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yr):  too.

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Mahesh doesn't know how to control the situation so many variables which one should have his priority the one ..............

Such a poetic description ! how many times i have read these lines.

This world can never be a communist world, he can't share that hot piece of ass with anybody ,it's a flawed theory from the very beginning.

Thanks for sharing your creativity.

  . Sometimes after pulling an all-nighter during exam days in college, I used to take an early morning stroll for hot tea. I think we all have done that at some point. I described that scene from such a memory.

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I loved the last 2 updates
The way shilpa took revenge against harsh is fantastic,I didn't expected that shilpa will torture him to that level
I loved the affection between Asish and shilpa 
"She thought he is a monster cause her husband told her so, and he thought she is just a whore who would let anybody ravage her the way her husband produced her to him" this lines are excellent man
I don't know how you come up with this great ideas and games ,the like setup of each scenes in this story

The flashback is good it is very smooth and I expected the much more complex flashback but this flashback is simple and answer many questions

Waiting for next update man

I was holding onto the 'BACKSTORY' for quite a while. I was not sure when I was going to reveal the twist. I noticed a lack of sympathy for Shilpa among readers so I thought let's reveal the backstory.


I am glad that you enjoyed the 'games' and 'ideas' the characters play or come up with.

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ENJOY THE NEW UPDATES.

LEAVE A COMMENT IF YOU WANT TO.

LINK OF PART 1 OF THE UPDATE-PART 1

LINK OF PART 2 OF THE UPDATE- PART 2

LINK OF THE INDEX PAGE.

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Awesome. I login everyday to just check for update on this story. Your writing skills are soo good. Keep up the good work.  yr): yr):

Thank you for following the story. Appreciate this response very much.

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hotttttt

Thank you.

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I was doing something when i found this quote  " Fighting for peace is like Screwing for viginity"

It immediately remind me of Shilpa rani & her quest (The Hunt).(seducing stranger for husband is like screwing by Rahul ,Harsh and who knows)

That is the impact of your style, writing style. The above comment by warlock123 shows how vast the story is.(Pablo Escobar, Abe Lincoln, Oscar Wilde,Indian Mythology, Roman History, Psychology and many other streams  in erotica but it is not only an erotica nor a thriller Yes it is a landmark tale well said by kamdev99008.)

!!!!Funny thing words and thoughts.Once they are inside of your head and mind,you are their master or mistress,but as soon as you utter them,as soon as those leave your lips you become their slave,you have to live up to what you said otherwise you will be called a liar or stupid or what not?!!

Eagerly but patiently waiting for many more chapters of the Sigma , the Alpha & the Bambino. yr):

You know more details about the story than I do. 

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Epic!!!! No words to describe how insanely good this Chapter was. 
Sometimes it felt like I am reading a biology book,

sometimes it felt like chik lit romance novel,

 sometimes it was a study of philosophy, 

Other times it was nothing but poetry 

 sometimes it was  sleazy 

sometimes it felt like I am reading something written by a criminal   Sad .

Thank you mate. You are very generous .

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Great..... I'm speechless again
Your insight on the genetic point and role of love between a couple's life

This is not an erotica or a thriller... Neither just an erotic thriller
A landmark tale contains multiple shades of love and lust... With a lot of informations on each and every aspect

Will wait with crossed fingers for the next

I never realized that I am writing a thriller. Now that I think of it, You are right it is an Erotic crime thriller.

I think I have a tendency to drive the story that way cause my late childhood was influenced by writers like James Hadley Chase.
They stole my innocence 

I always wanted to write those things up what I said in that Chapter. I wanted to register those thoughts somewhere.

Thanks for the comment and appraisals.

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I just want a reiterate a great quote by Chinua Achebe

"I believe myself that a good writer doesn’t really need to be told anything except to keep at it."

Please think about this when ever you want to quit writing an unfinished story.

 
There used to some readers who regularly encouraged me to write the story. Now they don't.

The story was not gaining any new readers moreover it has lost a handful of old readers who used to comment.

Hence I came to that conclusion of quitting.

The problem is I am writing a story which I want to read. I don't write to please readers, there I have just said it. Hence the story does not have many readers.
But on the other hand, I do want many readers to read the story.     . And I can't have both. That is the dilemma.

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Bhai you are writing great. Please don't stop and do not change your way of writing.
Morever many readers read your story but not reply. See your views bro. Keep writing. We love the way you write.
All the best.

Thanks, man. I have abandoned the idea of quitting already. The above post was just a reply to another post.

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eagerly waiting for your next blockbuster update

Corona virus has fucked the market,I got time until it recovers.
I have not wrote any words yet.
Do you guys want a short quick update tomorrow morning    or a well coordinated  one in next week?

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Wating for updates Bro...

Thanks man but it was a rather turbulent week ,I could not write a single letter . Sad

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Your art of writing has been awesome and humorous makes me wanna read further and further.

I  enjoyed the jokes, pun, gag, one liner, all in all the humour part

Again thank you for such a great entertainment

What the fuck man ?!!!  Where have you been dude ?You are one of my early critics .I enjoy your criticisms cause you recognize the humour part of the story so well .You see through the deception and recognize that I am actually mocking everything .

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He touches Shilpa's perky boobs with one hand " he needs the  hints of your mountains."

Mahesh's fingers brurshes shilpa's nipple over her baggy blouse and bra "He loves challenge, unless he knows there are two high peaks ready  to be conquered ,how he gonna even think of even climbing?"

Mahesh's other hand roams on Shilpa's flawless back which is entirely covered " If he does not know how smooth it is, why would he dream of the adventure of skiing there? "


Shilpa get tensed under Mahesh, Mahesh's hands travel furthur and lighly grabs Shilpa's plump ass " If he can't see how wild you sway while you walk, how can he be wild enough to committ wild blunder losing into the wilderness of your junoesque  landscape "


To feel what I feel when I watch my wife's body,it was made for men to fight over ,it was made for crime and that is what this body is gonna committ ."

एक सब्र है इसके सिवा कुछ पास नहीं है, बर्बाद तमन्नाओं का एहसास नहीं है /
कमज़र्फ नहीं हूँ के जो मैं मांग के पी लूं, और ये भी नहीं है की मुझे प्यास नहीं है //

Nice poem ,i had to translate it but I like it. 
I remember writing that chapter . I was trying to establish Mahesh as a criminal mastermind .

To feel what I feel when I watch my wife's body,it was made for men to fight over ,it was made for crime and that is what this body is gonna committ ."   

I am translating the story in another language but this line here does not sound as good as it is in English . 

This chapter contains a foreshadowing by the way.

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Ashish is feeling restless today at office,the stock market is making him so bored "Oh come on!!!! Don't buy YES bank share,what are you guys fools .The world is full of morons ,this stock's price rise even people hear the directors are meeting someone over a cup of coffee "

  CHAPTER 25 .


Ashsih was right     . Today Yes bank share plunged 55% .

It's India's fifth biggest private bank .The fall of Yes bank in more serious for indian economy than coronavirus for short term .

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एक सब्र है इसके सिवा ...... taken from famous qawaali " Ae Meri Jaan E Gazal". Glad that You and Kamdev99008 like it. JAI HO.

"I am translating the story in another language."

Now the time has come for me  to learn to read a new language.

"Oh come on!!!! Don't buy YES bank share,what are you guys fools ". Forecasting .

Must need to read between the lines /images.

this line here does not sound as good as it is in English .

Don't know how will you justify it but strongly believe you will justify it.

I am a bit concerned and enthusiast about this line though - "
“The amount of  holiness oozing from your hole could even purify the satan himself”
(I tried translator, it was hilarious)
Hindi
"आपके छेद से पवित्रता की मात्रा भी स्वयं को शुद्ध कर सकती है"

Anyway i heard something about revenge today then it remind me of "Bambino."

Rahul returns soon with a bottle of cold drink in his hand....
"Cold drinks, dad?!!!" Rahul offers Mahesh sleeping pill mixed cold drinks glass....
Shilpa, You want some?"Rahul asks.....
Rahul got what he wanted, both of his victims are now filled with the drugs in their respective blood circulatory system. He just could not believe it......

"Revenge is a Drink best served Cold."

By the way I learned something new today "Foreshadowing"

Thank You again and Hats Off.  yr): 

Rahul has his reasons for revenge but his validation for taking revenge is based on a false incident. And I find  the whole thing funny and sad at the same time.

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I gotta say thank you
Coz first time in my life some one has enjoyed my criticism. Usually i am just like you, in real life i just give my opinion without any filter and they say i fuck them.
So i tried believe me I really tried very hard to not hurt them.
But what the hell i am supposed to do if i can't sugarcoat the lies or bullshit they immersed themselves into.
So similarly i use the jokes, pun, gag, sarcasm to fucking mock there reality(lies).
Another thing I feel connected to your story is that about 90 % of psychological, historical bunch of other facts i do know it should i say studied it. So its amazing to read when you choreograph this facts with the plot of the story.
Once again thank you for such a great entertainment.
Another thing I dont comment  much is bcoz i just dont want disrespect someones hardwork by just writing GOOD WORK, Or UPDATE SOON.
And whatever I want to say it atleast takes 4-5 sentences. And the shittest part is i am not good with keyboard.

Nah it's not disrespect.
I can surely say that a good deal of writers stopped writing just cause many readers hesitated to write those few words like 'update soon' etc.

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You are awesome writer. For some reasons, i did not like the last episode.
I dont want to write anything bad about it to hurt you.
We know you spend your precious time on this. Looking forward for the next update.

Why ????  banghead:  Why do you hesitate to do reasonable criticism?

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You cannot satisfy everyone with every episode.  In the episode shilpa with harsh, she was totally a different woman. It was not something expected from her character from the previous episodes. So, it is a shocker. It just happens. Please go ahead and continue

"First of all thank you for encouraging me.But I want to respond to Shilpa and Harsh incident.

Here is the foreshadowing of  Harsh's fate .Chapter 28   ----------------------


"Shilpa seizes the moment, "Then you admit you enjoyed groping and grinding against my body? Come on, perv cough up."
Rahul sees no way out, and He throws himself at Shilpa's feet " I am sorry...You are beautiful, hot ...but I did not enjoy myself." he grabs her feet.
Shilpa does not back off; she instead push her toe on his lips " I don't believe you...You know what I think, I think you love sucking toes like the perv you are." pushing her toe forcefully inside Rahul's mouth and scratching his gum with her toenail "I think you are the kind of creepy perv boy who loves to eat dirt from a woman's feet like the frail male you are."
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Shilpa thinks this whole drama she just did was to put Rahul in his place and also to terrorize him so that he does not do any funny stuff. She feels safe. She found out Rahul is just a weak, sniveling boy without a spine, now she feels she is in control.

That is what she thinks the only thing that happened. But that is not the whole story, and something else was happening. This entire act of her was a sexual act. Her conscious mind did not realize dominating a male whom she finds weak and unworthy of her is like riding a dick. She was getting sadistic sexual pleasure by tormenting him. That only made her flood her panty. It's like dancing, which is just another art form of sex, a mating ritual you can perform in public. Shilpa gets off by insulting men whom she thinks unworthy of her. In regular times she would have never thought of doing that with Rahul, but she is under sex drug influence." CHAPTER 28,PART 2


 It was not out of the blue.The problem is the story is so big it's hard to keep track for the readers what happened where or who said what.

I wrote more than 80 pdf pages in one month ,so .....yeah nobody got that much time to spend behind a single story.

That's why I am taking it slow,never going to make the same mistake of writing so much words in so little time.