19-04-2024, 12:44 AM
Poll: 7 Female charectar and 7 dufferent stories which u like the most
You do not have permission to vote in this poll.
You do not have permission to vote in this poll.
Vineeta ek jhooti shaadi me jakdi mahila/ A SEXY POOJA
102
15.64%
Garima ek happily married housewife jo seductive mahol me behek gai/ A HOUSEWIFE SEDUCTION
122
18.71%
Shabana ek zaheen housewife jiska shareer jitna akarshak tha bhagya utna hi kharab/ TRAPPED
216
33.13%
Neha the bold stylish girl with full of fantasies/ FANTASY
69
10.58%
Neetu ek sawli bengali girl jiski jald shaadi hone wali hai par ek khatre ke sath/KAMASUTRA LOVE
39
5.98%
Aarti ek gareeb ghar ki behad sundar ladki jo aane wale khatre se hai anjaan/DEMONS LOVE
40
6.13%
Shobha the bride and centre part of this story jiski suhaagraat uska sapna hai/FIRST NIGHT CONFESSION
64
9.82%
Total
652 vote(s)
100%
* You voted for this item.
Show Results
A wedding ceremony in village
Showing only the posts of Logan555: 852 of 2,522 posts. Show all posts
19-04-2024, 12:48 AM
(17-04-2024, 06:01 PM)hirarandi Wrote: Logan Jee ne surprise de diya..
Pehle to yakeen nahi hua k update aya hai, wo b Logan Jee ki taraf se. Q k is kahani k Agay barhne ki Umeed nahi thi. Bohot maza aya Update parh ker. Umeed hai Ab regular updates atay rahain gay
Ye mere liye bhi surprise hi hai
Sach kahu to mujhe bhi yakeen nahi tha ki mai dubara is story par wapas laut paunga ya nahi, par kahi na kahi ek malal tha ki is story ko uske anjaam tak nahi pahuchaya. Kaam ki vyastatato se samay hi nahi milta phir bhi koshish ki hai ki update likhu aur is story ko uske anjaam tak pahucha du. Par shayad ab yaha is site par ab readers kum ho gae hai.
19-04-2024, 12:58 AM
(18-04-2024, 12:22 AM)Bobby9034 Wrote: WOW Logan bhai that was amazing.
Without doubt one of the best gangbang scenes I’ve ever read. I can’t wait to read the second part. The fact that you’ve written that the night is not over and more men waiting for their turn has got me so excited.
Thanks bro I tried my best after a long break to make this update up to the mark i hope readers like it. And yes night and Neha update is not over yet, there are still some fishi characters yet to come in it whith a surprise.
19-04-2024, 12:59 AM
20-04-2024, 10:00 AM
20-04-2024, 10:03 AM
20-04-2024, 10:20 AM
Un charo ke pare hatne ke baad Ghanshyam aur Kanhaiya zameen par leti Neha ke agal bagal akar baith gae.
![[Image: 8YsSsbIz_o.jpg]](https://images2.imgbox.com/1e/f0/8YsSsbIz_o.jpg)
Ghanshyam 40 saal ka ek adhed umar aadmi tha jo is haweli ka caretaker bhi tha aur swabhaav se is kadar tharaki tha ki apni shaadi ke baad se hi sirf apni biwi ke sex life ko kamuk banane ke liye hi usne har tarah ki sex ki goliya aur nuskhe try kar dale par aap dawao ka had se jada istemaal karoge to wahi hoga jo Ghanshyam ke sath hua, uske aujaar ne kaam karna band kar diya. Shayad isiliye usne ab tak apni chaddi nahi utari thi kyuki wo sabke saamne sharminda nahi hona chahta tha.
![[Image: hiqdkFVR_o.jpg]](https://images2.imgbox.com/60/7c/hiqdkFVR_o.jpg)
Par Kanhaiya ka aujaar puri tarah tana tan halat me tha aur Neha ki chuadai karne ko bekarar tha. Waise bhi in dehati naukro ko jada Foreplay type sex me maza nahi ata tha inke liye to sex ka kewal ek hi matlab tha apna lund aurat ki chut me daalkar dhakke maar kar jhad jana.
![[Image: WWxVn8kN_o.jpg]](https://images2.imgbox.com/53/bc/WWxVn8kN_o.jpg)
Kanhaiya ne bhi Neha ko baho se pakad kar khada kara, uski ek tang uthakar apne baho me thaam li aur sedha mudde par aate apne lund ka supada Neha ki chut ke andara daakhil kar diya. Idhar Ghanshyam Neha ko chod to nahi sakta tha par maza to le sakta tha apna paani to nikal hi sakta tha isliye wo Neha ki peeth ke peechhe akar khada ho gaya aur peeche se hi uski gardan aur peeth chatne laga. Neha me ek baar phir josh ka sanchaar hone laga ek hath se to wo Kanhaiya ko thaame hue thi doosra hath peechhe le jakar wo Ghanshyam ka lund pakadne ki koshish karne lagi par Ghanshyam baar baar use aisa karne se rok raha tha kyuki wo apna chhota sa lund Neha ke haatho me dekar apni izzat ka janaza nahi nikalwana chahta tha. Kyuki agar uske chhote lund ki baat in baki naukro ko pata chal gai to ye pure gaav me baat faila denge aur wo kisi ko muh dikhane layak nahi rahega. Par wo Neha jaisi apsara ke sath maza karne ka mauka bhi nahi gawana chahta tha. Isliye Neha ko hath ko apne lund tak pahuchne se rokte hue hi wo jitna maza kar sakta tha ka raha tha. Neha baar baar Ghanshyam kj chaddi kheechne ki koshish kar rahi thi par wo use har baar rok deta tha.
Bhura : Are O Ghanshyam bhai dekho na kaise madam jee tumhara lund pakadne ko machal rahi hai kya tum bhi laundiyo ki tarah chaddi pehne khade ho utaro ise.
Ghanshyam : Mai tum logo ki tarah besharam nahi jo kahi bhi nanga ho jau koi izzat naam ki bhi cheez hoti hai ki nahi.
Bhura : Aae hae chaddi pehen kar ek nangi ladki se chipke khade ho badi sharmo haya aur izaat ki baat kar rahe ho.
Ghanshyam : Apni aukaat me reh kar baat kar bhool mat tu ek aam naukar aur mai is alishaan haweli ka caretaker hu, tum sabka boss hu samjha.
Ghanshyam ka is tarah aukaat ki baat karna Bhura se bardasht nahi hua. Aur usne aage bad kar Ghanshyam ki chaddi neeche kheech di. Chaddi utarte hi Ghanshyam ka sookhe chhuare jaisa lund sabki aankho ke saamne aa gaya.
![[Image: VDymryZd_o.jpg]](https://images2.imgbox.com/d4/2c/VDymryZd_o.jpg)
Ghanshyam ekdum samajh hi nahi paya ye kya hua use yahi laga ki Neha ke kheechne se hi uski chaddi utar gai. Bhura ki to uska moongfali jaisa lund dekh kar hasi hi nikal gai.
Bhura: Are re re caretaker jee ke lund ka size to dekho zara baate aur ghamand itna bada aur lund ka size moongfali jaisa. Aadmi ki aukaat uske aujaar ki naap se maapi jati hai sale Ghanshyam aur us maamle me teri aukaat bahut jada chhoti hai. Aur tere to teen teen bachhe bhi hai wo bhi tere hi hai ya kisi aur ke aujaar ki dhaar se nikle hai. Tera size dekhkar to nahi lagta ki tu kuch kar paya hoga. Ghanshyam gusse se tilmila raha tha: Sale bahut bol rahe ho tum sab mai abhi jata hu aur haweli walo ko yaha bulakar lata hu aur unhe bataunga ki tum sabne milkar is shehri memsaab ka bang kara hai tab pata chalega ki kiski kya aukaat hai.
Ghanshyam apne kapde dubara pehen kar darwaaze ki taraf bada par peechhe se ek mazboot haath ne use gardan se pakad liya. Ye mazboot haath aur kisi ka nahi Jogindar ka tha.
Jogindar: Sale bhosdike tu jakar humari chugli karega khud me kuch karne ka guda nahi to doosro ko bolne laga. Sale madarchod namard tu agar caretaker hai to mai undertaker hu jada tipir tipir kari na to yahi tera care alag aur taker alag kar dunga.
Jogindar ko dekh Ghanshyam ki sitti pitti gum ho gai, Jogindar ko kuch bolne ki himmat usme bhi nahi thi kyuki Jogindar ke hath ka ek jhapad hi uski jaan nikalne ke liye kaafi tha. Jogindar ne Ghanshyam ko pakad kar kamre ke andar zameen par Bhura aur Kallu ke samne phenk diya. Bhura use dekh kar has raha tha jo Ghanshyam ke liya bardasht ke bafar tha, par philhaal wo kuch nahi kar sakta tha isliye chupchap apne bistar par dubak kar baith gaya.
Kisi aadmi ko sabse zada gussa tab ata hai jab uski mardangi par sawal uthaya jae aur aaj wahi sab Ghanshyam ke sath hua tha sareaam sab naukro ke saamne uski izzat ko taar taar kar diya gaya tha. Chudai to Neha ki ho rahi thi par asal Gangbang to aaj Ghanshyam ka hua tha. Ab tak jo baat dhaki chhupi thi wo aaj sabke saamne aa gai. Ghanshyam man hi man soch raha tha ki kash ye shehri chhori yaha ye sab karne na aati to aaj uski yu jaghasai na hoti, agar uski namardangi ki baat bahar logo ko pata chal gai to wo samaj me kisi se nazre nahi mila paega uski bachho ki paidaish par shaq kiya jaega, samaj me uske pariwaar ki sari izzat mitti me mil jaegi. Usne nazar uthakar ek baar Neha ki taraf dekha jo in sabse bekhabar ab bhi apni chudai me mast thi, Kanhaiya lagataar Neha ki chut me lund pele ja raha tha. Ghanshyam ko Neha par bahut gussa aa raha kyuki kahi na kahi uske apman ki asal wahah Neha hi thi, na wo yaha aati na uske sath ye sab hota aur itna hone ke bawjood uspar to koi asar hi nahi pada wo ab bhi apne hawas ke nashe me choor thi.
![[Image: hqsh7Lyd_o.gif]](https://images2.imgbox.com/5c/b4/hqsh7Lyd_o.gif)
Idhar Kanhaiya lagataar Neha ki chut me ghapaghap lund pelne me mast tha. Uska dhyaan bhi nahi tha ki kamre me kya kya ho gaya, kamre ka mahool kitna garam ho gaya uske liye to asli Neha ki chut se ragad khate lund me thi. Idhar Neha ki bhi ek taang Kanhaiya ke kandhe par thi aur wo kaafi der se ek taang par khadi thi jis wajah se uski takat bhi jawab de rahi thi aur sharab ka bhi nasha jis wajah se uska khada rehna mushkil ho raha tha. Par Neha ki kismat achhi thi ki use aur zada khada nahi rehna pada Kanhaiya ke lund ne bhi apna paani Neha ku chut ke andar chhod diya.
![[Image: JQYvY2rm_o.gif]](https://images2.imgbox.com/9e/85/JQYvY2rm_o.gif)
Neha buri tarah thak chuki thi aur nidhal si wahi zameen par let gai jaha charo taraf veerya ki mehek hi bhari th. Neha aankh band kare gehri gehri saase le rahi thi ki achanak kisi ne use baalo se pakad kar kheech kar uthaya aur isse pehle neha kuch samajh pati ek jhannatedaar jhapad Neha ke gaal par pada. Neha ki aankhe hadbada kar khul gai saamne Bhola khada tha. Bhola ki aankhe sharab aur afeem ke nashe me surkh laal ho rahi thi wo apne hosh me nahi tha aur aaj apna sada junglipana Neha par utarne wala tha.
![[Image: bzs7RAlk_o.jpg]](https://images2.imgbox.com/3d/11/bzs7RAlk_o.jpg)
Bhola: Sali chhinar sabse marwa liya ab meri bari aai to aram kar rahi hai. Chal nach kar dikha matka apne kulhe doodh hila apne chal mood bana sali mera.
Neha se ab dhang se khada to hua ja nahi raha tha nachna to badi door ki baat thi. Bhola use baalo se kheechta hua kamre me yaha waha dauda raha pata nahi use isme kya maza aa raha tha.
Gopi kaka: Ae Bhola sale jahil ye kya kar raha hai bade sahab ki mehmaan hai ye koi gaanv bazaru rundi nahi hai jo tu uske sath ye sab kar raha.
Bhola: Abe chup sale Bhosdike aaj mai hi iska bada malik hu jada bola to tujhe bhi nanga karke aise hi daudaunga.
Bhola puri tarah nashe me tha use kuch bhi kehne se koi matlab nahi tha use pata nahi tha ki wo kya abab shanab bake ja raha tha aur kya ool jalool harkate kar raha tha. Aur Neha bhi koi chikham chilli nahi kar rahi thi shayad use is sabme bhi maza aa raha tha isliye Gopi kaka bhi aage kuch nahi bole.
Bhola Neha ko baalo se kheechta hua apne gadde tak le gaya aur Neha ko dhakka dekar apne gadde par gira diya. Aur khud bhi chadkar Neha ke upar let gaya aur Neha ki jo cheez use sabse zada pasand thi yani Neha ke honth un par jaanwaro ki tarah toot pada. Bhola Neha ko wehshi paaglo ki tarah kiss kar raha tha uske muh se aati sharab aur guthkhe ki badboo Neha ki ssaanso me andar tak samai ja rahi thi. Kiss karte karte Bhola ne Neha ke baalo ko kaas kar muuthi me guchha bana kar kas liya aur Neha ke nichle honth ko apne daanto me bharkar kaatne laga. Bhola ka pagalpan is kadar bad chuka tha ki Neha ke hontho me khoon utar aya tha. Aakhirkaar Neha ne bhi Bhola ke balo ko pakda aur use peeche ko kheecha aur ab Neha Bhola ke hontho par toot padi aur usne Bhola ke daato me itna kas kar kata ki Bhola ke hontho se khoon behne laga. Par Bhola ko jaise dard ka ehsaas hi nahi hua use ulta aur maza aya. Bhola ne Neha ki taango ko uthakar uske sir tak upar mod diya aur apna lund Neha ki chut ke muhane par rakha aur ek hi dhakke me apna pura lund Neha ki chut ke andar gehrai tak utar diya.
![[Image: ipEndnYW_o.gif]](https://images2.imgbox.com/68/4f/ipEndnYW_o.gif)
Neha ki chut me apna lund daal kar Bhola apna pura wazan Neha par daalte hue uske mudi taango ke upar hi let gaya. Aur uchhal uchhal kar zordar dhakke marte hue apna lund Neha ki chut me andar bahar karne laga. Yu to Neha kaafi thak chuki thi par Bhola ke josh ne uski kaamagni ko dubara dehka diya. Bhola ka josh shayad yaha maujood sabhi mardo me sabse jada aur uska pagalpan is josh ko aur hawa de raha tha aur sharab ke nashe ne to isme char chand laga diye the. Bhola ko koi foreplay fiveplay nahi ata tha uske liye sex ka matlab kewal aurat ki chut me apna aujaar daalkar habsi pagal ki tarah tez tez dhakke marna aur apna sara maal aurat ki chut me andar khali kar dena aur wo apne isi kaam me laga hua tha. Wo tabadtod Neha ki chut me dhakke mare ja raha tha jab tak ki uske lund ne apbmni sari garmi Neha ki chut ke andar khali nahi kardi.
![[Image: JFIMDBVZ_o.jpg]](https://images2.imgbox.com/80/45/JFIMDBVZ_o.jpg)
Neha ki chut ko apne veerya se bharne ke baad wo bhi ludak kar Neha ke bagal me let gaya. Sharab aur afeem ke nashe kab uski aankhe band hui aur wo neend ke aagosh me chala gaya pata hi nahi chala. Neha ka pura badan paseene veerya sharab aur peshab se sarabor tha.Neha jis fantasy ki talash me aaj yaha aai thi wo use mil gai thi in dehati naukro ne uske badan ka purza purza dheela kar diya tha. Pura kamra sharab veerya aur peshab ki durgandh se mehek raha jo cheekh cheekh kar is baat ki gawahi de raha tha ki aaj raat yaha hawas ka kya nanga nach hua hai. Neha sahit sare naukar sharab aur shabab ka bharpoor sewan karne ke baad besudh se yaha waha aundhe pade the. Bache the to kewal teen log Chhotu jo ab bhi kamre ke bahar khada chaukidaari kar raha tha, Ghanshyam jo apne apmaan ka kadwaa ghoot peekar ek kone me dubka baitha tha aur Gopi kaka jo ab tak is hawas ke nange khel se khud ko alag thalag rakhe the. Gopi ne ek nazar kamre ka ast vyast mahool dekha ghadi ko dekha jisme raat ke teen baj rahe the. Phir aage bad kar zameen par pade Neha ke kapde uthae apne kandhe ka sahara dekar Neha ko uthaya aur Neha ko lekar kamre ke bahar nikal aae.
Bahar Chhotu ne jab Neha ka ye haal dekha to wo bhi chaunk utha.
Chhotu: Inko kya hua
Gopi kaka: Tujhe kya lagta hai agar ek nazuk hirni jungli lakadbaggho ke beech fas jae.
Chhotu: Par ye fasi thi ya khud se fasne aai thi.
Gopi kaka: Jo bhi hai ise is halat me to haweli nahi le ja sakte mai ise bathroom le jakar iske sir par paani dalkar iska nasha utarta hu ise nehla dhula kar haweli chhod aaunga ja tu bhi ab andar jakar soja.
Chhotu: Kaka mai bhi aau kya apke sath
Gopi kaka: Nahi mai dekh lunga jitne jada log honge logo ki nazar me aane ka khatra bhi utna jada hoga, tu ja soja andar jakar kaafi der se khada hai yaha ja mai dekh lunga.
Chhotu: Jee theek hai
![[Image: mdfkV7PG_o.jpg]](https://images2.imgbox.com/42/e1/mdfkV7PG_o.jpg)
Gopi kaka Neha ko sahara dekar servant quarter ke peechhe bane bathroom ki taraf chal pade aur Jeetu andar chala gaya.
![[Image: 8YsSsbIz_o.jpg]](https://images2.imgbox.com/1e/f0/8YsSsbIz_o.jpg)
Ghanshyam 40 saal ka ek adhed umar aadmi tha jo is haweli ka caretaker bhi tha aur swabhaav se is kadar tharaki tha ki apni shaadi ke baad se hi sirf apni biwi ke sex life ko kamuk banane ke liye hi usne har tarah ki sex ki goliya aur nuskhe try kar dale par aap dawao ka had se jada istemaal karoge to wahi hoga jo Ghanshyam ke sath hua, uske aujaar ne kaam karna band kar diya. Shayad isiliye usne ab tak apni chaddi nahi utari thi kyuki wo sabke saamne sharminda nahi hona chahta tha.
![[Image: hiqdkFVR_o.jpg]](https://images2.imgbox.com/60/7c/hiqdkFVR_o.jpg)
Par Kanhaiya ka aujaar puri tarah tana tan halat me tha aur Neha ki chuadai karne ko bekarar tha. Waise bhi in dehati naukro ko jada Foreplay type sex me maza nahi ata tha inke liye to sex ka kewal ek hi matlab tha apna lund aurat ki chut me daalkar dhakke maar kar jhad jana.
![[Image: WWxVn8kN_o.jpg]](https://images2.imgbox.com/53/bc/WWxVn8kN_o.jpg)
Kanhaiya ne bhi Neha ko baho se pakad kar khada kara, uski ek tang uthakar apne baho me thaam li aur sedha mudde par aate apne lund ka supada Neha ki chut ke andara daakhil kar diya. Idhar Ghanshyam Neha ko chod to nahi sakta tha par maza to le sakta tha apna paani to nikal hi sakta tha isliye wo Neha ki peeth ke peechhe akar khada ho gaya aur peeche se hi uski gardan aur peeth chatne laga. Neha me ek baar phir josh ka sanchaar hone laga ek hath se to wo Kanhaiya ko thaame hue thi doosra hath peechhe le jakar wo Ghanshyam ka lund pakadne ki koshish karne lagi par Ghanshyam baar baar use aisa karne se rok raha tha kyuki wo apna chhota sa lund Neha ke haatho me dekar apni izzat ka janaza nahi nikalwana chahta tha. Kyuki agar uske chhote lund ki baat in baki naukro ko pata chal gai to ye pure gaav me baat faila denge aur wo kisi ko muh dikhane layak nahi rahega. Par wo Neha jaisi apsara ke sath maza karne ka mauka bhi nahi gawana chahta tha. Isliye Neha ko hath ko apne lund tak pahuchne se rokte hue hi wo jitna maza kar sakta tha ka raha tha. Neha baar baar Ghanshyam kj chaddi kheechne ki koshish kar rahi thi par wo use har baar rok deta tha.
Bhura : Are O Ghanshyam bhai dekho na kaise madam jee tumhara lund pakadne ko machal rahi hai kya tum bhi laundiyo ki tarah chaddi pehne khade ho utaro ise.
Ghanshyam : Mai tum logo ki tarah besharam nahi jo kahi bhi nanga ho jau koi izzat naam ki bhi cheez hoti hai ki nahi.
Bhura : Aae hae chaddi pehen kar ek nangi ladki se chipke khade ho badi sharmo haya aur izaat ki baat kar rahe ho.
Ghanshyam : Apni aukaat me reh kar baat kar bhool mat tu ek aam naukar aur mai is alishaan haweli ka caretaker hu, tum sabka boss hu samjha.
Ghanshyam ka is tarah aukaat ki baat karna Bhura se bardasht nahi hua. Aur usne aage bad kar Ghanshyam ki chaddi neeche kheech di. Chaddi utarte hi Ghanshyam ka sookhe chhuare jaisa lund sabki aankho ke saamne aa gaya.
![[Image: VDymryZd_o.jpg]](https://images2.imgbox.com/d4/2c/VDymryZd_o.jpg)
Ghanshyam ekdum samajh hi nahi paya ye kya hua use yahi laga ki Neha ke kheechne se hi uski chaddi utar gai. Bhura ki to uska moongfali jaisa lund dekh kar hasi hi nikal gai.
Bhura: Are re re caretaker jee ke lund ka size to dekho zara baate aur ghamand itna bada aur lund ka size moongfali jaisa. Aadmi ki aukaat uske aujaar ki naap se maapi jati hai sale Ghanshyam aur us maamle me teri aukaat bahut jada chhoti hai. Aur tere to teen teen bachhe bhi hai wo bhi tere hi hai ya kisi aur ke aujaar ki dhaar se nikle hai. Tera size dekhkar to nahi lagta ki tu kuch kar paya hoga. Ghanshyam gusse se tilmila raha tha: Sale bahut bol rahe ho tum sab mai abhi jata hu aur haweli walo ko yaha bulakar lata hu aur unhe bataunga ki tum sabne milkar is shehri memsaab ka bang kara hai tab pata chalega ki kiski kya aukaat hai.
Ghanshyam apne kapde dubara pehen kar darwaaze ki taraf bada par peechhe se ek mazboot haath ne use gardan se pakad liya. Ye mazboot haath aur kisi ka nahi Jogindar ka tha.
Jogindar: Sale bhosdike tu jakar humari chugli karega khud me kuch karne ka guda nahi to doosro ko bolne laga. Sale madarchod namard tu agar caretaker hai to mai undertaker hu jada tipir tipir kari na to yahi tera care alag aur taker alag kar dunga.
Jogindar ko dekh Ghanshyam ki sitti pitti gum ho gai, Jogindar ko kuch bolne ki himmat usme bhi nahi thi kyuki Jogindar ke hath ka ek jhapad hi uski jaan nikalne ke liye kaafi tha. Jogindar ne Ghanshyam ko pakad kar kamre ke andar zameen par Bhura aur Kallu ke samne phenk diya. Bhura use dekh kar has raha tha jo Ghanshyam ke liya bardasht ke bafar tha, par philhaal wo kuch nahi kar sakta tha isliye chupchap apne bistar par dubak kar baith gaya.
Kisi aadmi ko sabse zada gussa tab ata hai jab uski mardangi par sawal uthaya jae aur aaj wahi sab Ghanshyam ke sath hua tha sareaam sab naukro ke saamne uski izzat ko taar taar kar diya gaya tha. Chudai to Neha ki ho rahi thi par asal Gangbang to aaj Ghanshyam ka hua tha. Ab tak jo baat dhaki chhupi thi wo aaj sabke saamne aa gai. Ghanshyam man hi man soch raha tha ki kash ye shehri chhori yaha ye sab karne na aati to aaj uski yu jaghasai na hoti, agar uski namardangi ki baat bahar logo ko pata chal gai to wo samaj me kisi se nazre nahi mila paega uski bachho ki paidaish par shaq kiya jaega, samaj me uske pariwaar ki sari izzat mitti me mil jaegi. Usne nazar uthakar ek baar Neha ki taraf dekha jo in sabse bekhabar ab bhi apni chudai me mast thi, Kanhaiya lagataar Neha ki chut me lund pele ja raha tha. Ghanshyam ko Neha par bahut gussa aa raha kyuki kahi na kahi uske apman ki asal wahah Neha hi thi, na wo yaha aati na uske sath ye sab hota aur itna hone ke bawjood uspar to koi asar hi nahi pada wo ab bhi apne hawas ke nashe me choor thi.
![[Image: hqsh7Lyd_o.gif]](https://images2.imgbox.com/5c/b4/hqsh7Lyd_o.gif)
Idhar Kanhaiya lagataar Neha ki chut me ghapaghap lund pelne me mast tha. Uska dhyaan bhi nahi tha ki kamre me kya kya ho gaya, kamre ka mahool kitna garam ho gaya uske liye to asli Neha ki chut se ragad khate lund me thi. Idhar Neha ki bhi ek taang Kanhaiya ke kandhe par thi aur wo kaafi der se ek taang par khadi thi jis wajah se uski takat bhi jawab de rahi thi aur sharab ka bhi nasha jis wajah se uska khada rehna mushkil ho raha tha. Par Neha ki kismat achhi thi ki use aur zada khada nahi rehna pada Kanhaiya ke lund ne bhi apna paani Neha ku chut ke andar chhod diya.
![[Image: JQYvY2rm_o.gif]](https://images2.imgbox.com/9e/85/JQYvY2rm_o.gif)
Neha buri tarah thak chuki thi aur nidhal si wahi zameen par let gai jaha charo taraf veerya ki mehek hi bhari th. Neha aankh band kare gehri gehri saase le rahi thi ki achanak kisi ne use baalo se pakad kar kheech kar uthaya aur isse pehle neha kuch samajh pati ek jhannatedaar jhapad Neha ke gaal par pada. Neha ki aankhe hadbada kar khul gai saamne Bhola khada tha. Bhola ki aankhe sharab aur afeem ke nashe me surkh laal ho rahi thi wo apne hosh me nahi tha aur aaj apna sada junglipana Neha par utarne wala tha.
![[Image: bzs7RAlk_o.jpg]](https://images2.imgbox.com/3d/11/bzs7RAlk_o.jpg)
Bhola: Sali chhinar sabse marwa liya ab meri bari aai to aram kar rahi hai. Chal nach kar dikha matka apne kulhe doodh hila apne chal mood bana sali mera.
Neha se ab dhang se khada to hua ja nahi raha tha nachna to badi door ki baat thi. Bhola use baalo se kheechta hua kamre me yaha waha dauda raha pata nahi use isme kya maza aa raha tha.
Gopi kaka: Ae Bhola sale jahil ye kya kar raha hai bade sahab ki mehmaan hai ye koi gaanv bazaru rundi nahi hai jo tu uske sath ye sab kar raha.
Bhola: Abe chup sale Bhosdike aaj mai hi iska bada malik hu jada bola to tujhe bhi nanga karke aise hi daudaunga.
Bhola puri tarah nashe me tha use kuch bhi kehne se koi matlab nahi tha use pata nahi tha ki wo kya abab shanab bake ja raha tha aur kya ool jalool harkate kar raha tha. Aur Neha bhi koi chikham chilli nahi kar rahi thi shayad use is sabme bhi maza aa raha tha isliye Gopi kaka bhi aage kuch nahi bole.
Bhola Neha ko baalo se kheechta hua apne gadde tak le gaya aur Neha ko dhakka dekar apne gadde par gira diya. Aur khud bhi chadkar Neha ke upar let gaya aur Neha ki jo cheez use sabse zada pasand thi yani Neha ke honth un par jaanwaro ki tarah toot pada. Bhola Neha ko wehshi paaglo ki tarah kiss kar raha tha uske muh se aati sharab aur guthkhe ki badboo Neha ki ssaanso me andar tak samai ja rahi thi. Kiss karte karte Bhola ne Neha ke baalo ko kaas kar muuthi me guchha bana kar kas liya aur Neha ke nichle honth ko apne daanto me bharkar kaatne laga. Bhola ka pagalpan is kadar bad chuka tha ki Neha ke hontho me khoon utar aya tha. Aakhirkaar Neha ne bhi Bhola ke balo ko pakda aur use peeche ko kheecha aur ab Neha Bhola ke hontho par toot padi aur usne Bhola ke daato me itna kas kar kata ki Bhola ke hontho se khoon behne laga. Par Bhola ko jaise dard ka ehsaas hi nahi hua use ulta aur maza aya. Bhola ne Neha ki taango ko uthakar uske sir tak upar mod diya aur apna lund Neha ki chut ke muhane par rakha aur ek hi dhakke me apna pura lund Neha ki chut ke andar gehrai tak utar diya.
![[Image: ipEndnYW_o.gif]](https://images2.imgbox.com/68/4f/ipEndnYW_o.gif)
Neha ki chut me apna lund daal kar Bhola apna pura wazan Neha par daalte hue uske mudi taango ke upar hi let gaya. Aur uchhal uchhal kar zordar dhakke marte hue apna lund Neha ki chut me andar bahar karne laga. Yu to Neha kaafi thak chuki thi par Bhola ke josh ne uski kaamagni ko dubara dehka diya. Bhola ka josh shayad yaha maujood sabhi mardo me sabse jada aur uska pagalpan is josh ko aur hawa de raha tha aur sharab ke nashe ne to isme char chand laga diye the. Bhola ko koi foreplay fiveplay nahi ata tha uske liye sex ka matlab kewal aurat ki chut me apna aujaar daalkar habsi pagal ki tarah tez tez dhakke marna aur apna sara maal aurat ki chut me andar khali kar dena aur wo apne isi kaam me laga hua tha. Wo tabadtod Neha ki chut me dhakke mare ja raha tha jab tak ki uske lund ne apbmni sari garmi Neha ki chut ke andar khali nahi kardi.
![[Image: JFIMDBVZ_o.jpg]](https://images2.imgbox.com/80/45/JFIMDBVZ_o.jpg)
Neha ki chut ko apne veerya se bharne ke baad wo bhi ludak kar Neha ke bagal me let gaya. Sharab aur afeem ke nashe kab uski aankhe band hui aur wo neend ke aagosh me chala gaya pata hi nahi chala. Neha ka pura badan paseene veerya sharab aur peshab se sarabor tha.Neha jis fantasy ki talash me aaj yaha aai thi wo use mil gai thi in dehati naukro ne uske badan ka purza purza dheela kar diya tha. Pura kamra sharab veerya aur peshab ki durgandh se mehek raha jo cheekh cheekh kar is baat ki gawahi de raha tha ki aaj raat yaha hawas ka kya nanga nach hua hai. Neha sahit sare naukar sharab aur shabab ka bharpoor sewan karne ke baad besudh se yaha waha aundhe pade the. Bache the to kewal teen log Chhotu jo ab bhi kamre ke bahar khada chaukidaari kar raha tha, Ghanshyam jo apne apmaan ka kadwaa ghoot peekar ek kone me dubka baitha tha aur Gopi kaka jo ab tak is hawas ke nange khel se khud ko alag thalag rakhe the. Gopi ne ek nazar kamre ka ast vyast mahool dekha ghadi ko dekha jisme raat ke teen baj rahe the. Phir aage bad kar zameen par pade Neha ke kapde uthae apne kandhe ka sahara dekar Neha ko uthaya aur Neha ko lekar kamre ke bahar nikal aae.
Bahar Chhotu ne jab Neha ka ye haal dekha to wo bhi chaunk utha.
Chhotu: Inko kya hua
Gopi kaka: Tujhe kya lagta hai agar ek nazuk hirni jungli lakadbaggho ke beech fas jae.
Chhotu: Par ye fasi thi ya khud se fasne aai thi.
Gopi kaka: Jo bhi hai ise is halat me to haweli nahi le ja sakte mai ise bathroom le jakar iske sir par paani dalkar iska nasha utarta hu ise nehla dhula kar haweli chhod aaunga ja tu bhi ab andar jakar soja.
Chhotu: Kaka mai bhi aau kya apke sath
Gopi kaka: Nahi mai dekh lunga jitne jada log honge logo ki nazar me aane ka khatra bhi utna jada hoga, tu ja soja andar jakar kaafi der se khada hai yaha ja mai dekh lunga.
Chhotu: Jee theek hai
![[Image: mdfkV7PG_o.jpg]](https://images2.imgbox.com/42/e1/mdfkV7PG_o.jpg)
Gopi kaka Neha ko sahara dekar servant quarter ke peechhe bane bathroom ki taraf chal pade aur Jeetu andar chala gaya.
22-04-2024, 09:03 AM
22-04-2024, 09:04 AM
22-04-2024, 09:07 AM
(21-04-2024, 10:06 PM)sunravi5853 Wrote: Welcome back bro
(21-04-2024, 01:36 AM)Rohan0064 Wrote: Story ko continue karne ke liye thank you very very much
(21-04-2024, 11:52 AM)abcturbine Wrote: thanks or coming back............
I am so glad bro...........
thanks a ton for continuation
Thanks for welcoming me and bilkul mai puri koshish karunga is story ko complete karke hi khatam karu.
22-04-2024, 09:17 AM
(21-04-2024, 01:49 AM)Shahid Khan Wrote: The main character of the story is Vineeta
Thanks for continuing this amazing story again
(21-04-2024, 01:19 AM)Salma Khan Wrote: Jee bahut bahut shukriya best of luck apka work supeb hota hai
Halaki story ke sabhi charectar ka apna alag importance hai sabki apni apni alag storyline hai but phir bhi Vineeta ki kahani sabse jada interesting aur timetaking hai jisme Greek aur indian mythology ko kaafi research karna padta hai us particular planet ke baare me bhi padna padta hai aur phir unke characteristics and likings ko lekar ek interesting plus some erotica update create karna padta hai isiliye isme jada mehnat lagti hai baki storyline me sirf ek sex scene likhna hai par mythology plus planetology ka bhi dhyan rakhna padta hai. Aur abhi mai kaafi dino baad active hua hu to mujhe khud apne likhe purane updates padne pad rahe hai taki story me jo maine pehle likha hai uski continuty bani rahe.
22-04-2024, 09:23 AM
(20-04-2024, 06:36 PM)Bobby9034 Wrote: Thanks for not making us wait so long for the next update Logan bhai.
The second part was a bit tame then the first scene, I thought it would get even more hot and sizzling with the others joining in, maybe some DPP/DAP etc. I wish Neha pulled Ghanshyam towards her like she did with Ramu kaka, I don’t think she would mind he has small Lund, she would still give pleasure.
If possible please continue a bit more with this storyline it’s very hot. Let everyone even Chotu have a turn with this beauty.
Agar aap Neha ke is scene ko dekhe to ye Neha ke is kamre me ghusne wale update se hi shuru ho gaya tha jiske baad pehle Jogindar ka update aya jiske baad kaafi lumba break lag gaya phir ye baki servants ke update hai. To agar har servant ko bahut bada update diya jaega to is scene me kaafi repeataion aa jaega aur scene bhi kaafi jada lumba ho jaega isliye is update ko thoda short rakha hai kyuki ek raat me 7-8 mardo se sex me harek ko proper lumba time nahi mil sakta kuch paasjng guys bhi hote hai abhi waise is scene ka ek aur update hona jisme kuch surprise element bhi hai I hope it will be liked.
22-04-2024, 11:19 AM
![[Image: mdfkV7PG_o.jpg]](https://images2.imgbox.com/42/e1/mdfkV7PG_o.jpg)
Gopi kaka Neha ko servant quarter ke peeche bane bathroom me le aae aur use wahi deewar ka sahara dekar bitha diya. Neha ab bhi poori tarah nangi hi thi aur uske badan se peshab veerya sharab ki mili juli durgandh aa rahi thi. Gopi kaka ne Neha ki wo laal dress wahi ek khoonti me tang di. Neha ke shareer par lagi gandgi Gopi kaka ke kapdo me bhi lag gai thi aur Neha ko nehlate hue unke khud ke kapde geele na ho jae shayad isliye bhi unhone apne kapde bhi utar kar wahi khooti me tang diye. Par chuki Gopi kaka ek charitravaan vyakti the isliye unhone apna naade wala underwear nahi utara. Unhone wahi paas rakhi ek balti se paani uthakar neha ke sir se daalna shuru kar diya. Jaha thanda thanda pani neha ke sir par pada Neha ka aadha nasha to pal me utar gaya. Gopi kaka ne puri balti neha ke upar khali kardi.
![[Image: Ky1jxTmy_o.jpg]](https://images2.imgbox.com/3c/d4/Ky1jxTmy_o.jpg)
Uske baad Gopi kaka ne ek sabun ki tikiya uthai aur use Neha ke badan par ragadna shuru kar diya. Sach me Gopi kaka kis mitti ke bane the itne chharhare badan ki apsara jaisi sundar ladki bina kapdo ke unke saamne thi aur unka charitra bilkul nahi dol raha tha. Ya to wo bhi Ghanshyam jaise andar se phuski the ya sach me unka charectar itna zabardast tha ki Neha ka roop saundarya bhi use hila nahi sakta tha. Neha ka nasha bhi ab halka halka utar raha tha use samajh aa raha thi ki koi uske shareer par lagi gandgi saaf kar raha hai use nehla raha hai par uski aankhe ab bhi puri tarah khul nahi pa rahi thi ki wo uska chehra dekh sake. Neha ke pure shareer par sabun malne ke baad kaka ne ek aur balti uthai aur magge se dheere se neha ke pure badan par laga sabun dhone lage. Unhone thoda paani Neha ki chut par bhi dala aur use bhi achhi tarah dhokar saaf kar diya. Aur wahi bathroom me rakhi ek tauliya se Neha ke badan ko achhe se pochh diya.
Neha ko achhe se saaf karne ke baad Gopi kaka khooti par tange Neha ke kapdo ki taraf bade par waha pahuch kar thithak gae, ek nazar Neha ki us laal dress ko dekha phir nazar ghumakar ek nazar necche zameen par nangi baithi Neha ko dekha. Phir hath bada kar Neha ki dress apne hath se chhukar uski komalta ko mehsoos karne lage, phir us dress ko apni naak ke kareeb lakar use soongh kar usme se ati Neha ke badan ki khushboo ko apne andar mehsoos karne lage. Aisa karte karte unke hath apne janghiye ke upar se apne lund tak pahuch gae aur wo use hole hole dabane sehlane lage. Aur agle hi pal unhone apna nada khol diya aur unka patre wala underwear wahi bathroom ki farsh par neeche gir gaya.
![[Image: Kc0hUVwd_o.jpg]](https://images2.imgbox.com/20/97/Kc0hUVwd_o.jpg)
Jis shaksha ne ab tak khud ko nanga nahi kara tha unka badan bhi ab bina kapdo ke tha ab Gopi kaka bhi madarjaat puri tarah nange the. Mota thulthula pet wajan kareeb 80-90 kg shareer par har jagah ghane ghane baal baho aur kulho ke beech bhi aur lund ke upar jo balo ka ghana guchha tha uska to kehna hi kya. Par us ghane guchhe me se bhi Gopi kaka ka mota moosal lund alag hi nazar aa raha tha aur uske neeche latakte do bade bade gote jo khud bhi puri tarah baalo se bhare the. Baalo ka kota shareer me hi itna jada tha isliye chand par par baalo ke naam par ginti ke char paach baal hi the. Apne underwear ko pairo se nikalkar ek taraf sarkane ke baad wo dheeme dheeme ahista ahista chalte hue Neha ke kareeb aae, apna chehra Neha ke kaan ke ekdum kareeb le aae aur phusphusa kar Neha ke kaan me bus ek shabd bole.
"Meri Kishmish"
Ye shabd sunte hi Neha ki aankhe jo ab tak Nashe ke chalte khul bhi nahi pa rahi thi yakayak puri tarah khul gai aur wo Gopi kaka ka chehra hi dekhe ja rahi thi. Use yakeen nahi ho raha tha ki itne saalo baad wo phir se ye shabd sunegi.
Neha: Kya aap
Neha bus itna hi bol pai thi ki Gopi kaka ne apna kala mota lund Neha ke chehre ke saamne kar diya. Neha ne bhi bina kuch kahe chupchap apna muh khol diya. Gopi kaka apna lund ke neeche latakte gote neha ke khule muh me daal diye aur Gopi kaka ke ballo se bhare gote muh me bharkar choosne chatne lagi. Neha Gopi kate ke gote is tarah chat rahi thi jaise jane kitne dino baad use uska koi manpasand khilona wapas mila ho. Neha ko Gopi kaka ke gote par uge ghane baalo se bhi koi parhez nahi tha.
![[Image: EzxCzKWz_o.gif]](https://images2.imgbox.com/64/7f/EzxCzKWz_o.gif)
Gote chatwane ke baad Gopi kaka peeche ki oor ghoom gae aur aage jhuk kar apne dono kulho ko kholkar apni gaand ka chhed Neha ke saamne kar diya. Neha ne bhi chupchap bina kuch kahe ya sawal kare Kaka ki gaand ke chhed ko chatna shuru kar diya. Neha Gopi kaka ki gaand ke beech ki darar ko upar se neeche tak chat rahi thi. Aur beech beech me apni jeebh Kaka ki gaand ke chhed me daal kar use andar se bhi chat le rahi thi. Aisa karne me Neha ko khud se andar se kitna maza aa raha tha wo uske chehre ko dekh kar hi samajh aa raha tha. Aur Gopi kaka unke anand ki to koi seema hi nahi thi. Gaand chatwane ke baad Gopi kaka dubara se Neha ki taraf ghoome aur Neha ki taraf dekhte hue apna lund masalne lage.
Gopi Kaka: Meri Kishmish us pehelwaan ki peshab to bade maze se pee rahi thi apni kaka ki nahi piyegi. Bol piyegi?
Neha ne kisi chhoti masoom bachhi ki tarah bus haa me sir hila diya aur chupchap apna muh khol diya. Neha ke muh kholte Gopi kaka ke lund se peshab ki ek moti peeli dhar seedha Neha ke muh me jakar girne lagi. Kya sadha hua nishana tha peshab ki dhaar seedha neha ke muh me hi gir rahi thi, aur Neha bhi kisi pyasi hirni ki tarah us peshab ke katre katre ko apne halak se neeche utarti ja rahi thi.
![[Image: N4svr0SW_o.gif]](https://images2.imgbox.com/e1/64/N4svr0SW_o.gif)
Sari peshab ki dhaar Neha ke muh me khali karne ke baad kuch aakhiri boonde Kaka ki jaangho talwo aur zameen par gir gaya. Sari peshab peene ke baad Kaka ne un idhar udhar giri boondo ki taraf bhi ishara kara aur neha ne kisi paltu gulam ki tarah pehle zameen par giri peshab ki boondo ki kisi kutiya ki tarah chat liya.Phir Kaka ke talwo ko chatne lagi. Iske baad Kaka ke pairo ko chatte chatte upar ki taraf aate hue Kaka ki jaangho par behti peshab ki boondo ko bhi chat gai. Kaka ne bhi apni jaangho ko khol diya aur Neha ne Kaka ki dono jaangho ke beech behte pasine ko apni jeebh se chat kar saaf kar diya.
![[Image: iHnEMsPB_o.jpg]](https://images2.imgbox.com/d8/a8/iHnEMsPB_o.jpg)
Iske baad Gopi kaka Neha ko kandhe se pakad kar paas hi bane ek shauchalay me le aae jaha western comod lagi thi. Gopi kaka khud us comod par taango ko faila kar baith gae unka lund poori tarah tana hua chhat ki taraf salami de raha tha.
![[Image: iEGVLhYS_o.jpg]](https://images2.imgbox.com/04/df/iEGVLhYS_o.jpg)
Gopi kaka apna lund sehlate hue apne jaangho ko thapkate hue Neha ko apni jaangho par baithne ka ishara kara. Neha bhi chupchap apni taango failakar Kaka ki taango ke ird gird karke apni chut ko Kaka ke lund ke upar karke neeche ki oor baithti chali gai. Jaise jaise Neha neeche ki oor baithti chali gai Gopi Kaka ka lund Neha ki chut ke andar gehra aur gehrai tak utarta chala gaya. Beshak Gopi kaka ka lund Jogindar ke jitna lumba nahi tha par motai me usse 21hi tha. Isliye andar jaane me Gopi kaka ke lund ne Neha ki chut ki deewaro ko kaafi stretch kar diya tha.
Iske baad Neha ne Gopi kaka ke kandhe ko tham liya aur upar neeche hone lagi. Neha ke har uthan giraav ke sath Gopi kaka ka kala mota balo se bhara lund Neha ki chut se gharshan khata hua andar bahar ho raha tha. Pata nahi Neha bhi kis unmaad me Gopi kaka se chud rahi thi, jis ladki ko abhi abhi 7 mardo ne har tarah se ragda tha use na jane kitni baar charamsukh dila kar jhadne ko majboor kar diya tha jo kuch der pehle thak kar choor thi ab apne se dugni se bhi jada umar ke ek ganje dehati ki baho itna jada kamukta se kyu bhar uthi thi. Aur doosri taraf wo Gopi kaka jo us kamre behad sabhaya charitravaan purush nazar aa rahe the ab is servant bathroom ke shauchalay ke andar unke charitra ka ek alag hi roop nazar aa raha tha.
![[Image: quFjo2Zj_o.gif]](https://images2.imgbox.com/c6/bc/quFjo2Zj_o.gif)
Servant bhathtoom ka wo tang shauchalay un sannate me dhap dhap ki awaaz se goonj raha tha. Neha tez gati se Gopi kaka ki godd me upar neeche uth baith rahi thi. Aur achanak Gopi kaka ne Neha ko kas kar apni baho ki giraft me jakad liya unhone apna chehra Neha ke kandhe par tika diya jisme se beh kar aaati laar Neha ke kandhe ko geela kar rahi thi, Gopi kaka ki saase tez tez aur gehri gehri chal rahi thi. Unka lund ab bhi Neha ki chut ke andar tha par ab uske andar ka tanaav khatam ho chuka tha. Neha ka upar neeche uthna baithna ruk chuka tha. Neha ko apne andar Gopi kaka ke gaade garam ka veerya ka ehsaas ho raha tha. Aaj Neha ki chut ne kitna veerya apne andar liya tha iska koi hisaab nahi tha par un sabhi veerya me Gopi kaka ka veerya sabse jada gaada tha jo is baat ka bhi saboot tha ki Gopi kaka ne jane kitne saale se kisi aurat se sambandh nahi banae aur nahi hastmaithun kara tabhi unke veerya me itna jada gaadapan tha.
Neha aur Gopi kaka kaafi der tak wahi us comod par ek doosre ko baho me jakde baithe rahe. Phir jab dono ki saase thodi kabu hui tab dono ek nazar ek doosre ki aankho me dekha, itni tabadtod chudai ke baad bhi un dono ki aankho me vaasna ke laal dore saaf nazar aa rahe the, aisa lag raha tha ki wo dono kabse pyase the aur aaj ek doosre ko pakar unki barso ki pyas aaj bujhi thi. "Meri Kishmish" Itna bol kar Gopi kaka ne Neha ko hotho par choom liya, jawab me Neha ne Gopi kaka ko ek lumba passionate kiss diya jisme usne apni kissing techniques ki sari maharat dikha di.
![[Image: ubTEFpAo_o.gif]](https://images2.imgbox.com/1c/49/ubTEFpAo_o.gif)
Ek lumbe passion se bhare chumban ke dono aakhirkaar ek doosre se alag hue. Gopi kaka ne Neha ke kapde Neha ki taraf bada diye aur khud bhi apne kapde pehenne lage. Dono ke kapde pehenne ke baad Neha ne peeche se Gopi kaka ko apni baho me bhar liya.
Neha: Kaha chale gae the aap itne saalo tak apko kabhi meri yaaad nahi aai. Kyu nahi milne aae mujhe kabhi.
Gopi Kaka: Us waqt mera chale jana hi theek tha.
Neha: Par jab aap yaha the aur mujhe pehchaan gae the to ab tak saamne kyu nahi aae.
Gopi Kaka: Pehle nahi pehchan paya tha par mujhe laga zaroor tha ki tu wahi hai par us din jashan wali raat tere purse se ek photo gir gai thi jisme tu apni maa ke sath thi tab mujhe pakka ho gaya ki tu Nupur sharma ki beti hai yani meri Kishmish. Par phir bhi mai tere saamne nahi ana chahta tha. Par aaj jab tujhe is tera hawas aur kamukta se bhara ye roop dekha to mai samajh gaya ki maine jis kishmish ko maine apne pani se seecha tha ab wo puri tarah se pani se labrez angoor ban chuki hai. Par ab tum jao subah hone wali hai aur mai nahi chahta koi hume is halat me dekhe.
Neha: Par kya aap mujhe milne sheher aaenge.
Gopi Kaka: Aaunga aaj tere badan ko mehsoos kar barso ki aag bhadak uthi hai isliye ab to ana hi padega. Kyuki Angoor me Kishmish se jada rus hota hai.
Neha ne Gopi kaka ke phone me apna number save kar diya wo bhi Kishmish naam se.
Neha: Apki Kishmish apka intezzar karegi.
Gopi Kaka: Kishmish nahi Angoor.
Jate jate unke hotho par ek aur kiss di aur kamar matka haweli ki taraf chal padi. Jate jate Gopi kaka Neha ke badan ke har katan har ghumav ko niharte rahe. Par ye to tai tha ki apni sabhi saheliyo me Neha Sharma ka koi saani nahi tha,Ek raat me aath aath mardo se chudne aur na jane kitni baar jhadne ke baad bhi Neha ke andar koi thakan nahi thi aur kamukta to itni ki abhi bhi wo na jane kitne mardo ko jhadne ko majboor kar sakti thi. Par sochne wali baat ye thi ki Jis Neha ne Kallu se apne jute chatwae the jo mardo ko apni ungli par nachana achhe se janti thi aaj wo khud ek gawar dehati ke talwe chat rahi par kyu wo aisa kyu kar rahi thi kaun tha ye Gopi kaka kya wo Neha ko pehle se janta tha agar nahi to wo Neha ko Kishmish kyu bula raha tha aur Neha bhi chupchap uski har baat man rahi thi. Kya kissa tha Neha ka Gopi kaka ka aur Kishmish ka.
24-04-2024, 10:41 AM
Shayad ab is site par readers kum ho gae hai ya phir is story ke readers kum ho gae kyuki idhar maine kaafi jaldi jaldi lumbe updates daale par us hisab se reponse ye replies nahi mile na updates ko jada likes mile agar koi update pasand aae to use like ye reply dekar apne feedback de taki pata to chalta rahe ki log is story se jude hai bhi ki nahi.
28-04-2024, 03:58 PM
(24-04-2024, 03:21 PM)hirarandi Wrote: Logan Jee…! Itne saal Apki story per koi update nahi aya, naa hi Apki taraf se koi response aya. Aakhir readers thak ker chup ho gaey. Ap dekh sakte hain k Apki absense me kitne comments hain, story update k liye.
Yahan per bohot si stories hain jin k updates nahi aey. Lekin wo pehle or doosre page per hain. Agar unko khol ker dekhain to Sirf or Sirf updates ki request hain.
Is liye kisi ko yakeen nahi ho raha k Ap ki story me new updates aa chukay hain. Ap apni story k title me likh dein gay to readers ko pata b chal jaey ga. Or sab log khush b hon gay.s
Story to mai complete karne ka pura try karunga par views to bad rahe hai aur jab mai story par hota hu tab neeche kai user thread par active bhi show hote hai par comments nahi. Ab zahir hai agar mai wapis aunga to wapis aane par readers ka response to dekhunga hi har writer agar story ko apna time deta hai to wo readers ka response dekhta hi hai. Jitna time ek reader ko ek update ko padne me lagta hai usse kahi kahi kahi zada time writer ko wo update likhne uske according picture select karke use paste karne me lagta hai aur aisa bhi nahi yaha ki story se writers ko koi money earning hoti hai unka writing booster sirf readers ka response hi hai. Aur jab writer lumbe samay baad wapsi karta hai to zahir hai wo badi mushkil se samay nikal kar update likh raha hai to yaha boostet aur jada necessary ho jata hai bus yahi bolna chah raha tha.
Mai story to mai complete karunga hi bus readers ka bhi support milega to update likhne me jada maza aaega warna kewal kaam khatam karne jaisa hi rahega.
28-04-2024, 04:21 PM
![[Image: jbivVEib_o.jpg]](https://images2.imgbox.com/29/93/jbivVEib_o.jpg)
Jis waqt Neha Vikram ka intezaar kar rahi thi jabki Vikram Lalu se ladkar Shabana ko bacha raha tha Garima Bihari kaka ki ek raat ki patni ban rahi thi Vineeta Lakhan singh ki Gaia ki puja sampann ho chuki thi aur Neetu Aghori ke sath Hades ki sadhna ki prakriya ku sun aur samajh rahi thi usi waqt Ajay star veg gati Logan ke lekar us jagah pahuch chuka tha jaha pehli baar uska aur Abhay Raichand ka aamna saamna hua tha. Logan ko waha pahuchte hi Abhay Raichand ke andar ki kaali urja ka abhaas hone laga tha.
![[Image: piW41NYT_o.png]](https://images2.imgbox.com/9c/de/piW41NYT_o.png)
Logan: Adbhut itni zabardast kaali urja ka ehsaas bade dino baad hua nishchit hi wo jo bhi hai behad takatvaar hai. Par mere hath se nikalne wale ye divya khanjar use cheer kar rakh denge. Par wo hai kaha.
Ajaystar: Shayad mai janta hu ki wo us ladki ko lekar kaha gaya hoga.
Ajay Logan ko lekar usi khandahar ke paas pahuch gaya jiske bara me Osaka ne use bataya tha.
Logan: Tum sach keh rahe ho wo yahi hai kyuki mujhe bhi uski yaha uski urja ka ehsaas aur bhi teevra ho raha hai.
Ajaystar: To hume andar chalna chahiye aur manjari ko bachana chahiye.
Logan: Hume nahi kewal mujhe mai akela andar jaunga aur use ladai me uljhaunga isi beech tum us ladki ko lekar Osaka tak jaoge.
Ajaystar: Par aapne kaha wo bahut takatvar hai phir aap akele use kaise rokoge.
Logan Ajaystar ko tirchi nazro se dekhte hue: Ye mat bhulo ki mai kaun hu. Tum sirf ek bina shareer ki aatma ho aur mai ek Divyansh hu. Mere hath se nikalne wale khanjaro me divya shakti hai tumhe lagta hai mujhe ek aatma ki madad ki zarurat hogi.
Ajaystar: Theek hai jaisa aap kahe.
Logan: Chalo is Abhay Raichand naam ke kisse ko yahi khatam karte hai.
Logan ne apni muthiyo ko kas kar bheecha aur us khandahar ki taraf full confidence se bad chala. Do vinashak shaktiya ek doosre se bhidne ja rahi thi Kali urja se bhara Mahakhalnayak Abhay Raichand aur Divya ansh Logan.
Its Logan vs Abhay Raichand
![[Image: dFRGhaPT_o.jpg]](https://images2.imgbox.com/f9/39/dFRGhaPT_o.jpg)
Jaise jaise Logan ke kadam us khandahar ke kareeb bad rahe the andar maujood Abhay ko bhi ek behad teevra Divya urja ka abhas hone laga tha. Aur isse pehle ki Logan us khandahar ke andar dakhil hota Abhay veg gati se Logan ke peeche akar khada ho gaya. Logan ko bhi Abhay ke apne peeche hone ka abhas ho gaya. Aur Logan ne tez gati peeche palat kar Abhay ke chehre ki taraf ek mukka bada diya par wo bhi Abhay Raichand tha usne bhi beech me uske mukke ko apni hatheli se rok diya.
![[Image: 9gdbhKcA_o.jpg]](https://images2.imgbox.com/d0/ba/9gdbhKcA_o.jpg)
Par Abhay ko Logan ke hatho se nikalne wale khanjaro ka pata nahi thi. Jaise hi usne Logan ke mukke ko roka Logan ke khanjar uski hatheli ko cheerte hue uske chehre ke theek saamne jakar ruke. Abhay Raichand ka khoon se laal ho utha. Logan ne sach hi kaha tha uske khanjar sach me divya the jinka Abhay ke paas bhi koi tod nahi tha. Abhay ko yaha itni divya shakti ke hone ki umeed nahi thi shayad isiliye wo iske liye puri tarah tayaar nahi tha.
![[Image: GIMAyLqm_o.jpg]](https://images2.imgbox.com/da/c4/GIMAyLqm_o.jpg)
Abhay ke ek baar ghayal hone ke baad Logan ne use wapai ka doosra mauka nahi diya. Logan ke khanjar Abhay Raichand ke shareer ko jagah jagah se cheerte ja rahe the. Abhay Raichand ka pura shareer khoon se tarbatar tha uske andar khade rehne ki takat nahi bachi thi. Chhupkar ye sab dekh raha Ajaystar behad khush tha ki Abhay Raichand ki kahani ka ant hone ja raha tha. Wo Logan ke kahe mutabik peeche ki taraf se khandahar ke andar gaya aur Aarti urf Marjari ko utha kar wapas aa gaya. Waise to Logan ne use kaha tha ki us ladki ko lekar Osaka ke paas chale jana par shayad wo us ladai ke parinaam ke prati puri tarah aashwast tha ki kya hone wala hai aur shayad wo use dekh kar hi jana chahta tha isliye wo wahi khada Logan ke hatho Abhay Raichand ka ant hote dekhne laga.
![[Image: ST2tU6uu_o.jpg]](https://images2.imgbox.com/00/61/ST2tU6uu_o.jpg)
Isi beech aasmaan me tez bijlj kadki hawae tez ho gai kutto siyaro ke bhaukne ki awaaze tez ho gai. Varavaran me Kaali urja ka pravaah yakayak behad teevra ho utha, ye wahi pal tha jab Aghori aur Neetu ki sadhna apne antim padaav par pahuch gai thi jab Hades ne Aghori ke shareer me pravesh kara tha.
![[Image: 06XhpNIx_o.jpg]](https://images2.imgbox.com/fb/c3/06XhpNIx_o.jpg)
Hades jo andhkaar aur pataal ki duniya ka swami tha uske aagman ne vaatavaran me kaali urja ka pravaah teevra kar diya tha. Aur ye ehsaas Abhay Raichand ko bhi ho raha tha usne vaatavaran me faili kaali urja ko sokhna shuru kar diya. Wo kaali urja ko sokhta gaya sokhta gaya, Logan ke vidhvansak waaro ne use puri tarah tod diya tha par usne apne andar bachi khuchi sare takat ko apne haatho me kendrit kara aur apne dwara sokhi gai sari kaali urja ko apne us ek mukke me ikattha karke Hades ki us kaali urja se bhara ek mahavinashak prahaar seedha Logan ke dil ke upar kara aur Logan ke dil ne dhadakna band kar diya.
Ajaystar ko apni aankho par ekpal ko yakeen hi nahi hua ki ye ek pal me achanak kya hua, ekdum se waqt badal diye halat badal diye jazbat badal diye, jo Logan ab tak puri tarah dominate kar raha tha wo ab bejaan sa zameen par pada tha. Par us ek prahaar ko karne me Abhay Raichand bhi andar se puri tarah nichud gaya tha uske andar aankhe khuli rakhne bhar ki takat nahi bachi thi aur Logan ke dharashai hone ke baad wo bhi bagal me nidhaal hokar gir pada. Ajaystar samajh gaya ki philhaal yaha se Manjari ko lekar Osaka tak jana bahut zaroori hai kyuki agar Abhay Raichand ko hosh aa gaya to pata nahi wo kya karega. Wo tez gati se Logan tak gaya usne ek kandhe par Logan ko uthaya aur tez gati se daudta hua seedha Osaka ke saamne ja pahucha.
![[Image: q8sli48I_o.jpg]](https://images2.imgbox.com/ea/f4/q8sli48I_o.jpg)
Osaka bhi vaatavaran me faili kaali urja ki badti teevrta ko mehsoos kar rahe the. Aur jab Ajaystar ke kandho par latka Logan ka bejan shareer dekha to sab kuch samajh aa gaya.
Ajaystar: Mahaguru waha Logan Abhay Raichand par haavi tha par phir pata nahi achanak aisa kya hua kaise uske andar achanak se itni takat aa gai ki usne ek mukke me hi Logan ka ye haal kar diya.
Osaka: Usne nahi vaatavaran me faili is kaali urja ne. Kahi kuchh to aisa hua hai jiski wajah se vaatavaran me kaali urja ka pravaah bahut bad gaya aur kisi kaali urja se takat lekar Abhay Raichand naam ke us shaksha ne is pahad ko bhi ghutno par laa diya. Par koi baat nahi Logan ko to mai wapas le hi aaunga wo ek chiranjeevi hai par philhaal Tumhari,Abhay Raichand aur is ladki ke ateet ke anjaan rahasyo se parda hatane ka aur ab mai aisa kar bhi sakta hu kyuki is kahaani ke teeno kirdaar mere paas hai jinpar ek vishesh prakriya ke madhayam se tum teeno ka ateet jaan sakta hu.
Ajaystar: Teeno kirdaar par yaha to sirf mai aur ye ladki hai Abhay kaha hai.
Osaka: Hai bilkul hai
Osaka Logan ki taraf ishara karta hai
Osaka: Iske hath ke khanjaro me Abhay Raichand ka khoon laga hai aur us khoon ke madhayam se hum tumhari is ladki aur Abhay ki yaado ki gehrai me jakar tum teeno ke ateet ko samjh sakte hai aur shayad hume waha Abhay naam ki us kaali shakti se ladne aur use khatam karne ka koi tareeka mil jae.
Ajaystar: To phir der kis baat ki shuru kariye isse pehle wo is ladku ko dhoondta hua yaha aa jae.
Osaka: Ye vidhi itni asan aur chhoti nahi hai isme samay lagega lagbhag 24 ghante yani pura ek din tabhi hum tum teeno ke ateet me pravesh kar paenge ha tab tak mai aisa prabandh kar dunga ki 24 ghante tak Abhay hume dhoond nahi paega.
Logan Aur Aarti ke moorchhit shareero ko do tantra ghero ke andar rakh diya aur Ajay bhi Osaka ke kehne par aatmik roop me teesre tantra ghere ke andar akar khada ho gaya aur mahaguru Osaka ne ateet ke rehesyo se parda hatane ki ye vidhi arambh kar di.
15-05-2024, 12:37 PM
15-05-2024, 12:40 PM
15-05-2024, 12:43 PM
« Next Oldest | Next Newest »
Users browsing this thread: 22 Guest(s)

![[+]](https://xossipy.com/images/bootbb/collapse_collapsed.png)