22-06-2024, 10:11 PM
dom nic torrento brother, endi ee rachha? your mastery over characters and expressing their emotions is unbelievable. Edo views ekkuva unnai bane undi untundi kasta chadivi kottukundam ani start cheste wow! what a narration & visualisation! and more over each update is huge so I can understand the amount of time you had to spend on this, thank you so much. But having said all that, regrettably I lost track of the plot and there were so many variations in the story which I couldn't keep up with! plus Inception and memento movies rendu mix cheste vachhinattu undi plot jumping from present to past every so often which made it really difficult to enjoy, Repetitively there were way too many sub plots and characters with extensive narration prolonging the overall story which would only add very little benefit to the end reader, I think this happened because you taking suggestions from us readers but that's useful to some extent but meeru heavily bomabrded with ideas I guess. Please don't get me wrong, I'm not saying it's bad but it had every opportunity to become a one of the greatest classics in telugu erotica! This story hits you on so many levels because it's relatable endukante core story is about true love which is greater than sex! so adi express cheyatam lo meeru 200% successful almost maa andari cheta edipincharu . cheppandi ee site lo enni stories genuinely tickle your emotions and make you cry? overall it's been a pleasure reading this story and keep up the good work!