[Logan555]

Bahut hi badhiya update

Shukriya bhai is feedback ke liye.

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From last 6 years I am using xossip bahut sare writers ko pada he par isase achchha update aaj tak nahi mila thank you so much for this update

Thank u so much bro bahut bada feedback hai ye mere liye. Mai bhi koshish karunga ki aage bhi kahanai ke ye rhytham bana rahe.

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Nice Update Bro....
Aap Isme Bestiality Ko add karoge wo bhi BDSM k sath ye Mene kabhi socha hi nahi tha...
Hats up to you....
Very Erotic Update Bro....
Next Aarti/Sobha/Vineeta/Neetu kiska update doge ye dekhna hai...
Waiting for your next update...

Thank u so much bro
Bestiality kya hota hai ye bata de.
Ha maine BDSM objects par zaroor thoda waqt diya aur jo objects yaha neha aur is update ko suit karte wo use kare use to mai aur objects bhi karna chahta tha par usse update jada lumba ho jata.
Nexe update Aarti than Vineeta than Garima than Neetu ka update hoga.

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ufffff   kia chudai hy ik dog se  kia wo kutty ky bachon ki maa  bhi bn skti hy  think it

Hahaha Dhanyawaad sheri ab ye to ek medical baat hai logicaly to ban sakti hai ab medicaly ban sakti hai ki nahi ye to doctor hi bata sakta hai. Aur agar bachha hoga to kaisa hoga Werewolf type to nahi hoga.

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Bhai sbke links bhej do meri mail ? hai [email protected] aur shirazsgh;.
Thnx .

Bhai mere paas to inke link nahi hai yaha par stories in pdf format karke ek thread hai waha se apko inke link mil sakte hai.

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Yr logan is a grt writer.just enjoy their story.logan sir u r awsm .i luv u

Thanks u so much bro. Bus aap readers ka pyar hi mujhe aur behtar update dene ke liye protsahit karta hai. Thank u so much

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Ohhh my god what a story!! Mujhe ye story ka har sex scene accha laga hai. But pichle 2 updates iss story ko alag hi level par le gaye hai. You are superb writer.

Thank u bro thanks for liking my story. Maine bhi koshish ki hai ki story ka har sex scene ek doosre se alag rakhu, story ka har ek sex scene padkar reader ko ye na lage ki aisa scene wo story me pehle bhi pad chuka hai. Aur pichhle update story ke do main kirdaro ke defloration updates the,  shabana jiska shuddh rareeke se defloration hua aur neha ne bhi jis level tak apne andar liya wo uske liye defloration se kum nahi tha aur jiske saath kjta wo bhi uske liye first time experience tha aur gaanv me to waise bhi uski pehli chudai thi. Ab story ke saat kirdaro me se 4 kirdaar yaha village ceremony me chudai karwa chuke hai Garima-Hariya/ Shobha-Malkhan/ Shabana-Lalu/ Neha-Richard. Ab Vineeta Neetu bhi jald khulenge. And thanks for ur appreciation.

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Readers se meri ek request hai ki mujhe hi nahi balki sab writers jinki story aap padte ho pasand karte ho unhe Ratings do. Iske liye apko unki profile par jakar Reputation wale colum me Rate par click karke aap Rating Positive Neutra ya Negative de sakte hai.

Agar apko story ki kai post achhi lagti hai to aap uske neeche diye gae Rate ke option se bhi us post ko alag se ratings bhi de sakte hai. Isse hume pata chalta rehta hai ki humari story ki kis post ko positive respone mil raha kab negative. Isliye comment ke sath kabhi kabhar waqt nikal Ratings bhi de diya kare. Jo bhi post achhi lage use Rate jaroor kare.

Writer ko Rating dene ke liye maine neeche ek pic upload kari hai jaha apko Reputation wale colum me Rate ka option dikh raha hoga. Ye Rating uski overaal story par jati hai.

To is tarah aap do tarah se Rate kar sakte hai ek kisi post ko aur doosre writer ko uski profile par jakar.



Thank You

[Logan555]

Logan bhai... this is my first post on xossipy. And ye post ke liye  mujhe aapki writing skills ne majboor kar diya  yr): You have got a great variety of characters. My personal favourite is Vineeta & Lakhan’s story. Ek request pls focus more on Vineeta’s story. Bahut Dino se koi update nahi aaya.

Oh thank u so much bro and i feel very proud ki meri writing ne kabhi post na karne wale kisi shaksha ko comment karne ko majboor kar diya. Ha maine har kirdaar ka charectar alag rakhne ki koshish ki hai. Vineeta Lakhan mere bhi favourite  hai haa ab unka hi update  bana raha hu.

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Idhar apni taraf baad rahe toofan se bekhabar aarti haweli ki taraf aa rahi thi aur vo saya uske saath-saath chal raha tha use aabhaas ho rahaa thaa abhay ke aane kaa par us rudraksha jo aarti ke paas tha ke prabhav ke karan vo kuchh nahi kar paa raha tha. Achanak us sannaate ko cheerti kuchh aawaaze aarti ko sunaai di vo aawaaze pal pal kareeb aati jaa rahi thi aur saaf hoti jaa rahi thi. Wo kutto ke bhaukne ki aawaaze thi. Kutto ke jhund usi taraf daudaa chala aa raha tha. Isse pahle aarti kuchh samajhti 20 - 25 jungli kutte uske saamne khade the. Aarti ki to sitti pitti gum ho chuki thi use apni maut saamne najar aa rahi thi aur vo bhi hi ghinauni aur dardnaak maut.



Aarti ne sarpat waha se bhagna shuru kar diya par kutto ko apnaa shikaar saamne najar aa raha tha kutte uske peechhe daud pade. Aarti bhage jaa rahi thi tej aur tej par kutte uske kareeb aate jaa rahe the achaanak aarti kaa pair ek ped ki jad se takraya aur aarti muh ke bal jameen par giri uske haath pair me kafi chot aai. Usse khada bhi nahi hua jaa raha tha kutte uske ekdum kareeb aa gaye aur use chaaro taraf se gher liya. Aarti aur uski maut ke beech bus chand kadmo ka fasla tha, vo jungli kutte uske shareer ko noch noch kar khaa jaane ko utaavle the.



Unme se do kutto ne aage baad kar aarti ke upar chhalang laga di. Aarti ne dar ke mare apna haath chehre ke aage kar liya par kuchh pal beet jaane ke baad bhi vo kutte aarti tak nahi pahunche. Darte darte aarti ne apne chehre se haath hataya aur saamne ka driashya dekhkar aarti ki aankhe phati ki phati rah gayi. Saamne vo dono kutte hawa me tange the jaise kisine unhe hawa me pakad liya ho unhe rok liya ho par rokne wala koi waha dikhai nahi de raha tha. Us sae ne un kutto ko beech me hi rok liyaa tha usne un kutto ke sir apas me takrae aur ghumakar unhe door fenk diya. Baaki kutte bhi shaant ho gaye apne saathiyo kaa ye haal dekhkar.

Aarti jise bhoot pret me vishwas nahi tha par ab use bhi aghori ki baato par yakeen ho raha tha ki sach me uske ird-gird koi upri saya hai. Usne turant apni jeb me rakha aghori kaa diya rudraksha nikal liya aur use aage kar diya. Us rudraksha ki oot me aarti ko vo saya saaf nazar aa raha tha jaise hawa me kisi aadmi ki aakriti si ubhar aai ho jo use hi dekh rahi ho.



Wo saya uski taraf bad raha tha aarti to dar ke mare paseene paseene ho gayi thi uske man se jungli kutto kaa dar to kahi kho gaya aur us saae kaa dar uske dilo dimaag par haavi ho gaya tha.
Wo saaya haatho ke ishare se aarti ko na darne ke ishare kar raha thaa par aarti par to dar is kadar hawi ho gayaa thaa ki use uske ishaare samajh hi nahi aa rahe the. Use bus vo saya apni taraph badta najar aa rahaa thaa. Aur isi dar aur tanav ki sthiti me aarti ne apne haath me pakda bajrangi rudraksha us saae ki taraph uchhal pheka. Us rudraakshaa se chhute hi us saae ki saari shakti nasht ho gayi vo khichhaa huaa us rudraakshaa ke andar samaa gaya aur usme kaid ho gaya. Jo aarti ka rakshak thaa use hi apnaa bhakshak samajhkar aarti ne khud use us rudraakshaa me kaid kar diya.

Wo saya un bhooke kutto aur aarti ke beeche se hat chukaa tha. Ab unke aur unke shikaar aarti ke beech koi nahi tha. Us saae ke hatte hi ek baar phir vo shikaari kutte laar tapkate hue aarti ki taraph bade. Aarti ne apne andar ki puri taakat ikathaa karke khud ko khada kara aur ek kadam aage badaya hi thaa ki pair ke dard ki wajah se vo ladkhada kar phir giri aur uskaa sir ek patthar se takraya aur aankho ke aage andhera sa chhaane laga vo behoshi ke aagosh me khoti jaa rahi thi aur badi mushkil se aankhe khole un kutto ko apni taraph badtaa huaa dekh rahi thi. Jo use bachaa saktaa thaa use to khud usne rudraakshaa me kaid kar diyaa aur vo khud is halat me nahi thi ki khud ko bachaa sake. Har beette pal ke saath ek dardnaak maut uske kareeb aur kareeb aati jaa rahi thi.



Par vo kehte hai na insaan ko maut tab tak nahi aati jab tak uski maut ki ghadi naa jaae. Achanak se un kutto ke badte hue kadam ruk gae. Us chaand ki roshni me koi aarti ke peechhe aakar khada ho gaya thaa jiski aankho se uthte angaro kaa dar un kutto ki aankho me saaph najar aa raha tha. Adhkhuli aankho se aarti un kutto ko peechhe hatte dekh rahi thi aur ek parchhaai jo jameen par ban rahi thi ko aage badte dekh rahi thi matlab koi uske peechhe thaa par usme itni taakat bhi naa bachi thi ki gardan ghumakar apne pichhe khade shaksha ko dekh sake. 
Behoshi aarti par haavi hoti jaa rahi thi par behosh hone se pehle aarti ne itna hi dekhaa ki kaale libaas me ek shaksha uske aur un kutto ke beech aakar khada ho gayaa thaa uski peeth aarti ki taraph thi is wajah se vo uskaa chehra nahi dekh sakti thi vo koi aur nahi Abhay tha jo aarti aur un kutto ke beech khadaa ho gaya tha.



Un kutto me se ek sabse hattaa kattaa kuttaa abhay par jhapta par abhay ne use beech me hi rok diyaa us kutte ki dekhaa dekhi baaki kutto me bhi josh aa gayaa vo abhay ko ek aam aadmi samajhkar uspar hamla karne ki galti kar baithe. Abhay ki bhaue gusse men tan gayi.
Usne us sabse hatte kaatte kutte ke donon jabdo ko apne haatho se pakad liyaa aur ek jhatke me us kutte ko do hisso me cheer diya. Jin kutto ne abhay ke sharir me daant gadaa die the unkaa shareer mom ki tarah galnaa shuru ho gayaa thaa shayad abhay ke jishm me khoon ki jagah zeher thaa jiske sampark me aate hi vo kutte galte chale gaye baaki bache kutto me ab aage badne ki himmat nahi thi jaise vo samajh gaye the ki vo milakar bhi isse nahi jeet paaenge unhonne ulte paav laut jaane me hi apni bhalaai samjhi. Bache hua kutte palatakar wapas laut gae.

Abhay ab aarti ki taraph paltaa aarti ki palke ab badi mushkil se khul paa rahi thi use uskaa halkaa-halkaa chehraa dikh rahaa tha. Wo aarti ke ekadum kareeb aakar baith gayaa aur uske munh se bus ek shabd niklaa Manjari. Abhay aaj 200 saal ki lumbi judaai ke baad ek baar phir apni manjari ke paas pahunch chukaa thaa. Isi ke saath aarti ki himmat ne uskaa saath chhod diyaa aur wo behosh ho gai. Abhay ne aarti ke chehre ko apne haatho me tham liya.

Abhay- Manjari 200 saal door rahaa hu tujhse par mujhe yakeen thaa ek naa ek din hum phir milenge. Aakhirkar maine tujhe paa hi liya. Socha thaa jab tu mere saamne aaegi to tujhe jaan se maar doonga par kyaa karu tujhse itna pyaar kartaa hu ki tujhe maar bhi nahi sakta. Par ab hamaare beech koi nahi aa paaegaa vo bhi nahi jo khud ko bahut bada star samajhta tha.

Achaanak abhay ki najar kuchh door pade us rudraakshaa par padi aur use uski maujudgi kaa aabhas ho gaya.



Abhay- Saale kayar is rudraakshaa me chhupa baithaa hai. Teri kismat bahut achhi hai jo tu is waqt is rudraakshaa ke andar hai agar bahar hota to tera usse bhi buraa hashra karta jaisa 200 saal pehle karaa tha. Naa tu tab mere aur manjari ke beech aa sakaa thaa aur naa aaj aa paaega.

Abhay ne behosh aarti ke sir par haath rakhaa aur aarti ke dimaag me maujood saari baate abh ke dimaag me aakar lene lagi. Beete dino me aarti ke saath jo kuchh bhi huaa vo abhay ko pataa chalta chalaa gaya.

Abhay- Ab tere aur mere beech koi nahi aaega jo aa saktaa thaa use to tune khud kaid kar diyaa aur tere dimaag se vo saari yaade main mitaa doonga jo tujhe mujhse door kare. Jo galti 200 saal pahle maine kari thi wo is baar nahi hogi tujhe mujhse muhobbat karni hi hogi apni marji yaa binaa marji ke.

Abhay ne aarti ko apni baaho me uthaa liya. Aarti ka behosh badan abhay ki khoon se sani baaho me jhool gaya. Abhay us chaandni raat me aarti ko baaho me bhare hue waapas us nadi ke kinaare par aa pahuncha.



Abh- Is kahani kaa ant Wahi se hoga jaha se is kahaani ki shuruaat hui thi usi jagah se jaha tune mujhe dhokhaa diyaa wahi tu ek baar phir meri dulhan banegi phir ek baar hamaari suhaag ki sej sajegi aur is baar hamaari suhaagraat mukammal roop legi. Aur iske lie hame is nadi ke paar jaanaa hoga.

Abhay aarti ko apni baaho me bhare ek baar phir tej bahaav se behti us nadi ko chalte-chalte yu paar kar gayaa jaise vo zameen par chal rahaa ho. Aarti ko lekar abhay usi jagah aa gayaa jaha barso pehle uski suhaagraat adhoori reh gayi thi usi khandhar ke saamne jaha 200 saal se soya hua tha. Abhay ki aankho ke ek ishaare me vo khandahar ek aalishaan haweli me tabdeel ho gaya.

Abhay- Duniya ke lie ye aaj bhi ek khandahar hi hai koi ise dekhega to use ye khandahar dikhegaa par jab tu jaagegi tab tujhe ye tere sapno kaa mahal nazar aaegaa. Ab humaare grihapravesh kaa waqt aa gaya hai barso pehle bhi humne yuhi saath-saath grihapravesh kara thaa aaj phir ek baar hum saath-saath grihapravesh karnege.

Abhay ki aankho ke ek ishaare me us haweli ke gate par chaawal bhara ek kalash rakh gaya. Abhay ne aarti ke pairo ki halki si thonkar us kalash me maari aur aarti ko lekar us khandahar ke andar aa gayaa aur aarti ko laakar usi patthar ke bisraar par litaa diyaa jahaan garimaa aur hariyaa ke sambhog ke baad abhay jagaa tha. Aarti ab bhi behosh thi aur abhay dwara uske dimaag ke saath kie gaye khilvaad ki wajah se jaldi jaldaa uske hosh me aane ki ummeed kum thi. Abhay ne aarti ki choto par apnaa haath phiraya aur aarti ke haath pair sir par lage ghaav khud baa khud bhar gaye par behosh vo ab bhi thi. Abhay vahi aarti ke sirhaane par baith gayaa aur use nihaarne laga.



Idhar aarti puri tarah se abhay ke changul me phas chuki thi kyaa sambandh thaa aarti aur abhay kaa kyo maar diyaa thaa aarti ne us insaan ko jo use is kadar deewano ki tarah chahta thaa aur marne ke baad bhi abhay itni shaktiyo ke saath apne sharir ke saath wapas kaise aa gayaa thaa uskaa shareer barso dafan rahne ke baad bhi galaa kyo nahi kaun thaa ye abhay usse bhi badaa sawaal thaa kyaa thaa ye abhay? aur in saare sawaalon kaa jawaab nadi ke us paar us bajarangi rudraakshaa me kaid thaa jisme kaid thaa is aarti abhay ki kahaani kaa teesraa aur sabse eham kirdaar jo us rudraakshaa ki kaid se aajaad hone ke lie chhatpataa rahaa tha. Kyaa sambandh thaa uskaa aarti aur abhay se kyo abhay usse itni nafrat kartaa thaa kyaa huaa 200 saal pahle in sawaalon ke javaab jald hi ek toofaan ki shakal me duniyaa ke saamne aane waale the. Ek mahayuddh ki rooprekha taiyaar ho chuki thi bas dekhnaa ye thaa ki isme vijay kise milti hai abhi to isme ye bhi tay nahi thi ki is kahaani kaa naayak kaun thaa aur khalnaayak kaun.



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Waiting for my favourite vineetha ka update

Jabardast kahani.update dere rahiye.thanks

Ab agla update vineeta ka hi hoga.

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zabardast vivran....ati uttam....agle bhaag ka intezaar

Thaks bro halaki ye xossip bacha hua part tha par yaha nahi kara tha.

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Nice Update Bro...
Dekhte hain aage kya hota hai Aarti k sath...

Thanks bro xossip par aarti ki story beech me dene wala tha par ab kahani ke aakhri din yani dusve din karunga.

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Why are you repeating the story of previous night?  Focused  on Neha so much that now you are repeating Aarti's story and probably going to repeat Neetu's also. So disgusting.

Bhai reapeat nahi kara ye xossip par 5th night ka update tha par yaha nahi,  yaha ye update diya hi nahi tha aarti ka pichhla update 72 page hai ek baar pad le ye ussi se aage ka update hai. Aur neha ka update to de chuka wo khatam bhi ho gaya ab usme aur kya karta. Aapne ye update xossip par pada hoga kyuki yaha to ab tak ye diya hi nahi gaya. And yes Neetu ka update bhi doonga kyuki waha par logo ne demand ki thi aarti ki story ka flashback beech me na aae isiliye use ek din bada diya. Aap apne hisab se dekh rahe hai kyuki aap ye update xossip par pad chuke hai par jo readers yahi pad rahe unke liye to ye naya hai to yaha ye update kaise hata deta. Its not disgusting its commonsense. Disgusting kehne se pehle check to karle PAGE 72.

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They demanded not to interrupt by any flashback and you change the number of night only. Such a nice exhibition of common sense.

Bhai isse jada mai samjha nahi sakta. Maine ab tak sirf wahi updates diye hai jo maine xossip band hone se pehle waha diye the. Ab agar tumne ye updates waha pade the to ye tumhare liye repetation hue na bakiyo ke liye to nahi. To meri nazar me to ye repetation nahi hai ha agar is site par mai ye update de chuka hu to wo page batao jaha pehle maine ye update diya hai. Jaise maine bataya ki Aarti ka pichla update page 72 hai usse aage ka maine ab diya. Ab meri nazar me me to ye disgustung nahi hai ab agar tumhe disgusting lagta hai to mai isme kuchh nahi kar sakta.

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Bhai ab tum story apne hisab se nahi likh rahe ho is liye padhne me jiyada maja nahi araha, xossip site pe jise khud ki marji se likhte the vese nahi likh rahe ho.

Hum tumhari writing skill aur tumhare vicharo vali story padhne aate he,  na ki kisi Reader ki suggestion vali story. Ager kisi Reader ko bahut echa ho ki ye story uske vichar ke hisab chale to unse gujaris he ki vo khud story likhe. Ager unki story pasand aayi to jarur padhuga, lekin kisi ki achi khasi story  vat mat lagavo.

Logon bhai tumne jo story me do changes kiye vo pasand nahi aaye. Ek to garima aur chhotu ki story reader ke hisab se likhi and lalu ka character acha bana diya.

I hope tumhari story pehle ki tarha sab se different hi rahe.

Oh bhai bade dino baad tumhara comment aya maine to samjha ki jin do readers ko maine apni story ka part banaya wo dono hi alag ho gae. Abhay raichand ka to koi ata pata nahi hai. Bhai mai reader ka hisab bhi dekh raha hu aur apna hisab bhi. Aur pichhle do update shabana aur neha ke to logo ne bahut pasand kare unme tumhe maza nahi aya.

Bhai mai story to puri apne dimag me pehle hi likh chuka hu ga reader agar kuchh demand karte hai to hske hisab se halka fulka change kar deta hu.

Ab jaise do changes ki baat kari ek jeetu wala waha tumne chhotu likha wo koi bahut bada change nahi hai wo kewal ek scene tha jaha maine sex socha tha reader ne mana kara to orgasm scene bana diya par kirdaar kahi nahi gae garima bhi wahi hai jeetu bhi. Balki hariya aur garima ka bhi pehle orgasm hua tha phir sex wahi yaha ho jaega. So wo koi itni badi baat nahi thi.

And doosra lalu ka charectar bhai to tumne to story xosip se padi hai aur Lalu ko bhi achhe se jante ho. Aur agar us update ki ye line tum dhyan se pado to is baat ka jawab Lalu ne khud de diya tha.

Lalu: Kya soch rahi hai ki kahi mai tujhe koi galat goli to nahi khila raha ye soch rahi hai. Zeher to dunga nahi tujhe maar kar mujhe kya mil jaega aur anshe ki goli khilakar tere sath kuchh karnenki mujhe zarurat nahi kyuki ye tu bhi janti hai ki agar mai chahu to tere hosho hawaas me bhi tere sath teri marzi ke bina bhi kuchh bhi kar sakta hu aur ye tune kal raat hi dekh liya tha to tujhe nashe ki goli kyu khilaunga. WO TO STORY KE KUCHH DARIYADIL READERS KO TERI BARBAAD HALAT PAR KUCHH JADA HI TARAS AA GAYA AUR UNHONE WRITER SE REQUEST KARI KI TUJHE AUR ZALEEL NA KARA JAE AUR APNA WRITER BHI PIGHAL GAYA AUR APUN KA STYLE HI BADAL KAR RAKH DALA. Par agar mera ye badla hua roop samajh nahi aa raha hai to wapas kal raat wala lalu bhi ban sakta hu.

So mujh par nahi to Lalu par bharosa rakho wo utna bhi seedha nahi jitna dikh raha hai bus kum shabdo me jada samjho. Lalu is the most Disgusting Charectar of this story. Ye bhi uska bus ek naya shade hai.

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HAR KAAM KIYA MAINE USKI KHUSHI KE LIE
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Kya likhte ho bhai dil jeet liya.m
Bht hard bht hard bhai ??

Ha ha ha pasand aaya.

Tumne ye update xossip par nahi pada tha waha bhi ye dala tha. Xossip band hone ke baad yaha dubara dala hai to repetative hai. Shaayad tumne yaha pehli bar pada hai tabhi tumhe repatative nahi laga.

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Bhai neeta ka kch likho

Bhai Neeta nai neetu bhai tum ye story xossip se pad rahe ho ya xossipy kyuki neetu ka next update jo hai wo xossip par pehle post ho chuka hai to kuchh ke liye wo purana update hoga par aarti ki story ka important hine ke karan yaha ke nae readers ke liye naya hoga so post karna jaroori hai to kuchh log kagenge mai fool bana raha purana update post karke..

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Then I was not talking about repetition. I was talking about your strategy to match the people's demand of going to flashback one day later. What a cunning brain!! Almighty give you writing power to write well and a brain to make people fool. I know it is a complete waste of time to say you anything.  You are the most right person, what you think, what you do all are right, we readers don't have anything to say unless praising you. Almost two years, Aarti-Neetu story still not in flow and now you are delaying one day and if anyone say anything then - "mai isme kuchh nahi kar sakta".

Firstly thanks for the compliment about my brain. And almighty give u also writing power i see ur bengali story of seven page but cant say u r making fool of ur readers or not becoze i dont know bengali.

Now the flashback u r talking about,  i not started it yet. This update is not a flashback. Its just a normal update if u think its a flashback its up u. Falshback means Abhay past story of his killing not means this. And when that story comes all other story paused becoz  Abhay story is from different time era. Thats the reason to make it seperate from other stories and take it to last day. Thats why i take this update to day 6 rather than day 5.

If now u understand what i am saying than its ok otherwise i also think its a waste of time to tell you anything. Becoz before this u commented on this thread on 21dec2018 and 1 may 2019 and both the times u only commenting on to leave that story what i already written on xossip becoz u already read that on xossip. But my thinking is differ becoz here are so many readers who first time join my story on xossipy thats why acc to me give them a short briefing is important. I cant take decison according  to just one reader.

And prasing line what u r talking about firstly check u never ever gave any prasing comment on this thread. Only said two times to start the story where i leave on xossip. So dont say anything about prasing u never comment on shabana u never comment on neha u never comment on vineeta or garima but when i gave a update from xossip u critisizing it.

And jo baat tumne readers par kahi ki we readers dont have anything to say unless prasing me. To for ur kind information maine apne readers ke feedback ko behad seriously liya jeetu aur lalu ke updates uske example hai. But jo tum chahte he wo feedback nahi tha ek personal demand thi ki xossip par story jaha chhodi thi wo chhodo a yaha uske aage se likho kyuki tum wo pad chuke ho. Par jo yaha pehli baar pad rahe hai kya wo readers nahi hai kya mai wo updates unke liye post nahi kar sakta hu. Agar mai ek readers ki demand par wo story chhod du to kya ye unhe fool banana nahi hoga.

And in the last u are talking about two years than i told u yaha maine Dec 18 se likhna shuru kara hai aur 8 months me 100 page tak aa gaya hu. If u think u can write faster than write a story faster. Writer also have a personal life wo har waqt story hi nahi likhta rahega.

Aur rahi pasing ki baat to writer apne khud ke liye story nahi likhta hai readers ke liye likhta hai. Aur maine nahi kaha kisiko ko sirf mujhe prasie kro hamesha ye kaha ki comment karo aur har reader ke comment ka usiki bhasha me jawab bhi diya. Tumhare bhi har comment ka jawab diya hai. Agar readers ne kuchh changement ki request kari to pura bana banaya update delete karke unke hisab se upate bhi banaya.

I think maine tumhe achhe se khulkar samjha diya hai aur rahi xossip ki story ki baat to ha mai wo neetu wala update bhi dalunga kyuki wo ek imp update tha jise maine rok kar rakha tha. Agar waha bhi tun fool bano to tum use bina pade paas it away kar dena.

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