Adultery மல்லி என் மனைவி

[oxy.raj]

5 mani kalaila endhirichu kadhai eludhuvom nu ukkandha ippadi feedback.
solradhellam solitu hurt avadhinag bro maadhiri pesitu poidringa easya

but let me also post this. 
pudichavanga padinga, pudikadhavanga vidunga. 

idhula naan purinjittadhu ennana 
nennga edhirpakra maadhiri kadhai ponaa naan brilliant en character brilliant, nice story 
neenga edhirpaakadha direction la ponaa, weak character, dummy piece. 

rajeev dummy piecena avan ivalo dhooram vandhuruka mudiyadhu. his game is long nu soliten, trust panna mudiyadhavana indha point laye, avalod dhan story is over nu close panikonga. idhuke travel panna mudiyadhavanga nichayama last few episodes othuka poradhu illa. 

better you guys can drop from this story at this point. 

en mind la conceieve aana story post paniitu i will jump to next. When i found time like this.

Your dedication to this story is appreciated, truly. Waking up at 5 a.m. and making time to write despite everything else you have going on takes real effort, and I respect the time, thought, and hard work you put into it.

I never intended to hurt you or dismiss your efforts. My feedback was only about the character’s choices and how they came across to me at this point in the story—not a judgment of your writing or dedication. It wasn’t about wanting the story to go exactly the way I expected, either.
I understand that you have a bigger picture in mind and that Rajeev’s journey is still unfolding. I’m sorry if my wording felt harsh or personal. Thank you for sharing the story with us.