ko thik se sunai nahi diyi ...


" ahm mat karo aisa "


Is bar aavaj thodi badi thi ....


Namrata ekdum chouk se jati hain aur voh uss diwar ko kan kan laga leti hainnn...aur kuch sunane ki koshish karti hainnn..


" Ah natak mat karo jaldi jaldi kam niptana hain" 


Issss bar ek alag aavaj thi joh sunn sunn namrta pura shock ho jati hain q ki ye aavaj boht gehri aur ek aadmi ki thi , schok isaliye laga tha q ki ye ladies toilet tha aur yaha aadmi kya kar raha tha ? 



Namrata vahi sunnn hoke khadi rehti hainnn...



Aur yaha baju vale toilet main kuch alag he mahol tha....jisko dekh kisi ki bhi chut pani chod de aur lund aapni aag bahar nikal de 


Yaha ek khubsurat sa badan diwar ke yaha khada hoke aapni saree upar kar ke khada tha uski gaand saree se dhaki huvi thi par chut ka darwaaja pure tarike se khula huva tha , chut ki mehak pure bathroom main ghum rahi thi aur badan ka perfume uss mehak ko aur kamuk bana raha tha 




Chut puri tarah se gili ho chuki thi aur jhukne ke karan uss aurat ka chehra dikh nahi raha tha par uss aurat ka ye nanga pan kisi ke bhi lund me aag laga de Ufff kya najara tha dosto ek bde college ke toilet main ek khubsurat bala aapni chut aur gaand ko aise bahar nikal kar khadi thi 

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Ussss khubsurat mohtarma ke piche ek patla sa par kala aadmi khada tha joh usss aurat ke gaand aur chut ko dekh aapna bada sa lund aapne hato main liye hilaye ja raha tha mano uska lund ufan ufan ke usss chut main aapni garami utarna chaha raha ho 


Aur ye kala aadmi aur koi nahi vahi tha joh namrta ko pehle deen aaur aaj dekh raha tha jab namrta aapne hills thik kar rahi tab yahi lund namrta ko dekh khada ho gaya tha par abhi usss lund ke samne ek nangi chut thi 




Ufffffff voh aadmi toh adhed umra ka tha par uska lund ekdam kadak aur 9 inch ka tha jisko dekh kisi bhi aurat ke man me dar bas jaaye voh aadmi aapne kale lund ko aapne hato se masal raha tha aur aapne lund ko usss aurat ke chut ki aur badha deta hainnnn.....



Yaha namrta abhi bhi diwar ko kan lagaye khadi thi usse abb dar lagne laga tha par andar se aa rahi dhmi aavaje abb badhne lagi thi ....



Aadmi :- ahhh tayar ho na...


Aurat :- ahhh ha ... par 


Aadmi :- par kya 


Aurat :- ghar bhi jana hain mujhe toh chalna aana chahiye 


Aadmi :- chinta mat karo ..


Aurat :- ahh ha 


Ye aavaje namrta ko sar sar sunai de rahi thi aur namrta ka dimag pura ghum chuka tha akhir kya ho raha tha anadar 



Yaha anadar voh aauart aapni saree pakad ke aapne chut ke ched ko aapne pair upar rakh filatai hain aur voh aadmi aapne lund ko uske chut pe set kar deta hainnn...






Ufffff uss Aadmi ke lund ki garami puri tarah se usss aurat ke chut pe mehsoos hoti hainnn....aur tabhi voh auart aapna pura chehra upar kar ek jor ki siskari bharti hainnn..


Aaah....ahhh hm .....dosto voh aurat aur koi nahi 


Balki namrta ki favourite teacher miss Kinjal Roy thi ....





Ji haaaa.....miss kinjal he thi voh auart joh aapni sundar se saree utha ke usss admi ke aage aapni nangi chut ko khulla faila kar uss aadmi ke lund ki garami aapne abdar le rahi thi ....



Uffffff akhir ek Jawan 26 saaal ki teacher ek adhed umra ke aadmi ka lund aapne chut par tika ke q khadi thi....

Kinjal :- ahhhhhhhhh ouchhhhhhhh


Aur tabhi usss haivan ka lund kinjal ke chut ke andar enter karta hainnnn....aur kinjal ke chut se ahhhh mano garami bahar nikal jati hainnnn...



Aaadmi :- ahhhh meri jaan...ahhhhh madarchod...ahh 


Ye shabd sunnn diwar ko kan lagayi namrta aur shock ho jati hainn...usne pehli baar ye gali suni thi voh bhi iss aggression se usko kuch andaja nahi tha ki andar kya chal raha hainnn....


Yaha kinajl ki kasi huvi chut me voh lund aasani se andar ghus jata hainnnn.....





Kinjal :- ahhhhh ouchhhhhh fuckkk ahhh 


Aadmi :- ahhhh ab toh nasha se ho gai hain teri ye aavaj ahhh aur ye jawani ahhh 


Kinjal :- ahhh hmmm ouchhhhhh 


Kinjal miss dard se tadap rahi thi aur lund ka dard saf uske chehre pe dikh raha tha ....



Namrata ko andar se aane vali aurat ki aavaj abb kuch jani pehchani lag rahi thi par voh aavaj pehchan ne me voh nakamyab ho jati hainnnn....



Abbb namrta ko andar se boht jor se ...


Thappppppppppp thapppppp thapppppp 

Ki aavaje aane lagti hainnnn....joh kafi jor ki thi aur tabhi ek jor ki aavaj aati hainnn..


Miss Kinjal :- ahhhhhhhhhh fuckjkkkkkkkkkk uhhhhhhh



Aadmi :- ahhhhhh itne me jan jan nikal.gayi teri ahhhh le saaali ahhhhh madarchod ahhhhh ahhhhhh le le mera ye lund ahhhhhhh sali ahhhhhh 



Kinjal :- ahhhhh kaha ka ghussa ahhhhh nikal rahe ho aap ahhhh ouchhhhhh ahhhhh 



Aadmi :- ahhhh chup baith ahhh ouchhhhhh behanchod ahhhhh mere lund ko shant kar ahhhhhh 



Ye aavaj namrta ko saf sunai de rahi thi par uske chehre pain koi bhav nahi tha q ki usko kuch shab ke meaning he pata nahi the 


15 minutes ho chuke the aur abhi bhi jordar thukai ka aavaj usss bathroom main gunj raha tha ....



Miss Kinjal :- ahhhhhhhhh bassss ahhhhhh uhhhhhh nahi ahhhhhhhh ouchhhhhh fuckjkkkkkkkkkk



Kinjal ka isss thukai main abbb pura badan nanga ho chuka tha ...aur usss Aadmi kr aur toh mano haws ka bhut chadh gaya tha badi he behrahmi se voh Kinjal ke chut ko thok raha tha 






Kinjal :- ahhhhhhh fuckjkkkkkkkkkk yar ahhh mar gayi aaj main ahhhhhhhhh ouchhhhhhhh 


Aaadmi :- ahhhhh sali mera aaaaa raaha hainnn...



Yaha namrta ko abbb ghutan aur dar sa lagne lagta hainn...voh apne toilet ka darwaaja khol ke baahar nikalne lagti hainnn....aur tabhi yaha ....


Usss aadmi ke lund ka sara pani miss Kinjal ke chut main bhar jata hainnnn....aur kinjal ye mehsoos kar siskari bharne lagti hainnnn...



Aur namrta bahar nikalne he vali hoti hain ki usko uss aurat ki ek bat sunai deti hainnn...


Miss Kinjal :- ahhhmmm sir ahhhhhh DAS sir ahhhh aaj apne mujhe chalne ke bhi aukaat ka nahi choda ahhh 



Namrata ko voh name sunai deta hain....aur voh apne otho pe voh nam chalte chalte put putati hain 


Namrata :- Das sir ....das sir....aur namrta college se nikal jati hainnnn.....



Aaagle din College ke pehle he lecture main ek notice aati hain....


Notice :- aaaj se 3 weeks bad college main fresher party hone vali hain agar koi fresher student inn sab main interested ho toh jald he respective teacher se contact kare iss program main boht sare activities honge 

Singing 
Dancing 
Etc ....



Dancing ka nam sunke he namrta ke chehre pain khushi aa jati hain usse bachpan se dance ka shouk tha 


Notice :- dancing ke liye student plz department ke senior profesor MR. Narayan DAS sir se contact kare 



Aur voh nam sunke namrta vahi sunnn ho jati hainn...voh nam usne kal he kahi suna tha joh yad kar ke uske pav vahi kampne lagte hainn..............

Ye naam namrta ke jindagi main boht bada tufan laane vala tha 


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