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A wedding ceremony in village

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Neeche hall me aane ke baad usne yaha waha Bihari kaka ko dhunda par na use Bihari kaka kahi dikhe aur na hi Jeetu. Usne kitchen me jhank kar dekha to waha bhi koi nahi tha. Philhaal use bhook bhi bade joro ki lag rahi thi to usne yaha waha kuch khane ko dhunda to Bihari kaka ne ab tak khane me bhi kuch nahi banaya tha. Wo fridge me jhuk kar dekh hi rahi thi ki use peeche apne koolho par ek hath sehlata mehsoos hua, wo samajh gai ki ye Bihari kaka hi hai. Wo palat kar ghoomne ko hui par uske peeche khade shakhs ne use majbooti se apni baho me jakad liya aur apne honth garima ke kandhe par rakh diye aur hole hole garima ke kandhe ko chatne laga. Garima samajh chuki thi ki ye Bihari kaka hi hai wo to soch rahi thi ki Bihari kaka se is baar sex ke liye kaise kahegi par wo to khud hi bahut bhare baithe the ki khud se hi Garima par toot pade.

Use Bihari kaka ki harkato se koi aitraaz nahi tha par ha use is baat ka dar tha ki Jeetu bhi yahi hai kahi wo use apne bapu ke sath ye sab karta na dekh le.

Garima: Jeetu ke bapu kuch to sharam karo jeetu bhi yahi hai kahi usne apko mere sath ye sab karte dekh liya to kya sochega.
Peeche se awaaz(Garima ke kaan me): Aap chinta mat karo mai kuchh bhi galat nahi sochunga mummy.

Peeche se aati ye awaaz aur mummy shabd sunkar ye clear the ki ye Bihari kaka to nahi hai. Achanak Garima ki nazre kitchen ke gate par padi to wo hairaan reh gai kyuki Bihari kaka kitchen ke gate par use kisi aur mard ki baho me dekh kar bhi muskura rahe the.

Peeche se awaaz: Kya hua mummy bapu ko dekhkar hairaan ho gai chinta mat karo bapu kuch nahi kahenge.
Bapu shabd sunte aur awaaz ko dhyan lagakar pehchante hi Garima ko samajhte der na lagi ki uske peeche khada shakhs aur koi nahi Jeetu hai.

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Peeche se Garima ki gardan ko chumte hue Jeetu apne hath Garima ki kamar se upar sarkate hue Garima ke blouse tak le aya aur Garima ko dono uchhalte kabootaro ko apne hatho me bhar liya aur unhe hole hole dabane sehlane laga. Garima ki aankhe to lazzat ke maare band hi ho gai aur kuch second baad hi jab usne aankhe dubara kholi to Bihari kaka ab uske theek saamne khade the aur unka chehra Garima ke chehre ke ekdum kareeb tha.

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Bihari kaka: Kya hua jeetu ki amma jeetu tumhe jada pareshan to nahi kar raha waise bhi jab kal raat tum meri biwi ban gai to uski to amma ban gai apne aap. To itna hasi thitholi to kar hi sakta hai tumhare sath aakhir uske andar ki jawaani ki garmi bhi bahar aane ko machal rahi. Aur mai janta hu ki uske andar ki garmi ko bahar lane me tum uski madad zaroor karogi aakhir amma jo ho uski.

Garima ko samajh nahi aa raha tha ki Bihari kaka ye sab kya kar rahe hai aur Jeetu jo apne baap se itna darta tha achanak se apne baap ke saamne itna open kaise ho gaya.

Bihari kaka: Kya hua kya sochne lagi pehle bhi to do baar tum mere peeth peeche uski jawaani ki garmi ko nikalne me uski madad kar chuki aaj zara mujhe bhi to dekhne do ki mera beta kitna jawaan ho gaya hai.

Garima ki aankhe hairaani me puri khul gai, matlab Jeetu ne apne baap ko us din mandir ke peeche baag ki aur kal raat maalish ke dauraan ghati sari ghatnae bata di hai.

Bihari kaka: Jada socho mat aur apne maa aur biwi hone ke dono farz pure karo wo bhi yaha se jaane se pehle apne nae nawele pati ko ek baar aur ek aurat ka sukh do aur apne nae navele bete ko jawaan hone me madad karo.

Itna kehkar Bihari kaka ne apna chehra aage karke apne honth Garima ke hontho se jod diye. Doosri taraf Garima ko yakeen nahi ho raha tha ki jeetu ne apne baap ko sab kuchh bata diya par kyu usne aisa kyu kara. Wo ye soch hi rahi thi ki jeetu apne chehra Garima ki gardan se hatakar uske kaan ke nazdeek le aya.

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Jeetu: Kya hua Garima didi ya yu kahu Garima mummy. Mai kal raat waha apne kamre me leta apke naam ki muth maar raha tha socha ki bapu so gae ho to ek baar mauka dekh kar apke kamre me chupke se dekh lu taki apko sote hue dekhte hue muth maarne me aur maza aae. Par jab kitchen ki khidki se jhank kar andar dekha to andar ka to nazara hi alag dhamakedaar tha, aap bapu ke bagal me letkar unki patni yani humri asal amma ki kumi ko pura kar rahi thi. Aur hum par humesha chillane wale je humae bapu to aur char hath aage ke nikle, aapki maang me sindoor bharkar apko sach me humari amma banae diya, gazab. Aur jaate jaate ka boli thi 9 mahine baad humae bapu ka bachha bhi janogi. Hum to kal maalish karte karte aapki chaddi ke andar jhad jane par hi bada sharminda hoe rahe the aur humae bapu ko dekho je to seedha apki jaangho ke beech ki gufa ke andar hi jhad gae. Savera hote hi hum seedha bapu se kal raat ke bare me sawal daag diye pehle to je thoda jhep gae aur chilla kar hume chup karane lage par jab hum us din wo baarish wali baat aur kal ki maalish wali sari baat bapu ko batae to inka muh bhi aise hi aapki tarah khula ka khula reh gaya. Tabahi hum samajh gae ki apki chut me badi khujli mach rahi hai jise aap hum dono baap bete ke sath baari baari nae nae bahane banae ke thanda kar rahi ho. Par ab sab kuch khullam khulla saamne hai apko humare lund chahiye aur hume aapke chhed to bekar me bahane bana bana ke ye sab kyu karna kuchh der me to waise bhi aap chali jaogi to je bache khuche ghante hum dono baap bete ke sath ek sath enjoy karlo bolo kya bolti ho meri mummy.

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Ab sab kuchh sheeshe ki tarah saaf ho gaya tha kal raat Jeetu ne garima ko apne baap ke sath raat kabbaddi khelte dekh liya tha aur usne subah hote hi saari baat apne bapu ko bata di aur ab in dono baap bete ne milkar Garima ko bhogne ka faisla kara hai. Garima ne man hi man socha ki wo to waise bhi jeetu ke sath bhi jaane se pehle ek baar sex karna chahti thi aur uske baap Bihari se bhi sex karne ka mauka talash rahi thi yaha to dono baap bete use apni baho me jakde khade the. Usne ab tak Neha ke muh se Threesome sex ke bare me kewal suna tha aur Neha ki alag alag fantasy ki kahaniya sunti rehti thi par pehli baar Threesome ko asal me experience karne ka uske paas aaj mauka tha wo ek 54 saal buddhe baap aur uske 18 saal bete ke sath. Garima ne man hi man socha ki yaha se jaane ke baad bhala aisa experience lene ka mauka dubara kaha milne wala hai. Yaha se jaane ke baad dubara se uski life wahi pati bachhe ghar khane me hi guzarne lagegi agar kuchh pal ke liye wo ek shareef conservative ghar ki housewife se ek tharki bazaru mardo ki hawas puri karne wali bazaroo raand ban bhi jaegi to kaun sa bada pahaad toot padega. Yaha se jaane ke baad dubara apni purani lifestyle me adjust ho jaegi aur yaha Hariya, Bihari kaka aur Jeetu ke sath jo kuchh bhi hua usne jo kuchh bhi kara wo sab yahi is gaanv me chhod jaegi, yaha ki saari yaade yahi dafan ho jaegi. Saari zindagi to wo doosro ke liye unke hisaab se hi jeeti aai hai aur aage bhi doosro ke liye unke hisaab se hi jeena hai pehle apne baap ke hisaab se phir pati ke aur aage bachho ke hisaab se zindagi jeeni hai agar unme se kuchh pal apne liye thoda enjoy kar liya to isme harz hi kya hai.

Garima ki is kahani ka ek hi aadhar tha wo khud hi khud se sawaal karti aur khud hi khud ko apne man maafiq jawab dekar apne kiye kaam ko justify bhi thehra deti. Matlab khud hi victim khud hi culprit aur khud hi faisla sunane wali judge. Jab wo yaha aai thi tab wo ek shareef gharelu housewife thi par bachpan se uske andar ki dabi ichhae aaj us par is kadar haawi ho chuki thi ki usne ek baap bete ke sath ek sath ek sath sex karne ko bhi aaj justify thehra diya tha wo bhi is tarq ke sath ki bus kuch hi ghante ki to baat hai agar wo enjoy kar legi to kya ho jaega. Par ye sawaal mai aap logo se poochhta hu ki garima hawas aur vaasna ke jis raaste par itni aage nikal aai hai kya wo yaha se jaane ke baad apni purani life me laut paegi kya itna asaan hoga sab kuchh bhool kar wapas se ghar grihasthi me settle ho jana, khud vichaar kijiye kya uske andar ki tharki housewife bus in kuch ghanto ke enjoyment ke baad fully satisfy hokar shant hokar baith jaegi, ya phir ye to bus shuruaat hai Garima ki asal kahaani to yaha se jaane ke baad shuru hogi. Ye faisla mai aap logo par chhodta khud vichaar kare ki Garima ka yaha se jaane ke baad future kya hone wala hai.

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(13-07-2024, 04:12 PM)sunravi5853 Wrote:  Your writing skills is excellent. Waiting for Garima with jeetu episode. He has to get a chance also. . Ha don't forget old, middle. Young concept for Garima. And waiting for your update

Thanks bro mera itna hausla badane ke liye. Shukriya apne apna suggetion rakha maine aur suggetions ki bhi umeed kari thi par koi baat nahi. Mai aapke suggetion ka zaroor dhyan rakhunga aur Jeetu ko bhi uska final closer zaroor milega. Garima ka old middle young ka concept bhi barkaraar rahega. Thanks again for your valueable feedback.
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(22-07-2024, 01:54 PM)Kuchnahi24 Wrote:  Bhai
Bahut time baad aap active hue h same is story ke regular readers ka haal hoga , aur ab tak aapne ise bahut aache se hi likha h to aage bhi apni samajh bujh se likhiye ab last mai kuch kisi aur ki thoughts/ tadka puri dish ka jayka badal sakti h
Eagerly waiting for upadtes specially vinita part.
Hope she will get happy life ahead and you will show some glimse also about her future

Bhai writer to ek hi hota hai but readers hazaro me hote hai unme se atleast 10 to comment kar sakte hai aur agar unke liye 2 line likhna bhari padta hai to socho writer ko to pura update likhna hai phir uske according photo select karke unhe post karna hai. Aur aisa bhi nahi hai ki ye koi money making site hai jaha views count se paise milte hai. Warna kai apps hai jaha story likhne ke baad views ke paise bhi milte hai. But yaha par comment to expect kar hi sakte hai ya wo bhi expect karna galat hai. I hope readers understand that. Chalo koi nahi sab badiya hai.........
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Kitchen me ue waasnapoorna mahaul me Garima un baap beto ke beech aise khadi thi jaise sandwich me do bread ke beech aalo. Achanak Bihari kaka ne uske hontho azaad kar diya aur ek kadam peeche hat gae.

Kaka: Suno bahut din tum humare hath ka bana kha chuki, ab jara jaane se pehle apna aurat ka farz nibhao aur pati aur apne bete ko apne hath se bana ke khana khilao. Tabahi aaj hum kuchh nahi banae kyuki aaj ka khana tum banaogi. Aata mada rakha sabji kati rakhi bus tumhe banana hai. Bolo banaogi na humare liye.

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Garima ne jawab me haa me sir hila diya.

Kaka: Chal beta chhod de apni amma ko ab je humare liye khana banaegi. Pegle hum iske hath ka bana khana khaenge aur phir khane ke baad ki mithai me ise khaenge.

Apne baap ke kenne par Jeetu ne bhi Garima ko chhod diya aur ab tak Garima ke saamne hath jod kar khade rehne wale baap bete seena taan kar muskurate hue kamre se bahar nikal gae. Garima kuchh der khadi yahi sochti rahi ki ye achanak hua kya ekdum se waqt badal diya halat badal diya jazbaat badal diya. Par ise bhi ek naya experience maankar wo gas ki taraf bad gai. Usne ek bahar ki taraf dekha dekha to Kaka aur jeetu bahar dinning tabel ke paas kursi me baithkar dinning tabel me pair rakh kar baithe Garima ko dekh kar muskura rahe the jaise wo is ghar ke maalik ho aur Garima unke yaha ki Kaamwali. Par garima bhi unka ye vyavhaar dekh kar muskura di aur unki taraf peeth karke khana banane lagi.

Garima un dono ki taraf peeth karke rotiya bel rahi thi ki achanak use apne dono kulho par do hath mehsoos hue. Wo samajh gai ki ye ya to kaka hai ya unka beta Jeetu. Wo dono hath garima ke dono mote kulho ko peticoat ke upar se hu masal aur ragad rahe the. Garima ne peeche ghoomkar bhi nahi dekha ki ye kaka hai jeetu, wo waise hi apna kaam karti rahi. Achanak ek teesra hath uska seene ki taraf aya aur usne uske seene par pada saadi ka pallu kheechkar neeche sarka diya aur ek chauthe hath ne us neeche sarak chuki saadi ko uski kamar se kheech kar bahar nikal diya. Ab clear tha ki jeetu aur kaka dono hi wapas akar uske badan se khel rahe the. Uske daai taraf Jeetu khada tha aur baai taraf uske pita Bihari kaka.Jeetu ka ek hath Garima ke daae kulhe par tha aur doosra uske seene par aur ab uski saadi ka pallu sarakne ke baad Jeetu ka hath uske blouse ke stano ke beech ki daraar ke khule hue hisse se andar daakhil hone ke liye jagah banane laga aur doosri taraf Bihari kaka ek hath se Garima ki gaand sehla rahe the aur unka doosra hath garima ke peticote ko upar aur upar uthane laga. Garima ki saase tez tez upar neeche ho rahi thi. Par wo ab bhi apne kaam me lagi thi.

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Garima ka blouse behad tight tha par Jeetu ka hath to har keemat par uske andar daakhil hona chahta tha. Aise me us saste purane blouse ke button kitni der sangharsh karte, aakhirkaar upar wale button ne haar maan li aur jaise jaise Jeetu ka hath aage bada doosra button pakk se toot kar alag ho gaya. Ab garima ka blouse ka blouse sirf ek button ke sahare Garima ke seene se tika hua tha. Aur do button khul jaane se Garima ke aadhe se jada doodh beparda ho chuke the aur Jeetu ke khurdure hath Garima ke mote mote chikne chikne ubharo ko yaha waha ragad rahe the.

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Doosri taraf Bihari kaka bhi apne bete ke sur me sur mila rahe the aur Garima ka peticote upar karte karte wo Garima ki jaangho ke muhane tak pahuch chuke the jaha se Garima ki chut unke hath se bus inch bhar ke faasle par thi. Aur jald hi unhone wo faasla bhi khatam kar diya aur unki fucking finger garima ki chut ke daane tak pahuch kar use ragadne lagi. Is pal par aakhirkaar Garima ka dhyan khane se hat hi gaya aur wasna ke aavesh me uski aankhe band ho gai. Jeetu ne apne hath ko thoda aur jhatka diya aur is jhatke ke sath hi garima ke blouse ka wo aakhiri button khul kar alag ho gaya. Us aakhiri button ke khulte garima dono kabootar kapdo ki kaid se puri tarah azaad ho gae. Jeetu Garima ki bagal se saamne akar apna chehra Garima ke stano ke kareeb lakar unse aati mehek soonghne laga.

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Jeetu: Mummy Gaav me itni gai bhais bakriyo ka doodh nikala hai aur piya hai par jo doodh ki mast mehek apki chuchiyo se aa rahi hai wo kahi nahi. Man karta hai inhe muh me bharkar inke andar ka sara doodh pi loo.

Garima Jeetu ki kamuk baate sunkar andar hi andar uttejit ho rahi thi aur neeche Bihari kaka ki ungali bhi is uttejna ko aur bada rahi thi.

Bihari kaka: Are beta jab wo meri biwi ho teri to amma hi hui na aur bachha apni amma ke doodh nahi piyega to kya padosan ke piyega.
Jeetu: Par bapu amma to ye kal raat hi bani hai pehle to madam thi. Aur ab tak inhone mujhe pyar se beta bhi nahi kaha hai to kaise maan lu ki ye meri amma hai.
Bihari kaka: Agar aisa hai to apni amma se hi pooch le ki kya wo tujhe apna doodh pilaengi.
Jeetu: Nahi bapu mai kuch nahi poochunga na hi khud se piyunga agar ye meri amma hai to khud se mera sir apni chuchiyo se lagakar apne ye mote mote doodh mere muh me daale tabhi mai inka doodh piyuga.

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Garima ka to uttejna ke maare bura haal ho raha tha, usne bina der kiye Jeetu ka chehra apne stano me bheech liya aur apna ek stan pakadkar jeetu ke khule muh me daal diya. Jeetu ne bhi khushi khushi Garima ki kamar ke ird gird apni baahe daal kar khud kobgarima se chipka liya aur muh chala chala kar garima ki stano ko choosne laga. Halaki garima ki chhati se doodh to waise bhi nahi aa raha tha par jeetu to unhe aise hi choos raha tha jaise unse dhero doodh nikal raha ho.

Bihari kaka: Waah pehle tum humri biwi bani baad me iski amma par bete ne tumse doodh maanga to turant use apni chhati se chipka liya kuch apne is pati ka bhi khayal karo.
Garima: To doosri taraf ka khula hai aap bhi aa jaiye.
Bihari kaka: Chheh doodh to bachha peeta hai apni amma ka pati to apni biwi ka kuch aur peeta hai.
Garima: Aur wo kuchh aur kya hai bhala.
Bihari Kaka: Premrus jo aurat ki jaangho ke beech bane chhed se nikalta hai. Hume to tumhara premrus peena hai.
Garima: To maine kya rok rakha hai apka. Par iske liye to apko mere saamne ghutno par aana hoga.

Bihari kaka Garima ka peticote chhodkar uske saamne ghutno ke bal baith gae. Waasna ki aag me jal rahi Garima ne bhi apna peticote khud se upar utha kar apni ek tang Kaka ke kandhe se peeche ki taraf latka aur apne peticote se kaka ko puri tarah dhak liya. Ab Bihari kaka Garima ke peticote ke andar the aur Garima ki phooli hui chut Bihari kaka ke chehre ke theek saamne thi. Kaka garima ki chut ki kaamukta ko apalak nihaar rahe the. Achanak unhe apne sir ke peeche Garima ke haatho ka dabaav mehsoos hua. Garima ne apne haatho ka dabaav daalkar unka chehra apni chut me daba diya. Bihari kaka apne honth Garima ki chut par yaha waha ragad rahe the. Garima ki jhaant ke halke halke baal Kaka ke chehre par yaha waha ragad rahe the aur Kaka ki daadi ke safed ghane baal Garima ki nangi jaangho par yaha waha ghis rahe the. Garima ki chut se aati madak sugandh ne Kaka ko deewana kar diya tha.

Bihari kaka: Garima jee apke Premrus ki sugandh hi itni madak hai ki mera hathiyaar dhoti ke andar kulaache bhar raha hai soch raha hu iska swaad kitna nasheela hoga.
Garima: Jeetu ke bapu aap na sochte jada ho karte kum. Aapse tez to apka beta hai dekho kitne achhe bachhe ki tarah mera doodh pee raha aur aap abhi tak soonghne me hi lage pade ho.

Itna sunna bhar tha ki Bihari kaka ne apni jeebh Garima ki chut ke andar daakhil kardi. Achanak hui is harkat se Garima ki jaangho ka kasaav bad gaya aur Kaka ka sir Garima ki jaagho ke beech dab gaya. Uttejna ke maare Garima ne ek hath se Jeetu ke baal kas kar pakad liye aur uska chehra zor zor se apne ubharo par ragadne lage aur doosre hath se peticote ke upar se hi Bihari ka sir par peeche se dabaav daalne lagi taaki wo aur jada gehrai tak apni jeebh daalkar garima ki chut ko andar tak chat sake.

Gas to filhaal faltu hi jal rahi thi kyuki na is waqt Garima ko khana banane me interest tha na un baap bete ko khana banwane me.

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18 saal ke bete ne Garima ke doodh aur 52 saal ke baap ne Garima ki chut choos aur chat kar hi Garima ko jhadne ke kareeb pahucha diya tha. Garima ki ukhadti saaso ko mehsoos kar Jeetu ne Garima ke stano ko aur tez choosna shuru kar diya. Usne ek nazar Garima ke chehre ko dekha, Garima aankhe band kare waha khadi thi aur uske honth tharthara rahe the. Jeetu ne apna chehra aage karke apne honth Garima ke kapkapqte hontho par rakh diye aur bade passionate tareeke Garima ke hontho ko kiss karne laga. Garima bhi uska pura sath de rahi thi. Kaka bhi garima ke peticote ke andar apne kaam me tanmayta se lage the unhe ab ehsaas ho gaya tha ki Garima ab jhadne ke behad kareeb hai.

Kitchen me bharpoor waasna ka mahaul ban chuka tha Garima apne charamsukh behad kareeb thi ki tabhi ek bhari bharkam awaaz ne us mahaul ko me rang me bhang daal diya.

" YE KYA HO RAHA HAI "

Is achanak kitchen ke baahar se aai awaaz se Garima Jeetu aur Bihari Kaka teeno apni sense me wapas aae aur chain reaction ki tarah un teeno ke chehre us awaaz ki disha me ghoom gae. Aur jab unki nazre us awaaz ke maalik par padi to Jeetu aur Bihari kaka hadbada kar Garima se pare hat gae aur Garima ke chehre ki bhi hawaiya ud gai.

Aur teeno ke muh se ek sath ek sur me ek hi naam nikla........


"  HARIYA "

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(25-07-2024, 02:32 PM)hirarandi Wrote:  Nice Update Logan Jee....

Agle update ka intazar rahay ga


(26-07-2024, 07:10 AM)pujaa69 Wrote:  Nice update?
Keep posting


(28-07-2024, 11:20 AM)hitenray09 Wrote:  jabardast episode...updates awaited..


Thanks Hira puja and hiten for ur moral booster
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(29-07-2024, 05:13 PM)Amit Sir Wrote:  Amazing Fantastic Update Very Nice
Thanks Amit for ur support
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(28-07-2024, 11:17 AM)hitenray09 Wrote:  thanks LOgan555 for your updates, plz keep going...let this saga come to a logical ending and plz give your best effort.

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Bilkil koshish to meri bhi yahi hai ki atleast is story ko khud hi iske logical end tak pahuchau kyuki mere dimaag me iska ek end already created hai agar koi doosra likhrga bhi to wo mera end nahi de paega jo mai dena chahta hu.
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(25-07-2024, 10:50 AM)Rizzi1198 Wrote:  Atti sundar zabardast update

Thanks Rizzi for ur feedback
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(29-07-2024, 12:55 PM)abcturbine Wrote:  You are marvellous....!!!
simply superb....
gazab ka likhte ho aap....
thanks a TON for writing such a wonderful erotica....

Thanks bro tareef ke liye shukriya
Bus aap logo ka yahi support likhne me utprerak ka kaam karta hai jo story ko aage badane ko motivate karta hai thanks again.
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Bhai bahut bahut shukriya agar aap kum comment karte hai phir bhi aapne meri story par comment kara. Sach kahu Vineeta part to is story ki soul yani aatma hai puru story hi us part ke ird gird ghoom rahi hai. Aur us story ko likhne me maza bhi aata hai kyuki usme mujhe kaafi research karni padti hai. Shayad jo mere readers hai wo greek gods ke baare me itna nahi jante honge jitna maine yaha greek gods Ares, Posideon, Zeus, Cronus, Aphrodite in sabko explain kara hai. Agar kabhi aap net par unke baare me pado tab apko pata chalega maine unki pasand napasand unki lifestyle ke according kis tarah sexual and thrilling mixed touch dekar Vineeta ke update likhe hai.

Aur upar se Anushka the beauty uski beauty and body ka to koi jod hi nahi hai.Ab Vineeta ki story bhi apne funale tak aa gai hai koshish karunga uska Grand Finale zabardast du.
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(02-08-2024, 02:10 AM)pujaa69 Wrote:  Nice lovely ❤ update

(07-08-2024, 12:19 AM)pujaa69 Wrote:  Love your writing
Keep updating ?

Thanks dear i will keep updatibg definetly
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(04-08-2024, 06:12 AM)Salma Khan Wrote:  Very nice update, waiting for specially vineeta's next update actually vineeta is my favourite character

Agla update Vineeta Lakhan par hi hai and thanks for ur love towards Vineeta
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(05-08-2024, 05:07 AM)HBK♡♡ Wrote:  Bhai Vineeta ki jam kar chudai karao ab sabhi puja dono ki akhen khol kar honi chahiye puja ke baad bhi Vineeta ki jam kar chudai honi chahiye kyunki sirf 1 baar ki chudai se na to Vineeta ko maja ayega na hum sabko

Finale to definetly aankhe khol kar hi hoga par ha Vineeta ki storyline me sirf sex bhar hi nahi hai waha unke andar ke emotional baate kahi zafa gehri hai. Sex ke antim padaav tak pahuch jana wo bhi bina ek doosre ke prati hawas wasna ya love express kare aur itna kuch hone ke baad bhi ab tak unka charectar yani izzat barkaraar hai jo Garima me nahi rahi so there is a difference between Garima and Vineeta aur Vineeta ki kahani usi tarah aage bad rahi hai. Par ha definetly Vineeta ka wo final update apni taraf se best banane ki koshish karunga.

Par ha aise hi apne suggetions de isse shayad wo update banate samay mai in sujhavo ko dhyan rakhkar aur jada badiya update bana saku.
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Lakhan singh us safed kabootar ka kaafi door tak peecha karte karte ek mele tak le aya jaha kai dukane lagi thi jaha aurto ke saaj sringaar ki alag alag dukaane lagi thi. Par un dukaano ki khaas baat ye thi ki har dukaan alag alag samaan ki thi par us dukaan par kewal ek tarah ka samaan hi mil raha tha. Jaise kajal ki dukaan par sirf aur sirf kajaal hi tha, lipstick ki dukaan par tarah tarah ke rango ki lipstick hi thi, nail polish ki dukaan par kewal nail polish mil rahi thi inke alawa bindi,saree,sindoor, powder, inner wear(bra), inner wear(panty),chppal, eye shadow, darpan, sungadhit itr, tarah tarah ke hair oil, face pack, creams, gaalo ki laali,yaha tak ki sabun ki bhi dukaane the. Lakhan singh ko samajh nahi aa raha tha ki yaha is mele me unhe karna kya hai.

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Wo ye sab soch hi rahe the ki tabhi chhota sa ladka bhagta hua aya aur lakhan jee ko ek patra thama kar wapas bhaag gaya. Lakhan jee ne use peeche se awaaz di par wo pal me unki aankho se ojhil ho gaya. Lakhan jee ne wo patra khola jisme aghori ka ek aur sandesh likha tha.

" Lakhan jee agar ye patra apko mil chuka hai matlab aap us kabootar ka peecha karte karte is mele tak pahuch gae hai jaha kewal aurto ke saaj srigaar ki hi dukaane lagi hai wo bhi alag alag vastuo ki. Har dukaan me samaan bechne ke liye ek ek mahila khadi hai, aur har mahila ke paas ek naksha hai par un sab naksho me se kewal ek naksha sahi hai baki sab galat aur us sahi nakshe me us bhawan ka pata hai jaha aaj ki Venus puja ke aage ke charan pure hone hai. Vineeta jee bhi apko wahi milengi. Is mele se ek baar me kewal ek cheez hi le sakte hai aur jis bhi dukaan se aap koi vastu lenge us dukaan ki mahila apko ek naksha degi aur nakshe ke sahare apko aage ka safar pura karna hai. Ab agar apko sahi naksha mila to aap apni manzil tak pahuch jaenge aur agar aap galat dukaan par gae to aap ek galat jagah pahuch jaenge aur apko dubara wapas akar phir se is prakriya ko doharana hai jab tak ki apko sahi naksha na mil jae. Aur dhyan rahe is prakriya ko pura karne ke liye apke paas kewal suryast tak ka samay hai. Agar suryast tak aap us bhawan tak nahi pahuche to ye saari dukaane hat jaengi aur apki aaj ki puja bhang ho jaegi. Par ab ye soch rahe honge ki wo sahi naksha in sab dukaano me se kis dukaan ki mahila ke paas hai to sahi uttar usi patra me tha jo apko shuruaat me diya gaya tha aur kaha gaya tha ki ise behad dhyaan se padiye. Ab usi patra ko dhyaan kariye aur sochiye stree ke sringaar ki wo kaun si vastu hai jo Devi Aphrodite ko sabse adhik priya hai. Asha hai aap sahi chunaav kare aur saralta se apni manzil tak pahuch jae. Shubhkaamnae. "

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Nahi bhai philhaal ke liye to tirangi barfi panchmel phir kabhi dekhenge Thanks for created the id for this story. Koahish karunga waise is story me hi itne saare kirdaar hai ki har kirdaar par ek ek alag srory likhi ja sakti hai aur yahi mera plan hai sabko apni apni ek story dena. Bilkul bhai notes aur google search dono bahut kara and shukriya ise appreciate karne ke liye and definetly mera prayas hoga Aphrodite Venus puja ka ye aakhiri charan bhi logical erotic and Anushkafull ho. Becoz u love Anushka.
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Lakhan singh us pure mele ki har dukaan ka tehel tehel kar nirikshan karne lage. Unke dimaag me wo subah wala patra ka ek ek shabd chal raha tha ki wo kaun si vastu ho sakti hai jo Devi Aphrodite ko sabse adhik priya thi. Lakhan singh jis bhi dukaan ke saamne se guzarte waha maujood mahila unka abhivaadan karte hue apni dukaan me maujood samaan dikhate hue aise darsha rahi thi ki uski dukaan hi sahi dukaan hai aur uske paas hi sahi naksha hai.

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Lakhan singh bindi ki dukaan ke saamne se guzre to waha tarah tarah ki sundar bindiya thi. Ek pal ko unke dimaag me aya ki bindi lagane se aurat ki sundarta bahut bad jaati par kya bindi sahi vastu hai.

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Aage sindoor ki dukan thi unke man me khayaal aya ki sindoor se hi aurat ka suhaag hota hai bina sindoor ke aurat suhagan nahi kya sindoor ho sakta hai. Jab wo itr ki dukaan ke saamne se guzre to waha se aati tarah tarah ke itr ki sugandh ne barbas hi unka dhyan apni taraf kheech liya. Itr ka shauk to unko bhi bahut tha aur waha aise aise natural itr the jinki kabhi unhone mehek nahi soonghi thi. Wo waha maujood alag alag itr ko soongh kar uska anand lene lage. Wo bhool hi gae wo yaha ek mehetvapoorna karya se aae hai. Waha maujood mahila ne hi unhe unka vastavik karya yaad dilaya.

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Mahila: Aapne bilkul sahi chunaav kara hai, aap itni saari dukaano ke saamne se guzre par kahi apka dhyaan vichlit nahi hua par is dukaan se aati itr ki madak sugandh ne apko apni taraf aane ko majboor kar diya. Ab aap khud hi sochiye isse jada mehetvapoorna vastu aur kya ho sakti hai stree ke sringaar ki jo purush ko apni taraf akarshit hone ko majboor karde.

Lakhan singh ko bhi kahi na kahi uski baate sahi lag rahi thi. Unhone ek pal ko man me chintan kara aur phir us dukaan se ek behad sugandhit itr ki sheeshi leli. Sheeshi ke sath us mahila ne ek naksha bhi Lakhan singh ke haatho me tham diya. Lakhan singh ne wo patra khola jisme ek marga dishao ke anusaar darshaya gaya aur yaha se 20 km door wo bhawan dikhaya ja raha tha. Lakhan singh bina der kiye wo itr ki sheeshi aur wo naksha lekar us safed ghode jispar baithkar wo aae the par sawar hokar us nakshe me darshae marg se hote hue tez gati se manzil ki taraf bad chale takreeban ded ghante me wo us nakshe me darshai jagah par pahuch chuke the par yaha bhawan to door door door tak koi jhopdi bhi nazar nahi aa rahi thi.

Jise ye to saaf ho gaya tha ki Lakhan singh ne galat vastu chun li thi. Unhe us mahila par bahut gussa aa raha tha par yahi to pariksha thi kahi na kahi wo khud se bhi gussa the unhone apne chunaav me thoda aur dhyan dena chahiye tha. Unhone apne sir ke upar chamakte surya ko dekha uski sthiti se spasht tha ki abhi suryast hone me lagbhag 3 ghante ka samay shesh tha yani wo ab bhi wapas jakar sahi vastu chun sakte the. Wo bina ek bhi pal ki der kiye dubara ghode par sawaar ho gae aur tez gati se wapas us mele ki taraf daud pade. Is baar ghode ki gati pehle se thodi dheemi thi wo samajh gae ki ghoda bhi lagatar chalne ke karan pyasa hai. Raaste me unhe ek talaab dikha jaha unhone khud bhi paani piya aur ghode ko bhi paani pilaya par is sabme bhi unka kuch samay vyarth ho gaya.

Lakhan singh (ghode ko sehlate hue): Dost mere paas jada samay nahi hai mujhe tumhari sahayta ki zarurat hai please dost meri madad karo.

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Jaanwar bhi pyar ki bhasha achhe se samajhte hai Lakhan singh ke is pyar dulaar ko dekh us shwet ashva ne uttar me apna sir jhuka diya. Lakhan singh ne aage bad kar uske maathe ko choom liya aur dubara us par sawaar ho gae. Is baar to us ghode ki tezi dekhte hi ban rahi thi. Pani peene me samay lagne ke bawjood us ghode ne ded ghante ka safar ek ghante me poora karke Lakhan singh ko dubara us mele tak pahucha diya. Lakhan singh dubara mele me daakhil ho gae. Sabse pehle unhone wo itr ki dukaan dhoondni chahi par wo hairaan the kyuki wo dukaan ab waha se gayab thi. Shayad lakhan singh ko bhramit karne ka uska kaam pura hua isliye wo dukaan hata di gai.

Ab Lakhan singh baaki dukano ko dhyan se dekhne lage, wo jante the ki ab unke paas bus ek mauka aur hai kyuki agar is baar phir unhone galat vastu chuni to dubara itni door jakar wapas ana aur phir teesri baar koi vastu lekar suryast se pehle apni manzil tak pahuch jana sambhav nahi hoga aur shayad ye ghoda bhi itna safar nahi kar paega. Isliye is baar unhe jo bhi chunna hai bade dhyan se dimag laga aur subah ka patra yaad karke hi chunna hoga. Unhe samajh nahi aa raha tha wo kya chune sindoor, bindi, lipstick achanak wo saree ki dukan ke saamne pahuche aur saree ki dukaan ko nihaarne lage. Waha dukaan me tarah tarah akarshak saree thi.

Lakhan singh (man me) : Kya saree wo vastu ho sakti hai.

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(31-07-2024, 09:59 PM)hitenray09 Wrote:  logan555 PMed you

Hiten i replied your PM.
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(11-08-2024, 08:15 AM)HBK♡♡ Wrote:  Superb! bahut hi mast and exciting update curiosity hai aage kya kya hoga
Vineeta ki jabardast chudai ka besbri se Intjar hai
Logan Bhai agar is story ka the end karna to Ishi Vineeta ki new story jarur start karna


Thanks HBK
Bus isi me to asli maza ki curiosity end tak bani rehni chahiye. Sabr kare sabra ka fal definetly zabardast hi hoga. Mera plan to har kirdaar ki alag story ka hai lets see kya hota hai philhaal to abhi isi story ko khatam karna hai.
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(11-08-2024, 10:32 AM)Somnaath Wrote:  
excellent update  clp);

Skhukriya Som
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Lakhan singh waha maujood saariyo ko hath me lekar mehsoos karne lage. Waha kaachivuram, banarsi, jodhpuri, bengali tarah tarah ki saree. Man hi man wo vineeta jee ko in sariyo me imagine kar rahe the ki in sariyo me kitni sundar lagegi. Wo vineeta jee ke liye ye saree lena chah rahe the unka dil keh raha tha ki yahi sahi vastu hai Satee. Achanak unki nazar ek saree par padi jisme chhote chhote kaanch ke gol tukde lage the jisme lakhan jee ko apna pratibimb dikhai de raha tha. Aur us sheeshe par nazar padte hi unke zehen me subahb wale patra ki wo line click kari ki Devi Aphrodite ko sringaar ka bahut shauk tha aur unka kaafi samay khud ko aaine me nihaarte hue beetta tha. Aur Lakhan singh un saariyo ko wahi chhod kar us dukaan ko dhoondne lage jaha unhe wo vastu milne wali thi jo Devi Aphordite ko sabse adhik priya thi. Aur jald hi Lakhan singh us dukaan thi aur wo dukaan thi Darpan ki Dukaan.

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Lakhan singh ne waha se ek sundar sa darpan liya aur us darpan ke sath us mahila ne unhe ek aur naksha diya. Nakshe me 12 km door ki ek jagah dikhai gai thi.

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Lakhan singh ne us mahila ko dhanyawaad kara aur ek baar phir apne ghode par sawaar hokar us nakshe me batai jagah ke liye nikal pade. Suryaast hone me ab bhi lagbhag 1:30 ghante ka samay baaki tha aur Lakhan singh ka ghoda tez gati se apni manzil ki taraf dauda ja raha tha. Lakhan singh 10 km ka safar pura kar chuke the par iske aage unhe ruk jana pada kyuki aage ek mahila unka raasta roke khadi thi. Us jagah par aas paas ke vatavaran me unhe behad bheeni bheeni madak kamuk sugandh aa rahi jiske saamne us itr ki sugandh bhi fail thi. Lakhan singh ne us mahila se raasta rokne ka karan poocha.

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Lakhan: Devi jee aap mera marg kyu roke hue hai mujhe kahi pahuchna hai jald se jald.
Mahila: Mai janti hu aur meri yaha uapsthiti is baat ka pramaan hai ki aap sahi raste par hai par apka raasta mujhse hokar hi aage jata hai.
Lakhan: Matlab mai kuch samjha nahi.
Mahila: Apko ye bheeni bheeni sugandh mehsoos ho rahi hai.
Lakhan: Ha ho to rahi hai bahut hi achhi sugandh hai.
Mahila: Ye menhdi ke paudho ki sugandh hai. Apko subah jo patra mila tha usme bhi menhdi ka zikra tha yaad hai na apko.
Lakhan singh( yaad karte hue): Ha yaad aya us patra me bataya gaya tha ki Devi Aphrodite ke shareer se Menhdi ki badi hi madak sugandh aati thi jise soonghne wala deewana ho jata tha.

Mahila: Matlab apne wo patra bade dhyan se pada tha bilkuk sahi kaha aapne. Ab is menhdi ki bhi aaj ki puja me mehetvapoorna jagah hai, yaha se thodi hi door menhdi ke paudho ka baag hai. Apko waha jana hai aur waha se menhdi ki pattiya tod kar.unhe pees kar uska lep is patra me bharkar mere paas wapas lana hai. (Mahila ne ek jug numa patra Lakhan ki taraf bada diya jo lagbhag 1 liter ka hoga). Patto ko peesne ke liye silbatta aur pathar wahi rakha hai.

Lakhan singh ne socha tha wo suryast se pehle hi jald apni manzil tak pahuch jaega par is nae karya ne uski samasya ko bada diya use jald se jald ye karya karna hoga.

Mahila: Kis soch vichaar me doob gae aap menhdi to apko laani hi hogi kyuki apki laai gai is menhdi se hi apki patni ka sringaar hoga unke haath pairo me apki laai hui mernhdi hi lagai jaegi.

Jab Lakhan singh ko ye pata chala ki uski laai hui menhdi se hi Vineeta jee ka sringaar hoga ab to unhe har halat me Vineeta jee ke liye achhi se achhi menhdi laani hi thi wo bhi niyat samay ke andar. Lakhan singh ne turant wo jug us mahila ke hath se le liya aur us sugandh ki disha me chal pada. Kuch hi pal baad wo us menhdi ke baag me pahuch chuke the.

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Pura vatavaran menhdi ki sugandh se mehek raha tha. Wahi paas me rakha silbatta aur pathar bhi lakhan singh ko dikh gaya. Lakhan singh ne samay vyarth na karte hue menhdi ke paudho ki kuch badi badi daaliya tod li aur unke patte chhantkar unhe silbatte par rakhkar peesna shuru kar diya. Lakhan singh ko ghar par silbatte par chatni peesne ka experience tha isliye ye kaam unke liye naya nahi tha. Bus samasya thi samay jo bina ruke lagataar aage badta ja raha tha aur yaha Lakhan singh silbatte par menhdi pees rahe the.

Lakhan singh ke hath tez tez chal rahe the wo patte tod tod kar silbatte par lakar use pees pees kar uska lep us jug me bharte ja rahe the.Aadhe ghanta ho chuka tha par abhi bhi wo jug pura nahi bhara tha par phir bhi wo thoda relax the kyuki yaha se kewal 2 km ka safar shesh tha jo ghode par baithkar wo aram se 10 min me pura kar lenge aur suryast se pehle apni manzil tak pahuch jaenge. 15 min aur peesna bahane ke baad Lakhan singh ne wo pura jug menhdi ke lep se bhar diya. Kaam samapt kar wo tezi se wo jug lekar us jagah par wapas laute jaha wo mahila khadi unka intezaaar kar rahi thi par ab wo Lakhan singh ke ghode par baithi thi. Lakhan singh wo jug numa paatra lakar us mahila ke hath me de diya.

Mahila: Waah aap le aae par kaafi jada samay lag gaya aapko. Khair mai usi bhawan par jaa rahi aap bhi suryast se pehle waha pahuch jaiyega mai apko wahi milungi. Aur ha apka ghoda le ja rahi ab 2 km ka safar paidal thodi na jaungi. Sheeghrata kariye suryast hone me ab sirf adha ghanta hi shesh hai.

Itna kehkar wo mahila ghoda lekar chali gai aur Lakhan singh bechara sa muh lekar wahi khade reh gae.Ab bechare Lakhan singh kya keh aur kar sakte the. Wo to is umeed me the ki ghode par baithkar jald hi ye safar pura kar lenge par ghoda to wo mahila le gai aur ab bache hue 2 km unhe paidal hi pure karne the. Lakhan singh ne nakshe ko gaur se dekha aur tez gati se paidal hi apni manzil ki disha me daud pade.

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Surya dheeme dheeme ast hone ki taraf badta ja raha tha aur Lakhan singh apni puri takat se apni manzil ki taraf daude ja rahe the. Surya aur Lakhan singh me ek alag hi race si chal rahi thi dekhna tha ye race kaun jeetta hai.
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