Adultery THE UNTOLD STORY OF RIYA & SAPNA

[Uma aananthi]

What i didnt like in ALL sexstories is that they are using 2 options...

1. Characterizing woman character as slut from the beginning

2. Cheating forcing or trapping a girl and fucking her body


Why u guys are not concerned on girl's attitude... Y r u not trying to corrupt woman's attitude... The day sapna slept with security officer and was ready for another round, she is his prey... Make jer drink smoke make her drug addict brainwash hypnotic and slowly she shd have been transformed...And in the end, a guy who bangd her initially ( blackie) she shd sleep with him this time in completely changed manner... That was my expectation... But now again this is moving round the clock which after point of time becomes repetitive

Now some people will say this is author's pov and u dnt have rights to question it. Yes they are rite but as a reader i just say my opinion....

Comparing all other stories in this xosippy i would say this is one of the best story but initially the impact story created was too great which i feel lacking now... MY FEELand