03-06-2019, 12:43 PM
wow....bahut sohna likhde ho.....te jo tussi GURJOT de POV to kahani likh rahe ho....swaad aa janda hai pad ke.....bas GURJOT nu INCEST wich na payo....story adultery hi rakhiyo....
u r too good in explaining scene plot
bahut chir baas enni sohni story padan nu mil rahi hai....
thank you so much buddy for ur effort.....
bahut wadiya writing hai tuhadi....
keep it up
keep writing
u r too good in explaining scene plot
bahut chir baas enni sohni story padan nu mil rahi hai....
thank you so much buddy for ur effort.....
bahut wadiya writing hai tuhadi....
keep it up
keep writing