Misc. Erotica ...And My Mother doesn't Remain Ours

[The_Writer]

Wow..! I really do love these kinda slow-burning erotic stories..!! Such a beautifully written story so far, I loved every single line while reading. Well done, bro.. Now this is something that gives a loud shoutout to the “garamrohan” brand. Spot on!

I really don’t want to give any sort of reviews to stories like this, because pointing out negative things kills the treatment of that story. That said, I would like to point out (others already did that) that the sex part could have been done a little slowly, taking its time, etc., but I also won’t do that because, as a lover and an avid reader of stories like this (and I have read dozens of them), I can easily make out why you did it the way you did.

Now, moving on to the characters, I’m sure there is something, some reason that made the mother surrender. I mean, yeah, it was not that she didn’t resist or put up a fight, but man, don’t we all see that something did happen very quickly, not unexpectedly, but really fast.

And yeah, why the heck did the narrator allow this shit to happen? If I have to take a wild guess, then it would be that sometime ago in the past, the narrator might have had some kind of M.I.L.F. interaction… or something related to mature ladies, etc. Because the way he’s describing his situation, while Rambo was having a taste of his mom, the fact can’t be ignored that the narrator really had some M.I.L.F fantasies somewhere in his mind.

Also, personally, I’m not much into these brother-sister relationships, but I do want to see what you have in store.

Wait, so there's a 'Jiju' in the picture now, and it's the Chapter 3... I mean, the continuity..? Hmm, and the narrator's mom already had the taste of a dick other than her husband's...!

Woah..! That’s it, bro. I gotta stop here to refrain myself from imagining things... many things.

All the best, Author Saab.

Keep writing, keep rocking.