30-07-2023, 02:25 AM
(21-01-2022, 08:22 AM)B1ryani Wrote: **Author's Note** - Thank you for your supporting comments. I have taken everything into consideration and I think perhaps Xossip isn't the right platform for this story. I will finish Divya's adventures perhaps later next week and end it.
In the meantime, I will be toning down on the rough sex and abuse in all follow up stories that I will write moving forward.
Here is the link for my latest thread :-
Dadi's Little Slut - https://xossipy.com/thread-44985.html
My apologies in advance to my readers who have enjoyed The Train Ride thus far.
Perhaps u can continue in literotica.net or some other platform. I understand some are not fond of some of the stuff here but you cant cater for everyone. Perhaps u can change the tone from Divya disliking it to craving for it where she becomes submissive and become a pain slut. She needs to be able to escape from them n return to her hostel but this experience of hers has changed her and now constantly thinking about it which makes her wet. She decides to go back to them. I hv yet to finish reading the story but u can also make all the pic or vids of her is deleted. This can also make her think that they couldnt control themselves because of hw gorgeous she looks and feel grateful. She tries masturbation but it does give her the pleasure she wants without some pain being involved. After a few weeks, she realizes she wants to experience it again but this time she will be in control. She also trains her asshole to avoid it being sore for the next time.