06-01-2023, 06:41 PM
(06-01-2023, 12:20 AM)Fuckstar Wrote: Hi Sean,
It's great to see that you are back..... But it seems like this story is going to be different from Anita because garima is so fucking rich that she is never gonna let someone like Hariya ever touch her, also she is a hothead and has attitude whereas Anita was kind hearted so it would make very difficult for some poor low class guy to woo her.....
But again it's a new story and a new character....
All the best for the story
Thanks for the analysis of the story and the character. This kind of feedback where the readers share their point of view of the character and the story is really helpful to the writer in understanding whether the reader's comprehension of the story and the character is exactly as the writer intended to show. Thanks again!!