Adultery THE UNTOLD STORY OF RIYA & SAPNA

[Anoop Nair]

The story is superb and the narration is great but sometimes it feels like Riya is dumb and easy 
You could have added half the sex scene in next part, I mean the scene where she greedly sucking . I felt like she is fully submitted to the minister like a slut
Again narration is really good but please don't move the story in a fast pace.
Pranitha Subhash is soo cute to portray as Riya
Just my thoughts I am not ruining your writing sense
Anyway good job waiting for the next update

Thanks for your feedback dear ,
In this story I portray Riya as an intelligent ,But Riya had aim to join in security officer department , because of his father she can't  achieve her goal , So Minister knew very well , So he played well , 

This story is not going to stop here ,This is only a 15 % of story,  I will come with a new update ...