11-04-2025, 03:18 PM
(10-04-2025, 10:22 PM)Ranvijaysingh2 Wrote: Sry bro..naku nachaledhu..e update..
Story antha 3 r 4 chrtrs madhya tirugutundhi...story ni oka cage lo pettinattu anipinchindhi.
Sameera ki vunna phobia ni antha twaraga vaalla mother mundhu reveal chestaru anukoledhu..kittu chrtr avaru em cheppina sare anettu vundhi..sameera whole story ni single update lo marchesindhi..alanti situations lo ne manishi loni mrugam/swardham baitiki vastundhi but story lo andaru Sameera cheppinattu veltunnattu anipistundhi...alane vundhi ..
New chrts introduce cheyandi...
Endhuku chepptunna ante me 1st 3 updates good story writing vundhi..
Idhi antha endhuku nak telidha story strustikartha ni anukutuntara ...just ignore
Thank you for your feedback andi. Nenu mee points annitiki ippude answer ivvalenu. Endukante I have a certain framework in my mind. Anduke screenplay ala undi. ikapothe:
1) Indulo vere characters ekkuva undavu. Vere chinna characters like Tailor Patel, Tailor Rani, madhyalo vastaru. They have a limited scope but play in the progression of the story. This is supposed to be a story within one small family.
2) Sameera alaa enduku marchesindi ante, meeru chuste Sameera is a main character. Tanu tana manasulo badha bhayam anni anuchukuni kurchundi. Sameera behavior vallane Spandana Kittu friends ayyaru. Sameera valane Spandana Kittu open up ayyaru. Ika ippudu pelli deggariki vachesariki inka laagi laabham ledu ani ala decide ayindi. And oka tandrileni small family of educated women story idi. Vallu chillara godavalu padaru. Life lo chala face chesaaru. self dependent aadavaru. They know how to control their emotions. Road lu ekki godavalu padaru. They express it differently. Meeru chuste character arcs veru untayi. Nenu explain cheste bavundadu. Readers feel it when they read. So Sameera actions will decide the flow.
3) Kittu ala enduku unnado strong backstory already undi. Anthe kaadu, inko chinna point nenu munde cheppesaanu. Kittu asalu pelli enduku chesukovali anukuntunnado episode 1 lo ne justification undi. Vaadi character anthe. Matured fellow. Kaani mondi kaadu. Life etu teeskelte ateltadu.
Inka munumundu chapters lo meeku nachani points ki justification chustaru ani anukuntunnanu. Hope you will like it.
Thanks!
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