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RAJ - RAMAT 

PART 1. "AARAMBH "


Hi Friends ,


Apni nayi kahani RAJ RAMAT  ka  pehla bhag AARAMBH shuru Kar Raha hun . ye kahani 4 parts me likhne Ka Maine faisala Kiya hai jis se ki kahani ke Rahashya aur romanch avam romance  ko barkarar rakha Jaye.


 Is se pehle maine xossip pe royal rajveer ya warrior prince ke naam se  raasleela aur rajveer ki royal family jaisi kuch story likhi thi Jo side bane hone ki wajah se adhuri reh gayi thi , jo mere dosto ko kafi Pasand aayi thi . Is bar Bhi Mera yahi prayas rahega ki story aap Sab ko Pasand Aaye.


Kahani Jis ke title se  aap ko samjh aa hi Raha Hoga ki ye middle ages se talluk rakhti aur Raj gharane mein panapti sajisho aur  satta ki bagdor ke lie bichhayi  gayi shatranj ki bisaat pe  khele Jane wale khuni  khel ki dastaan par aadhaarit hai . ASHA karta Hu Mera prayas aap ko Pasand Aaye.

Ye kahani  2 kalpanik MAHADWEEPO "DEVSTHALI" AUR "MARUATHALI" me se ek mahadweep "DEVSTHALI" ke 7Raj pariwar aur unke samnto ke ird gird ghumti rehti hai . In 7 Raj gharano ki satta ki lalsa aur us ke liye Kisi Bhi had tak Jane ki unki niyat , unke sadayantra aur sattaprapti ke liye apnaye Gaye kamuk sangharsh  aap logo ko romanch aur romance ki ek alag hi wadio me le Jayegi.

To chaliye Sab se pehle hum in  7 rajgharano ke mukhya patro Ke bareme Jan le.

INTRODUCTION -
"DEVSTHALI"- 

(1)Rajya "DWARSAMUNDRAM"-  RAJDHANI "SAGARSETU" . 

SAMRAAT  VEERBHADRA -Umra 40 Saal , 
MAHARANI YAMINIi - Umra 32 Saal 
RAJ KUMAR VARUN - umra 15 Saal
RAJKUMARI SUGANDHA - umra 14 Saal
RAJKUMAR  MITRAVARUN - umra 12 Saal


(2)Rajya  "UTTARPATH" - Rajdhani "AARYAVRAT"
SAMANT RAJA - YUDHAJEET - Umra 39 saal
SAMANT RANI - - SUNAINA -Umra 35 saal
RAJKUMAR - YUDDHAVIR - Umra 18 Saal
RAJ KUMAR - AABHIJIT -Umra 14 SAAL
RAJKUMARI - NIHARIKA  - Umra 16 SAAL
RAJKUMARI - ANAMIKA - Umra 12 Saal
SAMANT RANI -  (DIVANGAT  )SONPRIYA
RAJ KUMAR  - SHORYA - Umra 17 saal


(3)Rajya "ASHMAK" - Rajdhani "SRAVASTI"
SAMANT SUBAAHU - Umra 48 saal
SAMANT PATNI - SUBHADRA - (DIVANGAT)
KUMAR KANISHKA - Umra 30 saal
KUMAR CHANDRACHUND - Umra 28 saal
SAMANT PATNI - DARIAANA - Umra 35 saal KUMARI - CHITRA - Umra 16 saal


(4)Rajya "AVANTI"- Rajdhani "MAHISHMATI"

SAMANT VIKUKSHI - Umra 60 saal
SAMANT PATNI - ARUNDHATI ( DIVANGAT)
SAMANT KA BHAI AGNIMITRA - Umra 55 Saal
KUMARI MRIGNAINI - Umra 33 Saal (married)
KUMAR ARIJEET -  Umra 30 Saal (unmarried)


(5)Rajya DAKSHINPATH - Rajdhani "VYOMMANDAL"
SAMANT SUKETU - Umra 50 Saal
SAMANT PATNI - SUBODHAA (DIVANGAT)
SAMANT PATNI - RASDHAARA - Umra 25 Saal
KUMAR - VJRAKETU - Umra 25 Saal
KUMAR - VASHUMAN - Umra 22 Saal
KUMAR - NIKUMBHAK - Umra 20 Saal



(6)Rajya "RASHTRAKUT" -  Rajdhani "MIHIRSTHALI"
SAMANT AJAATSHATRU- Umra 60 saal
SAMANT PATNI  SUNDARI - Umra 58saal
KUMAR NEELKANTH - Umra 42
KUMAR PATNI SARATPRABHA  - umra 40
KUMAR PUTRA VYOM  - Umra 20 saal
KUMAR NEELVARNA - Umra 40
KUMAR PATNI SAILENDRI -  Umra 36
KUMAR PUTRI SWETAAMBARI - Umra 18




(7)Rajya " KADAMBA" - Rajdhani "TRIVENI"
SAMANT - DIVANGAT SUREN
SAMANTPATNI - KADAMBARI - Umra 38 sa
KUMAR - AROHAN - Umra 19 Saal
KUMARI - AROHI - Umra 17 Saal
KUMARI -:AARYA - Umra 14 Saal

AB BAAT KARTE HAI IS DEV BHUMI NAAM KE MAHADWEEP  KE TINO  TARAF UBHAR AAYE KUCHH CHHOTE CHHOTE TAAPU O  KI JIN ME MUKHYATA  2  TAAPU O KA JIKRA HUM  IS WAQT KARENGE.

(1)"RATNKALASH"
SAMANT RATNAKAR - Umra 45
SAMANT PATNI (DIWANGAT) AHAANA
KUMAR VIVAAN - Umra 20 saal
KUMARI SANYOGITA - Umra 19 saal

(2)"KUNTALADWEEP" - "NAGAR KUNTALA"
SAMRAT- ARYAMAN (CHATURTH) DIWANGAT
SAMRAGNI - VASUDHA (DIWANGAT)
RAJKUMAR - AARYAMITRA (DIWANGAT)
RAJKUMAR PATNI ADITI (DIWANGAT)
RAJKUMAR PATNI - DHARA - Umra 36 Saal
RAJKUMAR PUTRI - SWARA - Umra 16 saal

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IS KE ALAWA BHI KAYI CHHOTE BADE TAPU AUR BHI HAI JIN KE BARE ME HUM NAKSHE SE BEHTAR JAAN PAYENGE AUR UNKE SAMANT PARIWARO KI HUM SAMAY SAMAY PAR CHARCHA KARENGE .


{DEV-STHALI  AUR USKE DWEEPO KA NKSHA NICHE DIYA GAYA HAI .}

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Dosto , NAKSHA Maine half bazi mein draw Kiya hai to Us me ki likhai saaf Nahi dikh rahi . Kintu main kal AUR saaf tarike se Naya NAKSHA post karunga .

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Episode 1
"Kya Dekh rahe ho ?  Itni uchai se kuchh dikhta Bhi hai kya ?" , Rutuparn ne diwar ki prachir pe chahal kadmi karte hue kinaare ke Burj par chadhe somdutt ko dekhte hue Kaha . 

Somdutt ne koi jawab dene ki bajaay apni hatheli ko aankho ke upar Rakh Kar or adhik prayash ke sath dur dur tak dekha . Somdutt ek 6 fit lamba tagada Jawan tha jisne thand se bachne ke liye far aur chamde se bana garam coat pahen rakha tha . Kamar me ek taraf talwar bandhi thi toh dusri taraf tivra aavaz dene wala bingul taang rakha tha .

Rutuparn ki poshaak bhi usi ki Tarah thi . Talwar ke sthan par Usne ek bhala hath me le rakha tha. Us ko jab koi jawab na Mila to woh bhi thand se thithurta hua prachir ke Burj par chadh aaya aur Som ke samkaksh khade reh Kar usi disha mein  dur tak dekhne Ka prayaas Karne laga .  

"kuch bata Bhi to yar ?" , Rutuparn ne thithurte hue puchha .

"Kya batau , abhi tak kuchh saaf Nahi dikh Raha lekin…., Usne baat aadhuri chhod Di .

"Kya jindagi hai Sali , Nyunatam tapmaan me thand se sikudte hue diwar ki pehredaari Karo aur badle mei burf ki dawat udaao"! , kudhte hue rituparn ne dil ki bhadash nikaali.

"Ha ha ha , kyu jhalla rahe Ho Bhai , yahi ab hamari niyati hai !  Is se to samjhota Karna hi padega !" ,Som ne haste hue Kaha .

"bhad me Jaye aisa samjhota , jaha pal pal Jan Ka jokhim ho , jindagi Ka koi Maza Nahi aur badale me koi sarmaya Bhi nahi ! Thu ..hai Aise jivan par, Aise Jivan se to mout bhali !" Rituparn bhaale ke sahare akadu baithate hue badbadaya .

"kyu bhulte ho Bhai ye jimmedari bhi hamine khud Apne man se chuni hai ! Laakho logo ki suraksha karne Ka Jo gaurav hai uske samne sare sarmaaye baimani hai ! Bhai , mujhe to sahasikta purn ye diwar ke pehredar  Ka pad bahut Pasand hai !" , Bina uski taraf dekhe Som ne kaha .

"Kon kambakht man se aana Chahta tha yaha ? Ye to mere pas koi dusra rasta Nahi tha is liye aana pada ! yaha hai kya hamari jindagi me Charo taraf faili barf ke siva ! Sali na chahte hue Bhi isaan aadha kilo burf kha jata hai pure din mein !" Apne hatho ko ek dusre ke sath ragadte hue bure man se Rituparn bola . Som ne uski taraf dhyan hi na diyab.

"Ek to Itni tez hawa mein kuch saaf saaf dikh Nahi Raha Aur tu bhi kuch bata Nahi Raha ki kya dekha tha tune ! " , diwar se pith tikaye baithte hue rutuparn ne kaha.

"Kya batau ? , abhi tak main hi kuch thik se Dekh Nahi pa Raha hun , itni tez barfili hawa mein dekhna waakay me muskil Kam hai !" , Us ne purvat usi disha me dekhte hue Kaha .

Tabhi jaise Uske chehre ne rang badala , uski aankho me chamak aayi aur gayi . Uska hath teji se kamar se bandhe ek bade bingul ki taraf badha aur pal Bhar me Woh ek tej aawaz ke sath bingul Baja raha tha. Bingul ki aawaz Uttar ki wadiyon mein gunjane lagi .

Rutuparn vismay me tha , ek dam use kya ho Gaya . Woh turant khada hogaya aur us Disha me dekhne laga jis Disha me somdutt ko kuch dikha tha , jab ki somdutt  jhat se muda aur niche utarne ki sidiyo ki taraf lapaka . 

Ab Rutuparn ko dur se aata ek ghoda dikhayi de Raha tha , Uske pichhe …. Shayad us se bandha kihua kuchh khichta Chala aa Raha tha … Shayad koi vyakti ya koi laash ...rutuparna ke dimag ke sare darwaze Jaise khul Gaye aur Woh Bhi niche ki taraf dekhne laga . Ek baar Baja bingul Kisi Apne ke aagaman pe dwaar kholna Ka Sanket tha.

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Bingul ki aawaz ne diwar ke pragan mei Jaise halchal si macha di . Aanan faanan me diwar ka uttar ki taraf Ka praveshdwar khola Gaya . Pravesh dwaar kholna Bhi koi aasan kaam na tha . Kyu ki Woh koi aam praveshdwar na tha .

730 feet uchi diwar ka paravesh dwaar aam ho Bhi kaise Sakta hai . Diwar na sirf 730 feet unchi thi balki 450 kilometers lambi aur niche se 180 feet chaudi thi Jo uchai tak jate jate 30 feet chaudi  rehjaati thi . Diwar us yug ke silpsthapatya ka utkarsh namuna thi. Itni lambi unchi diwar kisne kaise aur kyu banai ye Apne aap me ek lambi kahani hai jiski charcha fir Kabhi .

Diwar ke bahar or upari hisse par Puri Tarah se barf Jami rehti thi. Dusre Jaise ye diwar barfili Chadar ki Tarah hi Lagti thi. 180 feet us diwar ke andaruni hisse ke aarambh pe ek bada mazboot lakadi se nirmit 20 feet chauda darwaza tha , jise ke dono palle 10 - 10 feet chauda the aur jinko apni jagah se hatane ke liye Kam se Kam 10 das aadmi ki jarurat padti thi . Aage andar Jake 90 feet ke baad ek lohe ke pipe se bana upar ki taraf sarak ne wala bhari vajani darwaza tha Jo ek prakar ke mechanism se dono taraf se  upar uthata aur niche girta tha . Niche girta hi in lohe ki salakho ki nokeeli chotiya jamin me andar tak ghas jati  thi  . Jis se dwaar aur majbooti se bandh ho jata tha .u dwaar ko upar niche karne ke liye Bhi Kam se Kam 10 se 15 aadmi darkaar the . Uske baad fir 90 feet ki duri par bhari lohe ki sapaat Chadar se nirmit upar ki taraf uthane wala darwaaza tha Jo mechanism se sirf aur sirf andar ki taraf se hi upar uthaya ya niche giraya ja Sakta tha . lohe ki Chadar bahar ki taraf se chikni sapat thi . Jis ki aakhar me dhar wala hissa niche girte hi jamin me Kam se Kam 5 se saat feet andar ghas jata tha . MATLAB bahar se use koi Bhi ..koi Bhi khol Nahi Sakta tha.

Is 450  k.m lambi Diwar pe kul Mila kar 9 choukiyan thi Jo Apne aap me ek durg kahi ja sakti thi.  Pehle Har durg ki Raksha ke liye Har durg par 500 ki Sankhya me jawaan tainaat kiye jate the Jo ab sankhya me ghat ke bahut Kam ho Gaye the. 9 durgo me Sab se bich wala paanchva  durg In sari choki yo Ka headquarters tha jo SUVARNA DURG naam se Jana jata tha jaha Ka durgpati DHANUSH KOTI naam Ka dakshin path Rajya Ka ek dravid tha .Jo sare 9 durgo ka Pradhan durgpati kehlata tha. 

Bingul bajte hi durgpati ko suchit Kiya Gaya aur aanafaanan me durg ke tino dwaar khulwaye Gaye .  10 jawano ki ek tukadi lekar durgpati dhanush koti turant durg se bahar nikala … tab tak ghoda aur karib aa Gaya tha aur ab saaf dikh Raha tha ki ghode ki Kathi ke rakab ki rassi se ek insaani jism ulajha hua tha. 
Turant ghode ki lagam ko thaama Gaya aur inssani jism ko us me se nikala Gaya .

Dhanush koti : " ye to TAARAN  hai Jo 4 aadmiyon ke sima gasti Dal ke sath gasht lagane Gaya tha ! Pata Karo jinda hai ya nahi !"

Ek jawaan ne niche jukh ke us jism ka muaayina Kiya , "saanse to chal rahi hai ! Lekin jism buri Tarah se ghayal hai !" 

" Hmm .. thik hai  ise andar le chalo , hos mein aate hi is se pata Karo kya hua , is ke sath Jo 3 jawaan aur Gaye the Woh kyu Nahi loute aur unka kya hua !" , Durgpati ne hukm dandanaaya aur mud Kar bhitar Jane laga . Tino dwaar wapas bandh Kar diye Gaye . 

Taran ko chikitsalay le Jaya Gaya Jo durg me Bani lakadi ki imaarat me 3 kamaro Ka Bana ek kaksh tha . Jaha use prathamik chikitsa Di Jane lagi . 
Use jald hi hose aa Gaya . Usne Apne Charo taraf dekha … phir pata Nahi kyu uska jism patte ki tarah kampkapane laga . 

"Kya baat hai Taran , tum kaamp rahe ho ?",  Kamare me alaav jal Raha tha bavjud use kampta Dekh somdutt ne puchha. " Tumhari tabiyat kaisi hai ab aur tumhare sath Gaye 3 sadashya ab Kaha hai ?" , Jawab me Taran ne Chou taraf aakhe ghumai phir wapsa bandh Kar di. "Tumhari ye dasa kaise hui ? Kya ANAARYO ne phir se hamla Kiya tum logo par ? Bhai tum kuch to batao !" 

Taran ne phir se aankhe kholi , kuch kehne ke liye muh khola lekin bol na paya. Shayad gala sukh Gaya tha , " ise jal pillao !" Som ke kehne par TAARAN ko jal pilaya Gaya . Kuch waqt yun hi khamoshi chhayi rahi . Phir Uske muh se bol fute……jis NE Kamare Ka vatavaran hi badal Diya..

" W..w..Woh..a.a.a.rahe..hai.. a.a.a.ra.h.e he ..dekha, Maine..unko …dekha"...Taran fusfusaaya

Woh phir khamosh ho Gaya .. Som uska bhaygrast chehra dekhta Raha ..TARAN Ki aankhe dur ksheetij ki taraf patharai si Dekh rahi thi ….

Dusri taraf … 
wahi imaarat ke durgpati ke Kamare me …. 
Durgpati :" hame jald se jald ek talashdal bhejna hoga un 3 jawaano ki khoj me !"

Pradhan : " Abhi thoda intazaar Karna uchit rahega ! Ho Sakta hai Taran Ka ghoda bidak Gaya ho aur Woh Kathi me ulzaa hua khincha Chala aaya ! Ho Sakta hai Baki Sab surakshit hi ho aur kal tak lout Aaye !" 

Pradhan durg Ka mukhya salahkar - aur durgpati ke bad Ka mukhya vyakti tha . Har durg aur Rajya me Aise Pradhan niyukt kiye jate the Jo raja , SAMANT aur durg patio ko Salah mashohara de sake .

Durgpati:" hmm .. ye bhi thik  hai lekin sawal ye hai ki ghoda bidaka q ? Hamare ashvo ko khas Tarah ki talim se sajj Kiya jata hai ! Mamuli Karan se wo bidak ne se Raha ! Dusra agar kaaran bada hai to Woh to chinta Ka vishay Bhi ho Sakta hai ! Jald pata lagana sahi rahega !" 

Pradhan :" ye bhi sahi hai , magar wo to TAARAN ke hos me aate hi pata chal hi Jayega ! Woh itna jyada Bhi ghayal Nahi hai ki jald hose me na Aaye !" 

Tabhi ek jawaan daudta hua kamare me dakhil hua " …  JANAAB …. WOH AA RAHE HAI.. US NE UN KO..DEKHA…." , chillatehue Woh bola

Dono Chonk ke khade ho Gaye … aur ek dusre Ka muh dekhne lage …

DURGPATI : " kisne .. kisne kis ko dekha… kya dekha..!" Woh chikhte hue Bola.

" Ji..w.o.h.. WOH… SWET MAANAV … US NE SWET MAANAV KO DEKHA…"

Sunte hi dono hadbadaye ..ek dusre ka chehre dekhne lage....phir.. dono chikitsalay ki taraf bhage ...Aise Jaise koi bhut Dekh liya ho .
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Badi burf ki diwwaar -

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SUVARN DURG 

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Too much characters.This story will never end before one century.

MA'AM KA TUGHALAKI FARAMAAN, KAHANI SADIYON TAK PURI NAHI HO SAKTI .... EK HI JHATKE ME KAHANI KA TIYAA PANCH KAR DIYA ! 

,? ITNA KEHNA CHAHUGA KI BINA KISI KO JAANE JUDGE KARNA AASAN NAHI HOTA . KAHANI AGAR SERIES ME LIKHI JAAYE TOH US MEIN CHARACTERS KI BHARMAAR HOTI HI HAI . BINA KAYI PATRA KE LIKHA HI NAHI JA SAKTA . HAA. YE UN PAR DEPEND KARTA HAI KI WOH LIKH PAYEGA YA NAHI , JO YOGYATA MUJH ME HAI.
MAIN AARAMBH ME HI KEH CHUKA HUN KI KAHANI KE 5 PART HONGE ... MEANS YA TO AAP NE PADHA NAHI AUR APNA SOLO JUDGEMENT DE DIYA . JO SARASAR GALAT HAI.
AAP SE PRATHANA KARUGA KI AAP ISE PADHE .. MERI KAMIO KO UJAAGAR KARE AUR KHUBIO KO SARAAHE..
TARIF WRITER KA HUQ AUR SARMAAYA HAI ..
LIKHNA BAHUT MUSKIL KAAM HAI SO PLS PEHLE SE JUDGE NAA KARE .

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bhaiji isme koi hero hai kya.....
aur hoga toh thoda sci fi ...ya kuch jod ske toh ...
fir jaisa apko lage.

Bhaiji , hero dhundnaa AAP Ka kaam . Mera kaam hai likhna.. Har kirdaar ko khubsurati se unke kirdaar me dhalunga ... Jis se ki aap khud apna Hiro chin sake. Kahani me Har kirdaar Ka apna alag andaaz hoga . Bus jo aap ko pasand aaye wo Hiro.
Waise Mera manana hai kahani apna hiro khud banati hai..Har koi Apni Apni jarurato aur samay ke khel  ke anusaar achcha bura ban hi jata hai. Kahani midle ages Ka kissa bayaan Karti ek fantasy hai jis me maine puratan ganrajyo Ka tadaka lagaya hai.

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NICE ONE

Thanks raj bhai ... Agar kuch kami dikhe to dhyan jarur dilana.

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Nice Story Bro..
Aapne ek Mahadweep ka details diya ab dusre ka bhi details de dijiye...
Waiting for next update

Thanks Mishraji ...
Dusre maha DWEEP ka detail tayyar Kar rahun jaldi hi post karuga . Darasal MANCHITRA banane ke liye thoda samay chahiye tha is liye deri hui.
Aap senior ho koi galati reh jaye to batana jarur.

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congrats for new thread
आप राज की रॉयल फैमिली की पूरा कीजिये ।

Thanks Bhai , 
Raj ki royal family Ka link Kahi mil Nahi Raha hai yaha . Warna Pura Karne Ka to bahut man hai Bhai .

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Good start but try to justify the role of each character

Thanks amita , main is baat Ka dhyaan rakhuga !

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Nice Update Bro..
Keep it up

Thanks bro ! Mere sath bane rehne ke liye !

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लिंक हम दे रहे है आप बस उसे पूरा कीजिये

https://www.mediafire.com/file/7cx08sfha...y.pdf/file

Thanks Bhai , jarur Pura Kar dunga !

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UPDATE - 2

UTTARPATH …




Uttarpath barfili wadiyon se ghira MAHADWEEP Ka Sab se Sundar aur manmohak Rajya hai . Uttarpath Ka jikra aate hi dimag me uche uche barfile pahad , devdar ke vruksh , hasin harit wadiya aur man ko chhu Lene wali khubsurat jhilo Ka aksh ubhar aata hai .

Uspar uttarpath ki rajdhani AARYAVRAT ko to dekhte man Nahi thakata . AARYAVRAT AARYO ki rajdhani hai . Aur aaryo ko mahadweep me bahut khas sthan prapt tha .  AARYAVRAT Ka durg abhed mana jata tha . Jo aaj tak aparajit tha . Uska silp-sthapatya  bejod tha. Aaryavrat ka durg Sardi o me barf me ram jata tha jise dekhna Apne aap me ek behad manoramya drashya tha. 



Garmi Ka mousam aate hi barf pighalti thi aur Puri ghati hare liwaas me pehne koi alhad lalana si dikhne lagti thi. Uchi uchi chotiyo se girte jharne aur Tarah Tarah ke full se ladi kyaariya , falo ke baagan aur mevo ki khetiyan , Jharne me atkheliya karti nariyan  aur lata o ka jhula bana kar us pe jhulti jawaaniyan , baagano me fal aur meve ki fasal lete purush aur medano mei khelte bachche , kul Mila Kar ghati  ka sondarya dekhte nahi banta tha.



 Aisi manoram wadiyon ke RAJA the SHRADH DEV  jinho ne Apne kaal me pure MAHADWEEP pe apna parchham leharaya tha . unke samay MAHADWEEP ki satta hastaran ke liye Kisi ne prayash Nahi Kiya . Sare rajya unke aadhin sukhi aur samrudh hue  . Unke baad unke hi vansh ke raja dweep pe raj karte rahe lekin phir kuchh aisi aandhi chali ki Woh sirf uttar tak simat ke reh Gaye  . Kuntala dweep ke shaktisali raja ne kuchh aisa kehar barpaaya ki pure dweep me Mano pralay aa Gayi .Sare rajya tahesh-nahesh ho Gaye . Kuntalo kevShakti pradarshan ke aage sab ne ghutne take diye sivaay uttar ke . Uttar ke aaryo ne jam ke apna loha manvaya lekin  kuntal ki Sena me kuchh shaktishali jeev the jinke aage insaani shaktiya aparyapt thi. 

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Aag ugalte vishalkaay GARUDO ke aage koi na tik saka . Sab bhasmibhut ho gaye, Kya insaan kya janwar . Maheloe ke patthar tak pighala diye un vehsi darindo ne .
Lekin sulahti maut ke samne bhi aaryo ne har nahi mani . Aur dat ke samna kiya un darindo ka . Kuntal naresh unse khub prabhavit hue .. unhone  bhi aaryo ko dushman ki bajaay dost banana behtar samjha , ek shaktishali dushman agar dost banjaye to 100 samnto pe bhari tha . Tab Aakhar me ek samjhota hua . Aur aaryo ko sirf Uttar Ka raj de diya gaya . Natija aarya uttar tak simat ke reh gaye . Aur Apne waqt Ka intazaar Karne lage . 

Woh waqt Bhi aaya jab unko mahadweep ki satta haasil Karne Ka suvarn avsar Mila lekin wo kehte hai na ki Kabhi Kabhi mitrata Sare samikarano ko badal ke Rakh deti hai , Sare laalach pe bhari padti hai , aisa hi aarya Raj yuddhajit ke sath hua . Mitrata nibhane ke chakkar me usne jeeti  hui satta ki bagdor Apne Mitra aur dwarsamundram ke SAMANT  VIRBHADRA ko de . Dhanya hai Aisi mitrata . Dhanya hai aise mitra. Khair ye ek lambi kahani hai jis ki charcha hum aage karenge . Philhaal kahani par aate hai .

[i]Aarya raja yuddhajeet Apne parivar ke sadashyo aur salahkaro ke sath apne kuldevta ke mandir me tha . Aaj unka vishesh parva tha , shardiyon ki shuruwaat ho chuki thi .. aaj suryadevta ko mahaprasadi arpan ki Jani thi jis se ki woh prasan ho aur jald se jald shardiyon ki rutu jald hi khatm ho aur ushnata Sare aaryavrat me faile.

Yuddhajeet ke pariwaar me unki patni SUNAYNA aur 5 santane thi Jin me 3 ladke aur 2 ladkiyan thi . yuddhajeet ne 2 shadiyan ki thi . pehli patni SUNAYNA se unko 4 santane thi jabki dusri patni SONPRIYA se sirf ek putra tha . 
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[i]Sonpriya ek putra ko janm dekar  chal basi thi. To uska laalan-palan sunaina ne hi Kiya tha. Aur putra ko ma ki kami kabhi mehsus hone na di thi.[/i]

[i][i]suryadevta ke mandir me mah-aarti ho rahi thi . Pura watawaran  sankh nagade manjire aur dundubhi naad me dub ke bhakti may ho Gaya tha .  Yuddhajit Ka bada beta yudhvir ,Jo 18 basant par Kar ke jawaniki dehlij pe aa chuka tha , suryadevta ko prasan Karne ke liye shankh Baja raha tha jaha Dusra Sab se chhota beta Abhijit Jo abhi Mayra 14 Saal Ka tha , Surya dev ki Murthy ko ek tak nihare ja Raha tha . dono betiya 16 saal ki NIHARIKA aur 12 Saal ki  ANAMIKA apni ma Ka anusaran Karti hath Jode khadi thi jabki 17 Saal Ka SHORYA Kahi nazar Nahi aa Raha tha. q ki use devta o me koi Ras Nahi tha . Uski MAA Ka akaal dehant use devta o se nafrat Karne par majboor karta tha . SHORYA apni badi ma ko mana Nahi Kar sakta tha is liye mandir tak aata jarur tha lekin us chardiwari me na pravesh Kar ke Woh bahar hi apna samay pasar karta .[/i][/i]

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UPDATE  3

Aaj Bhi Woh vahi Kar Raha tha , mandir ke bahaari parkote ki diwar pe chadh ke kund ke Pani me patthar fenk Raha tha . Ye uska man Pasand sugal tha time pass Karne Ka  . Usne ek patthar hath me uthaya aur pani me fenk hi raha tha ki Tabhi uski drasti dur uttar ki aur se aate ghudsawar pe padi . Woh ghudsaware tivra gati se ghode ko dauda raha tha aur ghoda apni raftaar se jyada aur apni kshamata se shayad adhik dod laga chuka saaf nazar as Raha tha ...uski chaal Apne aap hi Sara kissa bayaan Kar de rahi thi . Shayad isi liye shorya ne uspar adhik dhyan kandrit kiya.  Ab wo ghudsawar itni kareeb aa chuka tha ki shakal pehachani ja Sakati thi aur shorya ne use pehchana Bhi …. Tabhi ghoda ladkadaya aur ek jor  ki aawaz ke sath Apne asawar KO sath liye Gira .. Kuch kshan chatpataya...aur dam Tod gaya . Shorya turant hi  apni jagah se niche utara aur bahar ki taraf lapaka .


Tab tak ghudsawaar uth chuka tha .. Woh ek lambe kad Ka garam far ke coat pehna hua koi sipahi yoddha dikh raha tha jis ne apni kamar par ek lambi talwaar latka rakhi thi. Woh khud kafi thaka hua dikh raha tha jaise usne ek lambi duri ki avirat yatra ghode ki pith se bina niche utare ki ho . Woh apne gire pade ghode ka nirikshan kar raha tha.

" Tumhara ghoda to ab uthane se raha Subedar ji !" , Shorya ne uske karib ja kar use Uske pad se pukara .

"Bada swami bhakt ghoda tha janab .. mazil par pohchakar hi dam liya !", Woh ghutno pe beth gaya aur ghode ke pith par pyar se hath ferne laga . " Sondurg se bina ruke daud lagayi hai usne , Apni kshamta se adhik , swami ki wafadari ke liye apne prano ki aahuti di hai is ne !" Bina shorya ki taraf dekhe hi woh bola .. uski aankhe dab daba gayi. Ghode ka balidaan uske dil ko chhu gaya shayad.

" Janwar hammesa se wafadar rahe hai insaano ke , aur shayad ye hum insaano ki khuskismati hi hai !" , Shorya ne Kaha.

" Haa , shayad tum sahi ho !" , Phir woh jhat se uth gaya …" Maharaj kaha hai ?" , Usne do tuk Prashna Kiya .

" Woh pooja kar rahe hai , aao aap bhi andar hi aajao .. senapati ji bhi wahi hai ! Waise Kya aap mujhe bata sakte hai baat kya hai ? " , Utsukta vas usne puch hi liya.lekin woh vyakti jawab dene ke bajaye andar ko lapaka . Shorya bhi uske pichhe ho liya . Dwaar par hi senapati satyajeet khade the.

" Kya baat hai Subedar Naagesh , kaise aana hua ? Sab thik to hai ?" , Satyajeet ne Nagesh ko dekhte hi puchha.

" pranam , senapati mohadday , Abhi tak to thik hai lekin aage thik hi rahe aisa hum nishchit tor pe nahi keh sakte !" Nagesh ne thoda  jhuk ke pranam kar kaha . Senapati Kuch Der tak use dekhte rahe , kuch bole Nahi kintu unki aankho me prashna jarur tha.

" Subedar nagesh 2 din se avirat yatra karte hue aaye hai , kaka ! Jarur Kuch bat to hogi !" shorya ne senapati se kaha . senapati ab Bhi nazaro se  nagesh ko tol rahe the Jaise . Phir ….

" Tum mandir ke piche wale kaksh me betho , main maharaj ko lekar aata hun !" , Aur Woh Bina Kisi uttar ki pratiksha kiye andar chale Gaye .

Nagesh shorya ko sath liye  senapati ke bataye kaksha ki taraf badha .

" Tumhe Aarti me sammelit na dekh kar mujhe aashcharya hua shorya"!, Chalte chalte nagesh ne puch hi liya.

" Mujhe in dhakosalo me jyada  yakeen Nahi !" , Shorya ne shushk lehje me kaha.

Nagesh : "Surya devta hum Sab ke devta hai, unke bare me aisa nahi kahte ! Woh hamare rakshak ..taaranhaar hai !", Vishmay se use dekhte hue..

Shorya :" mere liye mere devta meri ma hai ! Aur un ke aage hi ye mastak jhukta hai !Jisne mujhe Pala Woh meri MAA  hi meri ishwaar , Baki sare Kath ke chehre !" Shorya ke mukh se nikali vani me devtao ke prati Uski kadvahat mehsus ki Nagesh ne .. Woh Kamare me ja bethe.

Kuch hi der me yuddhajit Apne bete yudhvir aur satyajeet ke sath aa pahucha . Use aata Dekh Naagesh turant uth khada hua . Chehre par jiske surya ke tej si aabha thi Woh yuddhajit ek 6 futa hadtprust yoddha tha jis ne Kayi maharathio ko apne kadmo me jhukaya tha.

" Subedaar nagesh , Kaho Kya sabdesh laye ho !" 39 Saal ke yuddhajeet ki bhari awaz Kamare me gunji . 

" Maharaj , ek bahut hi buri khabar hai !"  Raja ko pranam karte hue Nagesh Bola " ek saptah pehale hamari sima gasti Dal ki ek tukadi diwar ke uspar Gayi thi . Jin me char jawaan the  ! Unka kaam tha diwaar ke us par faile ANAARYO Ka hamare viruddh koi prayash ho to unki jankaari nikaal na tha. Kintu 3 din pehle in me se sirf ek hi wapas aa paaya ! Woh Bhi ghayal avastha me tha !  Ghode ki rakab me pair uljha na hota uska aur ghoda use khinch kar wapas na lata to hum unke anjaam ke bare me jan nahi pate !" , Woh ek kshan ruka phir… " hos aane ke bad Jo usne kaha us se hum Sab ke hos uda gaye ! Durgpati ne mujhe turant aap ko sandesh dene ke liye bheja! Me 2 din se bina ruke yaha tak pahucha hun !" Woh ek pal ke liye saans lene ke liyee ruka ..Phir  purvat " Maharaj , us jawaan ne bataya ki unhone shwetmanavo ko dekha hai ! hamare tin jawwan unlogo ne hi mar diye the aur Woh shankhya new 100 se jyada the Maharaj !" 

" Nahi ho sakta !" Yuddhajeet ne majbuti se inkaar me gardan hilayi " ikka dukka him manav dikhane ka to praman hai lekin jhund me Woh Bhi 100 se adhik Woh Kabhi Nahi dikhe ! Lagta hai Jawan adhik dar Gaya hai aur Woh aap logo ko Bhi Dara Raha hai jis se ki uski saza khatm ho Jaye aur use Ghar wapas jaane diya jaay!" .

" Maharaj , Woh saja paya hua gunahgaar nahi hai , apitu Apni marzi se juda ek sipahi hai ! Aur Jo Bhi ho maharaj , hum ise nazarandaz kadapi nahi kar sakte !" , Nagesh ne dekha uski is baat ko yuddhajit ne HAA me sar hila ke sweekar kiya to ," Maharaj , laakho logo ki suraksha ki jimmedari hum par hai ! Aur hum Sankhya me kafi Kam ! ek shwetmaanav Bhi 50 pe bhari padta hai jabki agar hamalavar sou se jyada shwetmaanav ho to aap andaza laga sakte hai ki Kya gat ban sakti hai hamari ! Aur bat yahi tak Nahi hai , hamari chinta Ka vishay kuchh aur hi hai !"

Nagesh : "taaran ne bataya ki shwetmanavo ke sath badi sankhyame anaarya Bhi the …!"

Yuddhajit :" ye kaise ho sakta hai baagh aur hathi me Mitrata sambhavta ho Jaye kintu manav aur swetmanavo me Mitrata kaise ho Sakti hai ?"

Nagesh : " Taran aur Uske sathio ne apni nazaro se dekha hai ye , aur agar ye Sahi hai Maharaj to....

" To samjho is dweep pe kaaldut vicharenge … ek Bhi insaan jinda Nahi bachega" ! , Yuddhajeet ke mathe par chinta ki lakire ab saaf  dikhi . " Chahe phir woh aarya ho ya dravid , RASHTRAKUT ho ya asmak .. anaarya Kisi me bhed Nahi karenge ! Sara dweep lasho se paat denge !" 

Nagesh :" Sahi Kaha Maharaj ! 

Yuddhjeet : " hmm , ye toh waakay chinta ka vishay hai !  Is waqt sari chaukiyon pe hamari sannkhya Kya hai ?"

Nagesh : " Sab se jyada hum sondurg par hai Maharaj , hamari sannkhya 287 hai , Baki sari chauki o par naam Matra ke Praheri hai ! Hum Sab muskil se sab milaakar  500 Nahi honge Maharaj !"

Yuddhveer : Hame Apni Sena bhejni Chahiye pita Shree , kyu na me Chala jau ?" , Pehli baar yudhvir ne charcha me bhag liya.

Yuddhajit :"Nahi tum Nahi , satyajeet tum Nagesh ko atithi kash me le jao !  Hum sochenge is baare me !hame maharaj veerbhadra ko bhi suchit karna padega !" Aur Phir Sabha barkhast hui. 

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Nice Update Bro...
Keep it up...

Thanks Bhai !

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Agar subedar Nagesh ki baat me jara si bhi sachchai hai toh …  ! Youdhajit  is se aage na bol paye , kaksh me chahal kadami karate unke kadam anayaash hi ruk gaye .  

Bhayanak vidhwansh maharaj , agar nagesh ki baat such nikali toh aryawrat ka namo nishan mit jayega . Styajeet ke aawaz me kammpan saaf sunayi padta tha . Yudhajit ne uski taraf dekha , chinta ki lakeer unke lalaat par saaf dikh rahi thi . 
Kaksha me mano kuchh der ke liye sannata sa pasar gaya .  6 sadashyo ki chhoti si sabha aanan faanan me bulai gayi thi . Naagesh ab bhi athiti kaksha me tha .  Maharaj sena pati aur udhaveer ke alawa kaksh me  tin matri or bhi the , jin me ek mahamantri vibhuti bhi the . 

‘’ Pitaji , hame is ki pusti ke liye kuchh prayash toh karne hi chahiye . Agar aap aagya de toh main ek dal lekar diwar ke paar jau ?’’  , Yuddhveer ne sannate ko tod ne ka prayash kiya . Yudhajit ne  uski taraf dekha . Gardan anayas hi naa me hil gayi unki .  Woh phir se kaksh me chahal kadami karne lage . 

Yuvraj ko yun mout ke muh mein  bhejna unko sahi nahi laga . Hala ki abhi tak swetmanavonkinpushti nahi hui thi phir bhi ye khatra uthana bhi thik nahi tha . 

“Aap kya sochte hai vibhuti ji “ , yudhajeet ne mahamantri ko tatola . Vibhuti kafi samay se maun the . Vibhuti ne nazare uthayi , 

“Dal toh nishchit hi bhejna chahiye , ye hamara kartavya bhi hai . Aakhir hum dwar rakshako ke sahayak bhi hai aur  sanrakshak bhi .  Lekin yuvraj ko bhejna anuchit hoga .”

“Phir , aap kis ka chunav karte hai vibhuti mahadhay , satyajeet ne puchha . Main khud bhi jane ko utsuk hu maharaj . “

“Nahi aap bhi nahi senapati ji , agar aap ko kuchh hogaya toh sena bikhar jayegi . Meri nazar me rajkumar shorya sab se jyada upayukt rahenge . “

“Woh abhi bachche hai vibhuti ji , yudhveer ke shabdo me krodh jhalak aaya . Unko mout ke muh me dhakel rahe hai aap ? “

“Bachche toh aap bhi hai yuvraj ,  jawani ki dehleej hi toh paar ki hai aap ne abhi . Aur shorya aap se sirf 1 saal hi toh chhote hai”

“Phir bhi mere rehte main shorya ko …” Shabd bich me hi ruk gaye uske , maharaj ne hath utha kar usko chup kar diya . 

“Kintu Shorya hi kyu ? “

 “Shorya hi q ? , aap shayad kuchh bhul gaye hai maharaj” . Vibhuti ne bade shant shabdo me maharaj ko kaha , dono ki aankhe chaar hui , kafi der tak dono ek dusre ko dekhte rahe phir jaise maharaj ki aankhonme ek chamak si ubhari .  Unki lalaat par kisi nishchay ki rekha ubharti dikhay di . 

“Hmm , phir tay raha . Shorya 50 sahasi yoddha ka dasta lekar deewar ke paar jayenge , “  unke shabdo me vishwas ki dhamak sunayi de rahi thi . 

“Kintu piyaji “…. Intna hi bol paya yudhveer . Yudhajeet ne use phir se khamish kar diya . 

“Styajeet , shorya ko mera aadesh sunadijiye . Yoddha o ka chayan aap khud kijiye . Dhyan rahe sare  vishwasubaur veer hone chahiye “.

Aur is faisale ke sath sabha barkhast hui . Yudhveer hataash sa nazare jhukaye kaksha  se bahar nikala .  Apne bhai ko deewar ke paar bhejne ka nirnay  use bikul hi pasand nahi aa raha tha , lekin pita ke faisale ke aage woh kar bhi kya sakta tha .  Phir usne ek aakhari prayash karne ki thani . Pita ji ko maa  hi ab rok sakti thi . Us ke kadam maa ke kaksh ki taraf mud gaye . 

“Pita ji aisa kaise kar sakte hai , maa . Shorya mujh se bhi chhota hai” . 

“Hmm , tumhare pita ji ko samjhaugi main . Tum nishchint raho “. , sunayana ke shabdo me bhi chinta jhalak aayi .

“Maa , ab sab kuch aap ke upar hi nirbhar karta hai , diwaar ke paar ke khatare utha ne ke liye shorya sahi chunaav nahi hai “. 

Maa ne haa main gardan hilayi .  
“Main baat karungi yudhveer tum nischint raho” . Kehne ko toh sunayana ne keh diya lekin woh khud bhi apne shabdo se santrusht nahi thi . Lekin yudhaveer ab shantrusht tha . Use maa par pura vishwash tha . Aakhir maa shorya ko sab se jyada chahti thi . Kintu Kash yudhveer is waqt apni maa ki ankho me dekh pata toh yun shant chitt kaksh se bahar nahi jaa pata . 
Is samachar ne sunayna ko chinta me daal diya . Yudhveer sahi keh raha tha . Woh apne pati ka intazar nahi kar saki aur turant hi unke kaksha ki taraf lapaki . Is se pehle ki der ho jaye ….

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Dosto , ye kahani maine likhne ki shuruwaart ki toh tab se mujhe bechain karti rahi hai . Hala ki kisi karan vash use likh nahi pa raha tha lekin ab aP se mera wada hai ise pura karuga . 
Padhte rahiye ga kyu ki rahashya aur romanch ke bhawar me udubati ubhaarti ye meri kalpana aap ko apne ras se sarobor kar degi . Aap ke sath ka tamannayi 
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“Maa , ab sab kuch aap ke upar hi nirbhar karta hai , diwaar ke paar ke khatare utha ne ke liye shorya sahi chunaav nahi hai “. 

Maa ne haa main gardan hilayi .  
“Main baat karungi yudhveer tum nischint raho” . Kehne ko toh sunayana ne keh diya lekin woh khud bhi apne shabdo se santrusht nahi thi . Lekin yudhaveer ab shantrusht tha . Use maa par pura vishwash tha . Aakhir maa shorya ko sab se jyada chahti thi . Kintu Kash yudhveer is waqt apni maa ki ankho me dekh pata toh yun shant chitt kaksh se bahar nahi jaa pata . 

kisi bhi stri ka sab se karagar hathiyar uska yovan hota hai aur sunayna ise bhali bhati samjhti thi , uske rup rang aur yovan ka use bhali bhati gyan tha . Jise woh kayi moko par aazama bhi chuki thi . Aakhir ab bhi wo samat ki ek matra chaah thi . Us ne aaine me apne shringar ko nihara  . Apni choli ko thoda sa aur niche kiya , ang vastra ko badala phir Shantrushth ho ke yudhajeet ke kaksh ki taraf badh chali .

Yudhajeet apne kaksha me shant chit lete hue the ki sunayna ne prabesh kiya .  Apne kandhe par pade lambe reshami vastra ko ek aur rakhte hue woh maharaj ke kareeb aai . Mahraaj ne unhe ek bar dekha aur phir kisi soch me dub gaye . sirf ek baar …. 

“Kya baat hai aary ? Aap kisi gehri soch me dube hai aaj” . Usne yudhajeet ke kareeb bethate hue puchha .

“Haa , baat hi kuch aisi hai sunayna “. Yudhajeet ne gambhir lehje me kaha.

“Hmm, aisi kya baat hai jis ne aap ko itna chintit kar rakha hai “. Yudhajeet ka sar apne god me le liya usne .

“Putra prem , sunayna .” Yudhajeet ka gala bhar aaya . “ log sochenge ki kaisa berahem baap hun main jo apne hi putra ko mout ke muh me dhakel raha hu , lekin main uttar ka dwarpaal bhi toh hun . Uttar ka rakshak . Kaise apne kartavya se muh mod sakta hu .”

“Baat kya hai , mujhe vistar se nahi batayenge maharaj ?” Sunyna ne uske baalo me ungliyan firate puchha . Yudhajeet ne use parishthiti se avgat karaya tab sunaynake chehre par bhi udasi chha gayi . 

“ kisi bhavishyavani par is had tak yakin karna kaha tak sahi hoga maharaj . Kya afavah o ke bharose hum apne bete kurban kar denge “. Us ne tej lehje me puchha.

“Hame jokhim toh uthana hi hoga sunayna”

“ nahi hum q jokhim uthaye , jokhim uthana hi ho toh woh uthaye jisne satta payi hai , nahi maharaj . Main apni santan ko kisi ki satta ki lalasa ki bhet nahi chadhne dungi .”
Usne apne hotho ko niche ki taraf jhukaya . 
“ aap ka kaam hai veerbhadra ko suchit karna , uttar ke dwarpaal ka  bus itna hi farz hai .” Iski aawaz me jadu tha , yudhajeet bus usi ko nihare ja raha tha .  Usne apna ek hath upar uthaya aur sunayna ke sar ko apne hoto ki taraf jhukaya . Sunayna ke surkh gulabi honth dhire dhire niche ki taraf badhe aur yudhajeet ke hontho se jud gaye . 

Yudhajeet us masti bhari ras ki pankhuriyon ko apne hontho se nichodne laga . Sar ko dabaye hue uska hath niche ki taraf saraka aur choli ke bandhan ko tatol ne me vyast ho gaye . Pakak jhapakte hi choli uske hath me thi . Youvan kapol aazad hogaye . Sunayna ne chumban todna chaha lekin yudhjeet ab puri tarah se  uttejit ho gaya tha . Usne alni jeevah sunayna ke muh me dal di . Aur sunayna ko apne sine par khinch liya . Is se pehle ki sunayna sambhalti yudhajeet ne palti mari aur sunayna par sawar ho gaya . 

“Aaree ye kya kar rahe hai aarya “.  Sunayna sharmate hue us ko pichhe ki taraf dhakel ne ki koshish karne lagi lekin yudhajeet ne uske dono hath apne panje me bhinch liye aur parvat ki tarah tane hue yovan sikharo ko muh me le liya . 

“ ummmahh ,aarya tanik rukiye toh .” Lekin yudhajeet ab rukne ke mud me kaha tha . Woh sunayna ke dono vishal kabutaro ko apne hatho se sehlane laga . 

Sunayna ko yovan sach me charam par tha . Uske dono stan ab bhi masal aur aakarshak the .  Yudhajeet ne dono ko masal kar rakh diya . Kaam krida me uski adhirta ab bhi yun hi barkaraar thi . Sunayna ko jyada mehnat nahi karni padti thi use uttejit karne me . Bus ek chingari kafi thi uski agni bhadkane ko . 
Upar se nagn sunayna ki sharir ko woh chumbano ki bochhar se bhigo raha tha . Uske honth sunayna ki dono chunchiyo ko chusne me vyast the toh hath ki ungliya uski nabhi ko sehlati uske kativastra ke andar jakar uski yoni ko sehla rahi thi . Achanak hi uski 2 ungliyone pralay la diya . Dono sunayna ki yoni me ghasti chaligayi aur sunayna ki chikh mikal gaayi … 

“Aaahhh aaryaa , itne adhir toh na baniye .. auuchhhhh ….. seeeeessseess”, ek lambi siskari li usne . Aur yudhjeet ke chehre par chumbano ki jhadi laga di . Yudhajeet ne use jhatke se utha diya aur apni dhoti ko khol kar apne lund ko bahar nikala aur sunayna ke muh ke samne kar diya . Sunayna ne use bade pyar se dekha . Aakhir uska sab se pasandida khilona jo tha woh . Jhat seusne apne hontho ko khol diya aur us lambi salaakh ko apne muh me bhar liya . 

“Ooohhh , meri raani . Tum ab bhi laajawab ho . Hmmmmm bus aise hi chuso use “. Uska hath sunayna ke sar par ja laga . Cup chup ki aawaze aane lagi . Sunayna upar se nagna hui apne swami ka lund masti se chus rahi thi .  

Yudhajeet teji se uske muh ko apne lund par dabane lagta jis se ki lund gehrai me ghusta chala jata tha . Sunayna bhi apni jeevah ki karamat dikha rahi thi . Lund akad ke lohe road me parivartit ho gaya tha . Ek dam sakht . Tabhi yudhjeet ne pura lund uke gale ki gehrai me utar diya . Sunayna ki sanse ful gayi . Woh chhatpatane lagi . Yudhajeet ne lund muh se bahar nikal diya toh sunayna lambi lambi sanse lene lagi . 

“Ohhh, maar dalo ge kya mujhe mere raja ji . Haai raam ab bhi aap utne hi beraham ho •, usne yudhajeet ke hontho ko chum liya . Yudhajeet ne use leta diya aur uska kativastra upar utha liya ab ras bhari chut uski aankho ke samne thi . Usne sunayna par letate hue apna lund uski chut se sata diya aur ek jhatka maara …
“Aaaaiiiiiiii … ohhmmmmmaa “ sunayna ki  ek lambi karah ke sath lund pura jud tak uski chut me utar gaya . “ kash aap aise hi din raat mere me samaaye rahte mere rajaji .., ummmhhhh !”  Sunayna ne uske baalo me ungliyan ferani shuru ki . Har ek dhake par woh jor se chikhti .  

“Aahhh aise hii kijiyee.  Aahh mere swamiii … aur teji see .. ummh umh”!! woh lambi sanse bhar rahi thi aur apne pati ko uksa rahi thi . 

“Tum bhi mujhe aise hi sukh seti raho meri pran sakhi … ufff . Such kahu tumhare yovan ke samne sari duniya fiki hai .”

“Haaa tabhi aap ko meri kadar nahi “, juth muth ki ruthate hue woh boli , sath me hi apne aap ko yudhajeet se dur karne ka jutha prayash bhi karne lagi .

Yudhajeet ne use palat diya , “kon bewakuf hoga jise tumhari kadar na hogi” , uski chut me pichhe se lund utarte hue woh bola 

“Aahhhh agar hoti toh meri baato par vishwaas karte aap aaahhhh uuummmhhhh “

Uske dono hatho ko pichhe ki taraf khinch kar pakadke uski chut me lund dhakelte hue , “kab mainevtumhari baat nahi mani bolo .”   

Ek jor ka jhatka laga te hue , “aisa kabhi hua hai ki main tumari koi baat thukarai ho .”

“Aashh nar gayiiiii ohhh jaaannnuuuu jii , aahh agar mante toh shorya ko deewar ke par bhejne ka  faisala na karte aahhhh uuimmaa “

Ek pal ke liye yudhajeet ruk sa gaya lekin sunyna thode na kam thi usne gardan ghumayi aur aone hontho ko uski taraf badhaya . Badhti hui raspankhudiyon ko dekh yudhajeet ne fat se use apne hotho me tham liya . Aur uske hath chhodte hue uka gala pakad ke use upar ki taraf uthaye jis se lund jud tak andar chala gay . Dard ki tej laher sunayna ke pure badan me daud gayi . Woh chht patayi lekin yudhajeet ne use baho me bhinch liya aur uske dono chuchiyon ko masal ke rakh diya . 

Muuhhhhhhhhhhhh ghutighuti si aawaz hi nikal payi … ghapaghap lund sunayna ki chut kured raha tha , aur sunayna dard se kaamp rahi thi tabhi yudhajeet ne use chhod diya toh sunayna ne dono hath niche jhuka kar khud ko geer ne se bachaya ..

“Aahhh bataona q mere bachche ko mujhse alag kar rahe ho jaanuuu aahhhhh sirf logo se suni baato ke bharose meri kokh ujad ne par tule ho aap …. Aaaiiiimaaaa “

Yudhajeet ne uske baalo ko kas ke pakad liya aur danadan uski chut ko pelna shuru kiya .  Sunayna tadap ke reh gayi .  Ab yudhjeet bhi kuchh sochne par majboor ho gaya . 

“Tum keh toh sahi hi rahi ho meri jaan lekin verrbhadra ko main kya uttar dunga “

“Aahhh aahh ab kya dosti ke liye apne bete bhi kurbaan kar doge aaahhiiiiiiii bus kijiye aaryaaaa  thode toh vyavharik hoyiye “

“Hmmm yudhajeet ne usko paltate hue kas ke apni bahon me daboch liya aur tabadtod jhatake lagane laga . 

“Sahi keh rahi ho tum sunayna , apne diye gaye aadesh par mujhe phir se sochna hoga .. lekin… “ , is se aage sunayna ne use bolne nahi diya uske honth pati ke hotho par dhakkan ki tarah chipak gaye . 2 karare jhatke ke bad dono jhad gaye aur ek dusre ki baahon me dub gayi .  Yun sabha me kiya gaya faisala  bistar par aate aate badal gaya . Aisa hi hota hai nari ke yovan me dubi  kalam se  takrakar tej talvare tut jaati hai .
Bade bade rajao ke takht is yovan ke samundar  me dub  jate hai .  Isi ko toh  kehte raaj ramat .