09-02-2025, 05:55 PM
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Just completed reading the final chapter and my honest first reaction is --------- ITS FINALLY DONE!
I am just gonna share the things I liked and some criticism from my part regarding this story. So here you go.
POSITIVES
1. DESAI BECOMING THE CUCKOLD
I actually forgot the hidden "cuckold" kink that has been inside Desai for far long that I always overlooked it. Now its makes sense , while my mind was obsessed regarding the "manipulation" sife of Desai I actually never noticed that there was a bit of cuckold kink in him too. After all he did watch as another man screwed Ananya , and he also shared his wish of cuckolding with Krish have both of them watch Meera screw another guy. But most importantly I really liked the idea of how much you explored Desai's "obsession" with Krish. He always craved to be Krish , to be the heart and mind of Meera in all the ways by wanting to be Krish. He was obsessed with being Krish to the point that he himself evolved to become a cuckold. At the end Meera was right , Desai was not exactly better future for her , because Desai ended up being Krish but with more money and age. In a way this also showed Desai the person he has become. To some extent I absolutely loved how Desai was handled in the ending. The man who fell victim to his kinks.
2. MEERA GAINING CONTROL AND PUTTING HER FOOT ON THE GROUND
Meera showed in this chapter why she was the focal point of the story. At first she was ready to accept Desai as her future because she actually believed Desai has changed and that she might find some peace even though her feelings for Krish still remained. Even in the duality of her feelings , she held onto Krish hoping that he will pull her back but she realized Krish was never going to change. And when Desai showed his true colors , Meera immediately took charge , sending the men hurling back. She had the right to be upset because both of her expectations were broken tonight , Desai by showing his cuckolding kink and Krish by never abandoning his cuckolding kink. She just had enough with both the men treating her like a sex object and she threw them both out showing them that their kinks have reduced their own identities. Meera desperately wanted Krish to stop the act but she also saw the cuckold in him can never be gone and she believed it was best to leave him so maybe Krish can change. But the truth is , Meera can never live without Krish , he is forever her life and she cannot think of a life without him.
3. KRISH THE LUCKIEST MAN IN THE WORLD!
Talk about "hitting the target" , if it wasn't for Desai's obsession of becoming Krish , Meera would've probably ended up pregnant with Desai's child at that moment. Seeing Meera enjoying Krish seemed to bother Desai which resulted in him wanting to switch places which resulted in not only impregnating Meera by Krish cumming inside her but also giving her a powerful orgasm. Desai's own obsession paved the way for Krish to understand his kink had no role in his life anymore. Now Krish's cuckolding nature is still not clear yet but I am tempted to believe that this new family life will shift his focus from his kinks to other important aspects. Also I like the insinuation of an open ending with the final sentence.
SOME STORIES END. OURS SIMPLY TURNED THE PAGE.
NEGATIVES
1.DESAI THE SAINT
A part of me want to accept the character ending author chose for Desai because unlike Sekhar and Das , Desai actually goes through some changes in his life. Maybe it was the "manipulative" Desai trope that I wanted to be seen as a reality more that I never considered a "cuckold" Desai would've been a much better blowback to the character. However , he got the easy way out with no manipulation game or any "reaction" to his actions in the past. Just Desai accepting his mistakes and moving on and hoping to improve on himself. And just like Sekhar and Das he left the story with no more involvement. Considering how much this character has impacted other's lives , I wanted some pay off and a part of me feels I don't get that with this ending. In this regard I prefer the original ending where Nidhi exposes Desai and his true face is shown. However , this character arc is one thing I am not a fan of.
2. LACK OF KRISH-MEERA ROMANCE.
A part that I have always never liked regarding part 3 is the complete lacking of Krish and Meera romance and that also resonated in the final chapters and at the ending of the story. The part where Krish and Meera reunited after finding out their pregnancy and got intimate , it was once again ended in quick words. It just feels like the story wants the readers to connect more to the "cuckolding" sex rather than the actual real intimate sex between lovers. That is something I completely dislike in this ending , in my opinion their reunion deserved a passionate sex session. But as usual , it was once again reduced in some few words. Though I can understand why the author chose it and the reason is my third point in the negatives.
3. KRISH's CUCKOLDING KINK STILL IN QUESTION.
Once again the author has insinuated the duality of whether Krish is cured of his kink or not. Because even after this story ended , Krish's nature is still left unanswered. And I believe that is the reason why the Krish-Meera reunion extended sex sequence was left out. Because Krish's own nature is still confusing. If he not a cuckold anymore? or like the Author said , There is no such thing as a ex-cuckold. I get the feeling that the need to have an open ending for the story kind of made this decision to not give a definite answer to his kinks anymore. In a way its been left to the readers to decide. Is Krish really cured? Or will there be a part 4? After all the last line did say stories end but this one only turned a page. I understand the author's mindset regarding this but I personally wanted a definite answer which sadly the story never really answers. I guess the author wants to keep the possibilities of exploring this series further in the future but honestly this is the factor that I am most disappointed yet.
Now to finish my assessment , is the ending better than the last one?
In simple words , the answer is both , yes and no. The original ending did somethings better and the new ending did somethings better as well. If we weaver both the endings together maybe we can make our own perfect ending to this story with our own headcannons. But regardless I wanna thank you all for this incredible journey that krish_999 tooks us with this story. I wholeheartedly wish him all the best for the future.
Now I am gonna act a little selfish here and give you guys the link to my own story I've started on the site. I can assure you I am not as good of an author as krish_999 but he has inspired me to do this and a closure in this story helps me focus on mine. Thank you Krish for this wonderful experience and I cordially invite all readers to my own story below to start a new experience.
With Love.
HARRY JORDAN
https://xossipy.com/thread-66982.html
I am just gonna share the things I liked and some criticism from my part regarding this story. So here you go.
POSITIVES
1. DESAI BECOMING THE CUCKOLD
I actually forgot the hidden "cuckold" kink that has been inside Desai for far long that I always overlooked it. Now its makes sense , while my mind was obsessed regarding the "manipulation" sife of Desai I actually never noticed that there was a bit of cuckold kink in him too. After all he did watch as another man screwed Ananya , and he also shared his wish of cuckolding with Krish have both of them watch Meera screw another guy. But most importantly I really liked the idea of how much you explored Desai's "obsession" with Krish. He always craved to be Krish , to be the heart and mind of Meera in all the ways by wanting to be Krish. He was obsessed with being Krish to the point that he himself evolved to become a cuckold. At the end Meera was right , Desai was not exactly better future for her , because Desai ended up being Krish but with more money and age. In a way this also showed Desai the person he has become. To some extent I absolutely loved how Desai was handled in the ending. The man who fell victim to his kinks.
2. MEERA GAINING CONTROL AND PUTTING HER FOOT ON THE GROUND
Meera showed in this chapter why she was the focal point of the story. At first she was ready to accept Desai as her future because she actually believed Desai has changed and that she might find some peace even though her feelings for Krish still remained. Even in the duality of her feelings , she held onto Krish hoping that he will pull her back but she realized Krish was never going to change. And when Desai showed his true colors , Meera immediately took charge , sending the men hurling back. She had the right to be upset because both of her expectations were broken tonight , Desai by showing his cuckolding kink and Krish by never abandoning his cuckolding kink. She just had enough with both the men treating her like a sex object and she threw them both out showing them that their kinks have reduced their own identities. Meera desperately wanted Krish to stop the act but she also saw the cuckold in him can never be gone and she believed it was best to leave him so maybe Krish can change. But the truth is , Meera can never live without Krish , he is forever her life and she cannot think of a life without him.
3. KRISH THE LUCKIEST MAN IN THE WORLD!
Talk about "hitting the target" , if it wasn't for Desai's obsession of becoming Krish , Meera would've probably ended up pregnant with Desai's child at that moment. Seeing Meera enjoying Krish seemed to bother Desai which resulted in him wanting to switch places which resulted in not only impregnating Meera by Krish cumming inside her but also giving her a powerful orgasm. Desai's own obsession paved the way for Krish to understand his kink had no role in his life anymore. Now Krish's cuckolding nature is still not clear yet but I am tempted to believe that this new family life will shift his focus from his kinks to other important aspects. Also I like the insinuation of an open ending with the final sentence.
SOME STORIES END. OURS SIMPLY TURNED THE PAGE.
NEGATIVES
1.DESAI THE SAINT
A part of me want to accept the character ending author chose for Desai because unlike Sekhar and Das , Desai actually goes through some changes in his life. Maybe it was the "manipulative" Desai trope that I wanted to be seen as a reality more that I never considered a "cuckold" Desai would've been a much better blowback to the character. However , he got the easy way out with no manipulation game or any "reaction" to his actions in the past. Just Desai accepting his mistakes and moving on and hoping to improve on himself. And just like Sekhar and Das he left the story with no more involvement. Considering how much this character has impacted other's lives , I wanted some pay off and a part of me feels I don't get that with this ending. In this regard I prefer the original ending where Nidhi exposes Desai and his true face is shown. However , this character arc is one thing I am not a fan of.
2. LACK OF KRISH-MEERA ROMANCE.
A part that I have always never liked regarding part 3 is the complete lacking of Krish and Meera romance and that also resonated in the final chapters and at the ending of the story. The part where Krish and Meera reunited after finding out their pregnancy and got intimate , it was once again ended in quick words. It just feels like the story wants the readers to connect more to the "cuckolding" sex rather than the actual real intimate sex between lovers. That is something I completely dislike in this ending , in my opinion their reunion deserved a passionate sex session. But as usual , it was once again reduced in some few words. Though I can understand why the author chose it and the reason is my third point in the negatives.
3. KRISH's CUCKOLDING KINK STILL IN QUESTION.
Once again the author has insinuated the duality of whether Krish is cured of his kink or not. Because even after this story ended , Krish's nature is still left unanswered. And I believe that is the reason why the Krish-Meera reunion extended sex sequence was left out. Because Krish's own nature is still confusing. If he not a cuckold anymore? or like the Author said , There is no such thing as a ex-cuckold. I get the feeling that the need to have an open ending for the story kind of made this decision to not give a definite answer to his kinks anymore. In a way its been left to the readers to decide. Is Krish really cured? Or will there be a part 4? After all the last line did say stories end but this one only turned a page. I understand the author's mindset regarding this but I personally wanted a definite answer which sadly the story never really answers. I guess the author wants to keep the possibilities of exploring this series further in the future but honestly this is the factor that I am most disappointed yet.
Now to finish my assessment , is the ending better than the last one?
In simple words , the answer is both , yes and no. The original ending did somethings better and the new ending did somethings better as well. If we weaver both the endings together maybe we can make our own perfect ending to this story with our own headcannons. But regardless I wanna thank you all for this incredible journey that krish_999 tooks us with this story. I wholeheartedly wish him all the best for the future.
Now I am gonna act a little selfish here and give you guys the link to my own story I've started on the site. I can assure you I am not as good of an author as krish_999 but he has inspired me to do this and a closure in this story helps me focus on mine. Thank you Krish for this wonderful experience and I cordially invite all readers to my own story below to start a new experience.
With Love.
HARRY JORDAN https://xossipy.com/thread-66982.html
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