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Bahut hi kamuk update! Bahut hi hot aur exciting

Thanks bro for liking it.

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Congrats for the Century Logan bhai..
And very well written update as well....
Keep Rocking..

Thanks BeboPremi
Bus ye readers ka itna support hai ki ye dubar 100 page kar gai.
Isse pehle bhi xossip par is story ka yahi pyar mila tha.
Abhi 4 din baki hai and definetly ye 200 paar karegi.
Keep supporting.

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Keep rocking bro

Thanks bro

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Now i am creating Index of this story.
Jisme 70 page tak ki index bana chuka hu.
Isse nae judne wale readers ko story padne me asaani hogi.
Iske alawa jinko jo charectar pasand hai kewal uske update padne me asaani hogi kyuki mai index unke naam se bana raha hu.
I think isse readers ko asaan rahega apne hisab se apne kirdaar ke update padne me.

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Thanks bro nice pic again.

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Super updates.

Story jese jese age badh rahi he Vese aur bhi Instresting hoti ja rahi he.

Neetu,  Aarti aur shobha ki story age nahi badh rahi he.

Thanks bro

Maine koshish hi yahi ki hai ki hai story jaise jaise aage bade usme suspense kum hone ki bajae aur badta jae. Aur Day 10 to suspense se bharpoor hoga kafi saare twist and turns aaenge jo aage aane wali nai stories ko bahut effect karenge.

Shobha ka day 7 me ek zabardst update hai, Neetu aur Aarti ki story ha thodi slow hai par agar wo bhi tez chalti to baki story slow pad jati.

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Aarti ko wahi chhodne ke baad neetu aur aghori shamshan bhoomi ki taraf chal pade aghori ke nivas ki taraf jaha agle kuchh din unhe Raj ki jindagi ke lie ek tantra sadhna karni thi. Raste bhar dono ke man me alag-alag vichaar janm le rahe the. Neetu ke man me yahi chal rahaa tha ki vo aghori se ye kaise kahe ki use koi brahmchaari nahi mila aur jise vo apna kaumarya dena chahti hai vo aur koi nahi khud aghori hai kya aghori iske lie taiyaar hogaa agar taiyaar na hua to vo use kaise manaegi. Doosri taraf aghori ke man me aarti ke saath hui ghatnaao ne aneko savaal paidaa kar die the vo do parchhaiya kinki thi us divya rudraakshaa kaa aarti se kyaa sambandh hai in savaalon ne unke man ko vyaakul kar diyaa tha.

Apne-apne vichaaro me khoya neetu aur aghori kab shamshan bhoomi tak pahunch gaye unhe pata hi nahi chala. Wo dono aghori ke ghar me dakhil hue jaha unhe vo Kaamsadhna karni thi.



Aghori- Hum apne saadhnaa sthal par aa gaye par abhi tak tum us brahmchaari ko nahi laa pai niymanusaar to us brahmchaari ko bhi aaj ki vidhi men bhaag lenaa chaahie tha.
Neetu- Maaf karde baba kal vo jaroor is vidhi me shaamil hoga bus mujhe kal tak kaa waqt de deejiye.
Aghori- Theek hai aao is havan kund ke samne baith jao.

Neetu aur aghori ne us hawan kund ke paas baith gaye. Aghori ne usme agni prajwalit kar di.

Aghori- Pehle humne is sadhna kaa sankalp kiya ki hum ye sadhna avashya karenge kisi bhi paristhiti me is sadhna ko beech me nahi rokenge aur kal humne shiv ka rudrabhishek karke kaal saadhna me mahakaal ka aashirwaad liya.
Neetu- Jee
Aghori- Par jab hum kisi jagah par koi kaam karte hai to kaam shuru karne se pahle us jagah ke malik se uski anumati leni padti hai. Hai ki nahi
Neetu- Ji baba vo to hai.
Aghori- To ye ek shamshan bhoomi hai yaha aneko atmae vaas karti hai ye unkaa nivaas sthaan hai vo yahaan ki malik hai aur hum yaha saadhna karne jaa rahe hai vo bhi ek kaam saadhna jisme ek stri purush kaa milan hoga. Aisi jagah par is tarah ki kriya ke lie in aatmao ki anumati hona bahut jaroori hai.
Neetu- Jee baba to unki anumati lene ke lie hume kya karna padega.
Aghori- Aavahan, us har aatma kaa aavahan jo pichhle kai saalo se is shamshan bhoomi me nivaas kar rahi hai us har aatma ko hame yaha bulana hoga. Wo har aatma is hawan kund me aahuti daalegi. Ye aahuti ek anumati hogi us kriyaa ke lie jo hum yaha karne vaale hai.

Aatma bulane ki baat sunte hi neetu ke raungte khade ho gae. Ek aatma hi halat kharab karne ke lia kafi hai aur aghori shamashan ki saari aatmaao ko bulaane ki baat kar rahaa thaa jise sunkar kisi ke raungte khade ho jaana svabhavik tha.

Neetu- Baba aatmaa bulaenge aap ye jaroori hai kya.
Aghori- Haa bahut jaroori hai bina unki anumati lie tum yaha aisa kaam kaise kar sakti ho agar us kriyaa ke dauraan koi aatma tum par mohit ho gai yaa gussa ho gai to isme beech me vyavdhaan daal sakti hai. Aatma bulaane ki baat sunkar tumhe dar lag raha hai kya.
Neetu- Jee baba
Aghori- Chinta mat karo mai tumhaare saath hu yahaan ki har aatmaa se mai parichit hu mere rehte unme se koi tumhe nuksaan nahi pahunchaegi bharosaa rakho.
Neetu- Ji baaba.
Aghori- Par tumhe apnaa kalejaa majboot karna hogaa saadhna kaa ye charan bilkul bhi aasaan nahi hai jab vo aatmae yaha aengi to unhe dekhakar majboot se majboot vyakti ko bhi dar lag sakta hai par tumhe himmat rakhni hogi mere rehte unme se koi tumhe kuchh nahi karegi bas tum himmat mat haarnaa.
Neetu- Ji baaba.

Neetu ne aghori ki haa me haa to milaa di ki vo himmat nahi haaregi par vo hi jaanti thi ki andar se uski buri tarah fati padi thi. Aghori ne hawan kund me aahuti daalnaa shuru kardi.



Aghori- Mashaan me nivaas karne vaali achchhi buri sabhi aatmaao yaha aao main tumhaara aavaahan kar rahaa hu mere paas aao yahaa aakar hame is kaamsutra saadhna ki anumati pradaan karo. Tum sab jahaa bhi ho jis haalaat me bhi ho mere paas aao mai tum sabka yaha avaahan karta hu.

Neetu kabhi hawan kund ki jalti agni ko kabhi aankh band karke usme aahuti daalte aghori to kabhi idhar-udhar ke maahaul ko dekhti dar ke maare uskaa buraa haal thaa uskaa dil jor-jor se dhak-dhak kar rahaa tha. Bhoot pret par vishvaas naa karne vaali nitu is waqt bhooto ki aahat se khaufjada thi. Jald hi uskaa khauf sach kaa aakar lene laga us kamre ke maahaul badalne lagaa thaa vahaan hava kaa dabaav bhaari hone lagaa thaa kamre kaa mahaul sard hone lagaa thandak badne lagi. Kamre ke bahar kutte aur siyaro ke bhaukne rone ki aavaze aane lagi. Kauve jor-jor se kaav kaav karne lage the. Kutte aur kauvo ki aavaazo ne maahaul ko aur jadaa khaufnaak banaa diyaa tha. Ab neetu ko lag raha thaa ki yaha rehne aane kaa faisla karke usne koi galti to nahi kardi. Door kahi kutto ka ek jhund ne aarti ko chaaro taraf se gher liyaa thaa aur us shamashan me barso se nivaas karne vaali ek aatmaa aarti aur kutto ke beech aakar khadi ho gayi thi.

Aghori lagaatar aahuti daale jaa rahaa thaa aur us shamashan ki nivaasi sab aatmaao kaa aavaahan kar rahaa tha. Aur uske aavaahan par aatmaao kaa aana shuru ho gayaa thaa.



Kuchh aatmae dhue ke aakar me thi kuchh kaa aksaa dhundhlaa thaa to kuchh kaa ekdum saaf, kuchh aatmae saumya thi to kuchh ugra.



Us jhopdi me rakhi cheeje hilne lagi thi, neetu ki haalat patli ho gai thi dar ke maare uske munh se aavaaj bhi nahi nikal paa rahi thi. Aatmae uske kareeb se gujar gujar kar us hawan kund ke upar aakar usme aahutiya daal rahi thi.



Zindagi bhar bhooto par bharosaa naa karne wali neetu ne sapne me bhi nahi sochaa thaa ki ek raat me use itne saare bhooto ke ek saath darshan ho jaenge.

Jin aatmaao ke aksaa saaf the unhe dekhnaa jaadaa bhayaanak thaa kisike maathe par goli lagi thi to kisi kaa haath gaayab, kisi ke pair toote the to kisi ke pet me khanjar gadaa thaa aise vibhaatsa roop neetu ne sapne me bhi nahi dekhe the.



Horrar filmo ki shaukeen neetu ke saamne aaj jeeti jaagti horrar film chal rahi thi.

Aisa khaufnaak manjar dekh neetu ko ulti aane ko thi uskaa dimaag chakrane laga thaa vo badi mushkil se khud par kaabu rakhe thi. Achaanak ek aatmaa ne uske bagal me akar hawan kund me aahuti daali. Neetu ne sir ghumaakar use dekhaa uskaa sir gaayab thaa gardan par maans kaa lothdaa najar aa rahaa tha.



Neetu kaa dimaag bhannaa gayaa isse jadaa vo khud par kaaboo nahi rakh sakti thi vo vahi havan kund ke bagal me ludak gai. Is maahaul ko dekh vo behosh ho gayi thi. Aghori aankh band kare ab bhi aahvan me vyast thaa shamashan ki lagabhag har aatmaa ne vaha aakar aavaahan kar diyaa thaa par abhi bhi koi thaa jiskaa aahuti denaa abhi baaki tha. Us shamashan se kaafi door abhai raichand un kutto ko kaal banaa huaa thaa aur rudraakshaa me kaid us aatmaa ko lalkaar rahaa tha. Abhai behosh aarti ko uthaakar vahaan se nikal gayaa pichhe chhod gayaa vo bajarangi rudraakshaa jisme kaid vo saayaa baahar aane ke lie chhatpataa rahaa tha.

Idhar aghori kaa aavaahan use shamashan ki taraf khinch rahaa tha. Aghori ke mantro ki shakti ne us bajarangi rudraakshaa ko apni taraf kheenchna shuru kar diya. Wo rudrakshaa hava me udtaa huaa us shamashan bhoomi ki taraf khichha chalaa jaa rahaa thaa aur saath me usme kaid vo saayaa bhi.

Aghori us aakhiri aahuti ko apni taraph kheench rahaa thaa aur vo rudraakshaa khichhaa huaa aghori ki taraph chalaa jaa rahaa thaa। aghori ne havan kund me ek aur aahuti daali aur achaanak se koi cheej uske hatheli par aakar giri. Aghori ne apni aankhen kholi aur us bajarangi rudraakshaa ko apne haatho me dekh vo chaunk pada.

Aghori- Ye rudraakshaa ye to mainne us kanya aarti ko diyaa thaa uski rakshaa ke lie, ye is tarah apne aap mere paas kaise aa gaya. Mai to is shamashan ki nivaasi aatmaao kaa aavaahan kar rahaa thaa matalab jaroor is rudraaksha me koi aisi aatmaa kaid hai jo is shamashan ki nivaasi hai. Shaayad yahi vo saayaa hai jo aarti ke peechhe padaa thaa jiskaa mujhe aabhaas ho rahaa thaa aur shaayad raaste me isne aarti par hamlaa karaa hogaa aur aarti ne bachaav me ye rudraaksha is par phenk maara aur ye aatma isme kaid ho gayi. Achhaa huaa ab mai is aatmaa ko baahar nikalakar ise iski uddandta kaa achha sabak sikhaa dunga.



Aghori ki najar saamne behosh padi neetu par padi vo samajh gayaa ki un aatmaao ke aavaahan par unke vibhatsaa roop dekhakar neetu behosh ho gai. Par abhi aakhiri aahuti baaki thi aur uske lie is aakhiri aatmaa ko is rudraakshaa se aazad karnaa jaruri tha. Aghori ne zameen par ek tantraa ghera banaaya aur us rudraakshaa ko us ghere me rakh diyaa aur phir kuchh mantraa budbudaane lagaa aur phir ek phoonk us rudraakshaa par maari। us rudraakshaa me kampan hone lagaa aur ek jhatke ke saath vo rudraakshaa do khand me vibhaajit ho gayaa aur usme kaid saayaa us rudraakshaa se baahar aa gaya.

Par us rudraakshaa ki kaid se baahar aate hi vo ek doosri kaid me fas gaya. Us tantra ghere ki kaid me jo aghori ne zameen par banaaya tha. Wo saaya vaha se nikaalne ki bharasak koshish kar rahaa thaa par har koshish bekaar thi. Ek siddha aghori ke banae hue tantra ghere ko tod kar baahar aana us aatmaa ke lie aasaan kaam nahin tha.

Aghori- Teri baahar aane ki har koshish bekaar hai dusht aatmaa. Kaun hai tu, tu vahi hai naa jo us kanyaa aarti ke pichhe pada thaa use pareshaan kar rahaa tha.

Sayaa- Jaane de mujhe aghori jaane de apni maut ko daavat mat de. Jaane de mujhe jald se jald kahi pahunchnaa hai jaane de mujhe varnaa tujhe mujhse koi nahi bachaa paegaa.
Aghori- Tu mujhe maregaa lagtaa hai tune mujhe koi chhotaa motaa gali kaa baaba samajh liyaa hai mai aghori hun aghori aur abhi main tujhe dikhataa hu ki kaun kise khatam kartaa hai.

Aghori ne mutthi me bhabhoot uthaakar us sae par phenki vo saayaa dard se tilamilaa utha.

Aghori- Kyaa huaa nikal gai saari hekdi. Bahut badi-badi baate kar rahaa thaa kyaa huaa ab nahi maregaa mujhe maar naa mujhe.
Saayaa- Kyaa bigaada hai maine tumhaara kyo baandh rakhaa hai tumne mujhe. Jaane do mujhe, mujhe kisiko bachaane jaanaa hai koi saalo se intejaar kar rahaa hai mera.
Aghori- Hai kaun tu tujhe pehle to kabhi is shamshaan me nahi dekhaa main saalo se is shamshan me reh rahaa hun yaha rehne vaali har aatmaa ko jantaa hun tumse kabhi kaise nahin mila.
Saya- Kyuki main barso se kisi ke tanraa jaal me kaid tha. Is shamashan ke kone me rakhi vo chattaan barso se mujhe apne andar kaid kare hue the isilie tum kabhi mujhe dekh nahin pae.
Aghori- Kaid the kabse kaid the aur kisne kaid karaa tumhe ho kaun tum, aur us ladki ke peechhe kyon pade ho.
Saayaa- Main uske peechhe nahi padaa thaa balki use ek bahut bade khatre se bachane ki koshish kar rahaa thaa aur agar tumhaara vo rudraakshaa beech me naa aataa to main use bachaa bhi leta.
Aghori- Bachanaa chaahte the par kisse.
Sayaa- Bataaungaa sab bataaungaa main jantaa hu tum ek nek bande ho par tumhe bhi mujh par bharosaa karnaa hogaa aur mujhe is tantraa se aajaad karnaa hoga.
Aghori- Theek hai par meri bhi ek shart hai tumhe is havan kund me aahuti daalni hogi is ladki ke premi ki rakshaa ke lie main yaha saadhnaa karne vaalaa hu jiske lie mujhe is shamashan ki har aatmaa se aahuti chaahie kyuki tum bhi barso se yahaan kaid ho to tum bhi yahaan ke nivaasi hue isilie tumhe bhi isme aahuti daalni hogi.
Saayaa- Daalunga mai jaroor isme aahuti daalungaa par pahle mujhe aazad karo.
Aghori- Theek hai mai tumhe aazad kar rahaa hu par dhyan rakhnaa koi hoshiyaari mat karna. Dhyaan rakhnaa jab mere haath me bandha ek rudraakshaa tumhe kaid kar saktaa hai to mai khud kyaa kar saktaa hu.
Saayaa- bharosaa rakho mujh par.
Aghori- Theek hai

Aghori ne phirse kuchh mantraa jaap karaa aur vo gheraa zameen se majtaa diya. Wo saayaa us kaid se aajaad ho gaya.

Aghori- Chalo ab pehle is hawan kund me aahuti daalo uske baad tumhaare baare me baat karte hai.

Us sae ne havan kund me aahuti daal di. Aahuti yagya purna ho gayaa aghori ko neetu ki kaam saadhna ke lie vahaa maujood har aatmaa ki sehamati mil gai. In sabse bekhabar neetu vahaan behosh padi thi. Par is waqt neetu se bhi jaadaa mahatvapurnaa shakshaa aghori ke saamne thaa vo saayaa aarti abhai ki trikoni kahaani kaa tisraa kon.

Aghori- Ab bataao mujhe apne baare me kaun ho tum. Par usse pehle mai tumhaara chehraa dekhnaa chaahta hu tumhaari vaastavik shakla. Isilie tumhe is parachhaai se baahar laanaa hoga.

Aghori ne bhabhoot ko haath me lekar kuchh mantraa pade aur vo bhabhoot us sae par phenk di. Ab tak ek havaa banaa aur kaali parachhaai saa dikhtaa vo saaya apnaa vaastavik aakar lene laga, Tha to vo ab bhi ek aatmaa par ab vo aatmaa vo roop leti jaa rahi thi jo uskaa marne se pehle kaa roop tha. Pairo se hote hue dheeme dheeme us aatmaa kaa asli roop saamne aataa jaa rahaa tha.

Aghori- Ab bataao tumhaaraa naam kyaa hai.

Wo saayaa ab apne asli roop me aghori ke saamne khdaa tha.



“AJAY, mera naam hai AJAY, AJAY THE STAR”

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Bahot hi shaandaaar Logan bhai...Unlike from the rest of your majority readers ..Jinki Shabana favourite hai
Meri day 1 se Garima favourite Rahi hai..
Maza aaya Garima ka action scene padhke. ..
laajawaab...

Thanks bro.......Hmm sabki apni apni pasand hai aur sabhi readers ko samajhna chahiye.....Garima ka alag charectar hai. Aur ye scene pehle din se tayar ho raha tha isiliye ab tak kaka ko garima ke sath involve nahi kara warna ye situatuon nahi ban pati.

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Neetu ka ye scene xossip ki kahani ka likha ja chuka scene hai to jo log waha ye scene pehle hi pad chuke hai kripya is scene se door rahe aur bewajah ye purani post kyu daali reader ko bewkoof bana rahe ho ye sab karke apna aue mera samay waste na kare.

Iske liye mai apka hriday se aabhari rahunga.

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Bhai agle update me neetu ko continue karna

Agla update Shabana ka hai uske baad Day 6 aakhiri Neetu ka update hai. Jiske baad Day 6 khatam ho jaega.

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बहोत अच्छा update दिया आपने thanks

wow! another great update!

Thanks Asha madam and Don jee. Waise ye xossip ke purana update tha par yaha pehli baar diya hai. Aur chuki isme ek aham kirdaar ki identity reveal honi thi isliye ye imp updata tha.

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nice dear

Maja a gaya

Wah loganji wah

Thanks Miss Khan Regme aur Utsuk Saand jee.

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भाई बहुत ही शानदार अपडेट है।।
इतनी गृहणियां का बेहतरीन स्टोरी
में पिरोया है किसी ग्रहणी को हिजाबी matrue
Cut लिंग का प्यार से seduce कराएं।
गज़ब अपडेट बनेगा ।।।

Thanks bro
Shayad maine kabhi bataya nahi par jab maine ye kahani shuru kari thi tab isme bhi kewal ek mahila kirdaar tha Vineeta. Kahani ka pehla update bhi usi hisab se bana tha jisme vineeta ko main dikhaya gaya. Par Ek female kai male ya ek male kai female ki story bahut pad chuka tha kuchh alag karna chahta tha tab vineeta ki saheliyo ko bhi kahaani ka hissa banae ka khayal aya aur tab vineeta ke parallel Garima Shabana Neha Shobha Neetu Aarti ke kirdaar dimaag me aae. Warna shayad ye kahaani bhi ek wedding ceremony me ek aurat ki alag alag mardo se chudai se shuru hokar wahi khatam ho jati. Aur Shabana aur Garima ke kirdaar saamne hi na aate jo popularity ke maamle me main lead Vineeta se bhi aage nikal gae.

Philhaal is kahaano me kisi  male charectar ki gunjjaish nahi hai par iske baad jo shabana ki kahaani hai waha  kitdaaro ki bharmaar hai.

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LALU Ke Kamre Me



Shabana aaj sari duniya ko bhulakar tan man se khud ko lalu ko saup kar usi ke agosh me uske upar lete lete so rahi thi. Jeewan me pehli baar use kisi mard ne usse ek aurat hone ka asli ehsaas diya tha use andar tak puri tarah santusht kar diya tha. Is santushti ke ehsaas ki wajah se shabana wo sari barbarta wo sari ghinauni harkate jo lalu ne uske saath ki thi wo sab bhool gai aur apna sab kuchh lalu ko saup djya.

Lalu shabana ko apni baho me jakde tha uske dono hath shabana ki peeth par the achanak shabana ko apne nange chutado par ek haath sehlata mehsoos hua. Shabana is kadar chudai aur neend ki khumari me doobi thi ki use ye lalu ke hi haath lage. Agle pal use do hath apne dono chutado par ghoomte mehsoos hue.



Jise mehsoos karte hi shabana ne aankhe khol di. Lalu ke hath ab bhi uski peeth par the do hath neeche uske chutado par ghoom rahe the. Shabana ye soch hi rahi thi ki ek teesra haath shanana ke chutado ki darar me apni ungli daakhil karne laga. Ab ye tai tha ki ye Lalu nahi kar raha koi aur hai jo uske peehe khada hai. Aur ye pata chalte hi shabana achanak se hadbada kar uth baithi. Shabana ke achanak se yu hadbada kar uthne se Lalu ki bhi aankh khul gai.



Uthne ke baad shabana ne turant peeche ghoom kar dekha ki peeche uske chutado ko sehlane wala shaksha kaun hai aur peeche dekhte hi uske hosh ud gae. Peeche ek do nahi balki teen log the, lalu ke teeno dost Dev Kundan Pratap use is tarah lalu ke seene par nanga lete dekh kar muskura rahe the, un teeno ke haath me mobile aur wo teeno apni daant dikhtate hue is nangi halat me shabana ka video bana rahe the flash maar maar kar uski photo kheech rahe the.
 

Dev



Kundan



Pratap

Shabana ko jaise hi apne nangepan ka ehsaas hua wo lalu ke upar se uth kar khadi ho gai aur apne nangepan ko dhakne ke liye kuchh dhoondne lagi. Uska burkha un teeno ke peeche zameen par pada tha aur unke paas jakar wo uthane me use dar lag raha tha. To wo wahi bistar ke bagal me apne haatho se apne nangepan ko dhakne ki nakam koshish karte hue zameen par baith gai.



Wo teeno lagatar shabana ki majboori par has rahe the uska is majboor halat ko apne mobile me record kar rahe the.
Kundan: Dekho dekho haweli me raat alag alag mardo ke kamro me jakar dhanda karne wali ye rundi kaise badi shareef banne ki nautanki kar rahi hai.
Un teeno ko kamre me dekh Lalu bhi hadbada kar uth baitha.
Lalu: Tum teeno yaha tum log to farmhouse gae the ye achanak se yaha kaise aa gae.
Pratap: Waah Lalu yaar dikha diya na apni asli rang hume waha farmhouse me bhej diya us naachne wali chandni ke paas aur yaha khud is nai rundi ke saath maze kar raha tha. Hume bhool gaya.
Dev: Ae Lalu aaj tak gaav ke har nae maal ke udghatan me hum saath rahe har rundi ki chudai saath me kari aur aaj tu akele akele ye maza loot raha tha. Wo to beech raste me hume uska phone aya ki uske pair me moch aa gai hai isliye wo aaj mujra nahi kar paegi to wapas aa gae warna hume ye sab pata hi nahi chalta.
Lalu: Chup raho tum sab ye koi bazaru rundi nahi hai ek shareef aurat hai.
Kundan: Kitni shareef hai wo to dikh raha hai tere kamre me apne saare kapde utar kar nangi tere lode par leti thi sach me badi shareef hai kasam se sharafat to tapp tapp tapak rahi hai.

Achanak Paratp ki nazar bistar par bane khoon ke dhabbo par padi.
Pratap: Oh bhai log ye dekho iski sharafat ka saboot dekho bisyar par pada hai wo dekho.
Kundan: Oh teri ye to seal band bottle thi apne bhai ne opening kari hai isiliye hume yaha se tarka diya, par ye theek baat nahi thi tujhe open karna tha to tu open kar leta hum middle order me khel lete bhai.
Dev: Aisa mast chikta gadraya badan dekh kar mai to tailender me bhi khelne ko tayar tha.
Kundan: Tha tha kya kar raha hai, abhi kaun si raat beet gai hai ab khel lete hai.
Wo teeno apne lund masalte hue shabana ki taraf bade, shabana dar ke sehem gai ki jo kaam pehle nahi hua wo ab use ab hota nazar aa raha tha uska GANGbang. Wo teeno shabana ki taraf bade hi the ki Lalu unke saamne akar khada ho gaya.

Lalu: Ruk jao mere rehte tum ye sab nahi kar sakte.
Shabana Lalu ka ye roop dekh kar hairaan thi ki lalu use bachane ke liye apne hi doato ke khilaaf ja raha hai.
Kundan: Dekh bhai Lalu bahut hua tune hume bewkoof bana kar yaha se bhej diya chal koi baat nahi par ab humare aur iske beech mat aa.
Lalu: Shabana sirf Lalu ki hai pyar karta hu mai ise aur mere alaawa koi ise koi haath bhi nahi lagaega.
Lalu ke muh se ye alfaaz sun kar shabana ko apne kaano par yakeen nahi ho raha tha ki kal raat ko uska bang karne wala aaj use bachane ke liye khada hai apne pyar ki baat kar raha hai.
Dev: Nahi nahi bhai aise nahi chalega ye tay nahi hua tha humare beech. Tune kaha tha ki kharbooza katega to sabme batega. Ab tu apni baat se palat raha hai.
Lalu: Ha kaha tha par ab mujhe isse pyar ho gaya hai aur ab mai iske sath aur galat nahi kar sakta.

Shabana chupchap khud ko chhupae unki baatr sun rahi thi aur lalu ki baate sunkar uske baare me uske vichaar bhi ab badal rahe the.
Pratap: Ye nahi chalega jo pehle decide hua tha wahi hoga.
Lalu: Mere rehte hue to nahi.
Dev: Dekh tune uske video ke dum par use blackmail kara hai aur ab iski photo video humare paas bhi hai to hum bhi bahar sabko bata denge.
Dev ki baat sunkar shabana dar gai ki kahi ye teeno uske video bahar na dikha de.
Lalu: Us waqt use bachane wala koi nahi tha par ab ise bachane ke liye mai hu. Aur kya tum teeno me milkar itni himmat hai ki tum mujha hatakar is tak pahuch pao. Ye to teen char din me chali jaegi uske baad tumhe mere saath hi rehna hai. Kya char din ki chandni ke liye tum mujhse dushmani mol loge.

Lalu ki ye dhamki sun wo teeno ek doosre ka muh dekhne lage kyuki lalu ko cross karne ki himmat un teeno me nahi thi.
Kundan: Are bhai lalu tu to bura maan gaya bhai kya kare chandni ka dance dekhne gae the aur us saali ka pair mud gaya to mood off ho gaya ab yaha ise nanga dekha to niyat kharab ho gai.
Lalu: To apni niyat ko kaboo me rakho.
Kundan: Chal hum iske saath kuchh nahi karenge na iski photo video bahar dikhaenge par iske badle me kuchh to hume bhi milna chahiye, thoda to humare bare me bhi socho.
Lalu: Ye ghuma phira kar mujhse mat bolo jo kehna hai saaf saaf kaho.
Kundan: To bhai saaf saaf sunle hum ise haath bhi nahi lagaenge par ise bhi humari garmi shant karni hogi ab chandni to mujra karne ki halat me hai nahi to ise ek raat ke liye humari chandni banna hoga. Uski tarah humare saamne mujra karna hoga.

Kundan ki baat sunkar shabana ka kaleja dhakk karke reh gaya. Wo use ek nachne waali ki tarah mujra karne ko keh raha tha. Lalu ne nazre ghuma kar dari sehmi baithi shabana ko dekha jo lalu ko badi umeed se dekh rahi thi.
Lalu: Ise mujra karna nahi ata.
Dev: Uski fiqr tu mat kar chandni hai na uske moch aai hai pair nahi toota wo ise sikha degi ye kal ka pura din uske yaha chali jae to wo raat tak use achha khasa mujra karna sikha degi.
Lalu: Ye uske yaha kaise jaegi yaha sabko kya kahegi.
Dev: Wo hum nahi jante ab ye tu soch ab itna to karna padega.

Lalu ne aage bad kar zameen par pada wo burkha uthakar shabana ko lakar de diya. Shabana ne bina der kiye us burkhe se apne jism ke nangepan ko dhak liya.



Lalu: Ja tu bathroom me jakar apne pehle wale kapde pehen le mai in logo ko samjhane ki koshish karta hu.

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Shabana chupchap bathroom me chali gai aur waha apna abhi ka pehna hua burkha utar kar taang diya aur pehle wala gown pehene lagi. Gown pehenne ke dauraan bhi use bahar se Lalu aur uske teeno dosto ke beech hoti behes ki awaaze saaf sunai de rahi thi. Lalu lagataar unhe samjhane ki koshish kar raha tha par wo teeno apni baat par ade the. Apne pehle wale kapde pehen kar shabana bathroom se bahar aa gai, uske bahar aate hi kamre me khamoshi chha gai. Is khamoshi ko todte hue lalu uske kareeb aya aur uske haath ko apne haath me lekar bade pyar aur apnepan se use samjhane laga.



Lalu: Dekh maine in teeno ko samjhane ki bahut koshish ki par ye manne ko tayar nahi hai.
Lalu ki baate shabana ki bechaini bada rahi thi.
Lalu: Dekh agar maine inpar jada dabaav dala to kahi ye gusse me bahar sab kuch na bak de tere photo video bahar na dikha de.
Shabana ki dhadkane tez tez chal rahi thi.
Lalu: Dekh sun bus ek dance ki baat hai agar tu inke saamne mujra karde to ye baat yahi khatam ho jaegi.
Shbana: Par....
Lalu: Dekh samjha kar bus ek raat ke dance ki baat hai phir tu apne raaste ye apne raaste aur ye tere saath kuchh nahi karenge iski guarantee mai leta hu. Aur rahi tujhe mujra sikhane ki baat to wo humari ek favourite naachne wali hai Chandni wo tujhe mujra karna sikha degi. Bus tujhe mere saath uske yaha chalna hoga wo tujhe ek din mr perfect mujra sikha degi. Aur naachna to tujhe pehle se aata hai Dance party me kya gazab naacha tha.
Shabana: Baat agar sirf naachne ki hi hai to uske liye naachne wali ke yaha jaane ki kya zarurat mai aise hi dance kar dungi.
Lalu: Tu samjhi nahi yaha dance ki baat nahi ho rahi mujre ki baat ho rahi. Tujhe pata hai Chandni kis type ka mujra karti hai.
Shabana: Kis type ka.
Lalu: Strip Mujra. Jisme naachne wali pehle to pure kapde pehen kar aati hai par ek ek karke apne kapde utarti jati hai jab tak ki wo puri tarah nangi na ho jae.



Lalu ki ye baat sunkar shabana ke pairo tale zameen khisak gai, ek baar mujra karna tha tab bhi theek tha usne khud ko mentaly tayar kar bhi liya par Strip Mujra ki baat sun kar uske hosh ud gae.
Shabana: Nahi nahi mai ye nahi kar sakti.
Lalu: Dekh phir agar ye log kuchh ulta seedha karde to mujhe mat kehna. Mai inhe jitna samjha sakta tha samjha chuka tune dekha hai. Ye tere saath kuchh nahi karenge mai zabaan deta hu. Jaise abhi inhe kuchh nahi karne diya kal bhi nahi karne dunga. Aur nanga to tujhe abhi bhi dekha hai. Chal phir bhi tujhe nange hone ki tension hai to ek baar baat karta hu inse.
Lalu wapas un teeno se mukjatib hua.
Lalu: Dekho ye mujra karne ko tayar hai par kapde utarne me nanga hone ise dikkat hai.
Kundan: Nahi nahi nahi ye to karna hi padega nahi to phir wo mujra kaha reh jaega. Agar baat sirf dance dekhne ki hi hai to pure saal tv me kai dance show aate rehte hai wo dekh lenge. Apne ko mujra dekhne ka hai mujra, Nanga wala mujra jisme naachne wali hila hila kar apne doodh hilati hai apni gaand dikhati hai wo wala mujra. Agar ise chalta hai to theek warna abhi sari haweli ko yahi ikattha karte hai.
Lalu: Dekh samjha kar pehli baar hai uska thoda to samjho tum log.
Kundan Dev Pratap apas me baat karte hue: Chal theek hai tu apun ka bhai hai to sirf tere liye ise pura nanga nahi karenge apni jannat ka khazana dhaki reh ye. Yani apni chut chaddi nahi utarwaenge iski par baaki saare kapde utarne honge ek ek karke. Par hum ise ye choot muft me nahi denge iske badle me ise bhi kuchh karna hoga.
Lalu: Kya
Kundan: Ise hum teeno ko daru pilani hogi wo bhi humare style me.
Lalu: Aue ye tumhara style kya hai.
Kundan: Saari baate yahi jaan loge to kal ke liye kya chhodoge, kuchh baate kal ke liye bhi chhod do. Pooch lo apni item se manjoor hai ye ya bulae haweli walo ko yaha.



Lalu phir shabana se mukhatib hua.
Lalu: Tune sun liya na inki baate chal tujhe nanga hone ki tension thi to wo bhi baat karli tujhe chaddi nahi utarni hogi. Ab jada mat soch maan ja bharosa kar mujh mai bhi rahunga waha tere saath mere rehte ye tere saath kuchh nahi kar paenge.
Shabana ke paas kuchh kehne ko bacha hi nahi sare faisle to lalu aur uske dosto ne apas me milkar hi kar liye the.
Lalu: Philhaal tu apne kamre me ja kal dekhte hai kya karna hai tujhe Chandni ke paas kis tarah le jana hai. Jada tension mat le sara tension mujh par chhod de.



Lalu shabana ko lekar darwaaze tak aya aur darwaaza khol diya. Shabana chupachap kamre se nikal kar apne kamre ki taraf chal di. Sab taraf sannata tha sab so chuke the. Wo apne kamre tak pahuchi usne darwaaze ko halka sa dhakka diya hi tha ki darwaaza khul gaya. Andar neha bistar par nahi thi. Neha ko bistar par na pakar shabana ne use awaaz lagai. Andar bathroom me us gehri chudai ke baad wahi par nangi leti shabna ki awaaz sun kar hadbada kar uth baithi. Itni der me uska dard bhi kuchh kum ho gaya tha. Neha ne wahi bathroom me tangj towel se khud ko pochha aur wahi towel lapet kar bahar aa gai.



Neha ko yu raat ke 3 baje bathroom se nahakar nikalta dekh shabana bhi hairaan thi.
Shabana: Tu is waqt naha rahi thi.
Neha: Ha wo garmi lag rahi thi to socha naha lu.

Neha Shabana dono kapde change karke bistar par ek doosre ki taraf peeth karke let gae kyuki wo dono apne man ke bhav ek doosre ko nahi dikhana chahte the.
Neha: Shabana di kaisa raha sab.
Shabana: Neha philhaal mai bahut thak gai hu is baare me kal baat kare.
Neha: Ha thak to waise mai bhi bahut gai hu chaliye kal baat karte hai phir.
Shabana: Tu to yahi kamre leti thi tu kisme thak gai.
Neha ne man me socha: Ab kya batau mai inhe mai kis cheez me thak gai. Apke dhamakedaar update ko takkar dene ke liye ek dhamakedaar performance wala update diya tha par sala censor board ne us par kaichi chala di. Meri to is waqt wo halat hai ki KHAYA PIYA KUCHH NAHI AUR GILAAS TODA BARAH ANA. Dhang se chalne ki halat me bhi nahi rahi aur Update bhi kaat peet diya gaya. (KHAIR MERE READERS JINHONE MERA UPDATE PADA THA WO TO JANTE HI HAI KI MAI KYU THAKI HU. Mai un bijli ke jhatko aur us bade wale Dildo ki baat kar rahi hu kya aap log bhi kuchh bhi sochte rehte ho).



Neha: Kuchh nahi wo apke jaane ke baad thoda yoga exercise karli thi usi wajah se thak gai thi.
Shabana:Achha chalo theek hai so jao kal baat karte hai. Good night
Neha: Ok Good night

Unhe nahi pata tha ki unhone apne pichhle do updates kitne logo ki night Good ki thi. Kitne lundo ne unke updates padke apna dahi bahar nikala hoga. Agar un Lundo ki zaban hoti to unke pichhle se aseem santushti paane ke baad unke andar se bus yahi awaaz aati.

LUNDO KI DUAE LETI JAA
JAA TUJHKO MAST CHUDAI MILE
TERI CHUT KA BHOSDA BAN JAE
AUR PEECHE SE GAAND MARAI MILE

Un dono ne ek doosre ko good night to keh diya par wo dono hi apne apne vicharo me khoi thi. Neha jaha us Stranger ke baare me soch rahi thi jo kuchh uske saath hua uske baare me soch rahi thi wahi Shabana apne kal ke aane wale din ke baare me soch rahi thi kal ke mujre ke baare me soch rahi thi dhamu se jo kahani shuru hui thi wo Lalu se hote hue ab use teeno dosto tak pahuch gai thi is baare me soch rahi thi. Pata nahi aane wala din unhe aur kya kya dikhane wala tha.

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Bhai kya twist laye ho wah

Abhi is update ka last part post hone wala hai jisme ek aur twist hai.

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Super duper hit update •••••••••

Thanks Baban bro

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Ekdam ek no. Bhai....

Nice update

Another great Update bro...
Keep Updating...

Thanks guys ye Lalu ka update hai aur iska last part abhi post karne wala hu jisme lalu ka asli rang saamne aaega.

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Awesome ! Very much well thought writing.

yr): Superb update...??? Please give long updates...this one is my  favourite story...and your content writing skills are Amazing...keep writing my friend...!!! Waiting for the next huge update....?

Thanks Raj and Ghosthunter ye update ek normal simple update tha jo short hi tha. Thanks for ur boostup.

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Doosri taraf shabana ke jaane ke baad Lalu ke kamre me

Shabana ke nikalne ke baad lalu jaise hi darwaaze ki kundi lagakar wapas palta uske teeno dost gayab the, usne nazre neeche karke dekha to teeno uske pairo me sir jhukae baithe the.



Lalu: Abe ab ye kya naya drama hai.
Dev: Apka aashirwaad le rahe hai Mahaprabhu. Aap mahan ho shaktimaan ho, Aap gyani hi antaryaami ho, Mai to kehta hu aap purush hi nahi ho Mahapurush ho Mahapurush.
Lalu: Drama band karo aur chupchap khade ho.
Teeno uth kar khade ho gae.
Lalu: Aur dhyaan rahe mai usse pyar karta hu mai tum teeno ko uske saath kuchh nahi karne doonga.
Kamre me achanak se sannata chha gaya Lalu gusse me unhe ghoor raha tha aur wo teeno ek doosre ka muh taak rahe the. Do minute waha aise hi khamoshi chhai rahi phir achanak wo charo khilkhila kar has pade. Charo pet pakad kar hase ja rahe the.



Dev: Hahahaha Sale ye kya tha bhai.
Pratap: Hehehebehe Bhai bande ne itni zabardst acting kari ki ek baar to mujhe bhi lagne laga ki lagta hai apna Lalu sudhar gaya hai.
Dev: Hahahaba Bhai wo kya bola tha isne ma isse pyar karne laga hu aur mere rehte tum log ise kuchh nahi kar sakte. Bhai kya sach me pyar karne laga hai use.
Lalu: Agar mai life me ek ladki ko pyar karunga to bakiyo ka kya hoga baki bura nahi maan jaegi.



Dev: Hahahaha Bhai pata readers ne to tujhe Dev manus maan liya tha. Bawal mach gaya tha is story me ki is story ka ek iklauta villan bhi sudhar gaya achha ban gaya. Pasand karne lage the wo tujhe.
Lalu: Itna hi pasand aa gaya hu mai unhe to mera Lund muh me le le.
Kundan: Ab tu apne yaar ki tarah baat kar raha hai.



Lalu: Are hum to is kadar bigde hai ki hume sudharne wale khud bigad jaenge. MAI WO DOODH NAHI HU JISE LOG JAB CHAHE EK NAYA ROOP DE DE KABHI KHOYA KABHI PANEER KABHI MAKKHAN KABHI LASSI, MAI TO WO EK CHAMMACH DAHI HU JO KISI DOODH KE BHARE BHAGAUNE ME GIR JAE TO POORA DOODH FAAD KAR APNE JAISA BANA DE.



Kundan: Par bhai phir ye sab tha kya tune kyu sudharne ka drama kara.
Pratap: Ha ye hum bhi janna chahte hai aur saare readers bhi.
Dev: Hmm pehle tune hume yaha se bheja aur kaha ki kuchh der baad tu jab hume misscall de tab hum yaha aa jae aur yaha akar ye sab drama kare. Par kyu tujhe uske saamne achha banne ki kya zarurat thi wo to waise bhi tere saamne ghutno par thi tu jo kehta wo karti phir ye sab.

Lalu: Abe chutiyo tum logo ne mere saath itni aurate chodi hai phir bhi aaj tak tum kisi aurat ko samajh nahi pae. Hum zor zabardsti karke blackmail karke kisi aurat ke tan ko to chudai ke liye majbbor kar sakte hai par uske man ko nahi. Aur chudai ka asli maza tab hi milta hai jab usme tan aur man dono ki sehmati ho. Tum logo ko pata hai kal raat jab maine uska bang kara to mai chahta to wahi uski chudai kar sakta tha par maine nahi ki aaj subah jab maine uske upar moota usse zabardasti apna lund chuswaya tab bhi mujhe wo maza nahi aya jo maza mujhe is baar ki chudai me mila kyuki is baar wo tan aur man dono se mujhse chudi hai. Tum logo ko pata hai aaj usne khud mere chehre ko apne mummo par dabaya khud apni marzi se apne mummy mujhse chuswae, khud apna burkha upar karke mujhs apni gaand par mutwaya aur sabse badi baat khud se apni marzi se nangi hokar mere lund par akar bathi aur uchhal uchhal kar mera lund apni chut me liya mai bus badshaaho ki tarah uske neeche leta raha aur phir puri tarah santusht hokar mere seene par sir rakh kar so gai. Ab jara socho kya agar mai use majboor karke use chodta to kya mujhe chudai ka wo maza milta jo abhi mila.

Dev: Ha baat to teri sahi hai maza to aurat ko uski marzi se chodne me hi hai par phir tune hume wapas kyu bulaya aur usko chod lene ke baad ye sab acting karne ki wajah. Chudai to tu kar hi chuka tha phir ab uske saamne achha banne ki kya zarurat thi.
Lalu: Tum logo ne kabhi shikaar kara hai pata hai shikaar karne ka asli maza kab ata hai shikaar ko bhaga bhaga kar uska shikaar karne me. Pehle use ye yakeen dilaya jae ki uski jaan bach sakti hai aur jab use yakeen ho jae ki wo safe hai tab uska shikaar karne ka. Maine bhi use yakeen dilaya hai ki mai use bacha lunga aur jab use mujh par yakeen ho jaega mai uske pairo tale ki zameen kheech lunga. Maine uske aansoo isliye pochhe hai taki use isse bhi jada buri tarah rula saku.



Ek baar phir kamre me sannata chha gaya. Lalu ki ye soch ye vikrit mansikta ko dekh uske dosto ko bhi dar lagne laga tha.
Pratap: Bhai tu use itna jada torcher kar raha hai tujhe dar nahi lagta ki kahi usne kuchh kar liya to.
Lalu: Karti hai to kar le mujhe na uske jeene se farq padta hai na uske marne se. Pata hai kyu, kyuki mai Insaan nahi hu mai Haiwaan hu. Aur jin logo ko lagta hai ki Haiwaan sudhar sakta hai achha ban sakta hai unki soch ko ikkis topo ki salami. Aur waise bhi tum logo ne kaha tha na ki kharbuza katega to sabme batega to kal raat ye kharbuza tum logo ka. Kal mai uske aur tum logo ke beech nahi aaunga tum log jo chahe uske saath kar sakte ho. Bus dhyan rahe uske cheekhne ki awaaze rukni nahi chahiye. Aur ha us nachaniya Chandni ko bol dena kal tayar rahe kal use ek shareef zaheen aurat ko ek pakki rundi banana hai.



Lalu: Sabke saamne jhapad mara tha na usne mujhe wo jhapad use kitna menhga padega is baat ka use andaaza bhi nahi hai. KUCH BHI KARNE KA THA RE SINGHAM JAIKANT SHIKDE KA EGO HURT NAHI KARNA THA. Ab kal raat wo sali roegi cheekhegi chillaegi aur hum sab karenge.
O SAKI SAKI RE SAKI SAKI
AA PAAS AA REH NA JAE KOI KHWAHISH BAAKI



Shabana beshak kal ke bare soch kar thoda chintit thi par lalu ke is badle hue roop ne kahi na kahi uske man me asha ki ek umeed bhi jaga di thi, use lagne laga tha ki shayad sach me lalu ke dil me uske liye ek soft corner ban gaya hai. Aur wo sach me use kuchh nahi hone dega. Shabana ka dil bada masoom tha aur isi maoomiyat ki wajah se wo sharafat ka naqaab ke peeche chhupe lalu ke haiwaani chehre ko nahi dekh pa rahi. Shabana thoda hi sahi par lalu par bharosa karne lagi thi use andaaz bhi nahi tha ki usi Lalu ne uske liye kitni khaufnaak yojna bana rakhi hai. Logo par badi jaldi bharosa kar lene wali masoosm Shabana Khan ka kal jeewan ki kathor sachhai se saamna hone wala tha ki aurat ko bus ek upbhog ki cheez aur apne pair ki jooti samajhne wale vikrot mansikta wale insaan ki njyat aur fitrat itni asaani se nahi badalti aur aise logo par kabhi bharosa nahi kiya ja sakta.



Ab tak shabana ka har tarah se shoshan karne wale Lalu ne ab Shabana ko tashtari me saja kar apne dosto ke saamne paros diya tha. Lalu ne Shabana ke GangBang ki puri rooprekha tayar karli thi ab dekhna ye tha ki is yojna ko wo shatir shikaari kis tarah amal me lata hai aur kya shabana ek baar phir khud par hone wale is shareerik aur mansik aghaat ko bardasht kar paegi. In sabhi sawalo ka jawab is kahani saatve din me milne wala tha.