05-03-2026, 11:25 AM
Bravo Rohan! Very well written updates so far. The story is moving at a proper pace, and that’s so cool. Hope it’s all to set up the stage.
No need to hurry up with the “Actions”. You’re doing well… keep it up. I know with the continuity of this story, you (& readers) might come up with various ideas/kinks. At that time, it would be far better to stick with the initial idea (plan) you had when starting this story. This story definitely has the potential to become something different, rather than be another ‘bang bang’ story.
The only suggestion I would like to make here is that the dialogues would feel more realistic if you wrote them in Marathi alongside the English. (One of them always in bracket, of course.)
But do this only if you have time, otherwise it's good only in English also.
Once again, keep it up. Keep writing and surprising us.
No need to hurry up with the “Actions”. You’re doing well… keep it up. I know with the continuity of this story, you (& readers) might come up with various ideas/kinks. At that time, it would be far better to stick with the initial idea (plan) you had when starting this story. This story definitely has the potential to become something different, rather than be another ‘bang bang’ story.
The only suggestion I would like to make here is that the dialogues would feel more realistic if you wrote them in Marathi alongside the English. (One of them always in bracket, of course.)
But do this only if you have time, otherwise it's good only in English also.
Once again, keep it up. Keep writing and surprising us.
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