Adultery The Facilitator

[Harry Jordan]

Again , Great writing as usual . More Praise for you  . Every update is better than last . This update was kind of Long , But the way you wrote not a single dull moment , Not a single line felt like filler , How could you do it ? If i may ask Whats the average time you spend from writing to editing for single chapter . 

Now , My memory faded a little bit , I forget the starting of the story . 

So, Kunal spilled some cold drink or coffee on Priya's thesis which supposed to be life changing for her . 
So she decide to take revenge On Kunal and His wife Esha , who happens to be her friends too . 

( I know I know , Dont correct me ) 

So , Priya is so called Feminist . Who clearly has no Idea that A women and A wife both are different thing . A women can fuck any man she wants , whenever she wants , She can carry anyone child , Its her body , Its her child , Its her responsibility But A Wife ? Cannot do those things . She herself said that Marriage is Contract and Esha violated that contract does she deserve Penalty for that . 

So , Priya planned revenge to break them off , To destroy their marriage , She manipulated 34 year old women , who happens to be working in prestigious firm filled with intelligent people but of course she was not satisfied with her marriage and lust made people do stupid things . Okay . 

So a Hansome hunk came , And Priya plotted , They fall in love , She cheated on Kunal , Kunal apologize to Esha for making her to cheat on him , Promised to be better husband . But she again cheated on him , Got pregnant . Decided to keep child okay , Fine with me . 

Kunal sent divorce papers , She moved in with Aniket Her lover . Great decision to be honest . 

Okay , Aditya custody Case :-  The highly intellectual Kunal , Who somehow got the Job in USA firm found the worst lawyer for his case , where ESHA found the  best and very cunning lawyer , who literally fucked him in the ass . 

So , Priya got her Revenge from Kunal .
Kunal :- Lost his whole family , Wife cheated , Humiliated him, Got pregnant by His lover while still married to him, His whole world crumble in front of him , His years of hard work just vanished  , Going to loose Custody of his son . Her wife choose to go with man who is better than him in every way .

ESHA :- Got the literally Handsome hunk who loved her , Sexually Satisfy her , Make her feel alive , Ready for marriage , will accept the Responsibility of Aditya and will be better father than Kunal ever be, Also Rich . She literally got massive update . Call her gold digger , bitch , whatever you want , But Jiska husband Kunal jaise C ho uski feeling ko smjho .

I know she felt pain and cried and etc etc etc but still does not feel like that she is actually sad , Because She has gain more than she lost . Its very small price for the future she is gonna built with her Lover , ANIKET . 

Priya not only she got her revenge and She helped her friend to find a better Man for her . ESHA ko literally Thanks bolna chahiye Priya , Its because of Her she found the man of her dream , and she is gonna start her new family , Yeah , I know she might lost some respect among her family or peers but no one gives a fuck . And She will gonna get Aditya , How ? Again Priya The mediator . That Stupid Lawyer cannot even argue why Priya is misfit . She is bigger Idiot Than Kunal , Kunal  deserve this lawyer. 


Oh wait , I forget , While his whole world is falling apart , Mr. Kunal decided to become Sherlock Holmes . Okay lets assume eventually he is gonna find out its all Priya , but It still Does not explain or its not reverse the betrayal of ESHA , No matter if Priya literally throws her in the arms of Aniket its still ESHA's choice to fuck him and its still her choice to get pregnant by Him , Its still her choice to have a baby with Aniket  . Priya perfectly Explain this to Mr. Kunal . OKay let him Play His little Detective Adventure . 

Oh wait , Remind me , How old is Kunal ? 11 ? 14 ? 20 ? . He is fucking grown man. Here getting manipulated and shut by Priya . Priya literally made him to apologize . Acting like small child , I will not be surprise if Priya slapped him and make him to write I am sorry and ESHA was right 100 times  ( Oh bhai marro mujhe , Mujhe aap chutti dede , main is duniya se vida lena chahta hoon )

Men like Kunal deserved this , Everyone including me  from the start blaming ESHA , I wanna ask could you blame her for choosing Aniket over This chutpaglu Insan ( sorry for my language ) . 

Go girl , you made the right choice , Aniket is better man than Kunal . Judge should give aditya custody to ESHA , atleast he will not end up as stupid as his father . 

Men like Kunal deserve this , I wanna believe ( for this story ) Laws are not Partial towards women , Here if Men like Kunal exist Its necessary The kid wont  raise by Stupid pathetic loser like him. Just Imagine Yourself In place of Judge , Okay i accept ESHA is cheater but she not loser like him , while being pregnant She fought fiercely for her child , She found the best lawyer . And the best part is She could have Destroy Kunal's reputation easily but she choose not to , She showed mercy to him , for this alone Kunal should touch her feet and ask for forgiveness .  . The Kunal who is acting like He has upper hand on case , Has no Idea ESHA is literally holding herself back , If gives green light To her Lawyer he would chew and spit him out like cheap bugglebum .

Now I think the subject of the story shifted from Child custody Battle to Humiliation of Kunal.
 

To be honest , I am enjoying this , The last chapter , T was full of fun . I hope ESHA win this battle , She is literally an angel , Cooking biryani for the man she loves so much , and then * i skipped that part its was disgusting , Funny In sex story i am avoiding sex part*    . Also a bit sad , This whole encounter shows that She never loved Kunal the way she loves Aniket. Also now there is no coming back , I know it was established earliar that there is no way ESHA can fix her marriage . But Good for her .   

ESHA and ANIKET Best couple You can see their chemistry and They love each other , They deserve a chance to built their family . 

I wish in upcoming chapter , Kunal do something stupid and Aniket would beat the shit of him in front of Aditya , So Aditya finally see what a pathetic father he has , He also can finally move on and Accept Aniket as his father . For this story I am with Fierce Brave Feminist , PRIYA AND ESHA    who is teaching Kunal a male chauvinist .

 I know I know I literally spewed so much poison against Kunal , Coz he deserve it. 

( Note :- This comment is exaggerated comment , only for fun , I am not criticizing the writer or the plot or anything , I read the story and I write the comment based on written material )

Please Please Please Post an update ASAP ! 
( kidding please take as much as time you need )

PEACE OUT !

A rational me would've been pissed with this comment but I know you exaggerate which is alright. Although a little correction , Kunal didn't ruin Priya's thesis , It is indeed Esha who spilled the drink on her. 

Priya's revenge is focused on ruining Esha's life but she is conflicted in her mind , and she was always pissed with the marriage of Kunal and Esha because in Priya's mind , Kunal is the one who took Esha away from her , taking Esha away from her companionship.

As for you anger towards Kunal , I can relate to some extent because in many stories like this the husband becomes such a cliche. And here too in this case , even though his anger is justified , Kunal is still being led by his anger. In my eyes , he is a character with a lot of potential , you can actually create a redemption arc for him and turn his life around , show the betrayal of Esha push him to reinvent himself and move to a path of an improved lifestyle and move on just like Esha did. I am sick and tired of portraying men as this "crybaby" men who just shatters themselves when their wife leaves them. If a woman can leave her husband without a second thought , so should the man. 

In my opinion, that kind of arc would elevate this story. Now already Kunal is the odd man out in this game of manipulation of Priya. He should be the trump card in Priya's game and expose her influence on Esha. But at the same time I want Kunal to brighten his mind and elevate himself to raise his standards and show Priya what makes men the most dominant.



On a side note, I have updated new chapter to my own story , it is by far the lengthiest chapter I have written  , so if you like complex characters and arcs , do check it out. Its my first attempt in writing so I cannot bring the writing quality of legends like clearlover here , but I wish to share this story with everyone so they can also have a good time.

Have a good day Dean   

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