Adultery THE UNTOLD STORY OF RIYA & SAPNA

[EvilStone]

I don't know whether you asked for this or not, but I am going to tell you something. Consider these below listed points as constructive feedback.

1. Update the title of the story. Presently, "Riya the Mallu pay for his husband in North India", whereas it should have been, "Riya the Mallu pays for her husband in North India".
At least in the title of the story, get the grammar right.

2. People who are in this forum from years know from where you took the reference of first sex scene. Please add your flavour to that. There's nothing wrong in taking a reference but your signature writing should be there.

3. Riya has been fucked by Minister twice now. First time in the night when minister kind of forced himself on her and secondly in the pretext of training her how to save herself from a goon. Riya must now acknowledge that Minister fucks her and should play the game to tease him. Dont make her like that she doesnt understand what minister is doing to her in pretext of playing games.

I hope you take these in positive framework and don't get offended.

Keep up, waiting for the future updates.