వల్లీ

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Please share your experience about 
the story వల్లీ

1. Pace of the Story
2. Story Content and Plot
3. Writing Style and Narration
4. Anything to improve or stop doing
5. Overall - Excellent / Good / Average / Poor

This is for my learning purpose only and to incorporate further. 

Please share your experience and feedback. 

1) I like the pace
2) content and plot is good
3) writing style is what I'm more impressed of
4) I was expecting different positions when did the second time
5) overall Excellent