13-09-2026, 06:00 PM
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(13-09-2026, 05:14 PM)sanju4x Wrote: When Malli and Gautham get hurt, I want them to get hurt 100 times more than Rajeev.
Malli for knowingly letting her marriage ruin while dumbly believing her marriage was still fine, and Gautham for thinking he can have his way.
This is the problem with your stories bro.
You pull us deep into it and make us develop strong perspectives on the characters. It is almost always the complexity of a marriage/couple who shouldn't have had their marriage bothered but then get on a bad journey to find their bond stronger.
May he prove me wrong in this story, will see!!
You are an amazing writer, but one needs a strong heart to read your stories, when one look at it as something beyond a sex story, because there is serious complexities that you beautifully write.
Thank you for being a great writer this platform deserves!
True, Heygiwriter seems somewhat naïve when it comes to portraying a husband’s revenge. I haven’t really seen this angle explored in his earlier stories here.
He is undoubtedly an amazing writer, but revenge may not be his strongest area and not his cup of tea. I get the sense that he is more drawn to the emotional fallout of cheating than to plotting calculated retaliation. Perhaps he is trying to make a point against illicit relationships, especially when so many writers on Xossipy tend to glorify or boast about them.
What stands out is that, in most cheating stories, we rarely get to understand the perspective of the person being betrayed. The focus is usually on the affair itself, while the pain, humiliation, confusion, and emotional damage suffered by the cheated partner are often overlooked.
May be he will prove me wrong, will see!!


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