Adultery மல்லி என் மனைவி

[BlackSpirit]

Meantime lets have a small fun feedback. 

How do you want the story to get a closure ? or what do you wish :)

[Please avoid extreme thing, yes they will pay for their act, but my stories i prefer to end with a more positieve... even if that is sexual..or quite contradicting to star. Yup i wont split them:D ... but we have 4 people here., 3 main figures.   the characters are human first, lets just wish  them happiness and peace at the end for them :) ]

Don't take it as Criticism you spoiled Mali character in btwn the story..
You shown her as an intelligent girl but in the mid she is projected as a clown & fool of the story..!

Make her as Intelligent girl the story should be end up with her decision only whether it cruel or tarnish end but what i want is...

Rajeev Punishment on Mali is to be giving punishment for Gowtham in Mali her own hand ( Like choosing love or friendship ) I hope that will make judgement for her character.. she should comes out of clownism thing / fool things..

Anyway What ever you write but don't spoil Mali character again for the sake of the story. Don't do that.!